LKs wrote:

BG
BG不错 但男主的脸太大了吧 违和

Sweet

[00:15:734] 45都向右1格 我把3往左移，距離就一樣了
[00:47:039] 向右1 OK

其他难度都没问题 找泡吧 真的可以！？

另外真不用这么多难度 都你做导致风格趋同 之前我有聽過類似的話lol
难度变化也不大 反而我期望中的那种难度没做出来 嘛，整體就是太簡單了是吧？我不太會做觸圖lol

• - 個人認為應該在Tsuyokiss/Kiss之間取捨一個, 同時存在兩個insane意義也不大

• 01:01:480 (T) - change volume to 50%?
  01:07:163 (1) - new combo when kiai starts?
  01:25:051 (6,7,1) - rhythm suggest: http://puu.sh/8E7a
  02:22:442 (2,3,4,5) - fix spacing between these sliders
  
  
  Sweet
  [list:8135f]- 多留意一下clap的下法, 不時斷掉後又突然出現比較違和
  - 相比後面的難度, 這個Normal稍微偷懶了

• - 想跳又要控制難度的感覺!

• - 有點shinxyn, 或者說baka2的感覺呢

• - 跳的稍微誇張呢o.o"" 能挑的似乎不多

Pokie wrote:

-Gamu-'s
[list:50733]01:01:480 (T) - 改成50%音量? 40>60音量差距稍大 fixed
01:07:163 (1) - kiai再開始new combo比較適合, 取消new combo fixed
01:07:536 (2) - new combo fixed
01:22:442 ~ 01:31:014 - 節奏突然變的密集, 建議: http://puu.sh/8E7a fixed
- 01:25:424 (7) - 改成2/1拍slider
- 01:26:169 (1) - 刪
- 01:26:914 (x) - 加circle, new combo
02:22:442 (2,3,4,5) - 4個slider中間的間距最好相同 fixed

單人做4難度還挺多的, 不錯不錯

-Gamu- wrote:

Chinese 0.0

Mod Thank you~

____________________

To DarknessAngel

My diff. Please update

Pokie wrote:

General

• - 個人認為應該在Tsuyokiss/Kiss之間取捨一個, 同時存在兩個insane意義也不大

唔，我就是要留！lol


Sweet

• - 多留意一下clap的下法, 不時斷掉後又突然出現比較違和
  - 相比後面的難度, 這個Normal稍微偷懶了

太切中核心，我無話可說lol
00:55:610 ~ 01:00:082 - 這一段的clap不太需要, 可以考慮刪掉 fixed
02:09:958 (2) - 結尾漏了個clap麼 XD? 02:11:449 (4) - 這裡有下呢 fixed
02:44:430 (1,2,3) - (1)跟(2)都是跟著vocal, 個人認為(3)會造成誤導而早按了, 把(3)往下移如何? fixed



Heart

• - 想跳又要控制難度的感覺!

又中了...
00:25:796 (1) - 縮短1/1拍 fixed
00:27:660 (1,1) - 前移/起始點前移1/1拍? 目前的方式和歌曲不搭 fixed
00:44:989 (x) - 這個位置需要一個空檔呢, 刪掉這位置的note? 這裡是跳專用:3
00:51:697 (3) - 第一拍加上whistle? fixed
00:59:337 (3) - ^ fixed
01:00:082 (5) - 第一拍可以考慮加whistle/finish fixed
01:10:517 (6) - 跳設置的比較突然, 建議下移一些(大概4個grid) fixed
02:25:424 (4,5) - spacing錯誤? 左移1 grid fixed
02:31:014 (7) - 同01:10:517 (6), 左移4 grid? fixed
02:39:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - 希望能換個排列, AR6下這類型來回方式的排列並不適合 我想留著lol，話說AR是7。:3
02:49:647 (4) - slider第一拍加whistle fixed
02:50:206 (2) - whistle fixed



Kiss

• - 有點shinxyn, 或者說baka2的感覺呢

有被這樣說過lol
00:25:610 (7) - 結尾finish效果似乎還不錯XD 同感ww
00:39:399 (6,7) - spacing fixed
00:41:076 (3) - new combo或者往左上微移, 分辦不出這位置還有一個slider fixed
00:55:610 (6) - new combo fixed
01:00:641 (7) - ^ fixed
01:03:436 (1) - 關掉grid snap後移成這樣比較美觀: http://puu.sh/8EaU
fixed
01:04:927 (6) - 結尾上移: http://puu.sh/8EaY
fixed
01:08:467 (x) - 加一個circle, 或是把01:08:095 (4) 改成1/2 slider 唔，我想保留這個...
02:05:113 (1,2,3) - 這裡只出現一次反而突兀, 最好把break後的整段都補上同樣的效果 好吧我把他刪了



TsuyoKiss

• - 跳的稍微誇張呢o.o"" 能挑的似乎不多

因為我對這歌很熟悉lol，還能接受嗎？我感覺很多地方能跳的lol


===
單人做4難度還挺多的, 不錯不錯

Firce777 wrote:

我來mod小車車太鼓了~

SPOILER

嘛~萌車車的排列實在是中規中矩 沒什麼可挑的
01:37:815 ~ 01:38:747 這裡的變速建議還是稍微調降一些 0.15x會讓人反應不過 尤其是開了mod 0.10x如何:3?
02:59:363 ~ 02:59:363 同上

不錯的譜 快RANK吧:3

hitsuchi22 wrote:

Keep what you think looks good...

