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Berryz Koubou - Maji Bomber!! (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
AIR315

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Your map is basically 50% kiai which looks ugly. I suggest you start your kiai at 01:05:121 instead.DONE
Well you have a video, I suggest you disable letter boxing during breaks anyways. (Not like you even have a break)I want to set a break time too. But it's really not place can set a break.....
Easy:
Alright map...but really boring since it's all just 2/1 (sometimes 1/1) mapped.
00:17:752 (2,3) - Ctrl+H so you don't have a bad overlap with 00:16:489 (3,2)
00:41:121 (2,2) - The overlap here looks ugly. Perhaps you could change 00:39:857 (1,2) into different sliders?

Normal:
Hmm since it's a high spacing (imo) perhaps -1 HP so missing notes won't be too harsh?
00:08:278 (3,1) - This blanket here does not look very appealing, perhaps you could try changing this slider 00:09:542 (1) into something else that makes the blanket look better?
00:39:857 (1) - I wouldn't really advise a crunched up slider because they could be confusing for beginners because they don't expect it to be slower.

Hard:
00:23:752 (5,6,7) - Pretty sure you can disable DS and move them slightly so they don't overlap badly.
00:46:331 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - These just don't make sense to me. They don't really follow the music or vocals at all. Please remake these.
01:05:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Honestly this whole part just feels overmapped
01:15:542 (3) - Bad overlap. Perhaps you can move this note somewhere else?
01:23:121 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't feel good. You made the previous patterns a jump and then an anti jump? I recommend you space these correctly instead.

Insane:
01:15:857 (4) - Read this as a jump instead since usually the 4 notes placed like that have same timeline but this one doesn't. Dunno if you wanna do something about that.
Eh to me I think you mapped little too much. You don't really need a note every 1/2s.
thanks~
:)
wangjl1110
第一次做mod,没什么经验,所以写得有点少 :o

[Insane]
01:03:857(1,2,3,4,5) 修改星型的形状
01:27:778(14) 删除一个note

[Hard]
00:02:752 (4,5) 之间增加note?
00:12:857 同上

[Normal]
00:30:068(1,2) 建议重叠?
00:39:857(1,2) 可能会对note打击节奏有影响
Topic Starter
AIR315

wangjl1110 wrote:

第一次做mod,没什么经验,所以写得有点少 :o

[Insane]
01:03:857(1,2,3,4,5) 修改星型的形状DONE
01:27:778(14) 删除一个note

[Hard]
00:02:752 (4,5) 之间增加note?
00:12:857 同上

[Normal]
00:30:068(1,2) 建议重叠?
00:39:857(1,2) 可能会对note打击节奏有影响DONE
感謝你的MOD
:D
wwq1213
给点建议吧 insane难度的 note减小一号 比较好哦
Topic Starter
AIR315

wwq1213 wrote:

给点建议吧 insane难度的 note减小一号 比较好哦考慮中...... :?:
謝建議 :)
spboxer3
首先:必須將video的聲音去掉 不然那是不行的...

[Hard]
new combo需要多設些 有些combo太多了
00:06:700 (7) - nazi 碰到了(6)了 需要分開
00:16:331 (7,8) - 小細節必須注意 像這個兩個並沒有平行阿
00:23:752 (5,6,7) - 這排列不好
01:21:700 (4) - NC
01:26:752 (4) - ^

[Insane]
new combo需要多設些 有些combo太多了
01:12:700 (1,3,4) - 這個有黏到 所以不是很好 希望改掉

就這樣 這張作的好多了 給星的說~
Topic Starter
AIR315

spboxer3 wrote:

首先:必須將video的聲音去掉 不然那是不行的...DONE

[Hard]
new combo需要多設些 有些combo太多了
00:06:700 (7) - nazi 碰到了(6)了 需要分開DONE
00:16:331 (7,8) - 小細節必須注意 像這個兩個並沒有平行阿DONE
00:23:752 (5,6,7) - 這排列不好
01:21:700 (4) - NC
01:26:752 (4) - ^

[Insane]
new combo需要多設些 有些combo太多了
01:12:700 (1,3,4) - 這個有黏到 所以不是很好 希望改掉DONE

就這樣 這張作的好多了 給星的說~謝謝~ :)
感謝你的MOD~
:) :D ;) :) :D ;)
Breeze
Berryz工房 :O

General

  1. 像"Japan"和"ending"这些指向性不高的其实我觉得没必要加tag, 不过你想加的话也不是什么问题
  2. Audio lead-in我也觉得其实没必要, 加1秒也没问题, 加了在视频开始前会有1秒空白就是

