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Hi, star
THIS IS FABULOUS AND I KNOW IT
I haven't a shit to give, so have this.
Download: Various Artists - Ode to Jarby (SapphireGhost) [iNiSHINTA'S CAPITAL LETTERS AND SEXUAL APPEAL].osu
Download: Various Artists - Ode to Jarby (SapphireGhost) [iNiSHINTA'S CAPITAL LETTERS AND SEXUAL APPEAL].osu
I didn't covered my eyes. x_x
SOMETHING INSIDE OF ME DIES
Download: Various Artists - Ode to Jarby (SapphireGhost) [Ozzy's TaikOde].osu
What a lovely slider at the end 
Becausethestupidthingwon'tletmepostunlessIaddlotsofmorewordsinandIactuallywanttostarthismap,ihavetodothis
Becausethestupidthingwon'tletmepostunlessIaddlotsofmorewordsinandIactuallywanttostarthismap,ihavetodothis
Should storyboard this SG...
http://puu.sh/3UqG
But I doubt you can make it smaller than 4 MB, so whatever.
http://puu.sh/3UqG
But I doubt you can make it smaller than 4 MB, so whatever.
i just like sappy's maps : D
go go star get it ranked soon xD
go go star get it ranked soon xD
Love Jarby~
抱~
抱~
SPOILER
Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.
[Easy]
00:14:163 (2) - Whistle on this slider?
Wait, it doesn't follow a pattern... does it.
Ok ok, this is moe!.
[Normal]
00:43:951 (3) - why not stack!? Just kidding. But if you stacked it, it'd look the same, so...
00:53:036 (1) - Whistle on head! Wait.. it dowsn.t.t.t.
[Hard]
00:14:163 (1) - Why is not stack (3)?!?
Map moe!!! is !!I@!..1.15
[RJ]
00:35:712 (5) - Being that the approach circle for this blends with the slider blanket, it could be hard to tell whether or not it comes a 1/2 after or a 1/4 after which it more looks like.
but RJ diff moe! RJ moe! >///<
[Ozzy's Taikode]
oh... this diff!!! most moe!!!! this diff.. very moe!!!!!
0 0 i am very fan this diff! ><
[Delicious]
HOYL SCRAP
very kirby mix!!!
01:44:435 (1) - make delicious? slider ugly (LOLOLOLOLOLOLO)
00:14:163 (2) - Whistle on this slider?
Wait, it doesn't follow a pattern... does it.
Ok ok, this is moe!.
[Normal]
00:43:951 (3) - why not stack!? Just kidding. But if you stacked it, it'd look the same, so...
00:53:036 (1) - Whistle on head! Wait.. it dowsn.t.t.t.
[Hard]
00:14:163 (1) - Why is not stack (3)?!?
Map moe!!! is !!I@!..1.15
[RJ]
00:35:712 (5) - Being that the approach circle for this blends with the slider blanket, it could be hard to tell whether or not it comes a 1/2 after or a 1/4 after which it more looks like.
but RJ diff moe! RJ moe! >///<
[Ozzy's Taikode]
oh... this diff!!! most moe!!!! this diff.. very moe!!!!!
0 0 i am very fan this diff! ><
[Delicious]
HOYL SCRAP
very kirby mix!!!
01:44:435 (1) - make delicious? slider ugly (LOLOLOLOLOLOLO)
Overall:
- Your new combos are once again pretty inconsistent, sir.
- The difficulty spread is redundant, even though it's nice to see ENHI(Taikoshit), having a score spread of 300k, 400k, 800k, 5M is stupid. Create an Insane between Delicious and Hard, if you like.
Shiirn's Delicious:
The AR could be lowered by one. I know that this map must be insanely hard to fulfill Jarby's standards of hardness, but still.
01:05:184 - Add note.
TaikOde:
01:48:028 - Storyboard sample Ellie here.
Hard:
Could overall have a few more notes, it's more like a Normal Pwus.
Normal:
8=D
Easy:
01:42:746 (2) - CLOSER TO THE PREVIOUS NOTE
- Your new combos are once again pretty inconsistent, sir.
- The difficulty spread is redundant, even though it's nice to see ENHI(Taikoshit), having a score spread of 300k, 400k, 800k, 5M is stupid. Create an Insane between Delicious and Hard, if you like.
Shiirn's Delicious:
The AR could be lowered by one. I know that this map must be insanely hard to fulfill Jarby's standards of hardness, but still.
01:05:184 - Add note.
TaikOde:
01:48:028 - Storyboard sample Ellie here.
Hard:
Could overall have a few more notes, it's more like a Normal Pwus.
