I like it >w<
Miya so kawaii >///<

General
You need diff less 3 stars for rank

Saten-san :3
AR -1
00:17:896 - need note
00:27:067 - ^
00:34:066 (5) - NC
00:34:790 (2) - move to 00:34:790 and 00:35:152 - add note
00:36:720 - need note
01:05:922 - need note

Hard
00:15:838 - add note and 00:15:966 (8) - move to 00:16:086 (just suggestion)
First part little boring, Maybe add more 1/4?
00:44:081 (3) - remove?
00:44:443 (1) - finish
00:45:167 (4) - remove finish
00:48:304 (1) - add finish
00:57:957 (9) - NC
01:17:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make this > http://puu.sh/44op

Normal
Add more hitsounds!
And 1/1 it's not fun! >_<

It's not all but i'm lazy, sorry. Maybe i'll make recheck sometime XD
Ganbatte yo! ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)

Hellzero wrote:

I like it >w<
Miya so kawaii >///<

General
You need diff less 3 stars for rank

Saten-san :3
AR -1
00:17:896 - need note
00:27:067 - ^
00:34:066 (5) - NC
00:34:790 (2) - move to 00:34:790 and 00:35:152 - add note
00:36:720 - need note
01:05:922 - need note

Hard
00:15:838 - add note and 00:15:966 (8) - move to 00:16:086 (just suggestion)
First part little boring, Maybe add more 1/4?
00:44:081 (3) - remove?
00:44:443 (1) - finish
00:45:167 (4) - remove finish
00:48:304 (1) - add finish
00:57:957 (9) - NC
01:17:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make this > http://puu.sh/44op

Normal
Add more hitsounds!
And 1/1 it's not fun! >_<

It's not all but i'm lazy, sorry. Maybe i'll make recheck sometime XD
Ganbatte yo! ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)

thanks star and mod><

Miya is angel!!

Gabbarimasu^^

00:44:081 (3) - remove?
not remove

Hellzero wrote:

Saten-san :3
AR -1
00:17:896 - need note
00:27:067 - ^
00:34:066 (5) - NC
00:34:790 (2) - move to 00:34:790 and 00:35:152 - add note
00:36:720 - need note
01:05:922 - need note

I love to experiment, did everything~♪

Download: NicoNico Douga - Miya to Odoru (murasamenosigure) [Saten's Insane].osu

Saten-san wrote:

Hellzero wrote:

Saten-san :3
AR -1
00:17:896 - need note
00:27:067 - ^
00:34:066 (5) - NC
00:34:790 (2) - move to 00:34:790 and 00:35:152 - add note
00:36:720 - need note
01:05:922 - need note

I love to experiment, did everything~♪

oh thanks^^

(´・ω・)っ☆
nicemap nicesong
star~

にぃにのばかぁ！

Doubt wrote:

(´・ω・)っ☆
nicemap nicesong
star~

にぃにのばかぁ！

thanks star^^

にぃににアマガミ～愛情表現なのだ！！

mod suru tokoro nakatta desu (´・ω・｀)
nice desu (・∀・)

modリクエストありがとうございますー！
参考程度におねがいします~~



Fight~

Hinacle wrote:

modリクエストありがとうございますー！
参考程度におねがいします~~

mod

＜General＞

1. Resize BG to 1024x768 or 800×600
2. Artist change NicoNico Douga → Nico Nico Douga

＜Easy＞

1. Easyなのでスペーシングを一定にしてください
2. 00:09:691 (1) - add finish at beginning?
3. 00:11:139 (2) - 1grid down
4. 00:25:619 (1) - Remove new combo
5. 01:14:368 (5) - new combo?

＜Normal＞

1. NormalもEasyと同じでスペーシングを一定にしてください
2. 00:15:483 (5) - new combo?
3. 00:15:966 (1) - Remove new combo?
4. 01:08:576 (1) - ^
5. 01:24:491 (x) - green line delete.
6. 01:24:504 (4) - add green line

＜Hard＞

1. 01:25:952 (6) - end slider at 01:26:797
2. 01:27:400 (1) - Start spinner at 01:27:159

＜Saten's Insane＞
Nice Saten-san diff=w=b

Fight~

thanks mod^^

頑張ります～　ﾟ∀ﾟ)o彡°　ﾟ∀ﾟ)o彡°

Aenna wrote:

mod suru tokoro nakatta desu (´・ω・｀)
nice desu (・∀・)

thanks mod?^^

そういってもらえるとありがたいです～＞＜

[General]
- Preview point isn't setted.
- I found something strange in your map's folder.

1. MP3 doesn't have name.
2. Artist(Nico Nico~) isn't spaced except Insane diff.

Give any name to MP3. And change file name from 'NicoNico~' to 'Nico Nico~'.
If you changed MP3 file's name, open .osu in notepad and write name that changed.
You have to full-submit when you finish work in every diff.


