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W.T. Orchestra - William Tell Overture
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Hey, here's what I got. Green = nazi and cosmetic opinions I usually write, so you can ignore these if you don't care about those.
[Beginner]:
Star~
[Beginner]:
- 00:41:663 (3) - Move it up by 1 grid. I know you hate this but it would look much better if it would stack on top of the previous slider 00:39:031 (1).
- 01:10:507 (1) - Extend this spinner to the next big white tick (01:11:870). Afterwards move the starting point of the spinner 01:11:870 (1) to 01:12:038.
- No need to have Tonoicutzu in tags on this diff. Nothing critical though.
- 00:06:386 (1) - Completely silent hitsounds are unrankable I think. Having 5% volume doesn't really justify it since it's still not hearable. However, if I'm wrong in this case, you should do the same to 00:00:386 (1).
- 00:09:636 (4,5) - Instead of these I think you should use a short repeating slider just like you did a few notes before. If you are really keen on keeping these, then add a note at 00:09:761.
- 01:32:513 (1) - End this spinner at 01:34:250.
- No need to have AngelHoney in tags on this diff. Nothing critical though.
- 00:49:444 (1) - Remove new combo from this note. Add it to 00:50:263 (3) instead, fits better if you ask me.
- 01:09:128 (5) - Probably not necessary, but maybe put a new combo here? Looks better if you ask me.
- 01:22:250 - 01:27:302 - I don't agree how combos are positioned here. Nothing wrong but I think you should change them to follow the music better. Like this:SPOILER01:22:881 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:23:039 (2) - New combo.
01:23:671 (2) - New combo.
01:24:302 (3) - New combo.
01:25:566 (2) - New combo.
01:26:197 (3) - New combo.
Also, remove new combos from all (1)s that are coming in between these.
- 01:10:507 (1,x) - Don't think sliders like this are rankable since you can't hear them at all. You should up their volume so that they can be heard, or just swap to default soft hitsound for these. This applies to all sliders like this from this point onward.
- You have an obsolete .osb file in your folder (William Tell Overture - W.T. Orchestra (Louis Cyphre).osb), remove it.
- I don't like how normal-hitclap sounds because for me it's making the stuff sound weird. Having a default hitnormal heard and this one on top of it makes it double volume and slightly phased.
Star~
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
...the timing... wtf
a huge gap between [Beginner] and [Tonoicutzu]... add a diff?
your normal-hitclap is in fact another default normal-hitnormal...= = and i don't think it's really needed. it only make the hitsounds become louder and it sounds weird to me. (especially when you're using some clap at 2nd and 4th white line skill)
what is the applause.mp3 for? it seems you want to add it to the end of the map but i didn't see that?
[Beginner]
01:10:507 (1) - according to your next spinners... extend this spinner by 1/1 and start next spinner 1/2 later would be better?
[Tonoicutzu]
01:24:934 (1) - don't think start notes 1/2 after spinner is a nice idea in a ...Normal? or well, even for Hard, the BPM is already high enough here.
[AngelHoney]
00:49:649 (5) - maybe put this farther.
01:09:128 (1,2,3,4) - only for increase the difficulty..= =?
[Kurai]
00:36:249 (3) - remove? you don't have such a beat for similar parts.
00:46:145 (2) - repeat and move to the symmetry place of (1)? lower the hitsound volume for the slider's end if needed.
hell spinners...
[Champion]
...spacing lol... only thing i could mention for this diff is you probably need a new combo mod = =|||
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
...the timing... wtf
a huge gap between [Beginner] and [Tonoicutzu]... add a diff?
your normal-hitclap is in fact another default normal-hitnormal...= = and i don't think it's really needed. it only make the hitsounds become louder and it sounds weird to me. (especially when you're using some clap at 2nd and 4th white line skill)
what is the applause.mp3 for? it seems you want to add it to the end of the map but i didn't see that?
[Beginner]
01:10:507 (1) - according to your next spinners... extend this spinner by 1/1 and start next spinner 1/2 later would be better?
[Tonoicutzu]
01:24:934 (1) - don't think start notes 1/2 after spinner is a nice idea in a ...Normal? or well, even for Hard, the BPM is already high enough here.
[AngelHoney]
00:49:649 (5) - maybe put this farther.