Normal

  1. 我觉得对于normal来说这个难度的spacing大了些, 新手可能不会喜欢这种间距较大的

Hard

  1. 01:22:015 (5,7) - 我觉得这个jump间距略大了, 主要这个难度前面都没jump, 这里突然大跳会觉得来突然了
  2. 01:27:068 (5) - 这个间距也略大

Insane

  1. 嘛, 倒是没发现什么问题, 不过180BPM的1/4拍三连打, 在这种难度设定下对我来说好难, 手速不够;~;

nice map
star
Topic Starter
AIR315

Breeze wrote:

Berryz工房 :Oxd

General

  1. 像"Japan"和"ending"这些指向性不高的其实我觉得没必要加tag, 不过你想加的话也不是什么问题恩......
  2. Audio lead-in我也觉得其实没必要, 加1秒也没问题, 加了在视频开始前会有1秒空白就是恩......

Normal

  1. 我觉得对于normal来说这个难度的spacing大了些, 新手可能不会喜欢这种间距较大的><

Hard

  1. 01:22:015 (5,7) - 我觉得这个jump间距略大了, 主要这个难度前面都没jump, 这里突然大跳会觉得来突然了DONE
  2. 01:27:068 (5) - 这个间距也略大DONE

Insane

  1. 嘛, 倒是没发现什么问题, 不过180BPM的1/4拍三连打, 在这种难度设定下对我来说好难, 手速不够;~; :)

nice map
star謝謝~ :)
感謝你的mod
:) :) :) :)
Strawberry
:) Hi Air315~
request in game

[Hitsound]
有点吵

[Insane]
00:52:015 (9) - 不太美观,这里用ds x1.5怎么样?
01:01:173 (6,7) - 这里节奏有点怪?6和7都换成1/2的slider?
副歌部分的平均ds可以大一点 更燃 lol


[Hard]
00:23:752 (5,6,7,1) - 这几个堆在一起有点挤 既然都是slider加大些ds摆?
01:05:121 - 这段combo 1/2排满听起来有点单调


[Normal]&[Easy]
nice!

Really a good map!

Strawberry's Star~
Topic Starter
AIR315

Strawberry wrote:

:) Hi Air315~Hello :)
required in game

[Hitsound]
有点吵><......假日會修改~

[Insane]
00:52:015 (9) - 不太美观,这里用ds x1.5怎么样?DONE
01:01:173 (6,7) - 这里节奏有点怪?6和7都换成1/2的slider?
副歌部分的平均ds可以大一点 更燃 lol
@@

[Hard]
00:23:752 (5,6,7,1) - 这几个堆在一起有点挤 既然都是slider加大些ds摆?
01:05:121 - 这段combo 1/2排满听起来有点单调
假日會想想要怎改><......

[Normal]&[Easy]
nice!

Really a good map!

Strawberry's Star~謝啦~ :)
感謝你的MOD~ :)
PoochyEXE
(Sorry, even though I speak Chinese, I can't type much in Chinese. 對不起、我聴的懂中文、可是我不太會輸入中文字。 I'll try to cobble together whatever Chinese text I can.)

Hi AIR315!我也愛閃電十一人! I love this song, and I was just thinking I'd like to see a beatmap for it. Could I do a guest diff for it?

In general:
I agree with Raging Bull. Kiai Time太長了.
為什麼sampleset全部Custom 1? 你沒有custom的samples. Are you planning to add them later?

Easy:
01:04:489 (1) - I think this circle feels out of place. Delete, maybe?

Normal:
00:39:857 (1) - This slider is awkward. It's too similar to the ones right before it in looks, but lasts twice as long. Change it to a big arc or semicircle?

Hard:
I think you overmapped (太多東西了) the intro (00:01:963 ~ 00:19:489) and near the end (01:05:121 ~ 01:22:647).
00:03:542 (6,8) - These two feel out of place. Delete, maybe?
00:04:805 (1,3) - 同上
00:08:594 (4,6) - 同上
00:13:647 (6,2) - 同上
00:16:015 (5) - 同上
00:18:068 (3,6,8,10) - 同上
01:16:805 (7,9) - 同上
01:18:068 (1,3) - 同上
00:09:857 (2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm feels a little weird. Try one of these:
01:05:121 ~ 01:15:226 - ?!?! @_@ 太多東西了。我完全看不懂。
01:23:121 (1,2,3,4) - 太近了.
Topic Starter
AIR315

PoochyEXE wrote:

(Sorry, even though I speak Chinese, I can't type much in Chinese. 對不起、我聴的懂中文、可是我不太會輸入中文字。 I'll try to cobble together whatever Chinese text I can.)