Sweet
01:09:399 (1,2,3) - Consider removing (they're quite close to the spinner) and make the second spinner earlier. fixed
01:30:641 (5,6) - Move one step down, grid level 3 fixed
01:39:213 (6,7) - Move one step left, grid level 3 fixed
02:19:461 (1) - Remove this?
02:20:952 (1) - Too close to following beats, shorten/remove?
02:30:827 (1) - ^
02:41:449 - 02:42:939: same as previous spinners.
02:57:101 (1,2,3) - Move one step right on grid level 3

All fixed

Heart
01:19:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - These just don't look square... fixed
02:15:548 (4,5) - 4 a bit to the right and 5 a bit more to the right? No
02:17:411 (5) - Down to the left for symmetry with 2,3,4. If you want symmetry. No
02:54:492 (1) - A bit downwards? No

Kiss
I almost passed it *proud* 0.0
00:46:293 (5) - I step to the right, grid level 3...or not? No
01:31:386 (1) - 01:35:859 (4) - I want a clap or two somewhere in here. No
01:52:442 (2) - 1 step down , Grid level 3. Grid level now abbreviated GL. No
01:53:933 (2) - I suppose here too. fixed
02:25:610 (5) - 1 step down ,still GL3. fixed
02:28:032 (1,2,3,4) - Not a square/rectangle/paralello-something. yeah~

Tsuyokiss
Too hard for me, but I tried...
00:33:809 (3,4,5) - Should these be a straight line? No
01:15:548 (3) - Little bit to the left? fixed
02:19:554 (2) - Sounds too short. Make longer?fixed

hitsuchi22 wrote:

Keep what you think looks good...

-Gamu-'s Relaxing
01:56:355 (3) - slider isn't symmetrical e... I think I have become symmetrical
01:57:473 (1,2) - ^ ^
03:00:082 (1) - You could skip this beat, or place it 1/4 later. no fixed

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Good map, all suggestions here

[Relaxing]
00:34:741 (5) - if you want to make a semicircle, place a note and follow the approach circle. This one is not perfect. ok fixed
02:09:399 (1) - ^ ^
others are fine...

bossandy wrote:

[size=150]Hi hi!~
第二次mod from my queue~

-Gamu-'s Relaxing:

SPOILER

00:55:610 (1,2,3) - remove clap and add finish no fixed
00:58:219 (4) - remove finish and add clap start, remove clap and add finish end finish add (end)
00:59:337 (1,2) - remove clap and add finish no fixed
01:06:790 (7) - add clap fixed
01:07:536 (1) - add finish start fixed
01:34:368 (1) - add clap start fixed
02:04:182 (1) - remove whistle and add finish fixed

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Good map, all suggestions here


[Sweet]
00:28:778 (3) - it's not straight, a bit surprising :O
02:39:958 (1,1) - As it's a Normal, don't place notes immediately after a spinner. The new players (um?) need some time to find their cursor after it. I had fixed it... :O
02:48:902 (2) - add clap on 1st reverse? fixed

[Heart]
00:16:852 (1) - +1 reverse? No
02:28:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's not necessary to use a star formation here... yeah~Why not?:D

[Kiss]
00:39:958 (1,3) - overlapped and I failed to read fixed
00:35:672 (4) - wrong finish? yes,it is
00:39:958 (1) - remove head clap? OK
02:18:343 (7) - this?

002.jpg

[attachment=0:ca6ef]screenshot002.JPG[/attachment:ca6ef]

Maybe wrong link?
02:42:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - are you sure you want to use this here? = = OK I change the style...

[Tsuyokiss]
00:25:051 (2,4) - clap on 4 instead? fixed
00:41:449 (3) - add finish on head?No
01:08:654 (1,2,3) - um, spacing right? yes, it is
01:14:430 (3) - wrong clap? fixed
01:27:101 (4) - feels strange in some way... change 3 to slider and/or remove finish? fixed
02:06:418 (2,3,4) - 2sliders / 1slider + 2circle? sorry= =
02:15:921 (6) - use louder sound as well fixed
02:35:672 (2) - finish on 1 end? No
02:36:977 (8,3) - finish? No
02:58:778 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - whistle all? it sounds better than the current one I think the last clap is good... :O

bossandy wrote:

Hi hi!~
第二次mod from my queue~


Sweet:

SPOILER

00:50:952 (5) - 醜 噗！我改好了= =
01:07:536 (1) - 不建議用spinner帶過
01:10:517 (1) - ^
01:31:014 (6) - 這間距變大了一點...
02:30:827 (1) - 不建議這樣帶過...
02:39:958 (1) - ^
02:42:939 (1) - ^ 請原諒我這個不聽話的小孩...SPINNER我要留著orz

Heart:

SPOILER

不錯!

可能是mod已經很多的關係 找不到很多了
加油吧!! Good luck~!!

wmfchris wrote:

[小轟轟taiko]
00:43:126 - 要突出vocal的高音用d k 決定改前面的凸顯背景音，順便後面的也改了
01:58:964 - k ddd K 這...容我三思:P
基本上沒問題了 個人不讚成連續加速不過up to you
8/10

wmfchris wrote:

都第baka頁了都一堆mod o_o 是啊，因為在第5頁的時候又remap了一次

[General]
Tag littlecar3370 in [Relaxing]. fixed

[Tsuyokiss]
00:52:070 (4) - left 1 grid lv4 fixed
01:08:467 - feel empty as an insane here. try xxx x x here? (remove the next 1/4 note on blue tick) 我改了另一種形式
01:14:244 (1,5) - remove finish, you may finish on (5) fixed
01:23:049 (4) - up 1~2 grid lv4 fixed
01:58:778 (2) - Try to rotate the direction of slider a bit so that it looks parallel to (4), it looks a bit better fixed

