[General]
Source should be " Nyan Koi! " remove the OP at the Hard Diff.Add " Neko , Cats " at the tags ? :3The BG sure is in weird size , search for 1024x768 or 800x600 I think you should rename the Nyan diff name because Nyan is an osu user/player. so you need to change it x)Why the Video quality is bad Let me help you. Here, delete the old video and replace with this one (Click Here To Download)
[Hard]
00:09:686 (4) - this slider should end at 00:10:248 and put a circle at 00:10:436 , following the vocal it will sounds better !00:18:685 (1) - spacing? if you're using distance snap , you got wrong spacing then :p00:24:123 (3) - spacing same as 00:18:68500:28:810 (4) - map this part Dx its kinda waste , you can map it followin the vocal 00:38:935 (1) - remove new combo , its unnecessary :<00:42:498 (1,2,3) - you got this part wrong map it like this http://puu.sh/6mwA sounds better I try before post here >:300:50:935 (4,5,6) - don't you think its kinda sudden jump? i think it would be better if you stay with distance snap at this one :300:54:498 (x) - add a circle or add 1 repeat at this 00:54:310 (7) slider , following vocal X3 so its better if you put this 00:56:560 (2) - unnecessary slider , the slider should start from 00:56:748 since the vocal start from here again 00:58:248 (1,1,1) - remove new combo x) don't play with new combo if you didn't really need it 01:13:998 (1) - the spinner tail , 1 grid to the right , to make it linear with the next slider :p01:15:498 (1) - remove new combo , its unnecessary XD01:20:373 (1,1,1) - remove new combo , its unnecessary too 01:21:498 (1) - map this part :< its kinda waste if you didn't map it :<
[Nyan!]
00:03:498 (9) - you're missing one beat here x) I'm following the vocal ~! 00:07:811 (3) - spacing :O why so near when you can go far ? 00:10:061 (2) - move this to 00:10:248 , I'm following the " ne ruuuuu " vocal00:10:436 (x) - this spinner should start at 00:10:623 and end at 00:14:936. Add a circle at 00:10:436, I'm following the "ne ruuu " vocal00:18:123 (4,5,6,7,8) - is this 1/4 stream really necessary ? I think no x)00:19:248 (9) - make this a repeat slider like this http://puu.sh/6mza I'm following the beat , its kinda flow correctly like this 00:22:436 (7) - you can do something then putting a long slider here ! you can put some circles X(00:24:123 (1,3,1) - suddenly not jump? please make the jump consistent if you want to stay 00:25:998 (4,1) - same like 00:24:12300:28:436 (1) - remove new combo 00:30:311 (5) - sudden big jump ? its weird D: fix it 00:32:373 (8) - ugly slider :< make it looks smoother , flow with the song~00:52:436 (6) - sounds odd here .just make 00:52:061 slider end at 00:52:435 . and then 00:52:623 put a circle and 00:52:810 put a circle with finish. it would sound better 00:55:436 (6) - same like 00:52:43600:56:748 (3) - make it a 1/2 repeated slider you didn't follow the beat of the song if you make a long slider00:57:498 (x) - add a circle to fill the vocal 01:00:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - this stream is not necessary Dx just map follow " shi re ra iii " you can map it simple and neater at this part 01:08:186 (1,1,1,1,1) - don't spam new combo :< its not good 01:19:436 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - delete it and start a spinner from here until 01:21:310 , that means you need to delete this small spinner too 01:20:561 since the singer singing in a long note , so spinner is really really suit this part not spam triplets Dx01:21:686 (1,2,3,4) - what is this ? fix the spacing =='' you're not using the distance snap ? XD01:25:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - delete this streams. its really really not following the rhythm :<01:25:248 (x) - after you delete the streams, add a circle here. to follow the vocal01:25:529 (x) - same like 01:25:24801:25:623 (x) - same like 01:25:24801:26:561 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - delete all of this and start a spinner from 01:25:810 until 01:27:685 . long notes again XD01:27:873 - 01:28:998 (x) - map like this http://puu.sh/6mC0 the last 2 circles put with finish to follow the beat of the song