[Insane]
00:29:842 (4) - Weird position. Move to previous slider's end point. It will look much better.
00:35:514 (5) - Try to move it to start point of 00:34:428 (1) for better spacing.
00:36:720 (7) - New combo
00:36:841 (1) - Then remove new combo
01:26:314 (1) - Shorten to 01:26:797


[Hard]
00:16:086 (7) - Spacing. If you don't wanna change its position, add new combo.
00:40:582 (5) - New combo
00:40:702 (1) - Then remove new combo
00:43:840 (1) - Remove new combo
01:05:197 (7) - New combo due to spacing was changed.
01:05:680 (1) - Then remove new combo
01:27:159 (1) - Extend to 01:28:607


[Normal]
00:56:027 (1) - Too far from center. I suggest x:232/y:56


[Easy]
00:15:966 (3) - Stack correctly under previous note
00:20:792 (5,1,2) - Those stacks are hard to beginner. Find other way.


Not too bad stuff. Anyway it needs improvement.
Good luck.

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
- Preview point isn't setted.
- I found something strange in your map's folder.

.osz

[attachment=0:ec924]Screenshot_(2011-08-24_at_05.13.16).png[/attachment:ec924]

1. MP3 doesn't have name.
2. Artist(Nico Nico~) isn't spaced except Insane diff.

Give any name to MP3. And change file name from 'NicoNico~' to 'Nico Nico~'.
If you changed MP3 file's name, open .osu in notepad and write name that changed.
You have to full-submit when you finish work in every diff.


[Insane]
00:29:842 (4) - Weird position. Move to previous slider's end point. It will look much better.
00:35:514 (5) - Try to move it to start point of 00:34:428 (1) for better spacing.
00:36:720 (7) - New combo
00:36:841 (1) - Then remove new combo
01:26:314 (1) - Shorten to 01:26:797


[Hard]
00:16:086 (7) - Spacing. If you don't wanna change its position, add new combo.
00:40:582 (5) - New combo
00:40:702 (1) - Then remove new combo
00:43:840 (1) - Remove new combo
01:05:197 (7) - New combo due to spacing was changed.
01:05:680 (1) - Then remove new combo
01:27:159 (1) - Extend to 01:28:607


[Normal]
00:56:027 (1) - Too far from center. I suggest x:232/y:56


[Easy]
00:15:966 (3) - Stack correctly under previous note
00:20:792 (5,1,2) - Those stacks are hard to beginner. Find other way.


Not too bad stuff. Anyway it needs improvement.
Good luck.

Thanks Mod^^
I will do Mod!

ykcarrot wrote:

[Insane]
00:29:842 (4) - Weird position. Move to previous slider's end point. It will look much better.
00:35:514 (5) - Try to move it to start point of 00:34:428 (1) for better spacing.
00:36:720 (7) - New combo
00:36:841 (1) - Then remove new combo
01:26:314 (1) - Shorten to 01:26:797

All done~♪

Download: Nico Nico Douga - Miya to Odoru (murasamenosigure) [Saten's Insane].osu

Saten-san wrote:

ykcarrot wrote:

[Insane]
00:29:842 (4) - Weird position. Move to previous slider's end point. It will look much better.
00:35:514 (5) - Try to move it to start point of 00:34:428 (1) for better spacing.
00:36:720 (7) - New combo
00:36:841 (1) - Then remove new combo
01:26:314 (1) - Shorten to 01:26:797

All done~♪

oh thanks^^

[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Easy]
00:11:622 (3) - (1) と重ならないように配置してください
00:15:000 (3) - (2)と完全に重なってません
00:23:206 (3) - Health Barと重なっているので修正してください
00:25:619 (1) - (4) と重ならないように配置した方がいいかもしれません
00:38:651 (2) - (5) と重ならないように配置してください
00:46:374 (5) - NC.
00:47:822 (1) - RNC.
00:49:270 (5) - NC.
00:59:405 (3) - ^
01:00:371 (1) - RNC.
Spinnerの終点を 01:26:917 へ移動

[Normal]
00:16:931 (4) - この配置の方が綺麗に見えると思います
00:31:894 (6) - Health Barと重なっているので修正してください
00:47:339 (5) - ^
01:02:784 (6) - Normalで1/4は使わない方がいいです
Spinnerの終点を 01:26:917 へ移動

[Hard]
AR -1
00:16:086 (1) - スペーシングが狭すぎます
00:18:620 (4) - 前後のサークルの中間に配置するようにしてください
00:20:310 (7) - NC.
00:21:034 (1) - RNC.
00:22:482 (8) - NC.
00:27:308 (12) - ^
00:32:618 (8) - ^
00:35:755 (1) - RNC.
00:36:479 (5) - NC.
00:37:686 (1) - RNC.
01:06:163 (1) - ^
01:16:540 (7) - NC.
01:25:952 (5) - ^

[Saten's Insane]
00:13:070 (3) - 1grid up? nazi
00:38:048 (8) - shouldn't stack to the previous slider.
00:47:339 (6) - 1grid left.
00:49:752 (4) - NC ?
01:13:644 (1) - NC.
01:18:230 (1) - RNC.
01:18:712 (5) - NC.
01:19:195 (1) - RNC.

