ShintaNot wrote:

Charles' Anger
Wait a minute you only mapped the 2 easiest by yourself wtf Mathias ~At least he mapped 50% of the set
00:57:906 (6) - Add a finish? ~No
01:10:366 (3) - I think this jump might be a bit too big. It's not challenging as much as, well I don't know. Silly? ~Everyone else thinks they are sex
01:12:212 (3) - ^ ~^
01:27:902 (1) - This slider feels quite 'forced', I think more in placement than it's existence. Could you rotate it by about 45° from the startpoint? ~Please explain, I'm confused
01:31:133 (8) - I think this would be better not being a jump, rather just spaced like the rest of the combo. And copypasta. ~Yeah this one is stupid
01:46:362 (1) - Again, I'd suggest spacing this properly. What this is mapped to is very subtle, never mind not warranting a jump like that. (and copypasta) ~No
03:02:045 (1) - ^ ~^
03:21:889 (6) - A finish? ~No

NotShinta wrote:

Charles' Anger
Wait a minute you only mapped the 2 easiest by yourself wtf Mathias So whaaat ?! What's with this ridiculous mentality that a creator of a map must map most of his beatmap. This is a COM MU NI TY. We do things for a common goal so why not share our knowledges and make wonderful quality beatmaps in unison, ­>(. Pay me 25$/hour for this and we'd be in business man and I'd be staying here mapping all day . Otherwise, life has it's priorities so there, that's the best I can do .

Loneliness
03:32:503 (7,8,9) - You could make this symmetrical vertically to the screen /terriblemodding haha /sillyyou~

Sadness:
00:58:829 - Drag break to here. Or just map. Done~
01:56:526 (2) - I don't personally approve of this whistle. A clap is fine, too.Done~

TheVileOne wrote:

Sadness

01:50:511 (1,2) - This is 1 unit higher than 01:46:819 (1,2) - Make even? Woops *shy* fixed~

03:06:667 (1,2) - Isn't quite lined up with 03:02:974 (2,3) -. Close but isn't. Fixed~

I also fixed all spacing so they are ALL EXACTLY 1,00. So everything should feel perfectly balanced now :3

Lonliness

00:34:355 (3,4) - I really don't like this transition from 1.2 to 0.9 snap. Use 1.2 snap. Ummm... what ? Probably fixed it in irc mod lol...

00:45:431 (3) - Touch this slider up a little. It looks a little lumpy.Plastic surgery work wonders~.

00:52:584 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - touch up some of these spacings. Your timing change changed up all the spacings. Basically reapply distance snap to everything greater than 0.03 off of 1.2. Edit: Example: 1.17 snap or 1.23 (Fix these)All spacing has been snapped to 1,20... so there should not be any more spacing issues except for intended ones.

01:44:039 (3) - This slider looks kind of odd. Same for the other sliders shaped like this. Maybe its alright...Hmm...balanced it ~.

02:03:883 (4,5) - Stack this perfectly. The stack is doing weird things.Fixed~

02:37:571 (3,4) - spacingFixed~

Charles Anger

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Larto's Despair

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Love this song, love this beatmap set, love the video, everything. Star

TheVileOne wrote:

Charles Anger
00:47:046 (5,1) - I think this jump is too large. ~Nah, it's a sliderjump
03:23:721 - inheriteds off? ~That was actually intentional but really doesn't make a difference. It can be removed, but I'd like it to stay.

Kitsunemimi wrote:

Nice song you got there~

[Sadness]:
00:58:353 - imo a spinner would fit nicely here. The timeline space between the next note and the spinner would be too short... hence, making it too hard for that difficulty, so no.
01:55:115 (1,1) - Perhaps combine these two notes into a slider? Slow slider? Rearranged that part completely to match the following part and it does sound a lot nicer =).
02:07:114 - spinner again There isn't really any way to put a spinner there without making it too hard. I do agree though that it would have sounded nice .
Very nice map, goes with the melody well.

[Loneliness]:
00:58:353 - Spinner again o3oSame as above~
01:31:579 (1,2,3) - Your Normal might be a little fast with these notes, so if you want, to can convert some of them into sliders. v
01:35:271 (1,2,3) - Like if you did that ^ then this should be changed too.v
01:52:807 (1,2,3) - This would be a good one to change too.These 3 parts fits too perfectly with the song to be modified. I don't really like the idea. Sorry.
02:06:883 (3,4,5,6) - This part is really weird and I don't think it really belongs in a Normal. Try this! Did take your concern about this not sounding right in consideration . But did use a different pattern than what shown that makes even more sense hehe.~ :
[attachment=0:8537e]smth liek dis.png[/attachment:8537e]02:32:495 (1,2,3) - Another one that would fit good as a slider. Nah...I know this normal is a tad hard, but replacing this for a slider doesn't sound as good. I'd be sad to do so.
02:39:879 (1,2,3) - Same~^
03:09:645 - I just realized that a spinner would fit really well here... But.. well, I'm going too far with this, it's your map after all. Don't you like the suspension in time this break gives to the map ?!?! It's art right there ! Why would you take this off?!
03:23:720 (5,6,7) - I know the next bit has this tune as well, but to establish that tune maybe you should do what I suggested above with these notes again. Nope, these are perfectly fine as is. The spacing in timeline between those notes are perfect and they're not too hard to hit.

