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Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA?

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Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年11月30日 at 15:56:45

Artist: Kanemoto Hisako
Title: I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA?
Source: Sihnryaku! Ikamusume
Tags: Gamu kanpakyin Character Ika musume Sihnryaku squid girl
BPM: 140
Filesize: 17987kb
Play Time: 04:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ika Musume (5 stars, 827 notes)
  2. Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1185 notes)
Download: Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA?
Download: Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA? (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 7th Ranked beat map.(Approved)

Thanks my partner -Gamu-.

Sihnryaku! Ikamusume Character song.

Special thanks skin for JoJo
.

Taiko Oni by kanpakyin.


Collab time
-Gamu- :
  • 00:01:344 - 00:14:629 00:28:772 - 00:42:486
    00:54:486 - 01:12:915 01:33:701 - 01:47:415
    02:01:344 - 02:14:844 02:32:201 - 02:47:201
    03:11:415 - 03:30:058 03:50:844 - 04:06:058
Me :
  • 00:15:058 - 00:28:344 00:42:701 - 00:54:272
    01:13:129 - 01:28:772 01:47:629 - 02:00:915
    02:15:058 - 02:31:772 02:53:629 - 03:11:201
    03:30:486 - 03:45:915
kanpakyin
Timing:

1. Offset: 1,344ms BPM: 140.00

Your message is too short.
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika

kanpakyin wrote:

Timing:

1. Offset: 1,344ms BPM: 140.00

Your message is too short.
thanks KPY~ :)
Gamu
ヽ(゚∀゚)メ(゚∀゚)メ(゚∀゚)ノ

:) :) :)

SPOILER
Your message is too short.
JoJo
XD

If you like, you can copy the sb code to osu file.

BTW I will edit this post for modding this map later ~





Download: Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA (Kawayi Rika).osb
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[Ika Musume]
00:14:094 (1) - move it away from 00:12:915 (7)
00:27:272 (2) - maybe do a jump is better for me
00:28:022 (6) - ^
00:45:701 (12,13,14) - unstack with (11)
00:46:451 (2) - the timing should move to 00:46:665
01:06:058 (5,6,7) - unstack with (4)
01:28:986 (x) - add break time
01:43:343 (4) - make it symmetrical
01:44:201 (1) - ^
01:50:094 (x) - add a note?
02:06:058 (x) - ^
02:58:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part should use 1/3 beat, not 1/4
03:25:451 (2) - delete
03:35:629 (8) - jump
03:46:129 (1) - add break time
-------------------------------------------------
nice!
though some small problems,especially the red one.
Good luck ;)
Gamu

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[Ika Musume]
00:14:094 (1) - move it away from 00:12:915 (7) no fixed
01:06:058 (5,6,7) - unstack with (4) fixed
01:43:343 (4) - make it symmetrical fixed
01:44:201 (1) - ^ fixed
02:06:058 (x) - ^ no fixed
03:25:451 (2) - delete fixed
-------------------------------------------------
nice!
though some small problems,especially the red one.
Good luck ;)
Mod Thank you~ :)

Only part of me

Download: Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA (Kawayi Rika) [Ika Musume].osu
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[Ika Musume]
00:27:272 (2) - maybe do a jump is better for me<<fixed
00:28:022 (6) - ^<<fixed
00:45:701 (12,13,14) - unstack with (11)<<fixed
00:46:451 (2) - the timing should move to 00:46:665 <<fixed
01:28:986 (x) - add break time<<fixed
01:50:094 (x) - add a note?<<no
02:58:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part should use 1/3 beat, not 1/4 <<fixed
03:35:629 (8) - jump<<fixed
03:46:129 (1) - add break time<<fixed
-------------------------------------------------
nice!
though some small problems,especially the red one.
Good luck ;)
thanks Snowy Dream's mod~ :)
JoJo
OK mod time !