Apricot wrote:

[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Easy]
00:11:622 (3) - (1) と重ならないように配置してください
00:15:000 (3) - (2)と完全に重なってません
00:23:206 (3) - Health Barと重なっているので修正してください
00:25:619 (1) - (4) と重ならないように配置した方がいいかもしれません
00:38:651 (2) - (5) と重ならないように配置してください
00:46:374 (5) - NC.
00:47:822 (1) - RNC.
00:49:270 (5) - NC.
00:59:405 (3) - ^
01:00:371 (1) - RNC.
Spinnerの終点を 01:26:917 へ移動

[Normal]
00:16:931 (4) - この配置の方が綺麗に見えると思います
00:31:894 (6) - Health Barと重なっているので修正してください
00:47:339 (5) - ^
01:02:784 (6) - Normalで1/4は使わない方がいいです
Spinnerの終点を 01:26:917 へ移動

[Hard]
AR -1
00:16:086 (1) - スペーシングが狭すぎます
00:18:620 (4) - 前後のサークルの中間に配置するようにしてください
00:20:310 (7) - NC.
00:21:034 (1) - RNC.
00:22:482 (8) - NC.
00:27:308 (12) - ^
00:32:618 (8) - ^
00:35:755 (1) - RNC.
00:36:479 (5) - NC.
00:37:686 (1) - RNC.
01:06:163 (1) - ^
01:16:540 (7) - NC.
01:25:952 (5) - ^

[Saten's Insane]
00:13:070 (3) - 1grid up? nazi
00:38:048 (8) - shouldn't stack to the previous slider.
00:47:339 (6) - 1grid left.
00:49:752 (4) - NC ?
01:13:644 (1) - NC.
01:18:230 (1) - RNC.
01:18:712 (5) - NC.
01:19:195 (1) - RNC.

Thanks Mod^^
00:16:931 (4) - この配置の方が綺麗に見えると思います

考えた結果提案してもらった４の位置に３を持ってきてみました

Changes from Apricot's mod

Your message is too short.

Download: Nico Nico Douga - Miya to Odoru (murasamenosigure) [Saten's Insane].osu

Saten-san wrote:

Changes from Apricot's mod

Your message is too short.

thanks too^^

hi~

下手なりにModさせてもらいました！！

(　ﾟ∀ﾟ)o彡゜美也!美也!(　ﾟ∀ﾟ)o彡゜かわいいよ!美也!(　ﾟ∀ﾟ)o彡゜（ｒｙ

黄色＝提案

[Easy]
OD-1
スライダーの速さが0.99999990463257になってるので1.0に設定してください
スペーシングが一定ではないのでもう一度チェックしてみてください

[Normal]
AR-1
スライダーの速さが1.49999990463257になってるので1.5にしてください
00:09:450 add circle

[Hard]
スライダーの速さが1.99999990463257になってるので2.0にしてください
00:09:450 add circle
00:15:966 add circle
01:25:952 (1) - End at 01:26:676

[Saten's Insane]
AR+1
SliderMultiplier is 2.99999990463257 so use 3.0
01:26:314 (1) - End at 01:26:917

下手なModですいません＞＜

ランクドガンバです！！

[General]
On some difficulties i noticed normal hitsounds, on some soft. Decide what is better and set it on all diffs.

00:10:898 (2,3) - hard to read such jump, and it really does not fit with song.
00:12:828 (2) - ^
00:17:414 (2) - bleh.
00:19:103 (2) - ^ /etc
01:26:314 (1) - end slider here 01:26:917 -
Heavily overdone and overmapped difficulty.

DO! A! FO!

[Saten's Insane]

AR+1 or +2
連打でDSのばらつきが多いのが気になりました

00:09:450 (1) - 1 grid right
00:14:035 (3) - DS
00:14:759 (7) - 1 grid up
00:18:258 (6) - DS
00:20:792 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 物凄くやりにくい印象を受けました　こだわりがなければ変えたほうがいいと思います
00:25:619 (3) - DS
00:26:222 (6) - ^
00:28:515 (8) - ^
00:34:790 (2) - 前後の流れ的にジャンプしすぎな印象
00:38:048 (8,9) - 00:37:565 (6,7) - と同じような距離に設定
00:41:547 (1) - DS
00:42:995 (3) - ^
00:44:684 (1) - ^
00:45:891 (7) - ^
00:47:822 (1) - ^
00:57:716 (3) - 1 grid right
01:15:454 (2) - DS
01:15:575 (3) - ^

nice beat map.

