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NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2011-04-26T00:49:19+00:00

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
...the timing... wtf
a huge gap between [Beginner] and [Tonoicutzu]... add a diff?
your normal-hitclap is in fact another default normal-hitnormal...= = and i don't think it's really needed. it only make the hitsounds become louder and it sounds weird to me. (especially when you're using some clap at 2nd and 4th white line skill)
what is the applause.mp3 for? it seems you want to add it to the end of the map but i didn't see that?

[Beginner]
01:10:507 (1) - according to your next spinners... extend this spinner by 1/1 and start next spinner 1/2 later would be better?

[Tonoicutzu]
01:24:934 (1) - don't think start notes 1/2 after spinner is a nice idea in a ...Normal? or well, even for Hard, the BPM is already high enough here.

[AngelHoney]
00:49:649 (5) - maybe put this farther.
01:09:128 (1,2,3,4) - only for increase the difficulty..= =?

[Kurai]
00:36:249 (3) - remove? you don't have such a beat for similar parts.
00:46:145 (2) - repeat and move to the symmetry place of (1)? lower the hitsound volume for the slider's end if needed.
hell spinners...

[Champion]
...spacing lol... only thing i could mention for this diff is you probably need a new combo mod = =|||

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2011-04-26T04:51:31+00:00

what is the applause.mp3 for? it seems you want to add it to the end of the map but i didn't see that?

"Thanks you, for playing". Sounds when you finish playing.

01:10:507 (1) - according to your next spinners... extend this spinner by 1/1 and start next spinner 1/2 later would be better?

If i start spinner before timing section and if i end it after timing section, the end will not snapped. That's why i did like that.

...spacing lol... only thing i could mention for this diff is you probably need a new combo mod = =|||

You didn't see at all my mapping style on hardest difficulties >: D

Thanks for modding :>

Tony

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Tony 2011-04-26T05:06:26+00:00

lolcubes wrote:
[Tonoicutzu]:
No need to have Tonoicutzu in tags on this diff. Nothing critical though.
00:06:386 (1) - Completely silent hitsounds are unrankable I think. Having 5% volume doesn't really justify it since it's still not hearable. However, if I'm wrong in this case, you should do the same to 00:00:386 (1). √
00:09:636 (4,5) - Instead of these I think you should use a short repeating slider just like you did a few notes before. If you are really keen on keeping these, then add a note at 00:09:761.√
01:32:513 (1) - End this spinner at 01:34:250.√

NatsumeRin wrote:
[Tonoicutzu]
01:24:934 (1) - don't think start notes 1/2 after spinner is a nice idea in a ...Normal? or well, even for Hard, the BPM is already high enough here.√

thanks u2

Download: W.T. Orchestra - William Tell Overture (Louis Cyphre) [Tonoicutzu].osu

andysun_old

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andysun_old 2011-04-26T06:37:15+00:00

lol

akrolsmir

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akrolsmir 2011-04-26T08:02:33+00:00

Eh, I ought to look at this before it gets bubbled. Though I doubt I'll find anything significant.

Beginner:
Nice.

Tonoicutzu:
Wow that's a jump in difficulty, was no one interested in mapping a normal?

00:34:564 (5) - Not symmetric- start and endpoints not aligned, and center point is not in the middle.

AngelHoney:
01:11:188 (3,4,5,6,1) - I found this confusingly close together though that's probably because I judge time by distance rather than by approach circles, which is probably wrong of me.

Kurai:
01:30:618 (4) - This was hidden by/ confused with the aftereffects of the spinner.

Champion:
Yeah, I don't think I'd ever be able to pass this. Also, pretty colors.

Nice map, exceeded my already-high expectations. Starred!

Kurai

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Kurai 2011-04-26T10:04:11+00:00

lolcubes wrote:
[Kurai]:
00:49:444 (1) - Remove new combo from this note. Add it to 00:50:263 (3) instead, fits better if you ask me. New combo added on (3), but I keep the one onto 00:49:444 (1)
01:09:128 (5) - Probably not necessary, but maybe put a new combo here? Looks better if you ask me. Yeah
01:22:250 - 01:27:302 - I don't agree how combos are positioned here. Nothing wrong but I think you should change them to follow the music better. Like this: ok
SPOILER
01:22:881 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:23:039 (2) - New combo.
01:23:671 (2) - New combo.
01:24:302 (3) - New combo.
01:25:566 (2) - New combo.
01:26:197 (3) - New combo.

Also, remove new combos from all (1)s that are coming in between these.

NatsumeRin wrote:
[Kurai]
00:36:249 (3) - remove? you don't have such a beat for similar parts. Yeah
00:46:145 (2) - repeat and move to the symmetry place of (1)? lower the hitsound volume for the slider's end if needed. Symmetry done
hell spinners...

akrolsmir wrote:
Kurai:
01:30:618 (4) - This was hidden by/ confused with the aftereffects of the spinner. It's not a problem imo

Download: W.T. Orchestra - William Tell Overture (Louis Cyphre) [Kurai].osu

Last edited by Kurai 2011-04-26T10:16:11+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2011-04-26T10:10:42+00:00

Updated

happy30

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happy30 2011-04-26T14:32:39+00:00

goodluck

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2011-04-26T15:12:52+00:00

Kudosu for timing help man~

[Ghost]

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[Ghost] 2011-04-26T15:49:23+00:00

Tony

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Tony 2011-04-26T17:57:34+00:00

slider fix...

