Sonitus Vir feat. N. Sato - Grazing Gazelle Under The Moon · forum

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2011-07-31T13:55:29+00:00

Hey Nivalis

Everything is fine with the folder and map settings,the only suggestion is to set Audio Lead-In to 2000 via notepad,though it's up to you.

[Normal]
00:50:068 (3) - Clap perfectly fits here.
01:24:503 (1) - Even during test play it's almost out of play screen

It's visible and readable,but I'd move it a bit higher from the screen border.
01:40:155 (4) - Again clap.
01:57:894 - It's okay to start a break using notepad,but I'd add a note here.
02:46:938 (3,4) - Why not to use soft C1 clap for (3) and finish for (4) again?

[Hard]
00:53:198 (5,6) - Nice pattern,but extending (5) to the next blue tick (00:53:590) sounds more interesting to me then simple 1/2 rhytm.
01:06:633 - I hear a note here,maybe add another repeat to previous slider?
01:20:590 (1) - Stack with (6)?
01:42:764 (4) - Repeat on blue tick sounds wrong to me :< Try to make something instead here,using more notes.
01:47:851 (1) - Not sure about this slider,I'd fill this part with notes instead,seems like 1/3 fit here,anyway I'd like to see a note at 01:47:981 at least.
01:57:894 - Add a note here if you followed this suggestion in Normal.
Awesome ending

Nice music and map,I enjoyed it.
My suggestions are really few,but that's the only that looked a bit wrong to me.Everything else is just flawless.

Good job again,starring~

Niva

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Niva 2011-08-03T15:00:59+00:00

@IceBeam : Fixed most, and sorry for late reply, my internet connection went down for the past 2 days...
Thx (:

Fight69

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Fight69 2011-08-04T22:02:18+00:00

Hi :3

[Hard]

00:03:372 (4) - This slider is under the score, (http://puu.sh/40rX) it's not a good idea so you should move it somewhere else.
01:48:155 - Use 1/3 like that : http://puu.sh/40sl It fit better to the song.

Useless mod is useless.
~Starz'd !

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Niva 2011-08-05T09:37:57+00:00

Fight69 wrote:
Hi :3

[Hard]

00:03:372 (4) - This slider is under the score, (http://puu.sh/40rX) it's not a good idea so you should move it somewhere else.
01:48:155 - Use 1/3 like that : http://puu.sh/40sl It fit better to the song.

Useless mod is useless.
~Starz'd !

Fixed that 1/3...
Thanks for star + mod xD

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2011-08-07T12:05:04+00:00

from my que

[General]
fine

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
02:17:590 (7,8) - slider end at 02:17:981 , circle at 02:18:111 is better imo
02:36:111 - add circle?

awesome map
sorry I can't find anything more ;_;

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Niva 2011-08-07T14:19:23+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
[Hard]
02:17:590 (7,8) - slider end at 02:17:981 , circle at 02:18:111 is better imo I can't get a good pattern if I change this ><
02:36:111 - add circle? Added

Thanks for mod + double star (:

Gomo Psivarh

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Gomo Psivarh 2011-08-07T17:37:27+00:00

Hi Nivalis

Yeah no spinner

[hard]

00:45:111 - add a circle between (6) and (1)?
01:36:503 (5) - change it to an 1/4 snap slider? ( repeat the slider to 01:37:025 )
　　　　　　 or add a circle at 01:37:025?

BONUS 2000000!!!!!!!!!

Niva

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Niva 2011-08-08T10:28:00+00:00

Not changed anything (plus the second one is actually 1/6 rather than 1/4 ><)

Thanks for checking anyway Gomo Psivarh ~

Jinxy

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Jinxy 2011-08-09T07:04:51+00:00

A few beats are placed quite low. Not that much of a problem anyway.

[Hard]
00:04:155 (5) - Move the red slider pint right 1 grid, then move the entire slider left to the point is back i nthe middle. I should be more symmetrical now. (I used a ruler for this @_@)
00:16:677 (1,2,3,4,5) - All of them are correct, nice.
01:45:894 (2) - Not snapped to 1/3.
02:35:981 (1,2,3) - ^

I like the sliders, they really are smooth and fit with the map really well.

Starred.