Hi AIR315!我也愛閃電十一人! I love this song, and I was just thinking I'd like to see a beatmap for it. Could I do a guest diff for it?
Sorry no......><
In general:
I agree with Raging Bull. Kiai Time太長了.
為什麼sampleset全部Custom 1? 你沒有custom的samples. Are you planning to add them later?I will fixed on weekend......

Easy:
01:04:489 (1) - I think this circle feels out of place. Delete, maybe?

Normal:
00:39:857 (1) - This slider is awkward. It's too similar to the ones right before it in looks, but lasts twice as long. Change it to a big arc or semicircle?DONE

Hard:
I think you overmapped (太多東西了) the intro (00:01:963 ~ 00:19:489) and near the end (01:05:121 ~ 01:22:647).
00:03:542 (6,8) - These two feel out of place. Delete, maybe?
00:04:805 (1,3) - 同上
00:08:594 (4,6) - 同上
00:13:647 (6,2) - 同上
00:16:015 (5) - 同上
00:18:068 (3,6,8,10) - 同上
01:16:805 (7,9) - 同上
01:18:068 (1,3) - 同上
00:09:857 (2,3,4,5,6) - Rhythm feels a little weird. Try one of these:
SPOILER
[attachment=0:734ae]osuMajiBomber1.png[/attachment:734ae]
01:05:121 ~ 01:15:226 - ?!?! @_@ 太多東西了。我完全看不懂。I will fixed on weekend......
01:23:121 (1,2,3,4) - 太近了.
Thank you for modding~
:)
KayeSara
Sorry for too late
Baka Modding~
Time for ignorable modding~All of them just a suggestion.

[General]
  1. offset 708
[Easy]
  1. 基本没问题,至少我看来。
[Normal]
  1. 00:30:068 (1,2) - 这个重叠在一起感觉好些,因为前面节奏都是踩在白线上
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:331 (9) - 换成一个slider+note感觉好些,也就是00:04:489到00:04:647slider,00:04:647 - note
  2. 01:23:121 (1,2,3,4) - 突然这样慢总感觉有点不好,要真要这样还是弄成跳吧?
[Insane]
  1. 老实说我没感觉有什么错误,除了停顿。
    比如00:12:068 (1,2,3) - 停顿感觉很不错啊
    但是有些地方,例如00:46:173 (6) - 这个note完全可以不要的
    然后你前面的00:45:542 (4,5) - 可以排列成这样

    节奏感就非常不错勒,当然这只是我的风格
感觉图都越做越好了,当然我的mod也越来越少了

Good Luck~
Topic Starter
AIR315

KayeSara wrote:

Sorry for too late
Baka Modding~
Time for ignorable modding~All of them just a suggestion.

[General]
  1. offset 708DONE
[Easy]
  1. 基本没问题,至少我看来。
[Normal]
  1. 00:30:068 (1,2) - 这个重叠在一起感觉好些,因为前面节奏都是踩在白线上DONE
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:331 (9) - 换成一个slider+note感觉好些,也就是00:04:489到00:04:647slider,00:04:647 - note
  2. 01:23:121 (1,2,3,4) - 突然这样慢总感觉有点不好,要真要这样还是弄成跳吧?@@
[Insane]
  1. 老实说我没感觉有什么错误,除了停顿。
    比如00:12:068 (1,2,3) - 停顿感觉很不错啊^^
    但是有些地方,例如00:46:173 (6) - 这个note完全可以不要的
    然后你前面的00:45:542 (4,5) - 可以排列成这样

    节奏感就非常不错勒,当然这只是我的风格
感觉图都越做越好了,当然我的mod也越来越少了

Good Luck~謝謝 :)
感謝你的mod~
:) :) :D :D
elferingkev
i am a super big fan of inazuma eleven.if you need any info of it just ask me.i can find al the info you need ;)
Topic Starter
AIR315

elferingkev wrote:

i am a super big fan of inazuma eleven.if you need any info of it just ask me.i can find al the info you need :roll:
OK......