Source should be " Nyan Koi! " remove the OP at the Hard Diff.Add " Neko , Cats " at the tags ? :3The BG sure is in weird size , search for 1024x768 or 800x600 I think you should rename the Nyan diff name because Nyan is an osu user/player. so you need to change it x)Why the Video quality is bad Let me help you. Here, delete the old video and replace with this one (Click Here To Download)
[Hard]
00:09:686 (4) - this slider should end at 00:10:248 and put a circle at 00:10:436 , following the vocal it will sounds better !00:18:685 (1) - spacing? if you're using distance snap , you got wrong spacing then :p00:24:123 (3) - spacing same as 00:18:68500:28:810 (4) - map this part Dx its kinda waste , you can map it followin the vocal 00:38:935 (1) - remove new combo , its unnecessary :<00:42:498 (1,2,3) - you got this part wrong map it like this http://puu.sh/6mwA sounds better I try before post here >:300:50:935 (4,5,6) - don't you think its kinda sudden jump? i think it would be better if you stay with distance snap at this one :300:54:498 (x) - add a circle or add 1 repeat at this 00:54:310 (7) slider , following vocal X3 so its better if you put this 00:56:560 (2) - unnecessary slider , the slider should start from 00:56:748 since the vocal start from here again 00:58:248 (1,1,1) - remove new combo x) don't play with new combo if you didn't really need it 01:13:998 (1) - the spinner tail , 1 grid to the right , to make it linear with the next slider :p01:15:498 (1) - remove new combo , its unnecessary XD01:20:373 (1,1,1) - remove new combo , its unnecessary too 01:21:498 (1) - map this part :< its kinda waste if you didn't map it :<
[Nyan!]
00:03:498 (9) - you're missing one beat here x) I'm following the vocal ~! 00:07:811 (3) - spacing :O why so near when you can go far ? 00:10:061 (2) - move this to 00:10:248 , I'm following the " ne ruuuuu " vocal00:10:436 (x) - this spinner should start at 00:10:623 and end at 00:14:936. Add a circle at 00:10:436, I'm following the "ne ruuu " vocal00:18:123 (4,5,6,7,8) - is this 1/4 stream really necessary ? I think no x)00:19:248 (9) - make this a repeat slider like this http://puu.sh/6mza I'm following the beat , its kinda flow correctly like this 00:22:436 (7) - you can do something then putting a long slider here ! you can put some circles X(00:24:123 (1,3,1) - suddenly not jump? please make the jump consistent if you want to stay 00:25:998 (4,1) - same like 00:24:12300:28:436 (1) - remove new combo 00:30:311 (5) - sudden big jump ? its weird D: fix it 00:32:373 (8) - ugly slider :< make it looks smoother , flow with the song~00:52:436 (6) - sounds odd here .just make 00:52:061 slider end at 00:52:435 . and then 00:52:623 put a circle and 00:52:810 put a circle with finish. it would sound better 00:55:436 (6) - same like 00:52:43600:56:748 (3) - make it a 1/2 repeated slider you didn't follow the beat of the song if you make a long slider00:57:498 (x) - add a circle to fill the vocal 01:00:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - this stream is not necessary Dx just map follow " shi re ra iii " you can map it simple and neater at this part 01:08:186 (1,1,1,1,1) - don't spam new combo :< its not good 01:19:436 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - delete it and start a spinner from here until 01:21:310 , that means you need to delete this small spinner too 01:20:561 since the singer singing in a long note , so spinner is really really suit this part not spam triplets Dx01:21:686 (1,2,3,4) - what is this ? fix the spacing =='' you're not using the distance snap ? XD01:25:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - delete this streams. its really really not following the rhythm :<01:25:248 (x) - after you delete the streams, add a circle here. to follow the vocal01:25:529 (x) - same like 01:25:24801:25:623 (x) - same like 01:25:24801:26:561 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - delete all of this and start a spinner from 01:25:810 until 01:27:685 . long notes again XD01:27:873 - 01:28:998 (x) - map like this http://puu.sh/6mC0 the last 2 circles put with finish to follow the beat of the song
Don't make sudden stream XD Its not making the beatmap more fun , it just makes people irritate because doesn't follow the song/beatYou can do better