[Kiss]
00:16:392 (3) - remove whistle fixed
00:17:411 (2,5) - left+up 1 grid fixed
00:22:256 (1~5) - uneven spacing where?
00:26:542 (2,4) - remove whistle may fit the vocal better? fixed
01:08:095 (4) - feeling empty, make the slider 1 beat long or add a 1/2 notes No,it is this diff's style
01:17:225 (6) - may look better if down 1 grid fixed
01:34:182 (8) - remove whistle? fixed
01:38:840 (9) - a finish to end the sentence will be cool yeah,so cool~
02:28:964 - same as 01:08 fixed

我覺得這個圖diff spread是E H H+ H+ I 這樣有點偏重於難的diff
其實[Heart], [Kiss] 化為一個diff應該不成問題 不過毀掉自己心血也是事實

做了都做了，我不會刪的！ˋˊ

加油 ._. 果然到第9頁還是要mod 謝謝你的提醒...

kenny012012 wrote:

:)

DarkRingSystem wrote:

;) 来 搓b mod来了
娇蛮之吻 我记得好像是我刚上高中的时候的事了 很怀念啊 XXD
废话有点多 看不爽可以 skip 要改你說的東西好麻煩呀lol，我盡量...Orz

[General]
TAG:hentai eroge game 恶趣味 orz..
在我有限的记忆中 这好像不是一款18x 变态 黄色 游戏 而且这个op是PS2平台上的主题曲 PC版的的確是18X，不過這首是從FOXY載到的，我後來才知道:O

[Tsuyokiss]

SPOILER

这不是第一pc 一般我觉得miss 比 100多 那么 map中肯定存在着一些排版不太合理的地方
而且这个图 日本味十足 质量上升空间很大 有些地方看似很好玩 其实还是有些不太合理的地方

00:44:430 (1) - 比如这个跳得很大 跟前面同样节奏的排版 感觉来说 奇怪了不少 唔，這個我保留一下lol
01:10:517 (1,2,3,4) - 这个跳跃 意义不太明了 就是副歌固定的跳躍啊... 0.0
01:19:461 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个也是 也许把他们间距弄小点 手感会好好些 恩 換了形式...
01:25:051 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里 读图 按道理应该是 4 5 完了之后 1 2 3 4 跳跃 是两段节奏比较合理 這裡我不太懂，能不能說詳細一點，或是給個圖說明一下？
但是这里很容易跟音乐 读成 一段节奏 那么 4 5 1 2 3 4 突然从1开始跳 就感觉不太好 建议 改变一下排版
让节奏 好读一点

整体不错

[Kiss]
很重的一股copy味 我本身不反对 但是有些pattern 不要滥用 Copy什麼的...我只是排出我喜歡的樣子而已啊lol
00:30:455 (1,2,3,4) - 这个就不是很好
01:08:467 (X) -加个点
01:29:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 再考虑下 orz

其他还好 XD


這些都改了

[Heart]
00:25:796 (1,1,1,1) - 这个很诡异
尝试一下 这样 OK

SPOILER

后面还好
我觉得这个难度跟[kiss]相当 都是hard 唔，經你這麼一說的確是


[Sweet]
01:07:536 (1,1,1) - 这个节奏不好 都进入kiai了 还转圈混节奏? 加的节奏 连贯一些 我改了一點...
02:22:070 (X) - 这里加个note 别怕 就是會怕= =，有人說反應時間太短了(對新手來說)
02:30:827 (1) - 这里 先把 02:30:082 (6) - 加一个回转 然后 这个spinner 在02:31:014开始 02:32:132结束 OK
02:32:505 (X) -这里加个note 要是你觉得有点快 那么久用slider来代替 同樣反應時間lol


断网 That's all good luck!!! and starrrrrrrr

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

skip 1st & 2nd diff

[heart]
00:15:175 (4) - 去掉finish或者减点音量。有点吵 還好吧o.o
00:47:970 (4) - 去finish 恩
01:07:536 (1) - finish 恩
01:14:244 (1,2) - 感觉容易被挑 不至於吧..
01:24:492 (1) - 去NC OK
02:13:126 (3) - finish换whistle fixed
02:28:032 (1) - ^ fixed

[Kiss]
00:20:206 (2) - 减个折返换circle No
00:26:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 考虑调下音量然后换normal 保留..
01:01:200 (3) - spacing ？？
02:17:598 (5) - 减个折返换circle No
02:56:355 (1) - NC好像不太对劲 我刪了..

[Tsuyokiss]
00:48:902 (1) - 删NC 這是為了標明跳的NC，不能刪
01:24:492 (3) - 别重叠 為啥？
02:11:449 (1) - 删NC。下个note NC fixed
02:42:008 (6) - NC fixed

1. At least, HP +1 & OD +1 please.
2. 03:00:827 (T) - why not use kiai fevering like other diffs?

• looking fine~

1. 00:18:529 (1,2,3,4) - move 1 grid right? (grid lv3)
2. 01:10:331 (5,6) - Hmm, this jump is awkward for me... try changing normal spacing?
3. 02:30:827 (6,7) - ^

1. 00:43:685 (1) - add finish?
2. 01:19:647 (2) - move 2 grid left (grid lv4)
3. 01:30:268 (3) - move 3 grid down & 2 grid left
4. 01:36:790 (2) - remove whistle on the silder's body
5. 01:53:001 (3,1) - switch new combo?
6. 02:04:182 (2) - add finish?
7. 02:35:859 (4,5,1) - move 2 grid left
8. 02:56:355 (5) - remove whistle on the silder's body

1. HP +1 or OD +1 will be better for score spread.
2. 00:36:045 (6) - move 2 grid right (grid lv4)
3. 00:43:126 (5,6,7) - make triangle jump?
4. 01:23:001 (4) - move 1 grid left
5. 01:28:405 (1,2,3,4) - make parallel
6. 02:32:877 (3,4) - move 1 grid right

banvi wrote:

[-Gamu-]

1. At least, HP +1 & OD +1 please. ok fixed
2. 03:00:827 (T) - why not use kiai fevering like other diffs? あ、気づきませんでした　fixed!