Thanks~

:)
Sanzenin Nagi
easy我不是很会MOD= =应该没什么问题的._.

[normal]
00:46:181 (2) - 这里分成两个slider比较好

[Hard]
00:23:760 (5,6,7,1) -分开点比较好
00:46:339 (6) - new combo

[insane]
00:54:944 (13) - 删note

基本都没什么问题的._. good map
cRyo[iceeicee]
[Hard]
SPOILER
00:03:076 NC
00:09:550 remove NC
00:09:865 add NC
00:09:865-00:10:971 this part, try to make it like this http://puu.sh/7jyj , i think it sounds better
00:13:181 NC
00:16:023 NC
00:18:550 NC
00:41:286 NC
00:45:550 - 00:49:813 suggest you to remap this part, this is Hard less brakes more notes, dont make it boring to play
00:21:708 - add http://puu.sh/7jyB mb ?
00:49:971 - remove NC
00:50:602 - NC
00:56:129 - NC
00:57:392 - NC
00:57:708 - remove NC
00:59:129 NC
01:00:076 remove NC
01:00:392 add NC
01:06:392 NC
01:08:918 NC
01:15:865 NC
01:24:865 - add http://puu.sh/7jyB mb ?
part from 01:26:760, mb do it like this http://puu.sh/7jzM
[Insane]
SPOILER
00:02:602 - NC
00:06:076 - NC
00:07:023 - remove NC (start it from next note )
00:12:708 - NC
00:14:602 - remove NC
00:15:234 - NC
01:16:339 NC
00:21:708 - add http://puu.sh/7jyB mb ?
00:38:839 NC ( because of this 00:39:234, dont use NC on "jump note")
00:45:550 NC
00:49:971 remove NC (start it from next note)
00:55:655 NC
00:56:918 NC
00:57:550 remove NC
00:58:181 NC
00:59:444 NC
01:00:076 remove NC
01:00:550 NC
01:08:918 NC
01:10:181 remove NC
01:10:497 NC
01:15:865 NC
01:19:023 NC
01:20:286 remove NC
01:20:760 NC
01:24:865 add http://puu.sh/7jyB mb ?
01:27:865 stack this slider with stream notes normally, bad idea to jump like that
Komeiji Yuki
[General]

建議去AudioLeadIn , 前面已經有兩秒準備時間所以我想不怎麼需要 :idea:

[Easy]

Fine

[Normal]

00:39:865 (1) - 可能會困擾玩家 Easy或Normal 盡量少放這種slider(不然就是把震盪幅度減低)

00:58:813 (2) - 往下 1grid

01:27:550 (2) - 個人覺得這個circle有點多餘:l

[Hard]

00:06:708 (7) - Spacing (往左 3 grid ?)

01:15:865 (4) - NC ? , 因為你在01:15:234 (1,2,3)這邊放了跳

[Insane]

Fine

---------

圖看起來已經不錯了o.o

Good luck :oops:
Topic Starter
AIR315

Sanzenin Nagi wrote:

easy我不是很会MOD= =应该没什么问题的._.

[normal]
00:46:181 (2) - 这里分成两个slider比较好

[Hard]
00:23:760 (5,6,7,1) -分开点比较好我覺得這樣重疊還不錯XD
00:46:339 (6) - new combo

[insane]
00:54:944 (13) - 删note

基本都没什么问题的._. good map謝了~ :)
感謝MOD~
:)

