1. Another (4.9 stars, 243 notes)
2. Beginner (3.02 stars, 100 notes)
3. Hyper (4.29 stars, 138 notes)
4. Normal (3.61 stars, 122 notes)

k3nsh1n_H1mur4 wrote:

[Beginner]

HP -2 Way too low I think.
AR -2 -2 makes them too big, so I've done -1.
OD -1 Done.

01:09:250 (1,2,3) and 01:10:798 (1,2,3) - I don't see the point to use a kiai here. It accentuates the beats with a flash.

And the whole map is made like this 2 sliders 00:13:508 (1,2). Makes sense, but for a Beginner, it's a little difficult. Would be better to found a better solution. I might simplify some of this a bit so that Hyper is different, but I don't want Beginner to be boring.

[Hyper]

Same Kiai issue, and looks a lot like the beginner. play a little more with the positions of the beats, try to make him a less plain. I'll take a look at it.

[Another]

You have spacing issues. A lot of them. You can use "hold beats" in a map. One time, or two times, if the song have this. But you already have a hold time, when you call the BPM to 0.5x. But the way you use them, looks a '07 map to me.
Can you give me an example of the spacing issues? There are a lot of intentional anti-jumps in there.
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I like the song so, a star.

Mok wrote:

Here~
This is the mod4mod you asked to do with me :3

So, let's start!

[General]
Sof storyboard, really cool

[Beginner]
01:03:056 (1) - 01:06:153 (5) - I really started worrying when i've seen this 0,5x section, it can be really dangerous for our newbies.
^ Removed.

[Normal]
01:34:024 (1) - Remove New Combo.
^ Done.

[Hyper]
00:36:346 (2) - I would consider about moving this from under the slider.
^ Done.

[Another]
I've noticed many annoying stacking during this map, here's an example: 00:47:379 (5,1,2,3,4).
Try to avoid it, okay?
^ 1,2,3,4 seems fine to me, but I've removed some notes and rearranged them to be a little cleaner.

That's all! :3

XepherX3 wrote:

Really nice

mod guide:

add this as custom sound and make the sound Normal not soft (tick custom hitsounds)
http://puu.sh/11GV

[Another]
{Break} : do something on this part...piano or bass sounds really nice

Star

JauiPlaY wrote:

hi~
i have to say that the fly through the night had been became an awesome map

JauiPlaY wrote:

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now let's see...

[General]
kiai time is quite long...but, well.
I think it fits the song.

[Beginner]
00:39:830(3) - new combo.
Done.
01:34:024(1,2,3) - new player hardly control the rhythm here, set a slider with repeat arrow will be better.
Done.

[Normal]
...wait, why the slider velocity is same to the Beginner diff?
Because I'm lazy.
01:20:088(5) - new combo.
Done.
01:26:282(1) - i guess it is not a good idea that set such a short spinner in a normal diff.
Removed.

[Hyper]
even in the another diff, you set a break time, so why in the hyper diff you did not?
Fixed.
00:21:636(4) - did not be overlapped well.
This was slightly misaligned, fixed.
00:35:185(1) - turn the sound lower.
Done.
01:30:927(x) - i expect a note here.
I did something with it...
01:31:120(3,4,5) - not a good choice imo, maybe set 3 and 4 on those white line will be better

[Another]
01:02:475(x) - add a note here.
01:02:502(x) - ^
Hmmm... I'd rather not I think.

well done.
so
star~

1. 01:09:250 - if you actually look in the test mode, it would look like one huge kiai time. I suggest removing the kiai time at the middle of each time.

1. 00:47:185 (1,2) - remove combo on first, add on next

chamelepeace710 wrote:

By Mod Request:

General

1. 01:09:250 - if you actually look in the test mode, it would look like one huge kiai time. I suggest removing the kiai time at the middle of each time.

I'm not quite sure what you mean about the kiai. I can easily see the three beats in test mode.

[Beginner]

1. 00:47:185 (1,2) - remove combo on first, add on next

Done. I don't know what I was thinking here to be honest... >_>

Maybe on the harder diffs you can follow the rhythms instead on the lyrics?
It's a suggestion even though it feel like someone can DT the [Another] diff.
I think I might leave it for now.

Star!!!

Ayeen wrote:

Maybe just a small modding from me. I dont see anything much to change in your map

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General:
Maybe lower down the mp3 bitrate. ( Though, it quite small in size already )
Done, although I had to go through and fix all the timing points.
Make some custom color for map, maybe?
Yeah, the default colours are pretty boring. I might look into getting a custom skin.
From 01:03:056 till 01:09:153 there is some potential for SB (referring to the BG sound)
I'm not sure if a SB would work for this map, and I've never done one anyway.

Normal
The whole map is fine, except the slow approach rate, dont you think so? >.<
My suggestion :
You could have just typed that, you know.
Anyway, it's normal, not beginner. I think the approach rate should be alright.

Beginner
Spinner is quite short for "beginner" actually. But changing it will make not sync with song. Quite a good spinning practice for beginner
~ No comment on the rest
Spinner should be alright I think. I'd rather it be shortish than really long. Not all beginners have that much wrist endurance!