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. Why "Gamu" but not "-Gamu-" in tags ? At least I consider that you should add "-Gamu-" in tags extraly.
  2. Add "squid girl" in tags. It's the English name of this anime.
  3. You need to add code "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" in your osu file since you have used custom skin.
[Rika]
  1. 00:20:201 (x) - Useless timing section, delete it.
  2. 00:21:594 (x) - ^
  3. 00:21:701 (1,2,3) - NO WAY. Tooooooo hard for most players even this is for app. There are too many similar patterns, consider shortening the DS when putting a stream. 1.6x is really horrible and not fit you mapset overall. Never map for the reason "I want to making it more difficult so I do this".
  4. 00:24:058 (5,6,7,8) - The same as above. You have the right to ignore this but I strongly recommend you to use low DS here.
  5. 00:46:772 (4,5) - WEIRD PATTERN. This is really confused and hard to read. I suggest to delete them and add a slider 00:46:772 - 00:47:094(Reverse) - 00:47:415. This may follow the vocal.
  6. 01:48:486 (6,7) - Spacing issue. Don't tell me you did this on purpose.
  7. 01:54:915 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Question. Why there is no notes on 01:55:451 ? At 1st play, most of players depends on the music/vocal more to play, and you put your own rhythm here which couldn't be reflected on the song. The result is, most of players missed here for weird pattern. And here is my suggestion (No, I'm sure 99% of the mappers will agree with me on this):

    And there is more something similar like this plz check them by yourself.
  8. 02:59:201 (7,8) - What the hell.... Spacing issue since nothing could show that there is a jump here.
  9. 03:32:844 (3) - Not stacked perfectly.
  10. 03:37:129 (11) - ^
[-Gamu-]
  1. 00:35:629 (1) - Why don't you end this on white line ? Sounds better if you do this. And 00:37:344 (1) as well.
  2. 00:36:272 (2,3,4) - Sounds bad since you have not placed them following the vocal. Try to move them to next blue line ? And 00:37:987 (2,3,4) As well.
  3. 01:33:701 (x) - Useless timing section, delete it.
  4. 03:59:201 (4) - Not stacked perfectly.
Need more mods at the moment I guess. @_@
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika

JoJo wrote:

OK mod time !

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. Why "Gamu" but not "-Gamu-" in tags ? At least I consider that you should add "-Gamu-" in tags extraly.<<gamu is OK,no -Gamu-
  2. Add "squid girl" in tags. It's the English name of this anime.<<fixed
  3. You need to add code "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" in your osu file since you have used custom skin.<<fixed
[Rika]
  1. 00:20:201 (x) - Useless timing section, delete it.<<fixed
  2. 00:21:594 (x) - ^<<fixed
  3. 00:21:701 (1,2,3) - NO WAY. Tooooooo hard for most players even this is for app. There are too many similar patterns, consider shortening the DS when putting a stream. 1.6x is really horrible and not fit you mapset overall. Never map for the reason "I want to making it more difficult so I do this".
  4. 00:24:058 (5,6,7,8) - The same as above. You have the right to ignore this but I strongly recommend you to use low DS here.
  5. 00:46:772 (4,5) - WEIRD PATTERN. This is really confused and hard to read. I suggest to delete them and add a slider 00:46:772 - 00:47:094(Reverse) - 00:47:415. This may follow the vocal.<<fixed
  6. 01:48:486 (6,7) - Spacing issue. Don't tell me you did this on purpose.
  7. 01:54:915 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Question. Why there is no notes on 01:55:451 ? At 1st play, most of players depends on the music/vocal more to play, and you put your own rhythm here which couldn't be reflected on the song. The result is, most of players missed here for weird pattern. And here is my suggestion (No, I'm sure 99% of the mappers will agree with me on this):
    [attachment=0:10112]for rika.jpg[/attachment:10112]
    And there is more something similar like this plz check them by yourself.
  8. 02:59:201 (7,8) - What the hell.... Spacing issue since nothing could show that there is a jump here.
  9. 03:32:844 (3) - Not stacked perfectly.<<fixed
  10. 03:37:129 (11) - ^<<fixed

Need more mods at the moment I guess. @_@
thanks moe JOJO~ :roll:
Gamu

JoJo wrote:

OK mod time !