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:03:076 NC
00:09:550 remove NC
00:09:865 add NC
00:09:865-00:10:971 this part, try to make it like this http://puu.sh/7jyj , i think it sounds better
00:13:181 NC
00:16:023 NC
00:18:550 NC
00:41:286 NC
00:45:550 - 00:49:813 suggest you to remap this part, this is Hard less brakes more notes, dont make it boring to play
00:21:708 - add http://puu.sh/7jyB mb ?DONE
00:49:971 - remove NC
00:50:602 - NC
00:56:129 - NC
00:57:392 - NC
00:57:708 - remove NC
00:59:129 NC
01:00:076 remove NC
01:00:392 add NC
01:06:392 NC
01:08:918 NC
01:15:865 NC
01:24:865 - add http://puu.sh/7jyB mb ?DONE
part from 01:26:760, mb do it like this http://puu.sh/7jzMDONE
[Insane]
SPOILER
00:02:602 - NC
00:06:076 - NC
00:07:023 - remove NC (start it from next note )
00:12:708 - NC
00:14:602 - remove NC
00:15:234 - NC
01:16:339 NC
00:21:708 - add http://puu.sh/7jyB mb ?DONE
00:38:839 NC ( because of this 00:39:234, dont use NC on "jump note")
00:45:550 NC
00:49:971 remove NC (start it from next note)
00:55:655 NC
00:56:918 NC
00:57:550 remove NC
00:58:181 NC
00:59:444 NC
01:00:076 remove NC
01:00:550 NC
01:08:918 NC
01:10:181 remove NC
01:10:497 NC
01:15:865 NC
01:19:023 NC
01:20:286 remove NC
01:20:760 NC
01:24:865 add http://puu.sh/7jyB mb ?DONE
01:27:865 stack this slider with stream notes normally, bad idea to jump like that
New Combo的部份會再看看~
感謝你的mod~
:) :D ;) :) :D ;)

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

[General]

建議去AudioLeadIn , 前面已經有兩秒準備時間所以我想不怎麼需要 :idea: 還是1秒比較好XD~

[Easy]

Fine

[Normal]

00:39:865 (1) - 可能會困擾玩家 Easy或Normal 盡量少放這種slider(不然就是把震盪幅度減低)改成半圓了~

00:58:813 (2) - 往下 1gridDONE

01:27:550 (2) - 個人覺得這個circle有點多餘:l

[Hard]

00:06:708 (7) - Spacing (往左 3 grid ?)

01:15:865 (4) - NC ? , 因為你在01:15:234 (1,2,3)這邊放了跳DONE

[Insane]

Fine

---------

圖看起來已經不錯了o.o

Good luck :oops:謝謝~
感謝你的MOD~
:) :D ;) :)
mjw5150
as your req~

[General]
文件夹里的soft-hitclap没什么用就删掉吧(我看你都是用的normal-hitclap

[Hard]
00:56:129 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - 这1段的note全都下在了红线上 打起来感觉很怪 建议换1种方式下节奏

[Insane]
00:43:497 - 在这加个note 然后spin推后1/2?

快去找mat要泡泡吧少年lol
Topic Starter
AIR315

mjw5150 wrote:

as your req~

[General]
文件夹里的soft-hitclap没什么用就删掉吧(我看你都是用的normal-hitclap明天會用到><

[Hard]
00:56:129 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - 这1段的note全都下在了红线上 打起来感觉很怪 建议换1种方式下节奏><

[Insane]
00:43:497 - 在这加个note 然后spin推后1/2?考慮中...... :?:

快去找mat要泡泡吧少年lollol
謝mod~
:) :)
Beren
你好~


[General]
减小总体音量

[Easy]
00:19:655 (1) - 这个转圈有点短,开始于00:19:399(?

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
01:05:129 (1) ~ 01:09:865 (10) - 1/4放满不是很适合

[Insane]
^同hard大片的1/4不是很适合

Good luck~ ;)
DarkRingSystem
:)


[General]
kiai好长 是不是需要分割一下?
音量大了点 需要减小

[Timing]
-5ms is fine to me

Insane
其实190bpm AR9是很爽快的
AR8对我来说 有点苦手 XD
就难度展开 H→I ar7→ar9 也是很合理的
可以考虑一下

其他基本没设么问题

[hard]
01:23:129 (1,2,3,4) - 老实说这几个不是很好判断 放远一点 ?

很爽快的图 没什么好说的 期待你的新音效 star~
Topic Starter
AIR315

Beren wrote:

你好~


[General]
减小总体音量等等會改XD

[Easy]
00:19:655 (1) - 这个转圈有点短,开始于00:19:399(?

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
01:05:129 (1) ~ 01:09:865 (10) - 1/4放满不是很适合會改改......

[Insane]
^同hard大片的1/4不是很适合><

Good luck~ ;)謝謝~
謝MOD~
:) :)

DarkRingSystem wrote:

:)


[General]
kiai好长 是不是需要分割一下?恩......分割了......
音量大了点 需要减小等等會改><

[Timing]
-5ms is fine to me@@感覺708較好......