Hyper
No comment, seem good. Though, i dont really like those jumping notes >.>
But jumps are fun!

Another
No comment, and dont really want to comment as I cant play insane or 5 star much
I can't even pass my ranked map... >_>
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Every map that I mod/test I didn't forgot to star, so *star*

Charles445 wrote:

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General
01:09:306 These quick 6 fireworks are very likely Unrankable. You don't need them here.
Removed.

Beginner
This is very rectangular, you should have more curves
Yeah, I know.

Hyper
00:35:241 - Remove half the repeats and make the slider longer, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/62135
Hmm... I think I prefer it with more repeats, but I'll keep it in mind.

Another
This is rather easy for an Another difficulty...
Otherwise, it's ok, the normal sized hitcircles might annoy some people
The goal is to be fun, not un-DT-able.

Solid map

EDIT: Oh, and if you read this again, remove the seizure warning. There's no storyboard at all on the map so it's not needed
This was for the fireworks, which are now gone.

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

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Difficulty - Beginner
00:57:693 (2) - Turn this vertical slider upside down. The result of that would be the slider number would be placed in the bottom. I suggest this because I notice other sliders in this map like this: 2 sliders that have the same length with their slider ball going to each other's opposite direction.
Hmm, good point. Done.
01:26:338 (3) - This Hit circle looks a little irregular. I suggest you move this 2 grids upward.
I dunno, that messes up the spacing.

Difficulty - Normal
00:16:273 (5) - This should be the slider (1) of the new combo. You can fix this by selecting disabling the new combo on current slider (1) of the new combo [you should see all of the blue colored notes turn into green] and enable the new combo on the green slider (5) to make it the slider (1) of the blue ones.
I think I'd prefer to keep the combos with the music rather than the shape.
00:19:176 (4) - Same thing goes with this slider.
^
00:22:467 (5) - And this one.
^
01:20:144 (1) - Disable the new combo on this one.
That makes the combo a little longer than I wanted, but ok.
01:24:015 (4) - Try Putting a "finish" on end of this slider. I based this from the beat of the 8 hit circles before this.
I don't like it.

Difficulty - Hyper
00:16:273 (5) - Do the same with this one as I told you with Difficulty - Normal. [Surprisingly, they have the same time and same thing to do.]
As above.
00:19:176 (4,5,6) - These hit circles should be included in the red new combo making blue hit circle (4) into red hit circle (1), blue (5) into red (2), and blue (6) into red (3).
Doesn't fit the song.
00:36:596 (1,2,3,4) - Disable the new combo on hit circle (1) to make it (3), and goes on with (2,3,4)
I want to keep that shape as a separate combo.
00:53:435 (6,7) - These hit circles should be included in the blue new combo. [You already know what that means. ]
Again, I want to keep the combo with the music.

Difficulty - Another
00:19:176 (7,8,9) - These hit circles should be included in the red new combo. [As usual]
The same again.
00:46:273 (6) - Make this green (1).
Agreed.

Ayeen wrote:

The skin is not yet uploaded. Use full submission for it. And lol on "Ayeen" tagging

Sakura Hana wrote:

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[Skin]
Some of your hitbursts are very similar for instance the difference between 100g and 300 is the number, and 300k is the exact same as 300, make sure you vary colors between hitbursts because most players are guided more by the colors rather than the numbers. Also your hitbursts are gigantic.
Slider-followcircle... followCIRCLE not followSTAR, >_> In either case, it's unrankable since the player needs to know the exact area their cursor can go to, so i recommend maybe adding a circle around the star and maybe remove the pinkish section in the middle and make it completely translucent in that section, also it looks to me like it's uncentered? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/65691
You're missing approachcircle in your skin.
Like with sliderfollowcircle there's also a problem with spinner-circle. you need to put a small circle in the center so people know where's the center they should be spinning from.
I've removed a lot of skin elements instead, so it's mostly just the hitcircles and fonts.

[General]
I can see why you put ayeen on the tags, although usually i wouldnt put skin providers in tags, but why put SiRiRu on tags?
Fixed.
Why the harder the diff the most break time it has...
Breaks changed.

[Another]
I can barely hear the hitsounds, increase hitsound volume? 61% is kinda an odd volume number too XD
80% now, sounds a lot better.

I really dont see a reason to use x1.50 speed?
Changed to 1.3x.

Kiai sections should reflect the strongest parts of the song and the map and the last kiai feels really tame.
I've removed the kiai from the end.

00:55:757 (1,2,3) - Add a finish to all 3 of these instead of the 1st only?
Done.
01:09:306 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These really play weird
I removed the overlap to make it a little more interesting.

Other diffs are fine, sorry but there are major skin elements issues so i can give it a star icon yet.

ztrot wrote:

lovely :3

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Hyper]

Add +2 of HP Drain Rate, Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty. The settings are way too low right now.

[Another]

Add +1 of Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty for the same reason of Hyper difficulty.

Yeah, just fix the difficulty settings of them and I'll rank.