Oh, almost nazi mod xD
Good map & good luck~

banvi wrote:

[-Gamu-]

1. At least, HP +1 & OD +1 please.
2. 03:00:827 (T) - why not use kiai fevering like other diffs?

[Sweet]

• looking fine~

[Heart]

1. 00:18:529 (1,2,3,4) - move 1 grid right? (grid lv3)
2. 01:10:331 (5,6) - Hmm, this jump is awkward for me... try changing normal spacing?
3. 02:30:827 (6,7) - ^ All Done~

[Kiss]

1. 00:43:685 (1) - add finish?
2. 01:19:647 (2) - move 2 grid left (grid lv4)
3. 01:30:268 (3) - move 3 grid down & 2 grid left
4. 01:36:790 (2) - remove whistle on the silder's body
5. 01:53:001 (3,1) - switch new combo?
6. 02:04:182 (2) - add finish?
7. 02:35:859 (4,5,1) - move 2 grid left
8. 02:56:355 (5) - remove whistle on the silder's body

All fixed~

[Tsuyokiss]

1. HP +1 or OD +1 will be better for score spread.
2. 00:36:045 (6) - move 2 grid right (grid lv4)
3. 00:43:126 (5,6,7) - make triangle jump?
4. 01:23:001 (4) - move 1 grid left
5. 01:28:405 (1,2,3,4) - make parallel
6. 02:32:877 (3,4) - move 1 grid right

All Done~

Oh, almost nazi mod xD
Good map & good luck~

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Hi :3

[-Gamu-'s Relaxing]

01:55:237 (1) - 2 grid left would be better

01:58:964 (2) - 1 grid up and 1 grid left

02:22:070 (1) - 1 grid left

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Hi :3

真抱歉之前很忙所以拖很久才mod ~"~ 的確有點久了...嘛，沒關係

[General]

>>BG不修下嗎o.o 規格是要約4:3 你的是5:4 你能幫我修麼T.T，我家沒軟體

>>tag怎麼是打 打？



[Sweet]

00:31:759 (1) - 和00:29:523 (4)的頭重疊吧? 距離會錯掉

02:02:691 (2,3,4,5) - 感覺好像和前面(1)尾巴往右歪一格的感覺 fixed

02:38:095 (2,3,4,5) - 同上 往上歪一格o.o fixed

[Heart]

01:10:517 (6) - spacing? 建議重捏slider 耶？為啥？

恩...其他diff看起來都不錯了

大致上沒啥問題:3

1. Delete .osb and full submit

termerys wrote:

As your service.

Overall :

1. Delete .osb and full submit

OK


Sweet : Good pattern, but sometimes they would be boring when overuse it.
00:49:461 (2) - Move it right under (1)? :O
01:12:380 (x) - Add note here? (If you want to follow this, apply it to all the alike pattern.) No
01:15:921 (1) - DNC fixed
01:16:480 (2) - NC fixed
02:02:691 (2,3,4,5) - Move it right under (1)? fixed

Heart : Wow... this diff is flawless!

Tsuyokiss : Almost flawless!!
02:28:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rearrange this star I think it is not a star,it's nothing. XD

Decent mapset

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

>>tag怎麼是打 "Gamu而不是-Gamu-"

SPOILER

1. 00:34:741 (4) - I think slider is not symtrerical. It's better to change it into symetrical shape. Well, first make a symetrical shape like this > http://puu.sh/9BAs. Then rotate it by 120'-125' (You can do this by ctrl+shift r). And see the result : http://puu.sh/9BB3. More better right?
2. 00:54:119 (3) - I think it's best to move finish sound here to 00:55:610 (1) - since the circle is on the downbeat. And it's more better to hear and will make consistent with the finish sound after this.
3. 01:10:517 (4) - A finish sound at the endpoint here is litlle awkward. I think it's more better to remove it.
4. 01:17:598 (2) - Not symetrical slider shape here. Like before make a slider like this first > http://puu.sh/9BCw. Rotate it by 50' then place it your pattern. Final result : http://puu.sh/9BCX
5. 01:19:461 (4) - Move finish sound from endpoint to startpoint. It follow the beat more better.
6. 01:37:349 (1) - Not symetrical slider shape again? I assume you can fix it by yourself.
7. 01:57:473 (1) - A finish sound at the startpoint is not good imo. Well, there are 2 options to fix this, remove it, or adding a finish again at the startpoint of 01:58:964 (2) -
8. 02:09:399 (1) - Not symtrical slider shape again.
9. 02:13:126 (3) - Since the combo here is long, how about adding a new combo here?
10. 02:16:107 (1) - Same reason as before, it's better to add finish here at the startpoint. If you follow this you should add finish here 02:19:088 (1) - at the startpoint.
11. 02:34:741 (3) - I think you forgot to add a finish here at the startpoint. Since in your previous chorus, there are a finish sound at this rythim.
12. 02:39:585 (1) - Same as before, you should move a finish sound here to the startpoint of 02:39:958 (2) -
13. 02:47:784 (2) - A little awkward finish sound again. I think you should remove it.
14. 02:51:883 (1) - How about add a finish at the startpoint? since it's the begining of new rythim.

