I Love This beatmap, the crazy mode is really funny, im training on it, hoping it'll get ranked 
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Lucky Star - Motteke! Sailor Fuku (REDALiCE Remix)v2
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Easy:
00:38:538 (optional) imo i think you should put a note here and then the break after it. amek sure the single note here is a new combo
Normal:
01:21:171 this slider looks ugly to me
Hard:
00:08:364 shorten this by 1/4
02:23:627 this endpoint is too far from 1
Crazy:
2:31:171 why is there a break here
the spacing changes in crazy are fine
if your going to do a white flash on crazy i suggest you do it for all difs
pretty good map
00:38:538 (optional) imo i think you should put a note here and then the break after it. amek sure the single note here is a new combo
Normal:
01:21:171 this slider looks ugly to me
Hard:
00:08:364 shorten this by 1/4
02:23:627 this endpoint is too far from 1
Crazy:
2:31:171 why is there a break here
the spacing changes in crazy are fine
if your going to do a white flash on crazy i suggest you do it for all difs
pretty good map
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Gens
fine
Normal
fine
Hard:
fine
Crazy:
fine
garlic star
fine
Normal
fine
Hard:
fine
Crazy:
fine
garlic star
This is a very well made map. Then again, all your beatmaps are like that. 
I don't know if it's just me but the beats are a tad bit early. +20 to the offset seems to definitely work fine for me.
If it doesn't sound right to you, don't change it.
Oh and Gen's Easy is 2 ms away from the other difficulties.
I don't know if it's just me but the beats are a tad bit early. +20 to the offset seems to definitely work fine for me.
If it doesn't sound right to you, don't change it.
Oh and Gen's Easy is 2 ms away from the other difficulties.
Played Normal, I can't mod it, but I can give you a star.
Fun map/song.
Fun map/song.
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Easy
Personally, would go through and adjust most likely the hitobjects which are 1 beat apart to be a bit closer to each other on the grid. That or adjust everything else with larger timing differences to be a bit farther apart. Basically, just could use some touching up with spacing. Otherwise, looks good, though.
Normal
Fine.
Egh... I'm absolutely dog-tired.... I will finish up with Hard and Crazy sometime in the morning, before touching anything else... *writes down* Watch for an edit here. In the meantime, this gets a star because it looks pretty clean even from my test plays, and I expect anything I come up with will be minor.
EDIT:
Hard
00:31:69 (10,11,12,13) - It's hard to follow here where it's mapped to. I think it's mapped to the background, though the background seems really obsolete around here. I would recommend changing this part a bit so it can be better followed.
Some technically incorrect spacing in here, but I haven't had any problem following, so other than those beats I think this is fine.
Crazy
00:15:38 (5) - Weee nazi~ Just one tiny grid space to the right.
01:47:66 (6) - Technically, this is a little closer to 5 than it should be, though I'd let this slide anyways. Not hard to follow.
02:30:55 (1) - Even I have some troubles getting a 300 on this one, though I'm not going to complain. I'm all for fast spinners (see Ushiwaka's Dance lol), so long as it's 300-able by your probably-better-than-average spinner. Which I can do. Just with a lot of difficultly. XD
Personally, would go through and adjust most likely the hitobjects which are 1 beat apart to be a bit closer to each other on the grid. That or adjust everything else with larger timing differences to be a bit farther apart. Basically, just could use some touching up with spacing. Otherwise, looks good, though.
Normal
Fine.
Egh... I'm absolutely dog-tired.... I will finish up with Hard and Crazy sometime in the morning, before touching anything else... *writes down* Watch for an edit here. In the meantime, this gets a star because it looks pretty clean even from my test plays, and I expect anything I come up with will be minor.
EDIT:
Hard
00:31:69 (10,11,12,13) - It's hard to follow here where it's mapped to. I think it's mapped to the background, though the background seems really obsolete around here. I would recommend changing this part a bit so it can be better followed.
Some technically incorrect spacing in here, but I haven't had any problem following, so other than those beats I think this is fine.
Crazy
00:15:38 (5) - Weee nazi~ Just one tiny grid space to the right.
01:47:66 (6) - Technically, this is a little closer to 5 than it should be, though I'd let this slide anyways. Not hard to follow.