01:09:128 (1,2,3,4) - only for increase the difficulty..= =?
[Kurai]
00:36:249 (3) - remove? you don't have such a beat for similar parts.
00:46:145 (2) - repeat and move to the symmetry place of (1)? lower the hitsound volume for the slider's end if needed.
hell spinners...
[Champion]
...spacing lol... only thing i could mention for this diff is you probably need a new combo mod = =|||
Topic Starter
what is the applause.mp3 for? it seems you want to add it to the end of the map but i didn't see that?"Thanks you, for playing". Sounds when you finish playing.
01:10:507 (1) - according to your next spinners... extend this spinner by 1/1 and start next spinner 1/2 later would be better?If i start spinner before timing section and if i end it after timing section, the end will not snapped. That's why i did like that.
...spacing lol... only thing i could mention for this diff is you probably need a new combo mod = =|||You didn't see at all my mapping style on hardest difficulties >: D
Thanks for modding :>
lolcubes wrote:
[Tonoicutzu]:
- No need to have Tonoicutzu in tags on this diff. Nothing critical though.
- 00:06:386 (1) - Completely silent hitsounds are unrankable I think. Having 5% volume doesn't really justify it since it's still not hearable. However, if I'm wrong in this case, you should do the same to 00:00:386 (1). √
- 00:09:636 (4,5) - Instead of these I think you should use a short repeating slider just like you did a few notes before. If you are really keen on keeping these, then add a note at 00:09:761.√
- 01:32:513 (1) - End this spinner at 01:34:250.√
thanks u2NatsumeRin wrote:
[Tonoicutzu]
01:24:934 (1) - don't think start notes 1/2 after spinner is a nice idea in a ...Normal? or well, even for Hard, the BPM is already high enough here.√
Download: W.T. Orchestra - William Tell Overture (Louis Cyphre) [Tonoicutzu].osu
lol
Eh, I ought to look at this before it gets bubbled. Though I doubt I'll find anything significant.
Beginner:
Nice.
Tonoicutzu:
Wow that's a jump in difficulty, was no one interested in mapping a normal?
00:34:564 (5) - Not symmetric- start and endpoints not aligned, and center point is not in the middle.
AngelHoney:
01:11:188 (3,4,5,6,1) - I found this confusingly close together though that's probably because I judge time by distance rather than by approach circles, which is probably wrong of me.
Kurai:
01:30:618 (4) - This was hidden by/ confused with the aftereffects of the spinner.
Champion:
Yeah, I don't think I'd ever be able to pass this. Also, pretty colors.
Nice map, exceeded my already-high expectations. Starred!
Beginner:
Nice.
Tonoicutzu:
Wow that's a jump in difficulty, was no one interested in mapping a normal?
00:34:564 (5) - Not symmetric- start and endpoints not aligned, and center point is not in the middle.
AngelHoney:
01:11:188 (3,4,5,6,1) - I found this confusingly close together though that's probably because I judge time by distance rather than by approach circles, which is probably wrong of me.
Kurai:
01:30:618 (4) - This was hidden by/ confused with the aftereffects of the spinner.
Champion:
Yeah, I don't think I'd ever be able to pass this. Also, pretty colors.
Nice map, exceeded my already-high expectations. Starred!
lolcubes wrote:
[Kurai]:
- 00:49:444 (1) - Remove new combo from this note. Add it to 00:50:263 (3) instead, fits better if you ask me. New combo added on (3), but I keep the one onto 00:49:444 (1)
- 01:09:128 (5) - Probably not necessary, but maybe put a new combo here? Looks better if you ask me. Yeah
- 01:22:250 - 01:27:302 - I don't agree how combos are positioned here. Nothing wrong but I think you should change them to follow the music better. Like this: ok
SPOILER01:22:881 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:23:039 (2) - New combo.
01:23:671 (2) - New combo.
01:24:302 (3) - New combo.
01:25:566 (2) - New combo.
01:26:197 (3) - New combo.
Also, remove new combos from all (1)s that are coming in between these.
