Roddie wrote:

Hi.

General

1. You need a hitcircleoverlay.png file and a approachcircle.png file in your maps' folder.
2. On every difficulty, Lizzehb is not included in the tags.
3. On the "Lizzehb's Wine Cooler" difficulty, Larto is not included in the tags.
4. You're missing preview points on all the difficulties.

Ok all set.

Easy

1. 01:03:320 (x)-It might be a good idea to add a note here and a finish maybe? Mmm it doesn't sound good imo
2. 01:11:188 (1)-Maybe it would sound better with a finish? Yes, indeed.
3. 02:06:270 (x)-Add a note here and a finish? Set the sample set to Normal and lower the volume at 40%? Mmm no, it's ok as it is for Easy
4. 03:19:057 (6)-Add a finish Don't like this :T

Insane

1. 00:08:238 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. Ok!
2. 01:03:320 (x)-It might be a good idea to add a note here and a finish. Mmmm I'll keep it as it is
3. 02:06:270 (7)-Add a finish here and set the sample set to Normal and lower the volume at 40%. Sure
4. 03:19:057 (1)-Add a finish. I don't think it will sound cool :C

And that's it, I suppose.

Good luck, man.

Star!

NotShinta wrote:

General:
Offset could be 369. This is so it actually pulses on time in the menu. Ok, also it would fit the new given rules.
Lizzto's difficulty names are quite vague, couldn't you name them Normal and Hard, with appropiate names? I mean, wine cooler.
lizziehb is in tags. That can't be right. lol about the tags, I read Lizziehb when I was writting them I swear hahaha and about the diff names, it will be their choice

Insane:
00:13:647 (3) - Add a clap on the end of this? It doesn't sound good imo
00:35:778 - I would fill this break up with something (even with nothing, like Larto's), but at least drag 'break' to here should you keep it. I want to keep - you have those 1/4 objets afterwards that can really screw your hp bar, so I'll drag it as you say.
01:14:139 (5) - Please don't map to random offbeat 1/3 vocals, even with slider ends. I think just making the slider 1/2 long works better anyway. Well yeah.. I didn't want to do this. But I found no good way to follow the music. Oh well,1/2 sounds good enough
02:05:041 (3,4) - I'm not sure what these are meant to follow. Those don't have a solid basis on the music, yeah. I did that purposely because I think they give some spice to that moment - and they are pretty easy to read imo. Also, in the end of the first chorus I did something similar, so you should have complained, too Idk, keeping this for now.
03:18:197 (4) - I would remove this. Maybe I would, too

Easy:
Starting sliders on 1/4 ticks could be considered confusing for an Easy, see if anyone else complains. I don't think it's gonna be a problem, the lyrics help a lot there
Cool

I'm cheered up now.

Roddie wrote:

Hi.

Hey Roddie! (I'm a big fan of your maps.)

Lizzehb's Wine Cooler

1. 00:08:238 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. mmhmm
2. 00:16:106 (1)-^ mmhmm
3. 00:39:713 (1)-It sounds better with a finish instead of a clap. mmhmm
4. 00:41:926 (4)-Put a new combo here? mmhmm
5. 00:43:647 (3)-Add a finish on the beginning.mmhmm
6. 00:47:582 (1)-Add a finish. mmhmm
7. 01:19:057 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. mmhmm
8. 01:26:926 (1)-^mmhmm
9. 01:34:795 (1)-Add a finish. mmhmm
10. 01:42:664 (5)-Put a new combo here? And add a finish on the beginning. mmhmm
11. 01:46:598 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. mmhmm
12. 01:50:533 (1)-^ mmhmm
13. 01:58:402 (5)-Add a finish on the beginning. And add a new combo here? mmhmm
14. 02:06:270 (x)-Add a note and a finish here. and set the sample set to Normal and lower the volume at 40%? ooo that sounds nice.
15. 02:16:106 (5)-Put a new combo here. mmhmm
16. 02:16:598 (1)-Remove new combo.*/ mmhmm
17. 02:18:074 (5)-Put new combo here.mmhmm
18. 02:19:057 (1)-Remove new combo.mmhmm
19. 02:20:041 (5)-Put a new combo here/ mmhmm
20. 02:30:984 (1)-I think it would be better if you place this note on 02:31:106. And then fix the spacing on the rest of the notes afterwards. mmhmm
21. 02:39:713 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. mmhmm
22. 02:43:647 (1)-^mmhmm
23. 02:47:582 (1)-Add a finish.mmhmm
24. 02:55:451 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.mmhmm
25. 02:59:385 (1)-^mmhmm
26. 03:11:188 (4)-Put a new combo here? And add a finish on the beginning. mmhmm
27. 03:15:123 (3)-Put a new combo here?