00:46:370秒目から始まるスライダーがたくさんつながっているところは改善したほうがいいと思います。

01:09:532秒目から始まる9連打からのスライダーですが音楽とかとあってないような気がします。気のせいだったらごめんなさい。

それと一番最後のスライダーとスピンですがもうちょっと何か他のものに変えたほうがよろしいと思うのはぼくだけでしょうか。

最後にサークルの色がcombo3とcombo4の色が似すぎているのでやめたほうがよろしいのでは?

try +6ms in all diffs

[Saten's Insane]

1. AR7? at least +1 plz OD+1 or 2
2. 00:49:752 (1) - reverse arrow a bit hidden, we'd better fix it

[Hard]

1. OD +1 or 2
2. normal hitsounds too loud, not fitting well
3. broken spacing everywhere

[Normal]

1. sugguest soft hitsounds.

good luck

fixed~~
nishishi

Download: Nico Nico Douga - Miya to Odoru (murasamenosigure) [Saten's Insane].osu

Colin Hou wrote:

try +6ms in all diffs

[Saten's Insane]

1. AR7? at least +1 plz OD+1 or 2
2. 00:49:752 (1) - reverse arrow a bit hidden, we'd better fix it

[Hard]

1. OD +1 or 2 fix +1
2. normal hitsounds too loud, not fitting well fix I changed soft
3. broken spacing everywhere

fix a little

[Normal]

1. sugguest soft hitsounds.

fix I changed soft

good luck

thanks mod~

Saten-san wrote:

fixed~~
nishishi

thanks~

hello~ i'm here to mod~

General

Set Kiai time same in all diffs?

Saten's Insane

No steady Hitsound ?_? (like Claps in the other diffs)

00:14:644 (6) - NC?

00:15:006 (1) - delete NC?

00:15:851 (3) - NC?

00:30:934 (4) - ^

01:08:823 (4) - add finish like 01:07:858 (4) ?

01:16:788 (1) - delete NC?

01:17:270 (3) - NC?

01:18:718 (1) - delete NC?

01:19:201 (3) - NC?

01:19:563 (1) - delete NC?

[Hard]

How about setting New Combo more properly?

add finish following the Background song~

00:09:691 (1) - add finish on head

00:49:511 (4,5) - little weird spacing here?

00:59:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too confusing pattern for hard

01:18:471 (10,11,1) - these are not following the song~ try this

Normal

How about setting New Combo more properly?

00:09:691 (1) - add hitsound on head

00:20:792 (1) - delete NC

Good Luck~

Reisen Udongein wrote:

hello~ i'm here to mod~

General

Set Kiai time same in all diffs?

Saten's Insane

No steady Hitsound ?_? (like Claps in the other diffs)

00:14:644 (6) - NC?

00:15:006 (1) - delete NC?

00:15:851 (3) - NC?

00:30:934 (4) - ^

01:08:823 (4) - add finish like 01:07:858 (4) ?

01:16:788 (1) - delete NC?

01:17:270 (3) - NC?

01:18:718 (1) - delete NC?

01:19:201 (3) - NC?

01:19:563 (1) - delete NC?

[Hard]

How about setting New Combo more properly?

add finish following the Background song~

00:09:691 (1) - add finish on head

00:49:511 (4,5) - little weird spacing here?

00:59:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too confusing pattern for hard

01:18:471 (10,11,1) - these are not following the song~ try this

Normal

How about setting New Combo more properly?

00:09:691 (1) - add hitsound on head

00:20:792 (1) - delete NC

Good Luck~

thank you Mod~~

Fix my part!

Fixed, but I'm wondering how to add attachments with this new layout...

I Love Miya

Good diff~~~

1

Aoyama Yukari wrote:

I Love Miya

Me too!!!!!

Aoyama Yukari wrote:

Good diff~~~

Thank you~
Insane is goooooooooood

Saten wrote:

Fixed, but I'm wondering how to add attachments with this new layout...

SPOILER

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Miya to Odoru.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55785
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Miya to Odoru
Artist:Nico Nico Douga
Creator:murasamenosigure
Version:Saten's Insane
Source:
Tags:Amagami Scarlet Sisters Saten-san

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.99999990463257
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"miya_to_odoruBG.png"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
44.265320357392,482.664155844156,4,2,0,60,1,0
7766,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
8973,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
56027,-100,4,2,0,60,0,1
85958,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,255
Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 255,128,255