02:30:55 (1) - Even I have some troubles getting a 300 on this one, though I'm not going to complain. I'm all for fast spinners (see Ushiwaka's Dance lol), so long as it's 300-able by your probably-better-than-average spinner. Which I can do. Just with a lot of difficultly. XD
Topic Starter
Thnx, I've done everything
I want to see this map ranked finally. This was the first beatmap of yours you showed me some months ago. So here's my star for priority.
Really like this map, but I think that the clapping sounds with that came with the update screwed everything 
Also, they're totally random, they make the music "ugly"
Apart of that, great map! I really like it
Also, they're totally random, they make the music "ugly"
Apart of that, great map! I really like it
Easy:
00:07:13 (4,4) - I really don't think this should be stacked like this.
Normal:
The only comment I have to make is that this could really use some clapping hitsounds, in my opinion.
Hard:
Nothing to comment on except on hitsounds.
Crazy:
Now THAT's what I'm talking about concerning hitsounds! That was awesome! Definitely run this by Mogsworth and give him a run for his money modding these hitsounds.
The only concern I have is:
02:30:55 (1) - Auto barely 300's this spinner, which is a slight caution. If Auto were able to get a few bonuses out of it, then I'd be fine with it.
Have some starz.
00:07:13 (4,4) - I really don't think this should be stacked like this.
Normal:
The only comment I have to make is that this could really use some clapping hitsounds, in my opinion.
Hard:
Nothing to comment on except on hitsounds.
Crazy:
Now THAT's what I'm talking about concerning hitsounds! That was awesome! Definitely run this by Mogsworth and give him a run for his money modding these hitsounds.
The only concern I have is:
02:30:55 (1) - Auto barely 300's this spinner, which is a slight caution. If Auto were able to get a few bonuses out of it, then I'd be fine with it.
Have some starz.
Really like the layout of all of them.
For the ninja spinner at the end of crazy: Maybe removing (2) and (3) of the final red combo, changing the red (1) to a pruple (5), and lengthening the spinner up to that red tick? Auto gets a 1000 bonus that way. :p
I like the trade-off with the claps and whistles in Crazy as well - maybe you could integrate that into the other difficulties as well. =O
Coolioooo. Starred.
For the ninja spinner at the end of crazy: Maybe removing (2) and (3) of the final red combo, changing the red (1) to a pruple (5), and lengthening the spinner up to that red tick? Auto gets a 1000 bonus that way. :p
I like the trade-off with the claps and whistles in Crazy as well - maybe you could integrate that into the other difficulties as well. =O
Coolioooo. Starred.
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Done!
Just a few minor adjustments that I can suggest for this almost perfect map.
[Insane]
0:59 (9) The slider should last an 8th longer here, to be in sync with the vocals.
1:36 (8) Again, the notes are off from the vocals here, but this one I think is intentional. However that may be, I feel that that the ones following the vocals here would suit it better.
Wonderful map, by the way, definitely one of my favorites.
[Insane]
0:59 (9) The slider should last an 8th longer here, to be in sync with the vocals.
1:36 (8) Again, the notes are off from the vocals here, but this one I think is intentional. However that may be, I feel that that the ones following the vocals here would suit it better.
Wonderful map, by the way, definitely one of my favorites.
An incredible map, nevertheless!
I'm looking foward to see this map ranked.
I'm looking foward to see this map ranked.
You're on your way to be one of my favourite mappers 
. There may always be some things to be changed, but here I can't find any. You make wonderful maps, and of course this is one of them, keep up the good work . A Star from me for you~
. There may always be some things to be changed, but here I can't find any. You make wonderful maps, and of course this is one of them, keep up the good work . A Star from me for you~Alright. Been meaning to recheck this beauty.
Gen's Easy
Clean. Only problem is that the offset is 2ms earlier than the other difficulties. Fix and resnap.
Normal
Might have gone a bit far with the claps... That or my ears are just ringing too much. I don't nazi sounds though, so no worries. It's clean otherwise.
Hard
01:15:20 (10,11,12,13) - Very slight spacing inconsistency between 12 and 13. Not much of anything though, so it doesn't really need to be fixed. (But feel free to do so anyways)
So.... Clean.
Crazy
Thanks for making a map worth less than ten million that I'd feel is more than hard enough to justify ten million. Awesome. To be honest, you beat me out starting at 1:12.