  1. Red-You must fix it.
  2. Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  3. Black-Suggestion only.
[General]
  1. Why "Gamu" but not "-Gamu-" in tags ? At least I consider that you should add "-Gamu-" in tags extraly.Tags: gamu ○ (Tags this please see → http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35628
[-Gamu-]
  1. 00:35:629 (1) - Why don't you end this on white line ? Sounds better if you do this. And 00:37:344 (1) as well.oh..mistake fixed!
  2. 00:36:272 (2,3,4) - Sounds bad since you have not placed them following the vocal. Try to move them to next blue line ? And 00:37:987 (2,3,4) As well. fixed!
  3. 01:33:701 (x) - Useless timing section, delete it. fixed!
  4. 03:59:201 (4) - Not stacked perfectly.fixed!
Need more mods at the moment I guess. @_@
Mod Thank you~ :)

Download: Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA (Kawayi Rika) [Ika Musume].osu
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
OK,update Complete~
Nymph
Hi just some spacing suggestions: I just list the places I feel werid to play. I think this map can still improve a bit, so don't want to nazi now..

00:22:986 (9,10,11,1,2,3) - these feel very very very weird during playing... with 1.6 spacing it is really uncomfortable to play with these spacing.
00:46:772 (3) - why the distance decrease here? I prefer it not.
00:58:772 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest not to place these notes like this.... little uncomfortable to play with.
01:48:808 (7) - I suggest this spacing move nearer to 6
02:17:629 (5,6,7,8) - still.
02:34:772 (4) - I suggest jump here.
03:43:129 (4,5) - maybe move further? 0.6 spacing seems really crowd here.

hmm, that is all issues I found recently. =A= good luck.
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika

Nymph wrote:

Hi just some spacing suggestions: I just list the places I feel werid to play. I think this map can still improve a bit, so don't want to nazi now..

00:22:986 (9,10,11,1,2,3) - these feel very very very weird during playing... with 1.6 spacing it is really uncomfortable to play with these spacing.
00:46:772 (3) - why the distance decrease here? I prefer it not. <<fixed
01:48:808 (7) - I suggest this spacing move nearer to 6<<fixed
02:17:629 (5,6,7,8) - still.
03:43:129 (4,5) - maybe move further? 0.6 spacing seems really crowd here.<<fixed

hmm, that is all issues I found recently. =A= good luck.
thanks Nymph's suggestions~ :)

update my part~
Gamu

Nymph wrote:

Hi just some spacing suggestions: I just list the places I feel werid to play. I think this map can still improve a bit, so don't want to nazi now..

00:58:772 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest not to place these notes like this.... little uncomfortable to play with. ok. All tightly stacked
02:34:772 (4) - I suggest jump here. ok.fixed

hmm, that is all issues I found recently. =A= good luck.
Mod Thank you~ :)

Download: Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA (Kawayi Rika) [Ika Musume].osu
OzzyOzrock
[Ika Musume]
- AR 9 makes this a lot easier to read, but maybe it's too fast.

00:05:629 (4) - Remove this slider, and add circles at 00:05:736 and 00:05:951?
00:07:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use 1/3 like the song does instead? Probably should use a slider if you do.

00:16:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - o ooo oo oo instead? Fits better. You'll need to add a circle of course.
00:21:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ooo o oo o o oo instead? Just fits the song better.
00:23:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as above ^
00:25:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - And again.
00:27:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You do it here, so why not those parts?

00:35:308 - Add note here?
00:49:986 (5) - Stack on (6)? Less confusing.
00:52:344 (8) - Stack on (7)?
00:52:986 (2) - Not stacked right.
00:58:772 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like before, map this with 1/3?

01:54:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These parts again :3
Really, probably should go with music on those parts orz.