[HitObjects]
448,24,8008,1,4
64,24,8370,1,4
256,360,8732,1,4
256,24,9456,6,0,B|256:176,2,149.999995231629,0|4|0
304,24,10059,1,2
344,48,10180,1,0
360,88,10300,1,0
352,136,10421,1,2
320,168,10542,1,0
280,184,10662,6,0,B|200:184,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
208,336,10904,2,0,B|288:336,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
320,328,11145,2,0,B|392:296|416:216,1,149.999995231629,0|2
256,104,11628,6,0,B|176:104|120:160,1,149.999995231629,4|0
112,192,11990,1,2
120,232,12110,1,0
152,256,12231,1,0
192,256,12352,1,2
224,240,12472,1,0
240,208,12593,6,0,B|240:128,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
392,128,12834,2,0,B|392:208,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
176,192,13076,2,0,B|176:104|96:72,1,149.999995231629,0|2
256,328,13558,6,0,B|336:320|376:240,1,149.999995231629,4|2
376,208,13920,1,0
368,176,14041,1,2
336,152,14162,1,0
296,144,14282,2,0,B|216:176|144:152,1,149.999995231629,2|2
120,136,14644,5,0
104,104,14765,1,2
112,64,14886,1,0
136,40,15006,2,0,B|216:40,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
288,40,15248,2,0,B|368:40|416:128,2,149.999995231629,0|2|0
312,136,15851,6,0,B|312:288,1,149.999995231629,2|0
200,248,16213,2,0,B|200:96,1,149.999995231629,2|0
312,286,16696,1,4
200,98,16937,1,4
256,192,17178,6,0,B|256:272,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
168,312,17420,2,0,B|96:280|96:192,1,149.999995231629,2|0
448,216,17902,1,0
480,192,18023,1,2
488,152,18144,1,0
480,120,18264,1,0
448,96,18385,1,2
408,96,18506,1,0
376,112,18626,1,0
360,144,18747,1,2
360,184,18868,6,0,B|360:264,1,74.9999976158143
152,200,19109,2,0,B|152:120,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
168,88,19350,2,0,B|240:64|320:88,1,149.999995231629,2|0
344,112,19712,1,0
360,144,19833,1,2
360,184,19954,1,0
352,224,20074,6,0,B|304:288,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
208,288,20316,2,0,B|136:240|128:160,1,149.999995231629,2|0
464,40,20798,1,2
464,344,21040,1,0
48,344,21281,1,2
48,40,21522,1,2
464,40,21764,1,0
407,302,22005,5,0
104,302,22246,1,2
104,81,22488,1,2
407,81,22729,1,2
256,192,23212,12,6,24660
256,192,25142,6,0,B|176:200|112:152,1,149.999995231629,2|2
88,128,25504,1,0
80,88,25625,1,0
96,56,25746,2,0,B|176:32|248:56,1,149.999995231629,2|2
272,80,26108,1,0
280,112,26228,1,2
272,152,26349,1,0
240,176,26470,1,0
208,192,26590,2,0,B|168:264|208:336,1,149.999995231629,2|2
272,80,27073,5,0
304,48,27194,1,2
344,40,27314,1,0
384,48,27435,1,2
256,320,27676,5,2
224,336,27797,1,0
184,336,27918,1,2
152,320,28038,1,0
136,288,28159,1,2
144,248,28280,1,2
168,216,28400,1,0
192,192,28521,1,2
192,152,28642,1,0
176,120,28762,1,2
40,296,29004,6,0,B|88:352,1,74.9999976158143,0|2
200,272,29245,2,0,B|264:224,1,74.9999976158143
368,144,29486,2,0,B|440:176|448:264,1,149.999995231629,2|0
424,296,29848,1,2
320,352,29969,6,0,B|240:344|200:272,1,149.999995231629,2|2
192,32,30452,2,0,B|272:32,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
272,184,30693,2,0,B|192:184,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
328,104,30934,6,0,B|384:152,1,74.9999976158143,2|2
64,336,31417,2,0,B|24:272|24:272|24:192,1,149.999995231629,2|0
328,192,31900,5,2
328,192,32020,1,0
200,264,32141,2,0,B|160:192|200:120,2,149.999995231629,2|2|0
232,288,32744,1,0
264,296,32865,1,4
464,48,33106,5,2
48,48,33348,1,2
