HeatKai wrote:

[Namida]
02:17:798 (1,2,3,4) - lower volume at this part no :p

[ryuusei no namida]


Nice Thanks!

Please Be My Waifu think in your mind xD

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs!

[General]
2.31.727~2.48.870(x) - add object no~

[Ryuusei no Namida] -> change [Hard] no~
HP -2,OD -1 yes.
1.01.512(1) - 1grid right yes.
1.05.798(x) - add circleyes.
1.50.155(4,5,6) - symmetry(1,2,3) -> (4)1grid left,(5,6)1grid up. yes.

[Namida] -> change [Normal] no~
OD -1 yes.
map set is fine.


+star

1. I got offset:878(+8) You better to check this..
2. Please map the beginning part in Namida just like your Hard..

1. 00:18:012(7.1)-Swap New combo to keep the flow.
2. 00:19:298(1.2)-It will make confuse to newbie.The main problem is it's hard to read 00:20:370(2)-
3. 00:33:870(4.5.6)-A bit weird for me..Maybe stack it?
4. 00:40:941(1.2)-Little rhythm suggestion here:(1)-add two reverse.Then remove (2)- after that..add a note at 00:42:411.
5. 00:58:084(1-5)-A bit uglt for me...well you decide to change it or not.
6. 01:06:012(3.4.5)-Remove these note and put a slider at 01:06:012(x)- Because it down't have any vocal after 01:04:727,So it should start a break there.
7. 01:18:870(1.2.3.4.5)-IMO,It's a bit ugly due to long stack during gameplay.
8. 01:46:298(6)-Use a whistle to instead of clap?
9. 01:05:584(x)-Please snap this green line due to Kiai started.
10. 02:14:584(x)-You miss a clap sound here.Also you need to snap the green line due to the end of the kiai.
11. 02:24:870(x)-Long spinner will make the players boring.

1. 00:03:012(6)-New combo here?
2. 00:12:655(8)-New combo here due to consistent your combo.
3. 00:54:012(2)-Weird slider!!!Really!!
4. 01:06:012(x)-You miss a clap hitsound here.
5. 01:47:370(x)-Due to your HP setting so please add a break here.
6. 02:10:512(1)-Remove new combo!!!It's unnecessary.
7. 01:05:584(x)-Please snap this green line due to Kiai started.
8. 02:17:155(x)-Snap the green line due to Kiai end.
9. 02:23:798(2.3.4)-Well,to consistent the whole difficulty.Please remove (2)- caz' it's the only 1/4 on this difficulty.

kanpakyin wrote:

Sorry for long delay .

[General]

1. I got offset:878(+8) You better to check this..
2. Please map the beginning part in Namida just like your Hard..

[Namida]

1. 00:18:012(7.1)-Swap New combo to keep the flow.
2. 00:19:298(1.2)-It will make confuse to newbie.The main problem is it's hard to read 00:20:370(2)-
3. 00:33:870(4.5.6)-A bit weird for me..Maybe stack it?
4. 00:40:941(1.2)-Little rhythm suggestion here:(1)-add two reverse.Then remove (2)- after that..add a note at 00:42:411.
5. 00:58:084(1-5)-A bit uglt for me...well you decide to change it or not.
6. 01:06:012(3.4.5)-Remove these note and put a slider at 01:06:012(x)- Because it down't have any vocal after 01:04:727,So it should start a break there.
7. 01:18:870(1.2.3.4.5)-IMO,It's a bit ugly due to long stack during gameplay.
8. 01:46:298(6)-Use a whistle to instead of clap?
9. 01:05:584(x)-Please snap this green line due to Kiai started.
10. 02:14:584(x)-You miss a clap sound here.Also you need to snap the green line due to the end of the kiai.
11. 02:24:870(x)-Long spinner will make the players boring.

[Ryuusei no Namida]

1. 00:03:012(6)-New combo here?
2. 00:12:655(8)-New combo here due to consistent your combo.
3. 00:54:012(2)-Weird slider!!!Really!!
4. 01:06:012(x)-You miss a clap hitsound here.
5. 01:47:370(x)-Due to your HP setting so please add a break here.
6. 02:10:512(1)-Remove new combo!!!It's unnecessary.
7. 01:05:584(x)-Please snap this green line due to Kiai started.
8. 02:17:155(x)-Snap the green line due to Kiai end.
9. 02:23:798(2.3.4)-Well,to consistent the whole difficulty.Please remove (2)- caz' it's the only 1/4 on this difficulty.