Wow you just hitsounded my whole diff thanks. xD

NotShinta wrote:

General:
Offset could be 369. This is so it actually pulses on time in the menu.
Lizzto's difficulty names are quite vague, couldn't you name them Normal and Hard, with appropiate names? I mean, wine cooler.
lizziehb is in tags. That can't be right.

Issue with mine is it's to difficult to me considered a normal, so idk what to name it.


Lizzeh's what:
00:23:238 (8) - Hello, I dislike this as it doesn't look very good and can arguably be awkward, goodbye. Meh. It's gone.
00:30:861 (6) - Stick another repeat on 'ere so it ends on a white tick. mmhmm
00:41:926 (4) - New combo? mmhmm
01:01:352 (1,2) - Symmetrify because you can? STUPID DISTANCE SNAP RUINING MY FUN.
01:17:090 - Seems a bit silly for the mapping to disappear here, you can map to things that aren't talking. ehhh ok
02:06:270 - Drag the break to here please. Note here from previous mod.
02:35:287 (5,7) - 1 midgetgrid down for slider symmetry and things please. ja ja ja
03:06:762 (2) - Flip horizontally? mkay


I'm cheered up now.

Rukarioman wrote:

General:
-Wow, it's quite a difficulty jump from Easy to Lizzehb's diff. I'd really like to see something inbetween them. Otherwise this spread would look ugly. Actually, I asked Lizzehb for a Normal, if possible. I guess she did the best she could, but it didn't turn out as a Normal. I guess I can try asking her to make it easier~

Easy:
00:10:697 (4) - It's looking like this note wants to be one grid up.^^ Hehe, yeah
01:17:582 (3,1,2) - I'm quite unsure if beginner players will be able to read this rhythm. I recall NotShinta mentioning something similar. Well, I really think that the music helps a lot here. For example, I asked my sister (who had never played osu! before) to try the easy some time ago, and she read those pretty well. So I don't think this is quiet a problem
02:26:188 - Why not add a spinner here like in the other diffs? Sure!
02:51:025 (6,1,2,3,4) - Again not quite sure if new players will be able to read this rhythm. Again, trust me, it's ok

Insane:
00:24:713 (2) - Not symmetric. At least you should lower the end of the slider^^ OH GAWD HOW DID I MISS THIS
01:30:614 - This break is way too short. Remove it, please. Ok, fair enough

SapphireGhost wrote:

This hasn't been updated in a while but it's really awesome and contains Larto so you WILL get it ranked, sir. hehe

[General]
- Some of your kiai is unsnapped, that should be fixed. 02:06:270, for example. Done
- You could capitalize Larto in tags because that's the way he capitalizes it. Done. I also capitalized the L in Lizzehb because, well, her username has it in capitals, too

[Easy]
00:14:139 (2) - One grid down, please. Ok, no problem
01:28:402 (2) - I love how this blankets P!nk's face. Oh lol... It wasn't intentional xD
02:01:352 (4) - I'd probably change this to a 1/1 repeating slider to avoid confusing new players. You have a point, sir.
02:36:516 (2,3) - You could make this more parallel and cool-looking.
02:40:450 (2,3) - And here too. Done, both of them

[Normal]
Finish this! I will, I will~

[Insane]
00:35:778 - Break drag to here, please. Oh, sure!
02:11:434 (1,2,3) - Perhaps stack these or space them normally, I'm just not a fan of this pattern but alright. Well, I did space them out, but still keeping reduced spacing. At least they don't overlap each other now, which I must admit, looked pretty bad

Delicious. :3

Lanttu wrote:

Man, this song is so catchy. And, like I always keep saying, I really love your maps. Awesome work<3 ;u; Just little suggestions here, feel free to ignore if you don't agree~ Lanttu, I'll never ignore your suggestions