1. Overall nice diff
2. 00:31:759 (1) - How about adding a finish here? I think it's more better to hear.
3. 01:01:573 (1) - Same reason as above, add a finish here at the startpoint.
4. 01:31:386 (1) - ^ at the startpoint.
5. 02:04:182 (2) - In your previous rythim there are a finish sound here. I think you must forgot.

1. Nice diff too.
2. 00:31:759 (1) - add a finish here for a finishing touch of the rythim.
3. 00:41:076 (1) - Emm, make it stack properly with the 00:39:958 (1) - . It's more better to see imo.?
4. 01:16:480 (4) - Adding a finish sound at the startpoint is nice. And it will be a finishing touch for the finish rythim you added before this.
5. 01:35:859 (4) - A finish sound at the endpoint here is a little awkward. You can remove it or change it into whistle.
6. 02:18:343 (6) - Move the second point to x:312 y:268 since it's not't blanket properly.

termerys wrote:

As your service.

-Gamu-'s Relaxing : Good difficulty, but I think it could be better.
00:39:585 (1) - DNC
00:40:331 (2) - NC
01:06:790 (7) - NC no fixed
01:07:536 (1) - DNC no fixed
02:39:585 (1) - DNC
02:39:958 (2) - NC

Miya wrote:

-Gamu-'s Relaxing

1. 00:34:741 (4) - I think slider is not symtrerical. It's better to change it into symetrical shape. Well, first make a symetrical shape like this > http://puu.sh/9BAs. Then rotate it by 120'-125' (You can do this by ctrl+shift r). And see the result : http://puu.sh/9BB3. More better right?
2. 00:54:119 (3) - I think it's best to move finish sound here to 00:55:610 (1) - since the circle is on the downbeat. And it's more better to hear and will make consistent with the finish sound after this.
3. 01:10:517 (4) - A finish sound at the endpoint here is litlle awkward. I think it's more better to remove it.
4. 01:17:598 (2) - Not symetrical slider shape here. Like before make a slider like this first > http://puu.sh/9BCw. Rotate it by 50' then place it your pattern. Final result : http://puu.sh/9BCX
5. 01:19:461 (4) - Move finish sound from endpoint to startpoint. It follow the beat more better.
6. 01:37:349 (1) - Not symetrical slider shape again? I assume you can fix it by yourself.
7. 01:57:473 (1) - A finish sound at the startpoint is not good imo. Well, there are 2 options to fix this, remove it, or adding a finish again at the startpoint of 01:58:964 (2) -
8. 02:09:399 (1) - Not symtrical slider shape again.
9. 02:13:126 (3) - Since the combo here is long, how about adding a new combo here?
10. 02:16:107 (1) - Same reason as before, it's better to add finish here at the startpoint. If you follow this you should add finish here 02:19:088 (1) - at the startpoint.
11. 02:34:741 (3) - I think you forgot to add a finish here at the startpoint. Since in your previous chorus, there are a finish sound at this rythim.
12. 02:39:585 (1) - Same as before, you should move a finish sound here to the startpoint of 02:39:958 (2) -
13. 02:47:784 (2) - A little awkward finish sound again. I think you should remove it.
14. 02:51:883 (1) - How about add a finish at the startpoint? since it's the begining of new rythim.

Miya wrote:

Hi, it's time to mod your map. What a lovely song. :D

Well, i just randomly pick 3 of your diff. Since your map has so many diff.

General
Folder check is fine, song setup is fine, timing is fine too.


Heart

1. Overall nice diff
2. 00:31:759 (1) - How about adding a finish here? I think it's more better to hear. No
3. 01:01:573 (1) - Same reason as above, add a finish here at the startpoint. No
4. 01:31:386 (1) - ^ at the startpoint. No
5. 02:04:182 (2) - In your previous rythim there are a finish sound here. I think you must forgot. yeah!>< fixed~

Kiss

1. Nice diff too.
2. 00:31:759 (1) - add a finish here for a finishing touch of the rythim. No
3. 00:41:076 (1) - Emm, make it stack properly with the 00:39:958 (1) - . It's more better to see imo.? I must not do this,it's unrankable. :O
4. 01:16:480 (4) - Adding a finish sound at the startpoint is nice. And it will be a finishing touch for the finish rythim you added before this. fixed
5. 01:35:859 (4) - A finish sound at the endpoint here is a little awkward. You can remove it or change it into whistle. No
6. 02:18:343 (6) - Move the second point to x:312 y:268 since it's not't blanket properly. fixed

That's all from me. Sorry if my mod is not helpful.
I like this song. It's so cheerful and kawaii. and your map is overall good. So i'll shoot a star for you.
Bye and Good Luck DarknessAngel! yeah~><

Miya wrote:

@termerys : i'm not epic modder >.< i still need to learn more about modding. But thank you x)

Edit : oh, why if you stack that in 00:41:076 (1) is unrankable (Kiss diff)? Can i get an explanation? o.o

termerys wrote:

Miya's epic mod 0[]o
/me embarrasses

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

>>tag怎麼是打 "Gamu而不是-Gamu-"

XD 怎麼沒打完 前天確實有點累到恍神...

嘛 我大概知道打Gamu的原因了

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BG 這樣你看看O不OK :3

換了之後記得full-sub

no kd

SPOILER

pratnket wrote:

SB來了

DarknessAngel wrote:

Miya wrote:

@termerys : i'm not epic modder >.< i still need to learn more about modding. But thank you x)

Edit : oh, why if you stack that in 00:41:076 (1) is unrankable (Kiss diff)? Can i get an explanation? o.o

If I stacked those slider completely,that would make someone confuse.

That's why I said it's unrankable.

(I am sorry to my poor English... lol)

SPOILER

Just see it :
Slider 00:39:958 :

Slider 00:41:076 :

phoon wrote:

Hi ~ DarknessAngel~

From yuineee & phoon's modding queue

It is a proposal altogether :3

General
It may be better for the picture of SB to have deleted the blank portion and to reduce capacity...