[Charles' Anger]:
00:47:046 (5,1) - Not very intuitive jump Well technically, it's a split between the instrumental and vocal part... I don't see why this isn't intuitive.
01:29:272 (4) - Why so OutOfBounds? Now in bounds~
01:53:269 (4) - How come this is unstacked? Because it's nice that way... it puts the focus on "Don't Die" in the lyrics of the song.
Nice map :3

[Larto's Despair]:
01:53:731 (8) - This creates a nice effect and all, but for anyone playing the map the first time, they'll totally mess this one up. Space it out properly. ESC, retry :3 ~ This anti jump is amazing actually.
03:05:261 (5) - ^ ^ makes things harder for fun.
03:08:261 (2,3,4,5) - Weird spacing >_> I do agree with that one. Changed for a more stable, easier to read, but larger spacing.
03:33:412 - With the other diffs (not Charles'), there was a timing section here to end the kiai. And long long time ago, I was recommended to put an end to my kiai sections. So uhhh, you can just place one here.Fixed~

Yey. Really good looking map~ Thanks

Jarby wrote:

Charles' Anger:
03:08:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not liking this accelerated spacing thing.

Ayeen wrote:

Charles' Anger:
03:08:279 (1,2,3,4,5) spacing look a bit weird to me, but it doesn't affect my playing ~ FINE GOD
03:32:045 (spinner) maybe lower down a bit the volume? ~ Good catch, I didn't notice that.

Jarby wrote:

Add a second offset at 32534. Also, I think using a countdown is inappropriate here, but that's up to you. Fixed~

Sadness:

03:33:429 - Resnap the inherited section here. Fixed~

Loneliness:

00:43:609 (1) - Remove new combo to keep it at a similar length to the previous one. Fixed~
03:22:585 (4) - I think it would be a good idea to put a new combo here to seperate the phrases. Yup, fixed~

Charles' Anger:

03:08:279 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not liking this accelerated spacing thing. Fixed I presume ~

Larto's Despair:

I don't really like any of the anti-jumps here either. Oh well, it's a matter of taste in some cases, I suppose. Not sure about the heavily covered overlapping stuff in hidden, but I'll leave that aside for now. Hmm.. Okay. I'll hit Larto with a Turkey and I hope this will resolve your unhappiness about those anti-jumps . Cuz he said earlier he wanted to keep them hehe.

Solid mapping throughout if you hadn't already worked that out by the lack of complaints from me. But, uh, I'm not supposed to take this song seriously, right? I just find it too funny. hehe

Ayeen wrote:

Not much to say actually:

Lol on the arrow of spinner direction, I spin the opposite way

Difficulty naming:
sadness, loneliness, anger?, despair.... uhm why anger so suddenly as the rest is all about 'sorrow'?
Depend on you to change it or not though, just that the name sound a bit.... you know I know... I changed the difficulty names to what I intended them to be as my first idea... hopes it suits better ~

Timing:
I found it quite funny early before what was that second timing used for, got some few argument in #modhelp. And it doesn't change the original offset. Just for some 'metronome' adjustment. And for pulse and flashes in menu? Never thought about it before because I dont really pay attention to that anyway. haha well... Yeah it's always better when the metronome is synced with the song.

sadness:
seem good

Loneliness:
seem good

Charles' Anger:
All fixed~

Larto's despair
03:05:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) It seem a bit not complete circles, but whatever work for you~ Hmmm... I don't think it's that important as a mod... It's kind of a minor detail . Plus the whole thing is centered and balanced, just not making a circle shape hehe.

SPOILER

i dont think this worth a kudos.Just stating my opinions on it and star as I dont give star before. I dont give star so randomly before I play and experience the map itselfWell your first post already had 2 kudos so let's divide that kudo by 2 teehee~.

Charles445 wrote:

Ayeen wrote:

Charles' Anger:
03:08:279 (1,2,3,4,5) spacing look a bit weird to me, but it doesn't affect my playing ~ FINE GOD
03:32:045 (spinner) maybe lower down a bit the volume? ~ Good catch, I didn't notice that.

Updated~

Charles445 wrote:

Okay, updating again for one reason

1. you need an approach circle.png in your folder
2. your first timing section is pointless in this map, you have no notes for it in any of the map, delete it and use the one at the start of the map as your main section

SapphireGhost wrote:

I'm convinced they're eating human meat despite the fact there is no good evidence to prove they are doing so.

[General]
- Disable letterboxing during breaks, it provides unneeded SB load regardless of whether you're playing with video or not. Fixed... Wasn't aware of that. Thanks for the info
- Offset should be 1148 until a better one was found. I highly doubt the BPM is really 130.01, the same thing happened with My Moment. I thought it was 118.01 until Jarby came along and gave a better timing at 118 BPM. Clearly, the solution is to ask Jar. I'd have to check that out ~

[Sadness]
00:58:373 - Break drag should probably be to here Fixed
03:11:282 - Unsnahapped break drag. Fixed

[Despair]
All the little overlaps on this difficulty made me sad so I'll just point out the ones that are the most depressing. Hmmm... maybe I should revise this difficulty then?
00:41:759 (2,3) - This overlap really doesn't look good. Fixed
00:56:296 (4,5,6) - I'm not so sure this is a good idea. Fixed
01:11:295 (3,4,5) - This could be more perfect. Fixed...ish I think
02:41:746 (5,6) - Tiny overlap, move it a bit. Fixed

The other difficulties looked good, especially the Larto one. Have a star OH WAIT

MathiasXII wrote:

Man I'm trying ! If only BATS/MATS could get interest in checking it! lol.