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Sonitus Vir feat. N. Sato - Grazing Gazelle Under The Moon

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Topic Starter
Niva
loooool

Thanks for star ~

your message is too short
yeahyeahyeahhh
Yo, from my que 8-)

Hard:
Some inconsistencies with your custom hit-normal (clap on soft custom) , though IDK if intentional because you have whistle on them, but I'll point a few of them out. I think they sound better with the hit-normal on em.
- 00:34:416 (1) - Clap on beginning
- 00:35:198 (2) - Clap on end
- 00:35:720 (3) - Custom Clap on end
- 00:36:242 (4) - Clap on the end
- 00:37:285 (1) - Clap on the end

I'll stop there for now. was just curious why you didn't continue with the custom clap cause it sounds really good throughout the song. Just not sure if that was intentional or now.

- 02:56:329 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think this pattern fits.. its so.. awkward and i guess not as smooth like the rest of the map. Maybe just use regular streams, I don't think the map will be any harder using them compared of sliders. Infact, I think they'll be easier.
- 02:57:372 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 03:03:894 (3) - 1/6?

Normal:
Same thing like i said about the hitsounds on hard, else its solid.

Really good map man. I think shits rank ready ez.
Topic Starter
Niva

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Yo, from my que 8-) (:

Hard:
Some inconsistencies with your custom hit-normal (clap on soft custom) , though IDK if intentional because you have whistle on them, but I'll point a few of them out. I think they sound better with the hit-normal on em. It's all intentional, but changed on in 00:34:416 though
- 00:34:416 (1) - Clap on beginning
- 00:35:198 (2) - Clap on end
- 00:35:720 (3) - Custom Clap on end
- 00:36:242 (4) - Clap on the end
- 00:37:285 (1) - Clap on the end

I'll stop there for now. was just curious why you didn't continue with the custom clap cause it sounds really good throughout the song. Just not sure if that was intentional or now.

- 02:56:329 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think this pattern fits.. its so.. awkward and i guess not as smooth like the rest of the map. Maybe just use regular streams, I don't think the map will be any harder using them compared of sliders. Infact, I think they'll be easier. Some modders in the past (notably IceBeam) liked this ending >< plus actually I was running out of patterns here. I tried randomly placing it like this and it sounds well (:
- 02:57:372 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
- 03:03:894 (3) - 1/6? Done

Normal:
Same thing like i said about the hitsounds on hard, else its solid.
Tweaked some hitsounds

Really good map man. I think shits rank ready ez.
Thanks!!
Breeze
Hi there

[General]
  1. Combo color looked similar IMO
[Normal]
  1. 00:54:242 (5) - Add clap here seems better
[Hard]
  1. 02:57:372 (1) - Spacing a bit far for me, at leaset when I test play, I will miss here. You could ask some of your friend to test it, if most of them say OK, I think it's fine enough
It's a neat map
osu needs more relax map like this ;)
star
Topic Starter
Niva

Breeze wrote:

Hi there

[General]
  1. Combo color looked similar IMO I only used 2 combo colors now, I hope they don't blend much now


[Normal]
  1. 00:54:242 (5) - Add clap here seems better Done
[Hard]
  1. 02:57:372 (1) - Spacing a bit far for me, at leaset when I test play, I will miss here. You could ask some of your friend to test it, if most of them say OK, I think it's fine enough I've got my friends playtest this in the past (zeroclover etc.), and they can catch it, so I guess it's OK
It's a neat map
osu needs more relax map like this ;)
star
Thanks Breeze ~
Shulin
I saw your request in #modreqs :P

General:

-- In the intro I think the volume is too high (especially custom clap), maybe reduce the volume to 40%?
-- No spinners?
-- Only 5 maps? I hope you map more xD

Normal:

01:06:764 (5) - Add finish to the end?

Hard:

00:39:111 (4) - Remove whistle from the slider?
00:56:329 (4) - Add clap?
02:54:764 (1,2,3) - I think this looks bad (not bothered about the spacing lol) maybe use x1 distance snap on these notes then keep the rest as it is?
02:56:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is a sudden change in spacing, I managed it fine but you might want to consider tweaking it a bit.
02:58:807 (1) - Move to 02:58:677 ? I think it follows the song more.

Great maps, I love instrumentals. Star from me!
Topic Starter
Niva

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- In the intro I think the volume is too high (especially custom clap), maybe reduce the volume to 40%? Done (:
-- No spinners? I want to map this without spinner xD
-- Only 5 maps? I hope you map more xD I'm having trouble in MAT/BAT hunting, I'm not really good at it ):

Normal:

01:06:764 (5) - Add finish to the end? Added

Hard:

00:39:111 (4) - Remove whistle from the slider? Done
00:56:329 (4) - Add clap? Done
02:54:764 (1,2,3) - I think this looks bad (not bothered about the spacing lol) maybe use x1 distance snap on these notes then keep the rest as it is? Done
02:56:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is a sudden change in spacing, I managed it fine but you might want to consider tweaking it a bit. :'D don't wanna change
02:58:807 (1) - Move to 02:58:677 ? I think it follows the song more. It broke the previous rhythm ><

Great maps, I love instrumentals. Star from me!
Thanks Shulin xD
Verdisphena
SONITUS VIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR-
I approve this.
Topic Starter
Niva

Verdisphena wrote:

SONITUS VIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR-
I approve this.
yay ^_^
Aleks719
General
"world/electronica" <= not sure in this tag, since you have "world" and "electronica"

Hard
01:01:546 (7) - looks bad, try to find another direction
01:08:851 (4) - i play in "window" mode. reverse of slider is too close to the border of window. I suggest to replace slider point a bit upper than now
01:36:503 (5) - this slider is very strange, i can't replace it :
I tried to make it because i'm pretty sure it's 1/4 with 1 reverse , not 1/6 with two reverses
01:37:025 (x) - add note
01:45:894 (2) - add reverse?
02:31:807 (3) - add clap to the start

Normal
00:54:764 (6) - remove clap from the reverse, add clap to the start
01:12:503 (1) - overlap with scorebar
01:33:894 (2) - very close to the border of window
02:39:111 (5) - ^
02:43:285 (4) - remove clap from the reverse, add clap to the start
02:44:329 (1) - touch border of window

star~
Topic Starter
Niva
Thanks Aleks, fixed most~

btw World/Electronica is this song's genre, but I add "world" and "electronica" in the tags to let the beatmap searcher find this song with "world" or "electronica" only (:
Breeze
just one thing
[Hard]
  1. 02:57:372 (1) - I feel this jump is too far, since I've never seen such a far jump on other place in this diff., it's playable as a Hard diff., though
change it or not, let me know when you decide

EDIT: mapper decide to keep them, well, bubbled
Mismagius
renard <3
Topic Starter
Niva

Blue Dragon wrote:

renard <3
Yes :3
abalee
Ranked.
Gamu
(*・x・)/。・:*:・゚´★゚・:*:・。☆Congratulations ;*・'゜☆v(*'-^*);*・'゜☆
Mismagius
mfw ranked

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Backfire
Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy :)
banvi
Congratulations~ :)
Topic Starter
Niva
Aaaaaaaaah thanks for the rank abalee :3

And thanks all~
Breeze
Oh, finally it get ranked
Congratulations
Gomo Psivarh
CONGLATURATION!!!
Sallad4ever
Finally, great song & great map got ranked

Nice Job ;)
Dai
oh Finally

congrats
IceBeam
yeah,finally

gratz Nivalis! :)
IkkiMinami
:)
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