-Gamu-'s Relaxing
Fine!

Sweet
I think that Slider Tick Rate is good at 1 when groundless.

It is wonderful except it!

Heart
I think that Slider Tick Rate is good at 1 when groundless.

>>00:27:287 (1) - How about adding spin Note to >>00:28:778 even by >>00:28:405?
>>02:13:126 (3) - 1 grid right


Kiss
I think that Slider Tick Rate is good at 1 when groundless.

>>00:27:287 (4,5) - It is a proposal

SPOILER

Probably, it will be better to lower, since the top passed and it has overlapped with HP gauge.

Tsuyokiss
I think that Slider Tick Rate is good at 1 when groundless.

>>00:17:225 (2,3,4) - It is a proposal

SPOILER

How about regarding it as the terminal point of the slider of >>00:16:852 (1) in piles?

>>01:13:126 (4,5,6,7) - It is a proposal

SPOILER

Sense of incongruity has less how to take such a sound.

>>01:30:641 (7,8) - S Whistle may be better?
>>02:01:759 (2,3) - 2~3 grid up?

>>02:15:362 (3,4,5,6) - It is a proposal

SPOILER

Thus, how about arranging finely?

>>02:28:219 (2,3,4,5) - It is a proposal

SPOILER

Thus, how about arranging finely?

>>02:31:014 (1) - spaceing?
>>02:43:685 (6) - 1 grid down?

something fixed

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I am sorry only for a proposal TT
Nice Jump map!

1. Title: Mighty Heart ~Aru Hi no Kenka, Itsumo no Koikokoro~
2. -5 ms to offset? 别忘了改其他绿线

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. Title: Mighty Heart ~Aru Hi no Kenka, Itsumo no Koikokoro~
2. -5 ms to offset? 别忘了改其他绿线

改名时候可能会有两个osb出现 把他们都删掉 -.- 把.osb用记事本打开,//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)和//Storyboard Sound Samples之间的代码复制到每个osu难度的.osu的对应位置里 都改好了

其他做的都很好 改完了给我发个论坛PM

Colin Hou wrote:

Nice work, Bubbled!

1. Add "vn" in tags (short for visual novel) ? :3

1. Rename it "Car's Taiko Oni" please. "Taiko" don't give any feedback on the difficulty.
2. 00:33:245 (22) - k ?
3. 00:45:170 (75) - k ?
4. 01:37:717 (304,305,306,307,308,309,310) - This kind of sudden progressive speed up are very confusing :/
5. 02:58:214 (320,321,322,323,324,325,326) - Same here

1. This difficulty is the only which don't use slider tick 2, every difficulty should use the same slider tick rate because it depends on the music, not the difficulty. (Besides, slider tick 2 sounds amazing on this song!)
2. 00:22:065 (3) - It feels like a clap is missing here
3. 00:23:928 - ^
4. 00:25:419 - ^
5. 00:58:214 (4,1) - The comboing is kinda inconsistent here, the new combo mark should be on (4) as the vocals change on this note.
6. 01:00:822 - You need a note here, otherwise the pattern sounds odd and feels like something is missing.
7. 02:13:121 (3) - A new combo would be nice here, besides it would be well accorded to the finish.

1. 01:14:239 (4) - As it is a new pattern, a new combo is needed here.
2. 02:16:102 (5,1) - The comboing is inconsistent, the ew combo mark should be on (5) as the music become slower at this spot.

1. 00:32:686 (1,2) - Remove the whistle on (1) and add a clap on these circles. It will sound so much better !

KuraiPettan wrote:

-Gamu-'s Relaxing

1. This difficulty is the only which don't use slider tick 2, every difficulty should use the same slider tick rate because it depends on the music, not the difficulty. (Besides, slider tick 2 sounds amazing on this song!) ok. tick 1 ⇒ tick 2 Changed~
2. 00:22:065 (3) - It feels like a clap is missing here fixed~
3. 00:23:928 - ^ fixed~
4. 00:25:419 - ^ fixed~
5. 00:58:214 (4,1) - The comboing is kinda inconsistent here, the new combo mark should be on (4) as the vocals change on this note. (4) - Add a new combo. (1) - Remove a new combo
6. 01:00:822 - You need a note here, otherwise the pattern sounds odd and feels like something is missing. fixed~
7. 02:13:121 (3) - A new combo would be nice here, besides it would be well accorded to the finish. fixed~

KuraiPettan wrote:

General

1. Add "vn" in tags (short for visual novel) ? :3

Colin Hou said it doesn't work when the word is less than 3 letters,so I don't fixed it. :O


-Gamu-'s Relaxing

1. This difficulty is the only which don't use slider tick 2, every difficulty should use the same slider tick rate because it depends on the music, not the difficulty. Colin Hou said this rule have never existed.Can I change to 1? D:
   
   
   Sweet
   
   1. 01:14:239 (4) - As it is a new pattern, a new combo is needed here. fixed
   2. 02:16:102 (5,1) - The comboing is inconsistent, the ew combo mark should be on (5) as the music become slower at this spot.
   fixed
   
   Tsuyokiss
   
   1. 00:32:686 (1,2) - Remove the whistle on (1) and add a clap on these circles. It will sound so much better !

fixed

Call me back and I will rebubble.