464,336,33589,1,0
48,336,33831,1,0
360,192,34072,5,2
152,192,34192,1,2
256,16,34434,6,0,B|256:168,1,149.999995231629,2|0
256,368,34796,2,0,B|256:216,1,149.999995231629,2|0
256,218,35158,1,0
256,218,35278,1,2
256,16,35520,1,0
360,192,35761,5,2
392,176,35882,1,0
416,144,36002,1,2
416,104,36123,1,0
400,72,36244,1,2
112,72,36485,1,2
408,280,36726,5,0
400,312,36847,1,2
376,344,36968,1,0
336,352,37088,1,2
296,352,37209,2,0,B|232:312|224:224,1,149.999995231629,2|2
224,192,37571,1,0
232,152,37692,2,0,B|192:80|112:72,1,149.999995231629,2|0
100,124,38054,1,2
136,160,38174,2,0,B|240:40,1,149.999995231629,2|2
376,224,38657,6,0,B|272:344,1,149.999995231629,0|2
208,248,39019,2,0,B|312:128,2,149.999995231629,0|2|0
96,248,39622,2,0,B|48:104,1,149.999995231629,2|2
64,72,39984,1,0
88,48,40105,1,2
416,136,40346,6,0,B|464:280,1,149.999995231629,2|2
448,312,40708,1,2
424,336,40829,1,2
384,344,40950,1,2
344,344,41070,2,0,B|264:304|256:224,1,149.999995231629,2|2
88,48,41553,5,2
64,72,41674,1,0
48,104,41794,1,2
48,144,41915,1,0
72,176,42036,2,0,B|112:248|80:320,1,149.999995231629,2|2
440,208,42518,6,0,B|400:136|432:64,1,149.999995231629,2|0
464,48,42880,1,0
496,56,43001,1,2
512,88,43122,1,0
496,120,43242,2,0,B|424:136,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
384,136,43484,2,0,B|304:128,3,74.9999976158143,2|0|2|0
272,128,43966,2,0,B|112:160|184:224|248:288|96:312,1,299.999990463257,2|2
413,72,44690,5,2
392,48,44811,1,0
360,32,44932,1,2
320,32,45052,2,0,B|240:48|216:128,1,149.999995231629,2|0
216,168,45414,1,2
232,200,45535,2,0,B|192:264|104:272,1,149.999995231629,0|2
72,272,45897,2,0,B|32:208|48:128,2,149.999995231629,0|0|0
104,296,46500,5,2
144,296,46621,1,2
176,280,46742,1,0
200,248,46862,2,0,B|200:168,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
272,88,47104,2,0,B|272:168,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
344,248,47345,2,0,B|344:168|408:112,1,149.999995231629,2|2
456,336,47828,5,2
424,352,47948,1,0
384,360,48069,1,2
344,352,48190,2,0,B|288:296,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
196,360,48431,2,0,B|148:304,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
188,32,48793,6,0,B|188:112,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
324,88,49034,2,0,B|376:36,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
488,116,49276,2,0,B|518:191|479:264,1,149.999995231629,0|2
256,168,49758,6,0,B|256:88,2,74.9999976158143,2|0|2
240,200,50120,1,0
208,216,50241,1,2
168,216,50362,1,0
144,184,50482,2,0,B|144:32,1,149.999995231629,2|2
368,34,50965,1,4
256,264,51206,5,0
224,288,51327,1,2
184,288,51448,1,0
152,280,51568,1,2
128,256,51689,1,0
120,216,51810,1,2
136,184,51930,1,2
168,168,52051,6,0,B|248:160|304:88,1,149.999995231629
296,64,52413,1,2
280,32,52534,1,0
240,24,52654,1,2
208,40,52775,1,0
192,72,52896,1,2
256,344,53137,6,0,B|256:264,1,74.9999976158143,0|2
256,232,53378,2,0,B|312:168|400:176,1,149.999995231629,2|2
122,175,53861,2,0,B|120:96,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
104,64,54102,6,0,B|24:88|-8:168,1,149.999995231629,2|0
408,64,54585,2,0,B|488:88|520:168,1,149.999995231629,2|0
504,192,54947,2,0,B|432:216,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
8,192,55309,2,0,B|80:216,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
120,216,55550,2,0,B|192:184|208:96,1,149.999995231629,2|0
392,168,56033,6,0,B|320:200|304:288,1,149.999995231629,4|0