Some suggestion here:The hitsound seem humdrum...Overall you almost use clap sound.If I were you,I'll use some whistle and normal-finish!Please take a look on your hitsound and adjust it. i will fix it at later.

Well..overall quite nice.Star.

-Moccha_chii- wrote:

Hi~ I like this song :3 hope this ranked faster

=w=

Namida
00:27:671 (6,7) move them to the end of the slider (5) change another patten.
00:28:314 (1,2) I think delete them and make reverse arrow? Like this yes.

00:30:028 (3,4) Delete? make them into a slider yes.
01:57:886 (2,3,4) stack this fixed
02:06:671 (1,2,3,4,5) If it's an easy one please don't do like this since it's quite hard for easy fixed

Ryusei no Namida
Well if this is hard maybe
HP drain rate is 7 is 7 already.
Circle size 6 no. because size of 6 is too small+insane.
I think this diff need more finish i all change to soft whistle sound.
00:21:457 make the beginning with finish sound
00:30:028 finish sound here
00:52:314 (6) ^
01:31:743 (3) ^ (clap is fine tough :3)
01:36:886 (3) ^
01:43:743 (6) ^
01:45:457 (3) ^
01:54:028 (6) ^
And some notes need finish sound to make it better
Star for a nice map :3 Really love this one <3 thanks

Lissette wrote:

Offset: 870 (re snap all notes after change)

=v=

Namida
00:18:020 (1) - remove new combo
00:19:306 (2) - add new combo
01:06:020 (3) - end it at 01:09:457 (the reverse will be here 01:07:743)

Star~

Leorda wrote:

=w=

Halo? Apa kabar?

Namida
00:27:663 (6,7) - Stack with tail slider? To make some novice player easy to play? Fixed.
00:40:949 (1) - Don't use too much repeating slider, some noobs can't tell how many the repeating slider they are Fixed
00:48:878 (2) - Remove clap? yes.
00:57:020 (3) - AFAIK (As far as I know), shape the slider like this can makes newbie go confusing, because I think they thought that repeating slider is a head slider Fixed.
01:36:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I guess 7 combos are too long for easy/normal diff..... change another patten already.
01:49:520 (1) - Again, too much repeating slider can makes newbie player can't tell how many the repeating slider Fixed
01:55:520 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider? yes.
01:56:377 (1) - Again, too much repeating slider can makes newbie player can't tell how many the repeating slider Fixed
02:23:592 (1) - Too far from spinner, you need to put this slider close to the spinner. Otherwise, newbie player can't reach this slider during gameplay Fixed.

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Ryuusei no Namida
00:17:806 (7) - This shapes of slider is kinda ugly (Nazi) changed.
00:24:878 (6) - New combo? hmm... yes.
00:46:949 (10) - Would be better if you remove the clap at endpoint changed
01:02:592 (6,7) - Stacking together with krumping slider is kinda odd while gameplay changed
01:38:592 (6) - Perhaps, add clap sound at 2nd ticks? To follow the instrument at this music? XD Fixed
01:39:449 (7) - ^ Fixed
02:20:377 (1) - How about this spinner volume makes fading from high volume to low volume? Fixed.

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That's all folks

Aleks719 wrote:

Namida
Set slider tickrate 2 yes.
if you will use tickrate 2, check twice timing points on sliders
Why this diff shorter than another diff? Don't be lazy, it's only 14secs... If you'll make it (make it, please), don't forget about set audio-lead = 1,5sec. no.
00:33:441 (3) - add whistle
00:33:869 (4) - remove whistle from the start, add clap to the start
01:40:298 (6,7) - It's intuitive, but spacing is different.
02:10:084 (1) - add whistle
02:10:298 (2) - remove clap from the start, add whistle to the start
02:13:727 (6) - add whistle to the start
02:17:798 (1,2,3,4) - don't like stacks, maybe something like this:

SPOILER

Ryuusei no Namida
Hey, resnap all notes, my friend.
01:05:790 (6) - add whistle
01:06:004 (1) - Slider in Namida, longer than this spinner and slider's end at 01:09:441. So, I suggest replace end of spinner in this point too.

Star this map!