Normal:
8=D
Easy:
01:42:746 (2) - CLOSER TO THE PREVIOUS NOTE
General Earl:
- I suppose the metronome doesn't really fit the intro, so 5712 may be more appropriate in this case.
- OH (point being, SB slightly off)
- Yo, inconsistent break draggage with the first break. I mean, each difficulty has a 1/1 lead in to the break, but that results in different times. I think it'd be nice and natural if they were the same, like 00:36:134.
Christmas Tree:
- Too easy, please make harder diff
- This difficulty does seem a bit clusterfuckish at times, as is easily the problem with superhard things. You seem afraid of coming close to the sides and corners.
00:22:191 (1,2) - Moving this so this is in the centre of the previous circle would be much nicer and less baciktracky, kthx.
00:26:205 (2,3,4) - Yo offcentre if you care
01:18:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - You can totally make this a full circle with just a calculamator. SEE teehee 133711
Insane:
00:15:853 (1) - Sliders with repeats on a 1/4 which doesn't apparently follow anything what are you CDFA
Hard:
00:18:388 - Such a long pause mid-combo on a Hard for a song like this feels a bit forced and odd, so perhaps adding a hitcircle here is an option?
00:58:529 - Once again, I think a hitcircle could work here. Yes, you have to rearrange this pattern, but that's why you were hired, hired.
Normal:
00:49:656 (1,2) - Yes well done we know you can imitate WTF? where's my heart sliders
Easy:
- Cee Lo Green
Not as good as Aha?. I'M SORRY MS. JACKSON. Maybe I'll improve this mod but the map's just too cool for school and totally radical
- I suppose the metronome doesn't really fit the intro, so 5712 may be more appropriate in this case.
- OH (point being, SB slightly off)
- Yo, inconsistent break draggage with the first break. I mean, each difficulty has a 1/1 lead in to the break, but that results in different times. I think it'd be nice and natural if they were the same, like 00:36:134.
Christmas Tree:
- Too easy, please make harder diff
- This difficulty does seem a bit clusterfuckish at times, as is easily the problem with superhard things. You seem afraid of coming close to the sides and corners.
00:22:191 (1,2) - Moving this so this is in the centre of the previous circle would be much nicer and less baciktracky, kthx.
00:26:205 (2,3,4) - Yo offcentre if you care
01:18:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - You can totally make this a full circle with just a calculamator. SEE teehee 133711
Insane:
00:15:853 (1) - Sliders with repeats on a 1/4 which doesn't apparently follow anything what are you CDFA
Hard:
00:18:388 - Such a long pause mid-combo on a Hard for a song like this feels a bit forced and odd, so perhaps adding a hitcircle here is an option?
00:58:529 - Once again, I think a hitcircle could work here. Yes, you have to rearrange this pattern, but that's why you were hired, hired.
Normal:
00:49:656 (1,2) - Yes well done we know you can imitate WTF? where's my heart sliders
Easy:
- Cee Lo Green
Not as good as Aha?. I'M SORRY MS. JACKSON. Maybe I'll improve this mod but the map's just too cool for school and totally radical
General
Remove 'La roux' from the tags of Ozzy's TaikOde.
Stop making perfect stuff.
Easy
The tick rate makes the player make a high combo on a easy difficulty, I suggest you to reduce it to 1.
Normal
00:44:163 (4) - Stack this note with (3)?
Hard
Perfect ~
Insane
00:31:487 (10) - New Combo? Look It's a new pattern and this como is going to (18)
Delicious
NO U
Remove 'La roux' from the tags of Ozzy's TaikOde.
Stop making perfect stuff.
Easy
The tick rate makes the player make a high combo on a easy difficulty, I suggest you to reduce it to 1.
Normal
00:44:163 (4) - Stack this note with (3)?
Hard
Perfect ~
Insane
00:31:487 (10) - New Combo? Look It's a new pattern and this como is going to (18)
Delicious
NO U
/me floods place with Nutella
Folderrr:
clean here
Please note im running on 5 hours of sleep and not my usual 11 hour sleep of summer vacation.
General:
Shouldn't UTAU be in the artist as well?
Easy:
Nothing wrong here.
Normal:
Also very nice. nothing wrong here.
Hard:
Again nothing wrong here.
Insane:
There is one little overlap near the end of the nyancat part of the song I didnt like but it seemed you cant reallly do anything else.
Delicious Derps:
I could barely read that with the AR o.o
oh and nothing wrong here.
Oh well.
Your map like really has nothing wrong.
Good luck.
Folderrr:
clean here
Please note im running on 5 hours of sleep and not my usual 11 hour sleep of summer vacation.