336,304,56395,1,0
368,280,56516,2,0,B|352:200|272:168,1,149.999995231629,2|0
240,168,56878,1,0
208,184,56998,2,0,B|152:240|160:328,1,149.999995231629,2|0
352,63,57481,5,2
320,48,57602,1,0
280,48,57722,1,2
232,336,57964,1,4
232,48,58205,6,0,B|160:64|112:136,1,149.999995231629,2|0
112,168,58567,1,0
128,200,58688,1,2
384,200,58929,1,2
416,216,59050,1,0
440,240,59170,1,2
72,240,59412,6,4,B|128:88|296:64,1,299.999990463257,4|4
383,231,60136,1,0
216,319,60377,1,2
128,152,60618,1,2
295,64,60860,1,0
264,200,61101,1,2
264,200,61222,1,0
264,200,61342,1,2
216,319,61584,1,2
256,192,61825,12,4,63273
256,192,63514,6,0,B|256:112,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
224,104,63756,2,0,B|136:120|120:200,1,149.999995231629,2|0
152,216,64118,2,0,B|176:296|104:352,1,149.999995231629,2|0
72,352,64480,2,0,B|0:288|24:208,1,149.999995231629,2|0
176,56,64962,1,2
256,264,65204,1,2
280,296,65324,1,0
320,304,65445,1,2
320,80,65686,5,4
40,192,65928,1,0
40,192,66048,2,0,B|56:264|128:312,1,149.999995231629,2|0
160,304,66410,2,0,B|216:248|208:168,1,149.999995231629,2|0
88,48,66893,1,2
96,80,67014,1,0
104,112,67134,1,2
408,112,67376,5,0
104,272,67617,1,0
104,272,67738,1,0
104,272,67858,2,4,B|144:336|232:344,1,149.999995231629,4|4
229,40,68341,5,0
282,343,68582,1,0
282,343,68703,1,0
282,343,68824,2,0,B|344:304|360:216,1,149.999995231629,6|6
359,219,69186,1,0
256,192,69427,12,4,70996
472,192,71478,6,0,B|344:296|168:88|40:192,1,449.999985694885,2|0
176,256,72444,2,0,B|272:288,2,99.9999968210857,2|0|2
144,160,72926,2,0,B|224:16|400:40,1,299.999990463257,2|2
416,192,73650,6,0,B|336:192,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
264,208,73892,2,0,B|208:264,1,74.9999976158143,0|2
136,280,74133,2,0,B|56:280,2,74.9999976158143,0|2|0
208,304,74495,2,0,B|256:360,2,74.9999976158143,2|2|0
192,232,74857,2,0,B|192:152|264:104,1,149.999995231629,2|2
416,192,75340,5,2
408,232,75460,1,0
384,256,75581,1,0
352,272,75702,1,2
312,272,75822,2,0,B|256:216,2,74.9999976158143,0|2|0
288,304,76184,2,0,B|208:304,2,74.9999976158143,2|0|2
328,312,76546,2,0,B|392:352,1,74.9999976158143
432,352,76788,2,0,B|496:304|496:216,1,149.999995231629,2|0
488,184,77150,1,2
456,160,77270,6,0,B|336:16|192:288|48:112,1,449.999985694885,4|2
48,72,78115,1,0
72,48,78236,1,2
104,40,78356,1,0
136,48,78477,1,2
160,80,78598,1,0
160,120,78718,2,0,B|208:176,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
248,176,78960,2,0,B|296:232,1,74.9999976158143,2|0
312,272,79201,6,0,B|272:336|184:344,1,149.999995231629,4|2
152,344,79563,2,0,B|88:296|96:208,1,149.999995231629,0|2
128,192,79925,2,0,B|208:200|280:144,2,149.999995231629,0|2|2
112,160,80528,2,0,B|152:96|232:72,1,149.999995231629,0|2
256,96,80890,2,0,B|320:128|408:96,1,149.999995231629
256,192,81373,12,0,82580
256,336,83062,6,0,B|288:256|256:184,1,149.999995231629,2|0
224,184,83424,2,0,B|184:112|232:32,1,149.999995231629,2|0
264,32,83786,2,0,B|344:56|352:144,1,149.999995231629,2|0
160,242,84269,5,2
128,256,84390,1,0
88,256,84510,1,2
56,240,84631,1,0
40,208,84752,1,2
48,168,84872,1,0
72,144,84993,6,0,B|144:104|216:128,1,149.999995231629,2|0
240,160,85355,1,0
264,184,85476,2,0,B|344:192|400:128,1,149.999995231629,2|2
408,96,85838,1,0
392,64,85958,1,2
360,56,86079,1,0
320,64,86200,1,2
296,88,86320,6,0,B|296:312,1,224.999986141921,4|0
256,192,87165,12,0,88613