Clean. No question. Awesome. Hell no question. Sane? Well, yes. But it's probably the closest to insanity that I've seen in a while.
Just resnap Gen's and I bubble~
Gen's Easy
Clean. Only problem is that the offset is 2ms earlier than the other difficulties. Fix and resnap.
Normal
Might have gone a bit far with the claps... That or my ears are just ringing too much. I don't nazi sounds though, so no worries.
It's clean otherwise.Hard
01:15:20 (10,11,12,13) - Very slight spacing inconsistency between 12 and 13. Not much of anything though, so it doesn't really need to be fixed. (But feel free to do so anyways)
So.... Clean.
Crazy
Thanks for making a map worth less than ten million that I'd feel is more than hard enough to justify ten million.
Awesome. To be honest, you beat me out starting at 1:12.Clean. No question. Awesome. Hell no question. Sane? Well, yes. But it's probably the closest to insanity that I've seen in a while.
Just resnap Gen's and I bubble~
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Topic Starter
thnx, something went wrong with resnapping
Gen's Easy
00:49:76 (1)
00:51:17 (1)
00:52:57 (1)
00:53:97 (1)
00:55:38 (1)
00:56:78 (1)
02:02:75 (1)
02:04:15 (1)
02:05:55 (1)
02:06:96 (1)
02:08:36 (1)
02:09:76 (3)
^This stuff needs go be moved back 1/2. I'm not sure what happened, but if this was mentioned result of resnapping, well... Weird.
Just fix that I guess.
00:49:76 (1)
00:51:17 (1)
00:52:57 (1)
00:53:97 (1)
00:55:38 (1)
00:56:78 (1)
02:02:75 (1)
02:04:15 (1)
02:05:55 (1)
02:06:96 (1)
02:08:36 (1)
02:09:76 (3)
^This stuff needs go be moved back 1/2. I'm not sure what happened, but if this was mentioned result of resnapping, well... Weird.
Just fix that I guess.
+15 to offset.
Easy
See: An64fan's list. Just to clarify, move these 1/2 beat to the right.
01:21:69 (1) - If you could just move this back 1/2 or 1 beat back and make it end 1 beat before the next note.
Crazy
01:09:76 (12) - I normally never do this, but move this 4 level 3 grid squares to the right.
01:10:47 (1) - Make this start 1 beat earlier. It's just weird having a late start like that.
If you want, you could put some Kiai time during the ending... Seems appropriate enough.
Why's this end earlier than Hard? Also, Hard has Kiai time during that section, but not Crazy/Normal.
For a second there, I thought the artist name said Fukyu. I would've lol'd so hard. It's still funny without the y though.
Easy
See: An64fan's list. Just to clarify, move these 1/2 beat to the right.
01:21:69 (1) - If you could just move this back 1/2 or 1 beat back and make it end 1 beat before the next note.
Crazy
01:09:76 (12) - I normally never do this, but move this 4 level 3 grid squares to the right.
01:10:47 (1) - Make this start 1 beat earlier. It's just weird having a late start like that.
If you want, you could put some Kiai time during the ending... Seems appropriate enough.
Why's this end earlier than Hard? Also, Hard has Kiai time during that section, but not Crazy/Normal.
For a second there, I thought the artist name said Fukyu. I would've lol'd so hard. It's still funny without the y though.
Topic Starter
Fixed all.
It'll have more than 10mil points if I make it longerSeibei4211 wrote:
Why's this end earlier than Hard?
Ok, so assuming that you only want Kiai time in Hard and you don't want the spinners starting any earlier, it looks good.
Unless you wanna map the rest of Crazy. 10 million isn't a strict rule, you know. The map is super hard enough that around 10 million is probably fine. 12 million would be pushing it, but 10 million is ok. So if you want tooo, go ahead, but if you don't care, I can edit this into a bubble. We just don't want super easy, boring as hell, long-ass maps being worth a ton. You gotta EARN IT.
Also, WTF IS UP WITH THAT DUDE'S HAND?! IT'S NUTS! Is that even a hand?! It's like a claw! WTF?! Which one is the thumb?! They all look like thumbs! AAAAAH!