KuraiPettan wrote:

Car's Taiko

1. Rename it "Car's Taiko Oni" please. "Taiko" don't give any feedback on the difficulty. I think the diff name is OK, for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37995
2. 00:33:245 (22) - k ? d is better
3. 00:45:170 (75) - k ? same
4. 01:37:717 (304,305,306,307,308,309,310) - This kind of sudden progressive speed up are very confusing :/ I give this map to some of my friends, they think this is OK, also I made the same thing before. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/29044
5. 02:58:214 (320,321,322,323,324,325,326) - Same here

littlecar3370 wrote:

KuraiPettan wrote:

Car's Taiko

1. Rename it "Car's Taiko Oni" please. "Taiko" don't give any feedback on the difficulty. I think the diff name is OK, for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37995

KuraiPettan wrote:

It's because some ranked maps use only "Taiko" that this is good (and it's not a valid reason to don't fix). I'm not gonna force you to fix since it's not a really important matter. But please, Reconsider your choice.

KuraiPettan wrote:

Ok, we talked about it via forum PM.
I can rebubble it now :3

1. Tags:
   1. What is hentai doing in the tags? I though it would have been that the anime had some but Wikipedia doesn't say so. Care to remove it, unless there is a good reason to keep it?
   2. I don't know what eroge is, I'd like to know why it needs to be in the tags (and it's meaning).
   3. The "Gamu" in the tags should be -Gamu-, because that's how his/her username is. Also, you can add gamupoid since it is his/her previous username.
   4. I couldn't understand why Candy Soft is in the tags. As before, I'd like to know why it is there, and if it isn't needed it should be removed.

1. May I suggest to reduce Slider Tick Rate to 1? STR=2 feels like overdoing it a little...
2. 01:19:456 (4) - I think that a new combo fits pretty well here. In case you agree, you should remove the next new combo, 01:20:947 (1) -, and perhaps add one at 01:22:437 (4) -.
3. 01:37:344 (4) - New combo here, please.
4. 01:57:468 (1,2) - To be honest, I didn't like how the finishes at the beginning of these sliders sound. I'd try using just whistles, but it's totally up to you!
5. 02:00:822 (3) - With all the free space you had, did this have to be overlapped by (2)'s track? xD Can you place it somewhere else to avoid that?
6. 02:51:878 - The second kiai should end here, for consistency with the other difficulties. Same goes for [Tsuyokiss], but I'll mention this again when I get there.

1. 01:06:413 (6) - A new combo could fit here!
2. 01:07:531 (1) - I don't recommend starting a kiai with a spinner. It kind of makes that epic moment when the kiai starts... Anything but epic. My advice is to remove it and replace it with a circle/slider. Some finishes could help.

1. 00:37:531 (4,1) - Woah! That's a pretty big jump isn't it? Consider making this shorter. I know itt would break the symmetry, but I think it would play better this way.
2. 00:51:692 (3) - This slider isn't following anything in the music. You should use a 1/2 long slider with no repetitions or 2 circles, but this doesn't sound well :/
3. 01:14:611 (2) - Again, having so much free space, this doesn't really need to be overlapped by the previous object. Mind moving it a bit?

1. Are the kiais at 00:13:866 - and 01:40:326 - really necessary? They seem a bit out of place, plus their use is inconsistent with the other difficulties. I'm just stating this, you can keep them if you think they look good.
2. 01:07:531 (167) - How about having a big Don here? Instead of a small one.
3. 01:19:456 (221) - (^)
4. 01:31:381 (278) - (^)
5. 02:28:027 (169) - (^)
6. 02:39:953 (230) - (^)

1. I found the amount of overlaps rather big, it got confusing at some points. But I'm fine with it. My advice is to use slightly less overlaps on your next map!
2. 02:14:611 (6) - As in [Heart]:This slider isn't following anything in the music. You should use a 1/2 long slider with no repetitions or 2 circles, but this doesn't sound well.
   (btw there are other kick sliders that I didn't mention because they were fine even if they didn't reeeaally follow anything in the music, but this here doesn't sound good at all )

1. I found the amount of overlaps rather big, it got confusing at some points. But I'm fine with it. My advice is to use slightly less overlaps on your next map!
2. 02:14:611 (6) - As in [Heart]:This slider isn't following anything in the music. You should use a 1/2 long slider with no repetitions or 2 circles, but this doesn't sound well.
   (btw there are other kick sliders that I didn't mention because they were fine even if they didn't reeeaally follow anything in the music, but this here doesn't sound good at all )

1. 01:29:891 (5,6) - These whistles sound pretty random considering that you haven't used many whistles throughout the map, and never so many and so close together. I'd suggest using 2 whistles as maximum here.
2. 01:31:381 - Shouldn't the kiai end here instead of ending at 01:31:288?
3. 02:51:878 - Again, as I said earlier, the kiai should end here and not at 02:51:972.

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi there!

[General]

1. The "Gamu" in the tags should be -Gamu-, because that's how his/her username is. Also, you can add gamupoid since it is his/her previous username. Please look at this tags ⇒ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35628 "gamu" is ok! sorry. "gamupoid" Do not add
   
   [-Gamu-'s Relaxing]
   1. May I suggest to reduce Slider Tick Rate to 1? STR=2 feels like overdoing it a little.. This difficulty is the only which don't use slider tick 2, every difficulty should use the same slider tick rate because it depends on the music, not the difficulty. (Besides, slider tick 2 sounds amazing on this song!) By KuraiPettan
   2. 01:19:456 (4) - I think that a new combo fits pretty well here. In case you agree, you should remove the next new combo, 01:20:947 (1) -, and perhaps add one at 01:22:437 (4) -. fixed
   3. 01:37:344 (4) - New combo here, please. fixed
   4. 01:57:468 (1,2) - To be honest, I didn't like how the finishes at the beginning of these sliders sound. I'd try using just whistles, but it's totally up to you! ok. Finish ⇒ Whistle Changed~
   5. 02:00:822 (3) - With all the free space you had, did this have to be overlapped by (2)'s track? xD Can you place it somewhere else to avoid that? ok. Move (x:256 y:68)
   6. 02:51:878 - The second kiai should end here, for consistency with the other difficulties. Same goes for [Tsuyokiss], but I'll mention this again when I get there. fixed

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi there!