thanks Mod=~~~~=

[General]
- Inconsistancy in countdown
- Inconsistancy in red timine line (insane differs)
- Try to switch combo colour 3 and 4 since combo colour 2 and 3 are too similar each other

[Insane]
00:23:212 - the vocal actually starts 1/4 eariler (not exactly but nearer) so start the spinner eariler.
00:33:589 (3) - whistle?
00:57:964 (4) - A bit nazi but placing this along the y-axis (x:256) makes the figure symmetrical.
01:26:320 (1) - Don't know why you ended the slider on this blue tick... I will prefer ending it 1/2 eariler (yes another blue tick) where the music ends.

[Hard]
00:14:759 (4) - whistle at the end may work well?
00:26:102 (4) - slider minor fix so that it curves (5) better

92,248,26102,2,0,B|128:292|116:348|68:376,1,139.999990463257,0|8

00:29:480 (2) - move to (240,204)? Try to maintain equal spacing within combos unless you're making it intentionally

[Normal]
nothing special...but clapping through the song is not a very nice choice, and stop clapping in vocals with higher tones is odd without hitsound replacements...

[Taiko]
-remove letterbox during breaks
00:14:518 - such kind of 1/4 finish is banned (the second last and the last note have to be different)
00:16:207 - ^, 1/4 finishes can only be used on simple streams like xxxxO / xxooX
00:16:690 - these two notes sounds strong so you can also add finishes on them
00:30:928 - these sldiers are not recommended because in slower songs 1/8 sliders are given instead of 1/4, and no 1/8 appered in the song.
00:32:376 - same as 0:16
00:34:066 - ^ (well I suppose dk K work but there's a vocal note on the removed d...)
00:40:340 - too short for 1/4 finishes
00:47:822 - same as 0:16
00:51:924 - d as indicated by music
00:53:613 - same as 0:16
00:55:061 - no consecutive 1/4 finishes thanks
00:59:164 - I suppose you can use X X notes here like 00:57:716 -
01:05:680 - same as 0:30
01:09:300 - add a note to keep the flow?
01:17:264 - didn't feel something like D K D K from the music
01:18:712 - same as 0:16
01:26:676 - like 0:14

other than problems on usage of finishes it's nice. Note that the stream should be at least 5-plets for 1/4 finishes. In fact I feel like some of them are suitable and you can turn the stream into simple stream and leave the finish there.

Whee~

http://puu.sh/CubZ

@murasamenosigure
Change the combo colors om mine as well if you 're gonna change them~

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
-remove letterbox during breaks
00:14:518 - such kind of 1/4 finish is banned (the second last and the last note have to be different)fixed
00:16:207 - ^, 1/4 finishes can only be used on simple streams like xxxxO / xxooXfixed
00:16:690 - these two notes sounds strong so you can also add finishes on themfixed
00:30:928 - these sldiers are not recommended because in slower songs 1/8 sliders are given instead of 1/4, and no 1/8 appered in the song.fixed
00:32:376 - same as 0:16change simple stream
00:34:066 - ^ (well I suppose dk K work but there's a vocal note on the removed d...)fixed
00:40:340 - too short for 1/4 finishesfixed
00:47:822 - same as 0:16fixed
00:51:924 - d as indicated by musicfixed
00:53:613 - same as 0:16change simple stream
00:55:061 - no consecutive 1/4 finishes thanksfixed
00:59:164 - I suppose you can use X X notes here like 00:57:716 - fixed
01:05:680 - same as 0:30fixed
01:09:300 - add a note to keep the flow?fixed add note
01:17:264 - didn't feel something like D K D K from the musicfixed
01:18:712 - same as 0:16change simple stream
01:26:676 - like 0:14ｆｉｘｅｄ (remove note)

All fixed !!
other than problems on usage of finishes it's nice. Note that the stream should be at least 5-plets for 1/4 finishes. In fact I feel like some of them are suitable and you can turn the stream into simple stream and leave the finish there.

thanks modding !

http://puu.sh/Dyxv

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
- Inconsistancy in countdown
- Inconsistancy in red timine line (insane differs)
- Try to switch combo colour 3 and 4 since combo colour 2 and 3 are too similar each other

[Insane]
00:23:212 - the vocal actually starts 1/4 eariler (not exactly but nearer) so start the spinner eariler.
00:33:589 (3) - whistle?
00:57:964 (4) - A bit nazi but placing this along the y-axis (x:256) makes the figure symmetrical.
01:26:320 (1) - Don't know why you ended the slider on this blue tick... I will prefer ending it 1/2 eariler (yes another blue tick) where the music ends.

[Hard]
00:14:759 (4) - whistle at the end may work well?
00:26:102 (4) - slider minor fix so that it curves (5) better

92,248,26102,2,0,B|128:292|116:348|68:376,1,139.999990463257,0|8

00:29:480 (2) - move to (240,204)? Try to maintain equal spacing within combos unless you're making it intentionally

[Normal]
nothing special...but clapping through the song is not a very nice choice, and stop clapping in vocals with higher tones is odd without hitsound replacements...

[Taiko]
-remove letterbox during breaks
00:14:518 - such kind of 1/4 finish is banned (the second last and the last note have to be different)
00:16:207 - ^, 1/4 finishes can only be used on simple streams like xxxxO / xxooX
00:16:690 - these two notes sounds strong so you can also add finishes on them
00:30:928 - these sldiers are not recommended because in slower songs 1/8 sliders are given instead of 1/4, and no 1/8 appered in the song.
00:32:376 - same as 0:16
00:34:066 - ^ (well I suppose dk K work but there's a vocal note on the removed d...)
00:40:340 - too short for 1/4 finishes
00:47:822 - same as 0:16
00:51:924 - d as indicated by music
00:53:613 - same as 0:16
00:55:061 - no consecutive 1/4 finishes thanks
00:59:164 - I suppose you can use X X notes here like 00:57:716 -
01:05:680 - same as 0:30
01:09:300 - add a note to keep the flow?
01:17:264 - didn't feel something like D K D K from the music
01:18:712 - same as 0:16
01:26:676 - like 0:14

other than problems on usage of finishes it's nice. Note that the stream should be at least 5-plets for 1/4 finishes. In fact I feel like some of them are suitable and you can turn the stream into simple stream and leave the finish there.

thx mod!
fix all
done