02:15:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - oo oo, oo oo instead. Stack third note on fourth.
02:16:772 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above ^
02:17:629 (5,6,7,8,9) - And now 1/3

02:58:058 (1,2,3) - Confusing
02:59:058 (6,7,8) - Confusing jump lol

But it's a good diff =w=/
Gamu

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Ika Musume]

00:05:629 (4) - Remove this slider, and add circles at 00:05:736 and 00:05:951? no fixed
00:07:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use 1/3 like the song does instead? Probably should use a slider if you do. fixed
00:35:308 - Add note here? no fixed
00:58:772 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like before, map this with 1/3? fixed

But it's a good diff =w=/
Mod Thank you~ :)

Download: Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA (Kawayi Rika) [Ika Musume].osu
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Ika Musume]
- AR 9 makes this a lot easier to read, but maybe it's too fast.<<AR8 is OK~

00:05:629 (4) - Remove this slider, and add circles at 00:05:736 and 00:05:951?
00:07:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use 1/3 like the song does instead? Probably should use a slider if you do.

00:16:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - o ooo oo oo instead? Fits better. You'll need to add a circle of course.
00:21:701 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ooo o oo o o oo instead? Just fits the song better.
00:23:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as above ^
00:25:129 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - And again.
00:27:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You do it here, so why not those parts?

00:35:308 - Add note here?
00:49:986 (5) - Stack on (6)? Less confusing.
00:52:344 (8) - Stack on (7)?
00:52:986 (2) - Not stacked right. <<fixed
00:58:772 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like before, map this with 1/3?

01:54:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These parts again :3
Really, probably should go with music on those parts orz.

02:15:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - oo oo, oo oo instead. Stack third note on fourth.
02:16:772 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above ^
02:17:629 (5,6,7,8,9) - And now 1/3 <<fixed

02:58:058 (1,2,3) - Confusing
02:59:058 (6,7,8) - Confusing jump lol

But it's a good diff =w=/

thanks mod~

update~ ;)
Sure
[Skin]
  1. 스피너 돌려보셨어요? 커서 안보입니다. ㅡㅡ; 커서가 눈에 잘 띄게 커서를 추가하든지 스피너를 고쳐주세요.
  2. spinner-osu.png, spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.png 추가해야 됩니다.
  3. comboburst.png 주변이 지저분합니다. 깨끗하게 다듬어주세요.
  4. hit300g 랑 hit300k 가 똑같네요. 구분되게 바꿔주세요.

[Ika Musume]

-Gamu-
00:01:344 ~ 00:08:201 - Too loud intro part. Reduce audio volume to around 60.
00:58:772 (1,2) - Add normal-whistle to every point except 00:59:415
01:11:629 (3) - New combo to be synchronized with the lyrics ?
01:11:629 (3,4,5,6) - Add whistles
02:47:094 - Use soft sample set.
03:28:772 (3) - New combo to be synchronized with the lyrics ?
04:03:058 (1) - Remove whistle

-Kawayi Rika-
00:43:772 (5,6,7,8,9) - 이 구간 음악 느낌에 비해선 스페이싱이 너무 넓다고 생각합니다.
00:48:915 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거하는게 낫습니다. 2번노트에 뉴콤보 넣어주세요.
00:51:058 (1) - 피니시
01:47:629 ~ 01:59:201 - 이 구간 히트사운드가 하나도 없네요. 휘슬 조금 넣어보세요.
02:16:772 (1,2,3,4) - 헷갈리네요. 이거 모든 간격이 1/4로 보입니다. 앞에것들처럼 바꿔주세요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162042
02:30:486 (1,2,3,4) - 원투쓰리포 하는 순간에 휘슬 더해주세요.
02:59:058 (6,7,8) - 분리시키지 마세요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162044
03:06:915 (4,5) - 리듬을 이렇게 해보세요. http://puu.sh/6RVE