Oh well, for next time, you should know that you can change the colour of the text on the storyboard with the command _C. You don't need two images of the same text How to use it?:O

Also, for the next time, you can try to find a 1024x768 wallpaper since they have more quality and look better most of the time. I got it

[General]

1. Tags:
   1. What is hentai doing in the tags? I though it would have been that the anime had some but Wikipedia doesn't say so. Care to remove it, unless there is a good reason to keep it?
   2. I don't know what eroge is, I'd like to know why it needs to be in the tags (and it's meaning).
   3. The "Gamu" in the tags should be -Gamu-, because that's how his/her username is. Also, you can add gamupoid since it is his/her previous username. As -Gamu- said,I don't change it.
   4. I couldn't understand why Candy Soft is in the tags. As before, I'd like to know why it is there, and if it isn't needed it should be removed.

About tag,this page can tell you what you want to know. :3

[Sweet]

1. 01:06:413 (6) - A new combo could fit here!
2. 01:07:531 (1) - I don't recommend starting a kiai with a spinner. It kind of makes that epic moment when the kiai starts... Anything but epic. My advice is to remove it and replace it with a circle/slider. Some finishes could help.

all done~


[Heart]

1. 00:37:531 (4,1) - Woah! That's a pretty big jump isn't it? Consider making this shorter. I know itt would break the symmetry, but I think it would play better this way.
2. 00:51:692 (3) - This slider isn't following anything in the music. You should use a 1/2 long slider with no repetitions or 2 circles, but this doesn't sound well :/
3. 01:14:611 (2) - Again, having so much free space, this doesn't really need to be overlapped by the previous object. Mind moving it a bit?

all done~


[Kiss]

1. I found the amount of overlaps rather big, it got confusing at some points. But I'm fine with it. My advice is to use slightly less overlaps on your next map!
   
   
   
2. 02:14:611 (6) - As in [Heart]:This slider isn't following anything in the music. You should use a 1/2 long slider with no repetitions or 2 circles, but this doesn't sound well.
   
   I like overlaps. lol
   
   (btw there are other kick sliders that I didn't mention because they were fine even if they didn't reeeaally follow anything in the music, but this here doesn't sound good at all )

I fixed all of this,that's really better than before. 0.0


[Tsuyokiss]

1. 01:29:891 (5,6) - These whistles sound pretty random considering that you haven't used many whistles throughout the map, and never so many and so close together. I'd suggest using 2 whistles as maximum here.
2. 01:31:381 - Shouldn't the kiai end here instead of ending at 01:31:288?
3. 02:51:878 - Again, as I said earlier, the kiai should end here and not at 02:51:972.

all done~


I also wanted to advice you about a little something, now that you're still new to mapping:
Try NOT to abuse jumps and triplets/kick sliders/streams. As a general rule, maps should play fluently and accordingly to the music, not needing to have impossible jumps or random triplets just... Because. In my opinion, at least.

I will notice it next time.
but I think they are not impossible jumps...


Anyway, good job for your first map!
Call me back when you're done fixing that!

narakucrimson wrote:

[Car's Taiko]

1. Are the kiais at 00:13:866 - and 01:40:326 - really necessary? They seem a bit out of place, plus their use is inconsistent with the other difficulties. I'm just stating this, you can keep them if you think they look good. I want to keep them :3
2. 01:07:531 (167) - How about having a big Don here? Instead of a small one. fixed
3. 01:19:456 (221) - (^) ^
4. 01:31:381 (278) - (^) ^
5. 02:28:027 (169) - (^) ^
6. 02:39:953 (230) - (^) ^

narakucrimson wrote:

Funny thing, "-Gamu-" won't give me any results when searching... I wasn't expecting that :O

One last thing: in [Sweet], can you add a new combo at 01:07:531 (4) - ? Where you removed that spinner fixed

Call me back later via irc.

narakucrimson wrote:

All right! Rebubbled!

spboxer3 wrote:

恩~沒想到你居然泡了~
加油~

I will be back wrote:

加油!!

CDFA wrote:

Hi my name is CDFA and I like to be unbelievable late on modding this.

Overall:
4 [I]s? Hmm.
While you're at it, you can remove the letterboxes from the breaks.

Kissu~:
00:28:773 (8) - For an insane diff, this is kind of boring ;~;.
01:58:027 (3) - Symmetry! Neccesita!

Heartu!~:
00:27:282 (1) - Idunno, I'm not really a huge fan of double spinners. They play kinda silly. You can keep it, but it might be cooler to make a fun pattern~.
02:28:027 (1,2,3,4,5) - Symmetry! It's a bit lopsided going towards the left of the screen.

Sweetu!~:
00:13:866 (2) - Kinda boring.
00:13:866 (2) - ^
00:37:531 (2) - Add clap at end
00:39:021 (4) - ^
00:53:742 (5) - Also kinda boring
01:07:531 (1) - I know I've ignored sliders like these for a bit, but you know, it kinda looks awkward. I'd suggest changing it, but you don't have to o-o.
01:33:990 (3) - Nope.

Easyu!~:
02:13:493 (2) - Same thing as in sweetu, it's kinda boring. i know it's an easy, but still >:3.

Once again, sorry for being late and having incredibly awkward timing :3.

spboxer3 wrote:

恭喜了 在你學測前你做的2張map都Rank了