Insane
00:47:582 (1) - Hmm, I don't know, but to me, this miiiiight play just a bit better when flipped horizontaly. It does.
01:02:828 (8) - Just a little idea I got, how about something like this? :3 (9 and 1) Though it works good the way it is already also. I like it!
01:49:549 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - How about this? A bit bigger curve with notes would please my eyes a bit more. XD If you agree, same with the flipped part later on, of course. Sure, it looks great
02:11:188 - Too quiet, I can't hear a thing. ;__; Ah, sorry, but I'll keep this. If it was louder, it would be excesive imo.
02:16:844 (6,7) - Works like this also, but to me this would flow a bit better. Yeah, why not
02:52:992 (4) - Nice and perfectly symmetric slider, but.. The white sliderborder dot in the middle looks a bit ugly to me. ;u; You didn't see anything

[Larto]
THAT WAS SO EVIL. AND SO AWESOME. hahahahahaha

[Normal]
01:41:680 (4) - This overlap with 3 looks a bit ugly, but as I couldn't figure a nice way to change it, I don't know.. uguu. ;u; Well yeah, I don't know how ugly it is I do't really mind having it ^^

Have my star<3

wcx19911123 wrote:

from here as request in-game pm
and hope you can check my map soon 0.0

[Gerenal]
in Larto's Partying there are UseSkinSprites: 1 in osu file , it is different with other diffs , but I'm not sure what is it ..just point out That's so that his storyboard works.
tags in Lizzehb's Wine Cooler is "larto lizzehb" not "Larto Lizzehb" , I'm not sure it is fine or not oops, seems I missed this

[Easy]
02:29:639 - useless timing section and the next one is useless too, but so what? they are just like... less than 1 kilobytes more on the file, so why would I remove them?
00:54:959 (3,4) - change to slider? seems it is too hard as an Easy diff.. A slider seems even more confusing, and even my sister that never plays osu! can play this. So no
01:02:336 (4) - repeat 1 time ? sure!
02:59:877 (1) - remove clap and move to 02:59:754 ? or it is hard to read.. nah, it's not hard to read, and it sounds fine
03:16:598 (3) - make it symmetrical ? it is symmetrical, I must have moved it one grid unintentionally. Anyway, fixed.
03:19:057 (1) - delete it and repeat 03:18:073 (4) ? for symmetrical No, I did this on purpose, want to finish in a non-symmetrical way ^^

[Normal]
02:29:639 - useless timing section Same as in easy
02:34:303 (2,3,4,5,6) - is it really a Normal diff ? oh , don't you think this is too hard for a Normal ? What? of course it is a Normal! And this is easy to read, the BPM and AR help a lot. -.-
02:49:795 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ , change some circle to sliders plz..
02:54:221 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ , or stack some circles.. no

[Insane]
00:23:238 (2,3,4) - kinda confusing .. seems it is start at 00:23:114 , maybe just me Yeah, it's just you It isn't so hard to read

that's all
good luck :3

misja056 wrote:

3 diffs in Irc Mod

The guest diffs here.

[Liz's Normal/hard]

00:19:549 (1) - New combo k
00:18:073 (1,2,1) - It's all the same distance snap but one is 1/2 and one is 1/4 After this I re-spaced the entire map so I'm pretty sure all the spacing is correct now.
00:32:336 (2,3) - Distance is different from : 00:34:057 (5,6) -
00:35:779 (1,2,3) - If u want to let it sound nice, make it softer not the hitnormal xd Roddei suggested I do it like that so I'ma keep it.
00:37:254 (1) - I don't hear a note and Still I hear a hitnormal k removed.
00:43:647 (3,4,5) - Distance is different from : 00:46:598 (2,3) - Should be fixed,
00:48:566 (3,4,5) - Distance Snap..
01:05:533 (4) - Ends Awfully Added a repeat makes it less awkward.
01:15:615 (7) - New combo colour here, 01:17:090 (1) - Delete new Combo colour here. k
01:54:467 (3) - Distance.
From : 02:14:139 (1) -02:27:910 (1) - Use soft-whistles instead of normal-claps SOUNDS SO MUCH BETTER OMG. <3
02:24:959 (1) - Spinner is too quick, suggesting notes there. Added a slider and changed that part up a bit.
02:48:566 (3) - Distanc-e
02:55:451 (1,2,3,4) - Looks messed up. Whole part got changed.
03:11:188 (1) - Distan-ce

wcx19911123 wrote:

from here as request in-game pm
and hope you can check my map soon 0.0

[Gerenal]
in Larto's Partying there are UseSkinSprites: 1 in osu file , it is different with other diffs , but I'm not sure what is it ..just point out
tags in Lizzehb's Wine Cooler is "larto lizzehb" not "Larto Lizzehb" , I'm not sure it is fine or not