BPM140 / SV2.0 에 AR9는 별로 추천하고 싶지 않네요. 음악이 아무리 신나더라도.
아무튼 화이팅~ ;)
Gamu

ykcarrot wrote:

[Ika Musume]

-Gamu-
00:01:344 ~ 00:08:201 - Too loud intro part. Reduce audio volume to around 60.
00:58:772 (1,2) - Add normal-whistle to every point except 00:59:415
01:11:629 (3) - New combo to be synchronized with the lyrics ?
01:11:629 (3,4,5,6) - Add whistles
02:47:094 - Use soft sample set.
03:28:772 (3) - New combo to be synchronized with the lyrics ?
04:03:058 (1) - Remove whistle
All done~ :)
and 03:28:772 (1,2,3,4) - whistle add :D

Mod Thank you~

Download: Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA (Kawayi Rika) [Ika Musume].osu
kanpakyin
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika

ykcarrot wrote:

[Skin]
  1. 스피너 돌려보셨어요? 커서 안보입니다. ㅡㅡ; 커서가 눈에 잘 띄게 커서를 추가하든지 스피너를 고쳐주세요.
  2. spinner-osu.png, spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.png 추가해야 됩니다.
  3. comboburst.png 주변이 지저분합니다. 깨끗하게 다듬어주세요.
  4. hit300g 랑 hit300k 가 똑같네요. 구분되게 바꿔주세요.

[Ika Musume]

-Kawayi Rika-
00:43:772 (5,6,7,8,9) - 이 구간 음악 느낌에 비해선 스페이싱이 너무 넓다고 생각합니다. <이거제외하고 전부수정했어요~
00:48:915 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거하는게 낫습니다. 2번노트에 뉴콤보 넣어주세요.
00:51:058 (1) - 피니시
01:47:629 ~ 01:59:201 - 이 구간 히트사운드가 하나도 없네요. 휘슬 조금 넣어보세요.
02:16:772 (1,2,3,4) - 헷갈리네요. 이거 모든 간격이 1/4로 보입니다. 앞에것들처럼 바꿔주세요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162042
02:30:486 (1,2,3,4) - 원투쓰리포 하는 순간에 휘슬 더해주세요.
02:59:058 (6,7,8) - 분리시키지 마세요. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162044
03:06:915 (4,5) - 리듬을 이렇게 해보세요. http://puu.sh/6RVE


BPM140 / SV2.0 에 AR9는 별로 추천하고 싶지 않네요. 음악이 아무리 신나더라도. <8로 바꿨어요
아무튼 화이팅~ ;)
너무 감사함니다~캐롯님~ :)

kanpakyin wrote:

Here we go
Taiko Oni 9* I guess.

[attachment=1:ae1bd]Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA (Kawayi Rika) [Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni].osu[/attachment:ae1bd]

BG
[attachment=0:ae1bd]Taiko BG.jpg[/attachment:ae1bd]
OK,added~ ;)
winber1
Ika Musume

00:22:772 (8) - i would move this note forward by 1/4 tick to follow music more. then rearrange spacing.
00:22:986 (9,10,11) - this spacing changes so suddenly... It's so unexpected. I don't mind have this spacing, but it doesn't really fit with the spacing before. The music hasn't even really changed to a different tone or section yet. It's still in the introductino D:
00:24:486 (8,9) - move 1/4 tick forward.
01:14:201 (6) - new combo
01:17:629 (6) - ^
02:05:951 (4) - unstack?
02:17:629 (5,6,7) - space equally? D:
02:19:344 (4) - idk why you had new combos here previously and not anymore, but i would advise you to keep the combos consistent. I don't really care if you add a new combos here or not, but i would just suggest you to keep the combos consistent. So you can decide that yourself.
02:26:522 (5) - this is really hard to read, especialyl with this skin, because i can barely see the approach circle ._.
02:58:058 (1,2,3,4,5) - really hard to read and understand at first sight.
02:59:058 (6) - shuld be snapped to blue tick
02:59:344 (8) - should start on the red tick. Listen to at 25% if you want.