General:
Shouldn't UTAU be in the artist as well?
Easy:
Nothing wrong here.
Normal:
Also very nice. nothing wrong here.
Hard:
Again nothing wrong here.
Insane:
There is one little overlap near the end of the nyancat part of the song I didnt like but it seemed you cant reallly do anything else.
Delicious Derps:
I could barely read that with the AR o.o
oh and nothing wrong here.
Oh well.
Your map like really has nothing wrong.
Good luck.
GOOD LUCK RANK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jarby's Picture LOL
Your message is too short[General]
- Video: [Delicious] uses a different offset.
- Storyboard: I think you're missing the "HAPPY BIRTHDAY JARBY!" part.
- 01:44:314 - The ticks sound kinda nice during this part, I suggest to raise volume a bit more.
Oh, just to be sure. Perhaps, add the song title to the thread's title?Nevermind it would be too long.
- Amazing, just a minor suggesiton:
- 01:13:318 (1) - Perhaps, make this a bit rounder?SPOILER
416,152,73318,6,0,B|316:20|108:136|104:248|136:348|256:383|376:348|408:248|404:136|196:20|96:152,1,895.999933242799,4|2
- 00:43:951 (3,4) - Is this stack intentional? Well, it looks almost the same if you stack it properly, feel free to ignore this.
- 00:52:191 (3,4,5) - This part doesn't play well, (4) feels a bit forced and it's a bit hard to hit it accurately. I suggest to remove (4) and then add a repeat to (3), that sounds and plays better imo.
- 01:16:275 (3) - I don't like how you mixed 2 different "rhythms?" in one single slider, it sounds/plays a bit weird. Perhaps, use 2 circles instead?
- 01:28:529 (1) - This spinner-end is not snapped correctly. You would need a another timing section to snap it, I suggest to remove this spinner and leave the blank. (I know it's a very unusual thing for Taiko but this is an usual song so~)
- Kiai please?
- Oh my god, I don't even have suggestions for this diff. Congratulations, it's been while since something like this happens, fantastic!
- I can't believe that I'm going to say this but... I must suggest to increase "AR" 1 tick, the current AR is affecting the readability of some patterns, consider that please.
- 3 unsnapped BUNNIES.
- 00:10:360 (6) - Any special reason to stack this with (5)? It would make more sense if you stack it with (7) imo.
- 00:35:501 (1,2) - I don't like how this pattern flows, I'm not sure if it actually "flows" tho. Well, You should either flip (2) or stack this circle: 00:36:135 (1) - with (2).
- 01:44:419 (1) - Fantastic! Just wondering, would you like to improve the lower loops and define the heart-shape a bit more?SPOILER
72,232,104419,6,0,B|204:208|264:296|200:380|96:368|68:276|160:184|256:184|256:184|280:152|260:144|364:144|380:48|312:4|268:36|256:48|256:48|244:36|200:4|132:48|148:144|252:144|232:152|256:184|256:184|352:184|444:276|416:368|312:380|248:296|308:208|440:232,1,1359.99995946884,2|4
Topic Starter
mod response
Responding in blue, because that's what I felt like using.
Gonzvlo wrote:
[General]okay ~
- Video: [Delicious] uses a different offset. Oh my god, how did that happen? Oh well. Fixed!
- Storyboard: I think you're missing the "HAPPY BIRTHDAY JARBY!" part.
- 01:44:314 - The ticks sound kinda nice during this part, I suggest to raise volume a bit more.
Oh, just to be sure. Perhaps, add the song title to the thread's title?Nevermind it would be too long.
[Easy]][Normal]
- Amazing, just a minor suggesiton:
- 01:13:318 (1) - Perhaps, make this a bit rounder? Yes, that looks lovely.
SPOILER416,152,73318,6,0,B|316:20|108:136|104:248|136:348|256:383|376:348|408:248|404:136|196:20|96:152,1,895.999933242799,4|2It is intentional so my blanket works and stuff.
- 00:43:951 (3,4) - Is this stack intentional? Well, it looks almost the same if you stack it properly, feel free to ignore this.
[Hard]Good idea!
- 00:52:191 (3,4,5) - This part doesn't play well, (4) feels a bit forced and it's a bit hard to hit it accurately. I suggest to remove (4) and then add a repeat to (3), that sounds and plays better imo. Indeed it does. Plus now there's some lovely clapping action.
- 01:16:275 (3) - I don't like how you mixed 2 different "rhythms?" in one single slider, it sounds/plays a bit weird. Perhaps, use 2 circles instead?
[Ozzy's TaikOde]Will ask Ozzy about these.