Insane
其实190bpm AR9是很爽快的
AR8对我来说 有点苦手 XD
就难度展开 H→I ar7→ar9 也是很合理的
可以考虑一下恩恩,改成AR9了~

其他基本没设么问题

[hard]
01:23:129 (1,2,3,4) - 老实说这几个不是很好判断 放远一点 ?考慮中...... :?:

很爽快的图 没什么好说的 期待你的新音效 star~謝謝~ :)
感謝你的mod~
:) :D ;) :) :D ;)
y u c a
hi~

General

if you dont use soft-hitclap.wav, delete and fullsubmit plz

Normal

00:22:181 (1) - add finish


Hard

00:02:286 (3) - add finish (other part same too)
00:07:023 (7) - add finish
00:17:129 (8) - ^
00:24:708 (1) - ^
00:29:760 (1) - e...should follow the same slider as 00:30:234 (2)



Insane

00:12:392 (3) - add finish
00:21:708 (5) - new combo?
00:22:181 (1) - add finish
00:43:023 (2,3) - try this
00:45:234 (3) - add finish
00:55:339 (3) - ^
01:01:181~ try this
01:15:550 (3) - add finish
01:24:865 (6) - new combo
01:25:339 (1) - add finish
01:27:865 (1) - try this

加油~
Topic Starter
AIR315

y u c a wrote:

hi~Hello :)

General

if you dont use soft-hitclap.wav, delete and fullsubmit plzOK

Normal

00:22:181 (1) - add finish


Hard

00:02:286 (3) - add finish (other part same too)
00:07:023 (7) - add finish
00:17:129 (8) - ^
00:24:708 (1) - ^
00:29:760 (1) - e...should follow the same slider as 00:30:234 (2)DONE



Insane

00:12:392 (3) - add finish
00:21:708 (5) - new combo?
00:22:181 (1) - add finish
00:43:023 (2,3) - try this
00:45:234 (3) - add finish
00:55:339 (3) - ^
01:01:181~ try this
01:15:550 (3) - add finish
01:24:865 (6) - new combo
01:25:339 (1) - add finish
01:27:865 (1) - try thisDONE

加油~恩~
感謝MOD~
:) :) :)
Shiki
Hi~ :)

[Easy]
00:42:392 (1,2) - 这两个加finish??
00:54:076 (2) - 我感觉这样会好看些

[Normal]
00:30:865 (3,4) - 这两个加whistle??
00:37:339 (1) - 头部finish??
00:42:392 (1,2) - ^
找不到什么大问题 不过总觉得开头那里听着别扭...

[Hard]
00:18:550 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 或许可以换一种排法? 这样排看着不好看,打着也不容易打
00:42:234 (7) - 尾部finish
00:43:023 (8) - add finish
00:55:023 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个我认为都可以加finish.
01:15:234 (1,2,3,1) - ^

[Insane]
AR9实在苦手 pass不能 ;_;
00:22:971 (3) - 你把clap加到蓝线上了 :s 改到白线上
00:42:234 (9) - 尾部finish
00:43:023 (2) - finish

嗯~ 加油!!
☆~
Topic Starter
AIR315

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ :)Hello :)

[Easy]
00:42:392 (1,2) - 这两个加finish??DONE
00:54:076 (2) - 我感觉这样会好看些DONE

[Normal]
00:30:865 (3,4) - 这两个加whistle??DONE
00:37:339 (1) - 头部finish??
00:42:392 (1,2) - ^DONE
找不到什么大问题 不过总觉得开头那里听着别扭...><??

[Hard]
00:18:550 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 或许可以换一种排法? 这样排看着不好看,打着也不容易打@@
00:42:234 (7) - 尾部finishDONE
00:43:023 (8) - add finishDONE
00:55:023 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个我认为都可以加finish.
01:15:234 (1,2,3,1) - ^

[Insane]
AR9实在苦手 pass不能 ;_;=3=
00:22:971 (3) - 你把clap加到蓝线上了 :s 改到白线上DONE
00:42:234 (9) - 尾部finishDONE
00:43:023 (2) - finishDONE

嗯~ 加油!!謝謝~
☆~><
感謝你的MOD~
:) :D ;) :) :D ;) :)
KDS
yay!
Taiko DS done~ ><

I think it's some bad map.....
Because I was sleepy while making it....lolol

I hope you like it! >w</

Download: Berryz Koubou - Maji Bomber!! (TV Size) (AIR315) [Taiko DS].osu
spboxer3
給BG 不用給kd
Topic Starter
AIR315

KDS wrote:

yay!
Taiko DS done~ ><

I think it's some bad map.....
Because I was sleepy while making it....lolol

I hope you like it! >w</
Thank you very much~
:) :) :) :) :) :)

spboxer3 wrote:

給BG 不用給kd
感謝盒子~
:) :) :) :) :) :)
wcx19911123
from in-game pm
sorry for the delay

[General]
fine

[Easy]
OD-1
nothing found..