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Niva 2011-08-09T13:57:45+00:00

JInxyjem wrote:
[Hard]
00:04:155 (5) - Move the red slider pint right 1 grid, then move the entire slider left to the point is back i nthe middle. I should be more symmetrical now. (I used a ruler for this @_@) I'm not really good at symmetry shaping, fixed though. I hope it's correct now ~
00:16:677 (1,2,3,4,5) - All of them are correct, nice. Thx xD
01:45:894 (2) - Not snapped to 1/3. It's 1/4 duh ><
02:35:981 (1,2,3) - ^ Also ^

Thanks for mod and star (:

Scorpium

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Scorpium 2011-08-09T14:14:10+00:00

hehe good map

terusin niv, patut dicontoh ini

s t a r

Chuggles

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Chuggles 2011-08-09T14:41:33+00:00

Very nice map you've got here

Only thing I'd suggest is a spinner to break the song up a little bit

Star'd

Niva

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Niva 2011-08-10T09:54:29+00:00

I prefer without spinner ><
Thanks for checking anyway ~

dNextGen

dNextGen 2011-08-13T03:56:00+00:00

Pesan anda terlalu pendek,Tolong jangan mengirim pesan seperti "star" dan pastikan anda telah memberi konstribusi pada thread ini

Niva

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Niva 2011-08-13T09:49:48+00:00

loooool

Thanks for star ~

your message is too short

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2011-08-18T08:18:41+00:00

Yo, from my que

Hard:
Some inconsistencies with your custom hit-normal (clap on soft custom) , though IDK if intentional because you have whistle on them, but I'll point a few of them out. I think they sound better with the hit-normal on em.
- 00:34:416 (1) - Clap on beginning
- 00:35:198 (2) - Clap on end
- 00:35:720 (3) - Custom Clap on end
- 00:36:242 (4) - Clap on the end
- 00:37:285 (1) - Clap on the end

I'll stop there for now. was just curious why you didn't continue with the custom clap cause it sounds really good throughout the song. Just not sure if that was intentional or now.

- 02:56:329 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think this pattern fits.. its so.. awkward and i guess not as smooth like the rest of the map. Maybe just use regular streams, I don't think the map will be any harder using them compared of sliders. Infact, I think they'll be easier.
- 02:57:372 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 03:03:894 (3) - 1/6?

Normal:
Same thing like i said about the hitsounds on hard, else its solid.

Really good map man. I think shits rank ready ez.

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Niva 2011-08-18T10:22:47+00:00

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:
Yo, from my que (:

Hard:
Some inconsistencies with your custom hit-normal (clap on soft custom) , though IDK if intentional because you have whistle on them, but I'll point a few of them out. I think they sound better with the hit-normal on em. It's all intentional, but changed on in 00:34:416 though
- 00:34:416 (1) - Clap on beginning
- 00:35:198 (2) - Clap on end
- 00:35:720 (3) - Custom Clap on end
- 00:36:242 (4) - Clap on the end
- 00:37:285 (1) - Clap on the end

I'll stop there for now. was just curious why you didn't continue with the custom clap cause it sounds really good throughout the song. Just not sure if that was intentional or now.

- 02:56:329 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think this pattern fits.. its so.. awkward and i guess not as smooth like the rest of the map. Maybe just use regular streams, I don't think the map will be any harder using them compared of sliders. Infact, I think they'll be easier. Some modders in the past (notably IceBeam) liked this ending >< plus actually I was running out of patterns here. I tried randomly placing it like this and it sounds well (:
- 02:57:372 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
- 03:03:894 (3) - 1/6? Done

Normal:
Same thing like i said about the hitsounds on hard, else its solid.
Tweaked some hitsounds

Really good map man. I think shits rank ready ez.

Thanks!!