[Lizzehb's Wine Cooler]
00:18:811 (2) - kinda hard to know when it end.. but seems fine here
00:23:237 - too noisy.. Turned to volume down.
00:32:582 (3,4,5) - around circle better ? Fixed.
00:34:795 (6,7,1,2,3) - make them sysmmetrical ?
00:43:647 (3,5) - around circle better ? changed
00:48:566 (3) - ^ , ok I ignored same suggestions from now on .. but slider like this can be better It's easyier on the eyes now.
00:57:909 - add note ? Oh, nice idea.
01:05:533 (4) - repeat 1 time more ? yesss
01:13:893 (5) - change to 1/2 repeat slider ? follow the vocal better Trying to follow the beat here.
01:22:008 (5) - repeat 1 time more , fit the song better Both ways seem fine to me but I'm gonna leave it as it it.
01:29:877 (5) - ^
01:55:451 (5,1) - this spacing kinda confusing , but seems fine to me 0.0 That got changed in a previous mod.
02:56:926 (3) - ctrl + r ? for better flow Sure
03:10:697 (3,1) - spacing Should be fixed.


that's all
good luck :3

1. Difficulty settings: I find HPDrain 8 quite high. If a player comes into the "red", it will take a very long time to regen some HP back. In addition to that, I feel that OD 8 is a slight overkill for this kind of bpm, the accuracy requirements are ridiculous, so I suggest you bump both HPdrain and OD by -1, down to 7 (and leave approach rate at 8).
2. 01:14:139 (5) - I felt that this slider didn't follow the music nicely. The combo is following vocals, which would be located on the 1/3 ticks around here. Consider changing this somehow (I tried making a repeater on the 1/3 ticks and then added a circle at 01:14:877 but I didnt know how to position those to keep the symmetry).
3. 03:17:090 (2) - Some small nazi, don't have to fix if you don't want to. I like how you use creative sliders, but I didn't like this one, because the middle of it appears behind the previous slider, while you could have easily avoided this.

1. Difficulty settings: I strongly suggest to increase AR by 1 (to 7). The map has relatively fast pacing, and it's easier to read with 7.
2. 00:31:352 (5,1) - Are these unstacked from the previous slider on purpose? If not you should just fix them, because it would look better without putting almost any effort at all.
3. 01:16:598 (1,2) - Maybe put that new combo on 2 instead? Follows the music better imo.
4. 02:26:065 (1) - Don't think this finish is a good idea. It would be if it was following the song nicely, but due to the voice improvisation here that's kinda impossible, I suggest to remove the finish completely and end it with a soft default.

1. 00:18:811 (2) - This slider's reverse arrow is noticed way too late. By the time you're almost done with the slider before, only then you notice it's a repeating slider due to a hitburst from 00:17:582 (4). For higher diffs, I think it's okay to have so little time to react, but for a normal, definitely not. You should change this somehow, either move the note 4 a little, or make this slider point differently.
   In addition to all that, I think that it would be better if you make it repeat only once, and place a circle on 00:19:303 instead.
2. 00:27:418 (5,1) - I didn't like the switch of the claps from 2nd/4th tick to 1st/3rd. It doesn't sound that bad, but I think it would be better if you continued with 2nd/4th clap pattern.
3. 00:40:205 (2,3) - Since you mapped 2nd ant 4th ticks with the claps mostly during the kiai, you should do so here as well. It would sound better. So, clap on 2 and remove the clap from the start of the slider and put it at the end instead.
4. 01:50:532 (1) - Finish at the start? It's in the music and it fits as it starts the repeat of the chorus.
5. 01:54:467 (3) - Maybe fix the shape of the slider a little so it's not this ugly? You have really nice blankets everywhere and then something like this happens. D:
6. 02:32:336 (2,3) - Same as 00:40:205 (2,3) in the mod. Claps on 2nd and 4th ticks, etc.
7. 02:55:451 (1,2,3) - Maybe try using 4 or 5 points for these sliders so they blanket better? They look kinda bad compared to all other sliders.
8. 03:02:336 (1) - Remove this new combo and add it to 03:03:319 (3) instead. Makes more sense and bring consistency (check your other kiais, you did it like this over there).
9. 03:03:319 (3) - Finish at the start? It's in the music and it fits as it starts the repeat of the chorus.
10. 03:18:566 (3) - Clap?