[Normal]
00:29:444 (6,1) - 反着放circle不太好
01:25:339 (1) - use this , it is prefect
296,48,85339,6,0,B|428:92|428:312|256:360|84:312|84:92|216:48,1,660,0|0

[Hard]
nothing found

[Insane]
AR-1
00:19:971 (2) - ctrl+r
00:39:234 (1,2,3,4) - this jump is too huge
00:52:023 (9) - repeat
01:01:181 (6,7) - sldier first , circle later , follow the vocal better
01:02:602 - add circle here , spinner start at 01:02:760
01:10:813 (3) - change to 2 sliders , this is hard to know how many time to repeat..

这图虽然rankble但是打起来非常不舒服,毫无flow而且跳点跟歌曲不合0.0
I的三连下得有点无规律。。
然后就是E和N完全就是节拍器而不是map了。。稍微跟下vocal会好很多的0.0
嘛差不多就这样
good luck
bossandy
來mod摟~
Easy:
SPOILER
不錯
Normal:
SPOILER
00:25:023 (2,5,1,4) - clap
00:25:023 (2,5,1,4) - 去掉clap
00:34:497 (4) - 開頭clap?
Hard:
SPOILER
00:46:339 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - 太單調了吧 改一下節奏吧(OTZ
01:09:865 (10) - 間距
Insane:
SPOILER
沒啥大問題
整體來說都不錯 就是覺得打起來有點無趣
不要只跟音樂 跟點歌唱也不錯 像Hard的00:55:023~00:58:339
這段在Insane可以用單點加間距從小到大的jump 打起來會很有感覺的~
做的不錯^^ 加油!
Clare
來的有點慢>"<

[General]
大丈夫

[Easy]
這難度基本上都是跟著長白線下節奏雖說是easy但感覺有點單調了
00:23:760 (X) - 加個note?
00:45:550 (1) - 這邊開始後 都有normal whistle..我感覺有點吵?或許換成clap?
00:49:023 (X) - 加個note?
重複的節奏多了點 有點變化會更好

[Normal]
00:46:181 (2) - 不拆掉擺點note嗎?
01:07:971 (X) - 加note?

[Hard]
00:18:550 (1) - new combo
00:42:708 (X) - 加個三連打如何?
00:46:339 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - ...多加點別的節奏進去吧

[Insane]
00:42:708 (1,2,3) - 試著做jamp?
00:55:181 (2,3) - 往右移一格
其他沒什麼 這難度打起來還是不錯的
Topic Starter
AIR315

wcx19911123 wrote:

from in-game pm
sorry for the delayIt's OK~

[General]
fine

[Easy]
OD-1DONE
nothing found..

[Normal]
00:29:444 (6,1) - 反着放circle不太好
01:25:339 (1) - use this , it is prefect
296,48,85339,6,0,B|428:92|428:312|256:360|84:312|84:92|216:48,1,660,0|0

[Hard]
nothing found

[Insane]
AR-1DONE
00:19:971 (2) - ctrl+rDONE
00:39:234 (1,2,3,4) - this jump is too huge><
00:52:023 (9) - repeat
01:01:181 (6,7) - sldier first , circle later , follow the vocal better
01:02:602 - add circle here , spinner start at 01:02:760
01:10:813 (3) - change to 2 sliders , this is hard to know how many time to repeat..DONE

这图虽然rankble但是打起来非常不舒服,毫无flow而且跳点跟歌曲不合0.0
I的三连下得有点无规律。。
然后就是E和N完全就是节拍器而不是map了。。稍微跟下vocal会好很多的0.0
嘛差不多就这样
good luckThanks~
Thank you for mod~
:) :) :)

bossandy wrote:

來mod摟~
Easy:
SPOILER
不錯
Normal:
SPOILER
00:25:023 (2,5,1,4) - clap
00:25:023 (2,5,1,4) - 去掉clap
00:34:497 (4) - 開頭clap?
Hard:
SPOILER
00:46:339 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - 太單調了吧 改一下節奏吧(OTZ><
01:09:865 (10) - 間距
Insane:
SPOILER
沒啥大問題
整體來說都不錯 就是覺得打起來有點無趣
不要只跟音樂 跟點歌唱也不錯 像Hard的00:55:023~00:58:339
這段在Insane可以用單點加間距從小到大的jump 打起來會很有感覺的~
做的不錯^^ 加油! :)
謝mod~
:)