Download: W.T. Orchestra - William Tell Overture (Louis Cyphre) [Tonoicutzu].osu

Kitsuneko

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Kitsuneko 2011-04-28T18:35:23+00:00

Hi Louis Cyphre
as your request in our queue

[Beginner]
00:28:624 (2) - add clap to first?

[Tonoicutzu]
01:01:087 (1) - spinner start at 01:01:273 i think
01:27:460 (1,2,3,4) - confusing rhythm. can you change like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/82084

[Kurai]
01:26:197 (1,2) - move to centre 1 grid on grid level 4

[champion]
00:55:598 (5) - add newcombo and, 00:55:695 (1) - remove nc

I could not find other problem.
cute combo color and skin<3
was excited!

good luck~ star here ☆（ゝω・）v

kenji

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kenji 2011-04-29T20:07:49+00:00

★彡

-maJu

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-maJu 2011-04-29T20:12:57+00:00

;3

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2011-04-29T20:22:08+00:00

Berncastell

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Berncastell 2011-04-30T12:59:47+00:00

star

ghqkd159

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ghqkd159 2011-04-30T13:00:38+00:00

good song

GodMan_old

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GodMan_old 2011-04-30T13:01:06+00:00

nikhe_old

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nikhe_old 2011-04-30T13:01:48+00:00

:#

[cboss]

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XepherX3

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XepherX3 2011-04-30T13:09:32+00:00

first offset on all maps 377

[mod log]
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star

rockleejkooo

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rockleejkooo 2011-04-30T13:15:20+00:00

._.

Krisom

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Krisom 2011-04-30T18:38:37+00:00

General-
· Just the hitcircle overlay is from ztrot, the hitcircle is from RJ, sliderticks are from Larto. Lighting, followpoint and scorebar are all mine. Please list this on the OP.
· Make the sliderborder a light gray to match the hitcircle's colour.
· Everything else seems fine.

Beginner-
01:10:507 (1,1,1,1) - On the easiest difficulty? No way sir.
Cool

Tonoicutzu-
I think you should give some life to the map, curving the 1/2 long sliders a bit. It's a bit repetitive to see that they are all straight.

AHO-
01:11:188 (3,4,5,6,1) - This was very confusing...
01:12:544 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:13:880 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:15:202 (3,4,5,6,1) - At this point I guess I kinda expected it anyways.
All of those have the same spacing than the 1/4s around 00:50:263. Wich is quite confusing. Other than that, great diff.

Kurai-
Charts material. Very good diff! 10/10

Champion-
00:32:534 (1,2) - This was unexpected, why didn't you just place them below the previous combo like the other ones?
01:24:460 (4,5) - This would be unrankeable due to the perfect stacking on (5)'s end.

Twinkle twinkle little star, let me know when you are done~

Tony

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Tony 2011-04-30T19:01:15+00:00

yay

Download: W.T. Orchestra - William Tell Overture (Louis Cyphre) [Tonoicutzu].osu

HakuNoKaemi

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HakuNoKaemi 2011-04-30T22:04:55+00:00

[General]
the difficulty spread need a Normal / Normal + as you have 2 Hard and 2 Insanes (and one Easy)

[For All Guest]
use Soft Hitsounds in the part from start to 00:10:386

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2011-04-30T23:12:03+00:00

Thanks for stars.

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2011-05-01T01:54:07+00:00

http://puu.sh/1OwT

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2011-05-01T11:36:31+00:00

Everything is now ready. Waiting for you Krisom <3

XepherX3

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XepherX3 2011-05-01T12:54:42+00:00

all offsets +23ms

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2011-05-01T13:03:10+00:00

all offsets +23ms

Checked offset, sounds great. So no, as i said you before, stop advicing.

Mastodonio

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Mastodonio 2011-05-01T13:05:55+00:00

Sounds for me good too.

Krisom

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Krisom 2011-05-01T23:43:08+00:00

HEY GUYS I LOVE DOING RECHECKS AND FILLIN' PENDING WITH BUBBLES, HELLO MOM.
On a side note, those double red lines might be unnecesary, though if Lyby says they're fine I dunno, well, I suppose the next BAt who checks this will decide.
Btw, charts material, good work.

Lybydose

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Lybydose 2011-05-02T00:13:14+00:00

Krisom wrote:
HEY GUYS I LOVE DOING RECHECKS AND FILLIN' PENDING WITH BUBBLES, HELLO MOM.
On a side note, those double red lines might be unnecesary, though if Lyby says they're fine I dunno, well, I suppose the next BAt who checks this will decide.
Btw, charts material, good work.

As far as playing the map goes, they are unnecessary. If you remove the 2nd one though, you'll see why it's there - the metronome sounds totally off. This is because it will be ticking on the "red ticks" instead.

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2011-05-02T09:11:24+00:00

Thanks Krisom

Garven

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Garven 2011-05-02T10:07:19+00:00

As per your request:

[Beginner]
01:17:810 (4,5) - Uh, spacing

[Tonoicutzu]
00:29:327 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for a Normal.
01:27:460 (1) - ^

[Kurai]
00:10:511 (1) - Maybe end with the soft sound set so you don't get that pop sound that normal likes to do at low volumes?

Call me back and I'll bubble~

Edit:

Er, rebubble, I guess.

Editedit:
Rebubbled!