- 01:28:529 (1) - This spinner-end is not snapped correctly. You would need a another timing section to snap it, I suggest to remove this spinner and leave the blank. (I know it's a very unusual thing for Taiko but this is an usual song so~)
- Kiai please?
[Insane]I love you too!
- Oh my god, I don't even have suggestions for this diff. Congratulations, it's been while since something like this happens, fantastic!
[Delicious]
- I can't believe that I'm going to say this but... I must suggest to increase "AR" 1 tick, the current AR is affecting the readability of some patterns, consider that please. Making it horribly unreadable was actually the intent but yes, that's silly, it's up to eight now.
- 3 unsnapped BUNNIES. Oh looord, I have been sold.
- 00:10:360 (6) - Any special reason to stack this with (5)? It would make more sense if you stack it with (7) imo. Right you are.
- 00:35:501 (1,2) - I don't like how this pattern flows, I'm not sure if it actually "flows" tho. Well, You should either flip (2) or stack this circle: 00:36:135 (1) - with (2). I'm actually alright with the way it is now. Talk to me on IRC if this is important.
- 01:44:419 (1) - Fantastic! Just wondering, would you like to improve the lower loops and define the heart-shape a bit more? Less than three.
SPOILER72,232,104419,6,0,B|204:208|264:296|200:380|96:368|68:276|160:184|256:184|256:184|280:152|260:144|364:144|380:48|312:4|268:36|256:48|256:48|244:36|200:4|132:48|148:144|252:144|232:152|256:184|256:184|352:184|444:276|416:368|312:380|248:296|308:208|440:232,1,1359.99995946884,2|4
Thank you!
Just saying that 13th is sooooooooooooooooooooooon.
It's tommoooooooooooooorow and your message is too short. sdsakdlsdm
It's tommoooooooooooooorow and your message is too short. sdsakdlsdm
holy shit.
HOLY SHIT.
THIS MAP
IS AMAZING
I AM NOW YOUR FAN
Easy: AR +1 or +2
personally i think Insane was your worst diff; it didn't look as appealing and didn't play as well as the others.
Delicious being your best. That diff. is really impressive, seriously.
um yeah i think that's it
and bubble
HOLY SHIT.
THIS MAP
IS AMAZING
I AM NOW YOUR FAN
Easy: AR +1 or +2
personally i think Insane was your worst diff; it didn't look as appealing and didn't play as well as the others.
Delicious being your best. That diff. is really impressive, seriously.
um yeah i think that's it
and bubble
Topic Starter
Thank you very much, sir!
WHOA WHOA WHAO WHOA HW AOWHA HOWA HOW AHW AOHW AHW AAWWHOWAHOOH!
RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRANK IT.
Toooo short
Toooo short
USE MY VIDEO. IT'S BETTER. AND SMALLER. If the Level4.0 is turning you off then just convert it to h.263.ziin wrote:
Should storyboard this SG...
http://puu.sh/3UqG
But I doubt you can make it smaller than 4 MB, so whatever.
plus current one is
Topic Starter
I'M SO SORRY, ZIIN
By the way, self-popped to fix the video issue.
By the way, self-popped to fix the video issue.
oh wow, i didn't even notice that the soft-finish.wav was the "oh!" at the end of the song o.o
anyway rebubbled~
anyway rebubbled~
SAPPHYHURRYUPANDRANKTHISPLEASEOHMYGODIAMNOWDROWNINGINMYCAPSOHGODTHEMESSAGEISSHORT
Sooooooooooooooo
Topic Starter
And that's how I became the sea.
rank dis
nao
nao
Upped AR on Delicious, and fixed an ambiguous slider then...
Ranked!
Ranked!
congratumotherpootinglations
Here we go again.
I'll say 13 posts until locked, what about you guys?
I'll say 13 posts until locked, what about you guys?
huh? why'd you think that?
What? Naw this is well executed I doubt many people will complain. The actual gameplay itself is good yasee
This
is
amazing
have I told you sapphy
is
amazing
have I told you sapphy
Topic Starter
Exactly!Hernan wrote:
why
let me say something about this song . . . and also for the " staff " we have here .
I love this map, SG best mapper ever <3
SPOILER
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I love this map, SG best mapper ever <3
Topic Starter
Google Translate disappoints me.Google Translate wrote:
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Finally! 
Congrats!
http://www.lipsum.com/SapphireGhost wrote:
Google Translate disappoints me.Google Translate wrote:
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\:D/
All troll maps should have good gameplay.
This has good gameplay.
This has good gameplay.
rank dis
nao
Ranked!i'm so fucking pro