Clare wrote:

來的有點慢>"<沒關西><

[General]
大丈夫

[Easy]
這難度基本上都是跟著長白線下節奏雖說是easy但感覺有點單調了><
00:23:760 (X) - 加個note?
00:45:550 (1) - 這邊開始後 都有normal whistle..我感覺有點吵?或許換成clap?><
00:49:023 (X) - 加個note?
重複的節奏多了點 有點變化會更好><

[Normal]
00:46:181 (2) - 不拆掉擺點note嗎?
01:07:971 (X) - 加note?

[Hard]
00:18:550 (1) - new comboDONE
00:42:708 (X) - 加個三連打如何?
00:46:339 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - ...多加點別的節奏進去吧><

[Insane]
00:42:708 (1,2,3) - 試著做jamp?><
00:55:181 (2,3) - 往右移一格DONE
其他沒什麼 這難度打起來還是不錯的 :)
謝MOD~
:) :D ;)
Dino99
Nice map~

Star!!~~~~ :D

I love inazuma~

加油@@" :)
Topic Starter
AIR315

12BARRY21 wrote:

Nice map~

Star!!~~~~ :D

I love inazuma~

加油@@" :)
謝謝~ :)
:)
SapphireGhost
Hello, hello.

[General]
- Slider Tick Rate 2 works here. Right now the sliders feel pretty empty and more ticks would help resolve that. Also, the HP bar recovery that the ticks provide would also be good, so yeah. I'd advise setting it on all difficulties.

[Insane]
- This difficulty is good. There weren't any major flaws or anything like that to point out. There are several places where you could try to avoid overlap to make the map look a little neater, so I'll have a list of those overlaps, but other than that, good job.
Overlaps
00:03:234 (3,4,5,6,7) -
00:26:602 (7,8,1) -
00:40:655 (3,4,5,6,7) -
00:47:444 (1,2,3,4) - (Have these end at the same spot, or space them out more to avoid overlap?)
00:49:655 (8) - This touches the HP bar slightly. Not a big problem, but it shouldn't be too hard to rearrange the pattern slightly to fix it.
00:57:550 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:06:708 (6,7) -
01:09:550 (13,14,1) -
01:13:971 (5,6,7) -
01:19:497 (8,9) -
01:25:339 (1,2,3,4) -
As I looked at the other difficulties, I realized that there were overlaps in each one. So basically, I'd be very happy if you took the time to go through and make them not overlap (when possible), but if not, it's alright.

[Hard]
- For a [Hard] difficulty, I'd suggest removing the 1/4 bits to prevent it from being too tough for the [Hard] level.
01:21:708 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is rather high compared to the rest of the difficulty. Try to make it a bit more regular.
01:23:129 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is rather unintuitive, it'd probably be better to have a more sightreadable pattern.

[Normal]
00:29:444 (6,1) - Patterns like this worry me because someone could think you're supposed to think (1) 1/2 beat after (6) as opposed to 1/1 beat after (6), if someone thought that (6) was a kickslider and repeated twice. So basically, something like this might be more clear in telling the player when they're expected to hit the next object.
00:39:234 (4,1) - (4) awkwardly covers a lot of (1) in a really strange way. It would be good if they didn't touch this much.

[Easy]
00:41:129 (2,1,2) - (2) ends up getting hidden under (2) quite a bit, so it would be nice to move them to make a more sightreadable pattern.
00:45:550 (1) - Hm. It's good to make sure new players have enough recovery time after a spinner in [Easy] difficulties, and one could say that 2 beats is enough. I think it would be easy enough to make it 4 beats, however, and this would help make it a bit easier for new players. Something like this, for example.
01:04:497 (1) - Same thing about spinner recovery also applies to here. You could consider just removing the (1).

Currently, the map doesn't seem to have any taiko modding. Try to get at least one taiko mod from someone who knows what they're doing. I'll ask OzzyOzrock once he gets back from whatever he's doing. After the taiko has been modded and you've applied fixes, PM me and I'll re-check it when possible. Which is hopefully sometime soon. Hopefully.
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