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Please try to include another difficulty to cover a wider player skill ammount, 2 difficulty choices is kinda limited to what a player can choose to enjoy your mapset. i'll try it.
"Gundam" and "Unicorn" are already on the source, so there's no need to remove them from the tags, although i'd suggest you remove only Gundam and change the source to "Mobile Suit Gundam" which is the franchise (without the Unicorn). recently my connection is not good, can't full submit, so must wait a moment ;-;

[Ryuusei no Namida]
Until 00:13:727 use a lower hitsound volume, since the song is soft in that section Fixed
00:47:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make more symmetrical? (notice how (6) is slightly off) Fixed
01:02:584 (1,2) - Dont really see the reason for these sliders to wiggle around. Fixed

[Namida]
00:37:298 (5) - Avoid short repeat sliders (that repeat more than once) on the easiest difficulty as newbies cant tell how long they should hold, do this for all of these in the mapset, since there are plenty. Fixed
02:13:298 (5) - New combo Fixed
This difficulty doesnt feel easy enough for the easiest diff in the mapset yet, sorry =/ hmm.. this is a NORMAL difficulty, it is not EASY difficulty. /~\

This map still could use more modding, get more mods before you contact me again, i specially recommend that you dedicate more time to your sliders and some of your patterns, dont try to rush it, your map deserves more care and dedication ok~

1. Delete osb

1. 00:24:870 (1) - beginning Finish
2. 00:31:727 (1) - ^
3. 00:42:012 (6) - New combo
4. 00:45:441 (6) - New combo and beginning Finish
5. 01:06:012 (1) - spinner Silent better?
6. 01:50:584 (6) - New combo
7. 01:54:012 (6) - ^
8. 02:13:727 (5) - Slider speed 0.5 like this?
   

S o r d a wrote:

thanks req~

[overall]:

1. Delete osb

deleted.

[Ryuusei no Namida]:

1. 00:24:870 (1) - beginning Finish yes.
2. 00:31:727 (1) - ^ no.
3. 00:42:012 (6) - New combo yes.
4. 00:45:441 (6) - New combo and beginning Finish yes.
5. 01:06:012 (1) - spinner Silent better? yes.
6. 01:50:584 (6) - New combo yes.
7. 01:54:012 (6) - ^ yes.
8. 02:13:727 (5) - Slider speed 0.5 like this? no.
   

[Namida]:
awesome diff Thanks!!

Fight>~</
star(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆

Caami wrote:

:)

Raging Bull wrote:

Nothing much. Although I prefer you start the easier difficulty at 01:06:711 to keep it consistent with the harder difficulty. And I also don't like slider tick hitsounds. If you think they need hitsounds, use a hitcircle. :L

Good map.

L_P wrote:

YO~! i know im late

[Normal] 這不是easy, 是normal
17,155 4跟5 换成 如前一个的slider(有一个return的那个) yes.
44,584 加一个return 我加了兩個return
48,012 ^ no.
57,012 加两个return 58,084 删 no.
104,298 移去下一个note的位置，start new combo here no.
132,584 加return no.
135,155 slider 在 136411结束，中间有return no.
156,155 加note no.
205,584 加 return yes.
200,012 ^ no.
209,012 ^ no.

[ryusei no namida]
这个图做的好，不多说，因为根据我的经验多说会被鸟。還好吧~ 有努力就好~
不过考虑考虑看拉近note跟note之间的距离。 難道還不夠近o.O?!!

会不会觉得两个图太少了点啊？ 因為太懶了, 只做了兩個難度 = ='

送星星~？

额？怎送？點"shoot a Kudosu Star"就行了~

Kanon wrote:

I like the song!
General
delete osb when next full submit. lazy xD
Normal
00:44:584 (1) - no kicker slider in easiest diff plz. Because arrow appear late than hit. confusing for new player. Fixed.
00:51:441 (2) - ^ Fixed.
and i notice there are many. plz fix that ^^ ^^
01:24:870 (3) - using volume increase by degrees here? yes.
01:45:441 (6) - sound werid here. i prefer not to use ticksound here. fixed.

Hard
remove audio lead in no~
02:24:334- add note plays better imo yes.

Good map. Thanks ^^
Although it only have two diff, the diff srpead is good
Go go rank it! XD
sry i have to save kudosu for now ,sry nevermind~

HeatKai wrote:

[general]
There is 2 osb in the beatmap , delete it bourdon =w= - i got one osb only o.O
go to .osu notepad on "ryuusei no namida" diff and change the " audio lead-in " to 1500 - Fixed

urmm yeah , that's all .

No Kudos.

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Thanks, GilaKai

L_P wrote:

i donno heatkai was malaysian
well, gilakai!?