nice map :3
Kotone
;) sorry for my bad English
Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni
- Remove Countdown baka!
- nah

Ika Musume
*-Gamu-'s part*
00:42:058 (4) - add whistle (slider start & body
00:54:486 (1) - Finish
00:54:486 (1,3,5,7) - add whistle sound fit here^ ^
01:03:058 (3) - Remove new combo
02:13:344 (1,3,5,7) - Same
02:32:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - It likes 1/4 orz
03:28:772 (1) - Remove new combo

*Rika's part*
00:17:094 - add a circle here sounds better
00:18:486 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - put too many note here is not fit...
00:22:986 (9,10,11) - big spacing is not fit in this part(00:15:058 (1) ~ 00:27:058 (1)),it look like 1/2...and this is very ugly.Try to put it on 00:21:701 (1).
00:45:915 (14) - finish?
00:49:344 (1) - finish
00:49:986 (4,5,6) - hard to read,again,my intuition told me it is 1/2...I think fake pattern is not fit this song
00:51:058 (7) - new combo
01:27:058 (6) - Finish?
01:53:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest use normal hitsound of this stream~
02:17:629 (1) - New combo
02:58:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Add whistle and change to normal hitsound maybe?
02:59:844 ~ 03:11:201 - Try to add some whistle of the stream?It would be very fit
Gamu

winber1 wrote:

Ika Musume

02:05:951 (4) - unstack? ok fixed

nice map :3

karenying wrote:

;) sorry for my bad English

Ika Musume
*-Gamu-'s part*
00:42:058 (4) - add whistle (slider start & body fixed
00:54:486 (1) - Finish fixed
00:54:486 (1,3,5,7) - add whistle sound fit here^ ^ fixed
01:03:058 (3) - Remove new combo fixed
02:13:344 (1,3,5,7) - Same fixed
02:32:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - It likes 1/4 orz sorry.no fixed...
03:28:772 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
Mod Thank you~ :)

Download: Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA (Kawayi Rika) [Ika Musume].osu
DeeN
go

<Ika Musume>

-Kawayi Rika-
00:22:129 (4) - add soft-clap
00:22:344 (5,6) - change soft-whistle to soft-clap
00:22:665 (7) - remove soft-whistle
00:22:772 (8) - change soft-whistle to soft-clap
00:22:986 (9,10) - add soft-clap
00:23:201 (11) - change soft-whistle to soft-finish
00:23:844 (4) - add soft-clap
00:24:915 (10) - change soft-whistle to soft-finish
02:21:058 (4,5,6) - stream not fit here
02:53:629 - 02:59:629 add more hitsounds
03:08:629 (4) - add soft-finish

-gamu-
00:41:736 - add normal-whistle
01:02:201 (4,5,6) - stream not fit here
03:57:058 - add soft-whistle
03:57:486 - ^
03:57:701 (5) - - ^

cool map
pieguyn
source: "Shinryaku! Ikamusume"

EDIT: just some suggestions
00:12:808 - add a note?
02:15:486 (4) - perhaps move this away from (3)? It's very easy to mistake this for a xx xx rhythm instead of a xxx x rhythm, and even if you know the rhythm, it's too close given the pace of the song :?
02:16:344 (8) - ^

no kds o.o

nice map and song :)
Gamu
:)

DeeN wrote:

go

<Ika Musume>

-gamu-
00:41:736 - add normal-whistle fixed
01:02:201 (4,5,6) - stream not fit here no fixed
03:57:058 - add soft-whistle fixed
03:57:486 - ^ fixed
03:57:701 (5) - - ^ fixed

cool map

pieguy1372 wrote:

source: "Shinryaku! Ikamusume"


EDIT: just some suggestions
00:12:808 - add a note? no fixed

no kds o.o

nice map and song :)
Mod Thank you~

Download: Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA (Kawayi Rika) [Ika Musume].osu
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika

winber1 wrote:

Ika Musume

00:22:772 (8) - i would move this note forward by 1/4 tick to follow music more. then rearrange spacing.
00:22:986 (9,10,11) - this spacing changes so suddenly... It's so unexpected. I don't mind have this spacing, but it doesn't really fit with the spacing before. The music hasn't even really changed to a different tone or section yet. It's still in the introductino D:
00:24:486 (8,9) - move 1/4 tick forward.
01:14:201 (6) - new combo <<fixed
01:17:629 (6) - ^ <<fixed
02:05:951 (4) - unstack?
02:17:629 (5,6,7) - space equally? D: <<fixed
02:19:344 (4) - idk why you had new combos here previously and not anymore, but i would advise you to keep the combos consistent. I don't really care if you add a new combos here or not, but i would just suggest you to keep the combos consistent. So you can decide that yourself.
02:26:522 (5) - this is really hard to read, especialyl with this skin, because i can barely see the approach circle ._. <<OK
02:58:058 (1,2,3,4,5) - really hard to read and understand at first sight.
02:59:058 (6) - shuld be snapped to blue tick <<fixed
02:59:344 (8) - should start on the red tick. Listen to at 25% if you want.

nice map :3

karenying wrote:

;) sorry for my bad English
Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni
- Remove Countdown baka! <<OK.
- nah

*Rika's part*
00:17:094 - add a circle here sounds better <<fixed
00:18:486 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - put too many note here is not fit...
00:22:986 (9,10,11) - big spacing is not fit in this part(00:15:058 (1) ~ 00:27:058 (1)),it look like 1/2...and this is very ugly.Try to put it on 00:21:701 (1).
00:45:915 (14) - finish? <<fixed
00:49:344 (1) - finish <<fixed
00:49:986 (4,5,6) - hard to read,again,my intuition told me it is 1/2...I think fake pattern is not fit this song
00:51:058 (7) - new combo <<fixed
01:27:058 (6) - Finish? <<fixed
01:53:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest use normal hitsound of this stream~
02:17:629 (1) - New combo <<fixed
02:58:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Add whistle and change to normal hitsound maybe? <<fixed
02:59:844 ~ 03:11:201 - Try to add some whistle of the stream?It would be very fit

DeeN wrote:

go

<Ika Musume>

-Kawayi Rika-
00:22:129 (4) - add soft-clap
00:22:344 (5,6) - change soft-whistle to soft-clap
00:22:665 (7) - remove soft-whistle
00:22:772 (8) - change soft-whistle to soft-clap
00:22:986 (9,10) - add soft-clap
00:23:201 (11) - change soft-whistle to soft-finish
00:23:844 (4) - add soft-clap
00:24:915 (10) - change soft-whistle to soft-finish
02:21:058 (4,5,6) - stream not fit here
02:53:629 - 02:59:629 add more hitsounds
03:08:629 (4) - add soft-finish

cool map


thanks mod but No change.

pieguy1372 wrote:

source: "Shinryaku! Ikamusume"

EDIT: just some suggestions
00:12:808 - add a note?
02:15:486 (4) - perhaps move this away from (3)? It's very easy to mistake this for a xx xx rhythm instead of a xxx x rhythm, and even if you know the rhythm, it's too close given the pace of the song :?
02:16:344 (8) - ^

no kds o.o

nice map and song :)
thanks everyones mod~ :)
MMzz
Taiko looks fine to me.
HP Drain 6 or 7
OD 5 or 6

=w=b
SapphireGhost
I remember you.

[General]
- You must include a section-fail.png.
- spinner-circle.png must be exactly 666 x 666.
- I think Tick Rate 2 would work here for reasons I've explained in previous mods.

