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Sonitus Vir feat. N. Sato - Grazing Gazelle Under The Moon

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Breeze
Hi there

[General]
  1. Combo color looked similar IMO
[Normal]
  1. 00:54:242 (5) - Add clap here seems better
[Hard]
  1. 02:57:372 (1) - Spacing a bit far for me, at leaset when I test play, I will miss here. You could ask some of your friend to test it, if most of them say OK, I think it's fine enough
It's a neat map
osu needs more relax map like this ;)
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Topic Starter
Niva

Breeze wrote:

Hi there

[General]
  1. Combo color looked similar IMO I only used 2 combo colors now, I hope they don't blend much now


[Normal]
  1. 00:54:242 (5) - Add clap here seems better Done
[Hard]
  1. 02:57:372 (1) - Spacing a bit far for me, at leaset when I test play, I will miss here. You could ask some of your friend to test it, if most of them say OK, I think it's fine enough I've got my friends playtest this in the past (zeroclover etc.), and they can catch it, so I guess it's OK
It's a neat map
osu needs more relax map like this ;)
star
Thanks Breeze ~
Shulin
I saw your request in #modreqs :P

General:

-- In the intro I think the volume is too high (especially custom clap), maybe reduce the volume to 40%?
-- No spinners?
-- Only 5 maps? I hope you map more xD

Normal:

01:06:764 (5) - Add finish to the end?

Hard:

00:39:111 (4) - Remove whistle from the slider?
00:56:329 (4) - Add clap?
02:54:764 (1,2,3) - I think this looks bad (not bothered about the spacing lol) maybe use x1 distance snap on these notes then keep the rest as it is?
02:56:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is a sudden change in spacing, I managed it fine but you might want to consider tweaking it a bit.
02:58:807 (1) - Move to 02:58:677 ? I think it follows the song more.

Great maps, I love instrumentals. Star from me!
Topic Starter
Niva

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- In the intro I think the volume is too high (especially custom clap), maybe reduce the volume to 40%? Done (:
-- No spinners? I want to map this without spinner xD
-- Only 5 maps? I hope you map more xD I'm having trouble in MAT/BAT hunting, I'm not really good at it ):

Normal:

01:06:764 (5) - Add finish to the end? Added

Hard:

00:39:111 (4) - Remove whistle from the slider? Done
00:56:329 (4) - Add clap? Done
02:54:764 (1,2,3) - I think this looks bad (not bothered about the spacing lol) maybe use x1 distance snap on these notes then keep the rest as it is? Done
02:56:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is a sudden change in spacing, I managed it fine but you might want to consider tweaking it a bit. :'D don't wanna change
02:58:807 (1) - Move to 02:58:677 ? I think it follows the song more. It broke the previous rhythm ><

Great maps, I love instrumentals. Star from me!
Thanks Shulin xD
Verdisphena
SONITUS VIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR-
I approve this.
Topic Starter
Niva

Verdisphena wrote:

SONITUS VIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR-
I approve this.
yay ^_^
Aleks719
General
"world/electronica" <= not sure in this tag, since you have "world" and "electronica"

Hard
01:01:546 (7) - looks bad, try to find another direction
01:08:851 (4) - i play in "window" mode. reverse of slider is too close to the border of window. I suggest to replace slider point a bit upper than now
01:36:503 (5) - this slider is very strange, i can't replace it :
I tried to make it because i'm pretty sure it's 1/4 with 1 reverse , not 1/6 with two reverses
01:37:025 (x) - add note
01:45:894 (2) - add reverse?
02:31:807 (3) - add clap to the start

Normal
00:54:764 (6) - remove clap from the reverse, add clap to the start
01:12:503 (1) - overlap with scorebar
01:33:894 (2) - very close to the border of window
02:39:111 (5) - ^
02:43:285 (4) - remove clap from the reverse, add clap to the start
02:44:329 (1) - touch border of window

star~
Topic Starter
Niva
Thanks Aleks, fixed most~

btw World/Electronica is this song's genre, but I add "world" and "electronica" in the tags to let the beatmap searcher find this song with "world" or "electronica" only (:
Breeze
just one thing
[Hard]
  1. 02:57:372 (1) - I feel this jump is too far, since I've never seen such a far jump on other place in this diff., it's playable as a Hard diff., though
change it or not, let me know when you decide

EDIT: mapper decide to keep them, well, bubbled
Mismagius
renard <3
Topic Starter
Niva

Blue Dragon wrote:

renard <3
Yes :3
abalee
Ranked.
Gamu
(*・x・)/。・:*:・゚´★゚・:*:・。☆Congratulations ;*・'゜☆v(*'-^*);*・'゜☆
Mismagius
mfw ranked

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Backfire
Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy :)
banvi
Congratulations~ :)
Topic Starter
Niva
Aaaaaaaaah thanks for the rank abalee :3

And thanks all~
Breeze
Oh, finally it get ranked
Congratulations
Gomo Psivarh
CONGLATURATION!!!
Sallad4ever
Finally, great song & great map got ranked

Nice Job ;)
Dai
oh Finally

congrats
IceBeam
yeah,finally

gratz Nivalis! :)
IkkiMinami
:)
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