Unless you wanna map the rest of Crazy. 10 million isn't a strict rule, you know. The map is super hard enough that around 10 million is probably fine. 12 million would be pushing it, but 10 million is ok. So if you want tooo, go ahead, but if you don't care, I can edit this into a bubble. We just don't want super easy, boring as hell, long-ass maps being worth a ton. You gotta EARN IT.
Also, WTF IS UP WITH THAT DUDE'S HAND?! IT'S NUTS! Is that even a hand?! It's like a claw! WTF?! Which one is the thumb?! They all look like thumbs! AAAAAH!
Topic Starter
hmm.. done,
13.5mil points now...
btw that dude is konata
13.5mil points now...
btw that dude is konata
This looks okay now. I see no major problems.
Bubbled. And vytstarred.
Bubbled. And vytstarred.
Everything checks out. After discussing with some other BATs, the score seems fine for this level of difficulty.
The slider at the beginning of crazy isn't snapped. Just resnap this, and I'll rank.
The slider at the beginning of crazy isn't snapped. Just resnap this, and I'll rank.
This! Countdown was going off early, resnapping is a simple fix. I also approve of the max score for Crazy.Dakeyrus wrote:
Everything checks out. After discussing with some other BATs, the score seems fine for this level of difficulty.
The slider at the beginning of crazy isn't snapped. Just resnap this, and I'll rank.
Topic Starter
Thnx, I've fixed it
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Finally =)
I know, right? I was there.Isshin wrote:
Finally =)
Was pretty excited this was getting finished.Great work as usual Happy~ It's great seeing this ranked after so long.
congrats this is one of the few maps(I think only) I've given a 10 out of 10 stars on.
may not be ZOMG GREATEST MAP EVAR ZOMG SO FUN because i'm sure everyone will have their own favorite map, you took the song, mapped it perfectly, great background, great effects and cosmetics. I really cant in good mind give it a 9 when I cant say anything bad about the map.
may not be ZOMG GREATEST MAP EVAR ZOMG SO FUN because i'm sure everyone will have their own favorite map, you took the song, mapped it perfectly, great background, great effects and cosmetics. I really cant in good mind give it a 9 when I cant say anything bad about the map.
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that irked me but I didnt really careZerostarry wrote:
Did anyone mention that the artist is REDALiCE, and the source is Lucky Star?
hey, the picture resolution is too big, use a little one (800*600)
Topic Starter
ehm.. yes the BG is 1900 * 1200 that's not a problem is it?sesito71 wrote:
hey, the picture resolution is too big, use a little one (800*600)
The SB (white flash) is only 640 * 480.
Even a still BG shouldn't be more than 1024x768 or so. Maybe not worth unranking it now, but that's something to keep in mind in the future.happy30 wrote:
ehm.. yes the BG is 1900 * 1200 that's not a problem is it?sesito71 wrote:
hey, the picture resolution is too big, use a little one (800*600)
The SB (white flash) is only 640 * 480.
Background has been resized to 1024x640
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On the normal difficulty I think the notes at 0:55:559, 1:12:284 and 2:08:606 could use an extra flash.
These flashes would be nice to see on all difficulty but i named these three because i don't know if timing is different on any other difficulty.
These flashes would be nice to see on all difficulty but i named these three because i don't know if timing is different on any other difficulty.
You should add an epilepsy warning on the Crazy diificulty mode.
BTW, it's in Song Setup.
BTW, it's in Song Setup.
The song is already ranked so I'm not sure if this will be possible, but maybe a BAT can add the warning without forcing a new upload of the map o.orcmero wrote:
You should add an epilepsy warning on the Crazy diificulty mode.
BTW, it's in Song Setup.
Look, just go to Song Setup -> Storyboarding.Check the option for "Display epilepsy warning (storyboard has quick strobing)" and upload it. We'll see what happens then.
I can add an screenshot if you want.
I can add an screenshot if you want.
You can't upload ranked beatmaps.rcmero wrote:
Look, just go to Song Setup -> Storyboarding.Check the option for "Display epilepsy warning (storyboard has quick strobing)" and upload it. We'll see what happens then.
I can add an screenshot if you want.
Got it taken care ofBeuchi-chan wrote:
The song is already ranked so I'm not sure if this will be possible, but maybe a BAT can add the warning without forcing a new upload of the map o.orcmero wrote:
You should add an epilepsy warning on the Crazy diificulty mode.
BTW, it's in Song Setup.
I really love this beatmap!