1. Difficulty settings: Maybe reduce OD by 1 (to 3)? Just so it has lesser accuracy requirements from the other normal. Just a suggestion, since OD4 works as well.
2. 01:52:499 (1) - If you look at the previous kiai, you don't have a new combo on the slider that follows the "Raise your glass" lyric. Should make it more consistent so either add it in the previous one, or remove it here. This also goes for 01:56:434 (1), 02:00:369 (1)

1. 03:13:647 (1) - Maybe lower this slider a little to fix the spacing? (0.87x currently, when you can easily get 1.0x which you used everywhere else).
2. 03:19:057 (1) - Distance it a little further away to fix the spacing? Could probably place it in the middle as well, for a symmetrical finish.

lolcubes wrote:

Hey naraku!
Lets do this!
Hell yeah!

[Insane]

1. Difficulty settings: I find HPDrain 8 quite high. If a player comes into the "red", it will take a very long time to regen some HP back. In addition to that, I feel that OD 8 is a slight overkill for this kind of bpm, the accuracy requirements are ridiculous, so I suggest you bump both HPdrain and OD by -1, down to 7 (and leave approach rate at 8).
   You're right about the Drain Rate, it is a bit high - though I felt it great to have some challenge on it However, I won't lower OD. The accuracy requirements are high indeed, but I don't think they are as excesive as to have to lower them.
   So, HP Drain Rate -1 :3
2. 01:14:139 (5) - I felt that this slider didn't follow the music nicely. The combo is following vocals, which would be located on the 1/3 ticks around here. Consider changing this somehow (I tried making a repeater on the 1/3 ticks and then added a circle at 01:14:877 but I didnt know how to position those to keep the symmetry).
   I had this as 1/3 circles originally, but I think NotShinta said that it felt random. To be honest, I agree with you, so I'll make this follow the vocals somehow.
3. 03:17:090 (2) - Some small nazi, don't have to fix if you don't want to. I like how you use creative sliders, but I didn't like this one, because the middle of it appears behind the previous slider, while you could have easily avoided this.
   Ah, it isn't much of a problem to fix this~

[Normal]

1. Difficulty settings: Maybe reduce OD by 1 (to 3)? Just so it has lesser accuracy requirements from the other normal. Just a suggestion, since OD4 works as well. Seems like a good idea
2. 01:52:499 (1) - If you look at the previous kiai, you don't have a new combo on the slider that follows the "Raise your glass" lyric. Should make it more consistent so either add it in the previous one, or remove it here. Sure, I can't believe I missed this This also goes for 01:56:434 (1), 02:00:369 (1) <- Those are ok :O

[Easy]

1. 03:13:647 (1) - Maybe lower this slider a little to fix the spacing? (0.87x currently, when you can easily get 1.0x which you used everywhere else). Sure
2. 03:19:057 (1) - Distance it a little further away to fix the spacing? Could probably place it in the middle as well, for a symmetrical finish. Ok, ok

Quite a nice mapset. The only thing I think it could use some work are certain sliders in Lizzehb's diff, but nothing too serious, just some of those sliders which are really obvious.

Once you fix stuff, call me once more!

1. Remove Lizzehb from tags.

1. 01:14:323 (6,7) - I would prefer if you deleted the note 7 and extend the slider to where 7 was finishing. It's kinda confusing like it is currently. I think it fits the music better as well, as where the note 7 is currently, there is the key beat, not where the slider finishes.
2. 02:26:066 (1) - I like how Larto fixed the spinner in his diff, you should probably do the same (1/8 tick to match the music perfectly). This also goes for normal and easy diffs.

1. 03:13:647 (1) - I know you care about symmetry alot, so 1 grid right.
2. 03:19:057 (1) - Same as the above, just 1 grid left. Unless this is intentional!

narakucrimson wrote:

Thanks!

I'm once again very pissed because of so many 1/10 votes.

Last time there was a guy who said "staaar" on the thread and some minutes later I had a 1 vote. Isn't there a way to make them understand that?

Like a thread to teach people how to vote?
Or a thread to make people understand why their vote is important and when to vote 1?

Seriously, I did this map a whiiile back and it's not my style anymore, but I still worked hard on it...