[Ika Musume]
- Something about this map that I didn't like was that 1/4 patterns are constantly spaced in different ways. Sometimes they're spaced out, sometimes they're compressed, sometimes they're in the middle. This problem ends up happening in Collabs, but it's still good to try to keep things consistent even with multiple mappers.
00:49:772 (3,4,5) - This sort of spacing bothers me, as it goes straight from 0.00x to 1.28x, which is sort of awkward to play.
01:21:058 (2,3) - These two sliders are sort of noticeably sharp instead of smooth and curved, like they should be. Try to make them look a bit prettier. In fact, the sliders in this map seem a bit rushed, try to make them nice and neat.
01:44:201 (1,2) - (2) is placed in a rather strange manner under (1), try to avoid this sort of overlap.
02:05:201 (1) - Remove new combo here? (Otherwise, it leaves the previous (1) as a combo of its own which is sort of odd.)
02:15:272 (3,4) - These notes should probably be a bit further apart, same applies for the combos like it that come closely afterwards.
02:17:629 (1,2,3,4) - It's rather hard to predict the change to 1/3 here, use a repeating slider instead?
02:26:201 (4,5) - This spacing is quite confusing. It would seem that one would have to press (5) 1/4 after (4), but in fact, you're supposed to press it 1/2 after (4). I'd respace this somehow to make it less confusing.
02:27:915 (9,10) - Yeah, same here.
02:32:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'm not sure why the spacing got so low here, it should be fine spaced out as normal.
02:47:629 - Possibly drag the break on the timeline to this point? It's the start of a new measure, so delaying the break to this point works.
02:58:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hm. This doesn't play very intuitively. You could try to use... sliders or something? I don't really know.

So yeah. I'm going to sleep now so ask me about this later ~
Gamu

SapphireGhost wrote:

I remember you.

[Ika Musume]
01:44:201 (1,2) - (2) is placed in a rather strange manner under (1), try to avoid this sort of overlap. fixed
02:05:201 (1) - Remove new combo here? (Otherwise, it leaves the previous (1) as a combo of its own which is sort of odd.) fixed
02:32:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'm not sure why the spacing got so low here, it should be fine spaced out as normal. ok. fixed

So yeah. I'm going to sleep now so ask me about this later ~
Mod Thank you~ :)

My part only

Download: Kanemoto Hisako - I-KA-A-I-SU Tabena I KA (Kawayi Rika) [Ika Musume].osu
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika

SapphireGhost wrote:

I remember you.

[General]
- You must include a section-fail.png.
- spinner-circle.png must be exactly 666 x 666.
- I think Tick Rate 2 would work here for reasons I've explained in previous mods.

[Ika Musume]
- Something about this map that I didn't like was that 1/4 patterns are constantly spaced in different ways. Sometimes they're spaced out, sometimes they're compressed, sometimes they're in the middle. This problem ends up happening in Collabs, but it's still good to try to keep things consistent even with multiple mappers.
00:49:772 (3,4,5) - This sort of spacing bothers me, as it goes straight from 0.00x to 1.28x, which is sort of awkward to play.
01:21:058 (2,3) - These two sliders are sort of noticeably sharp instead of smooth and curved, like they should be. Try to make them look a bit prettier. In fact, the sliders in this map seem a bit rushed, try to make them nice and neat.
02:15:272 (3,4) - These notes should probably be a bit further apart, same applies for the combos like it that come closely afterwards.
02:17:629 (1,2,3,4) - It's rather hard to predict the change to 1/3 here, use a repeating slider instead?
02:26:201 (4,5) - This spacing is quite confusing. It would seem that one would have to press (5) 1/4 after (4), but in fact, you're supposed to press it 1/2 after (4). I'd respace this somehow to make it less confusing.
02:27:915 (9,10) - Yeah, same here.
02:58:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hm. This doesn't play very intuitively. You could try to use... sliders or something? I don't really know.

So yeah. I'm going to sleep now so ask me about this later ~
All fixed~ thanks SG~ :)
SapphireGhost
One pattern was fixed on IRC. Everything is fine now. This will be MAT bubble #1 for approval.
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