1. Mp3 Bitrate: 192Kbps (Good bourdon) :3
   
2. Video (frame size) : No video
   
3. Skin : No Skin
   
4. Background : 1024x768 (Okay)
   
5. Kiai time : Both same (Okay)
   
6. Snapping : No problem here (Okay)
   
7. Preview Point : No problem here (Okay)
   
8. Diffs : 2 diffs (Yeah fine) I recommend to make easier or that's the easiest xD
   
9. Audio Lead-in : "Ryuusei no namida" diff , make it 2000 ? alang alang menyeluk perkasam (hehe , fine)
   
10. Artist : Chiaki Kuriyama (Okay)
    
11. Title : Ryuusei no Namida (Okay) btw why movie version?
    
12. source : Mobile Suit Gundam Unicorn (Okay)
    
13. Tags : Both same (Okay)

Nivalis wrote:

Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

[General]
-> "Gundam" should not be in the tags (already in source xD)
-> Adding a silver combocolor would fit the bg imo //< sorry. i dont add it~

[Namida]
00:21:012 (3) - Add whistle?
00:25:727 (5) - Fine for Normals actually, but since this is the easiest diff beginners would find this tricky imo
00:28:298 (1) - Remove the clap from the repeat? (It doesn't follow the background drums ><)
00:30:012 (3) - Same as above
00:41:155 (2) - I prefer whistle instead of clap in the repeat. Would be cute :3
00:44:584 (1) - Curve it a bit like : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158287 ? Will give more flow imo
00:48:012 (1) - Remove clap from the slider's end?
00:53:584 (4,5) - Looks very weird in play mode (especially how it touches 00:51:441 (2))
00:57:012 (3,4) - Try this rhythm : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158289 (ignore the notes' positioning, just look at the rhythm on the timeline :3)
01:02:584 (2,3,4) - Why not a perfect triangle here ><
01:20:155 (2) - Remove clap from slider's start?
01:40:298 (6,7) - Remove clap from (6)'end - and use clap on (7)'s start?
02:05:584 (2) - Same as 00:57:012

[Ryuusei no Namida]
00:15:655 (2) - Add whistle on slider's start?
00:25:512 (2,3,4,5) - This stacking... Not bad actually, but looks weird for me. Maybe it's just something wrong with my eyes @_@
00:33:012 (3,4,5) - If you see this pic: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158297 you can see (3)'s endpoint is going too upward. Few grids down maybe?
00:40:941 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Not a perfect hexagon ><
01:02:584 (1,2) - To be honest I'm expecting a jump here xD
01:27:227 (2) - I found the clap slidertick here is somewhat disorienting for me... Not a big problem though
01:29:584 (2) - Whistle here?
01:45:012 (1,2,3) - Few grids right, so (2) is in the center?
02:00:012 (2) - Finish here looks out of place for me, clap/whistle better
02:18:012 (2) - Remove clap from slider's end?

Mostly suggestions, solid map already ~
Good luck (:

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Yo~ (Sorry I took so long :<)
[General]
• Tags don't match~ Make it so (Harder diff does not have Gundam)
• The map ends kinda...suddenly...
It feels weird, I say to map up to 02:41:584. That way the end feels much more..."end-like". Nothing huge.

[Namida]
• 02:09:012 (3) - This kick slider here through me off. The extra repeat barley matches the song and a kick slider on an Easy is awkward to begin with. Switch that up please~

[Ryuusei no Namida]
• 00:03:012 (1) - Remove the new combo here just to match the lyrics a little better.


Sounds amazing. Great work on the hitsounds!
Didn't find much, but I was kind of at a rush :/
Nice map. Deserves a star~♪

Zelos wrote:

Alrite here we go.

Folder:
Clean

Please note any mod of mine is only a suggestion and can be freely ignored.

General:
You cant really search for anything under 3 letters so those tags UC and CC just might be useless.

Normal:
00:18:012 (5,1) - start a new combo at 5 and remove the new combo at 1 so it becomes consistent with the down beats of the song.
00:41:155 (2) - the soft whistle on the kick back part of the slider sounds awkward in my opinion. use the normal hitsound?
There is a lot of comboing issues that I did not like but you kept the wierd comboing consistent at least. //< i just follow with the lyrics.

Hard:
00:25:727 (3) - this slider looks a bit un-symmetrical. perhaps fix it to make it so?
02:30:441 (2) - new combo here because that was a rather long previous slider. it will give some HP back if you do.
02:35:155 (6) - and a new combo here? it seems appropiate.

Nice map.

Star.

1. At the beginning of the map, you have silenced both slider tracks and sliderticks together. It's unrankable. Use 30% of hitsound volume instead of silencing them. It sounds nice

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hello ~ Mod requested by HeatKai

Ryuusei no Namida :

1. At the beginning of the map, you have silenced both slider tracks and sliderticks together. It's unrankable. Use 30% of hitsound volume instead of silencing them. It sounds nice

Edit : Here's your bubble