Breeze

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Breeze 2011-08-21T01:32:42+00:00

Hi there

[General]

Combo color looked similar IMO

[Normal]

00:54:242 (5) - Add clap here seems better

[Hard]

02:57:372 (1) - Spacing a bit far for me, at leaset when I test play, I will miss here. You could ask some of your friend to test it, if most of them say OK, I think it's fine enough

It's a neat map
osu needs more relax map like this

star

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Niva 2011-08-21T03:32:53+00:00

Breeze wrote:
Hi there

[General]
Combo color looked similar IMO I only used 2 combo colors now, I hope they don't blend much now

[Normal]
00:54:242 (5) - Add clap here seems better Done
[Hard]
02:57:372 (1) - Spacing a bit far for me, at leaset when I test play, I will miss here. You could ask some of your friend to test it, if most of them say OK, I think it's fine enough I've got my friends playtest this in the past (zeroclover etc.), and they can catch it, so I guess it's OK
It's a neat map
osu needs more relax map like this
star

Thanks Breeze ~

Shulin

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Shulin 2011-08-22T16:06:41+00:00

I saw your request in #modreqs

General:

-- In the intro I think the volume is too high (especially custom clap), maybe reduce the volume to 40%?
-- No spinners?
-- Only 5 maps? I hope you map more xD

Normal:

01:06:764 (5) - Add finish to the end?

Hard:

00:39:111 (4) - Remove whistle from the slider?
00:56:329 (4) - Add clap?
02:54:764 (1,2,3) - I think this looks bad (not bothered about the spacing lol) maybe use x1 distance snap on these notes then keep the rest as it is?
02:56:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is a sudden change in spacing, I managed it fine but you might want to consider tweaking it a bit.
02:58:807 (1) - Move to 02:58:677 ? I think it follows the song more.

Great maps, I love instrumentals. Star from me!

Niva

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Niva 2011-08-23T02:44:48+00:00

Shulin wrote:
General:

-- In the intro I think the volume is too high (especially custom clap), maybe reduce the volume to 40%? Done (:
-- No spinners? I want to map this without spinner xD
-- Only 5 maps? I hope you map more xD I'm having trouble in MAT/BAT hunting, I'm not really good at it ):

Normal:

01:06:764 (5) - Add finish to the end? Added

Hard:

00:39:111 (4) - Remove whistle from the slider? Done
00:56:329 (4) - Add clap? Done
02:54:764 (1,2,3) - I think this looks bad (not bothered about the spacing lol) maybe use x1 distance snap on these notes then keep the rest as it is? Done
02:56:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is a sudden change in spacing, I managed it fine but you might want to consider tweaking it a bit. :'D don't wanna change
02:58:807 (1) - Move to 02:58:677 ? I think it follows the song more. It broke the previous rhythm ><

Great maps, I love instrumentals. Star from me!

Thanks Shulin xD

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2011-08-23T02:52:14+00:00

SONITUS VIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR-
I approve this.

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Niva 2011-08-23T03:46:48+00:00

Verdisphena wrote:
SONITUS VIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR-
I approve this.

yay ^_^

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Aleks719 2011-08-31T14:09:57+00:00

General
"world/electronica" <= not sure in this tag, since you have "world" and "electronica"

Hard
01:01:546 (7) - looks bad, try to find another direction

01:08:851 (4) - i play in "window" mode. reverse of slider is too close to the border of window. I suggest to replace slider point a bit upper than now
01:36:503 (5) - this slider is very strange, i can't replace it :

I tried to make it because i'm pretty sure it's 1/4 with 1 reverse , not 1/6 with two reverses
01:37:025 (x) - add note
01:45:894 (2) - add reverse?
02:31:807 (3) - add clap to the start

Normal
00:54:764 (6) - remove clap from the reverse, add clap to the start
01:12:503 (1) - overlap with scorebar
01:33:894 (2) - very close to the border of window
02:39:111 (5) - ^
02:43:285 (4) - remove clap from the reverse, add clap to the start
02:44:329 (1) - touch border of window

star~

Niva

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Niva 2011-09-01T05:07:03+00:00

Thanks Aleks, fixed most~

btw World/Electronica is this song's genre, but I add "world" and "electronica" in the tags to let the beatmap searcher find this song with "world" or "electronica" only (:

Breeze

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Breeze 2011-09-08T06:09:14+00:00

just one thing
[Hard]

02:57:372 (1) - I feel this jump is too far, since I've never seen such a far jump on other place in this diff., it's playable as a Hard diff., though

change it or not, let me know when you decide

EDIT: mapper decide to keep them, well, bubbled

Mismagius

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Mismagius 2011-09-26T16:34:20+00:00

renard <3

Niva

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Niva 2011-09-26T22:22:44+00:00