NatsumeRin wrote:
[Kurai]
00:36:249 (3) - remove? you don't have such a beat for similar parts. Yeah
00:46:145 (2) - repeat and move to the symmetry place of (1)? lower the hitsound volume for the slider's end if needed. Symmetry done
hell spinners...
akrolsmir wrote:
Kurai:
01:30:618 (4) - This was hidden by/ confused with the aftereffects of the spinner. It's not a problem imo
Download: W.T. Orchestra - William Tell Overture (Louis Cyphre) [Kurai].osu
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Updated
goodluck
Topic Starter
Kudosu for timing help man~ 
Hi Louis Cyphre
as your request in our queue
[Beginner]
00:28:624 (2) - add clap to first?
[Tonoicutzu]
01:01:087 (1) - spinner start at 01:01:273 i think
01:27:460 (1,2,3,4) - confusing rhythm. can you change like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/82084
[Kurai]
01:26:197 (1,2) - move to centre 1 grid on grid level 4
[champion]
00:55:598 (5) - add newcombo and, 00:55:695 (1) - remove nc
I could not find other problem.
cute combo color and skin<3
was excited!
good luck~ star here ☆（ゝω・）v
as your request in our queue
[Beginner]
00:28:624 (2) - add clap to first?
[Tonoicutzu]
01:01:087 (1) - spinner start at 01:01:273 i think
01:27:460 (1,2,3,4) - confusing rhythm. can you change like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/82084
[Kurai]
01:26:197 (1,2) - move to centre 1 grid on grid level 4
[champion]
00:55:598 (5) - add newcombo and, 00:55:695 (1) - remove nc
I could not find other problem.
cute combo color and skin<3
was excited!
good luck~ star here ☆（ゝω・）v
Topic Starter
star
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General-
· Just the hitcircle overlay is from ztrot, the hitcircle is from RJ, sliderticks are from Larto. Lighting, followpoint and scorebar are all mine. Please list this on the OP.
· Make the sliderborder a light gray to match the hitcircle's colour.
· Everything else seems fine.
Beginner-
01:10:507 (1,1,1,1) - On the easiest difficulty? No way sir.
Cool
Tonoicutzu-
I think you should give some life to the map, curving the 1/2 long sliders a bit. It's a bit repetitive to see that they are all straight.
AHO-
01:11:188 (3,4,5,6,1) - This was very confusing...
01:12:544 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:13:880 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:15:202 (3,4,5,6,1) - At this point I guess I kinda expected it anyways.
All of those have the same spacing than the 1/4s around 00:50:263. Wich is quite confusing. Other than that, great diff.
Kurai-
Charts material. Very good diff! 10/10
Champion-
00:32:534 (1,2) - This was unexpected, why didn't you just place them below the previous combo like the other ones?
01:24:460 (4,5) - This would be unrankeable due to the perfect stacking on (5)'s end.
Twinkle twinkle little star, let me know when you are done~
· Just the hitcircle overlay is from ztrot, the hitcircle is from RJ, sliderticks are from Larto. Lighting, followpoint and scorebar are all mine. Please list this on the OP.
· Make the sliderborder a light gray to match the hitcircle's colour.
· Everything else seems fine.
Beginner-
01:10:507 (1,1,1,1) - On the easiest difficulty? No way sir.
Cool
Tonoicutzu-
I think you should give some life to the map, curving the 1/2 long sliders a bit. It's a bit repetitive to see that they are all straight.
AHO-
01:11:188 (3,4,5,6,1) - This was very confusing...
01:12:544 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:13:880 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:15:202 (3,4,5,6,1) - At this point I guess I kinda expected it anyways.
All of those have the same spacing than the 1/4s around 00:50:263. Wich is quite confusing. Other than that, great diff.
Kurai-
Charts material. Very good diff! 10/10
Champion-
00:32:534 (1,2) - This was unexpected, why didn't you just place them below the previous combo like the other ones?
01:24:460 (4,5) - This would be unrankeable due to the perfect stacking on (5)'s end.
Twinkle twinkle little star, let me know when you are done~
[General]
the difficulty spread need a Normal / Normal + as you have 2 Hard and 2 Insanes (and one Easy)
[For All Guest]
use Soft Hitsounds in the part from start to 00:10:386
the difficulty spread need a Normal / Normal + as you have 2 Hard and 2 Insanes (and one Easy)
[For All Guest]
use Soft Hitsounds in the part from start to 00:10:386
Topic Starter
Thanks for stars.
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Everything is now ready. Waiting for you Krisom <3
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all offsets +23msChecked offset, sounds great. So no, as i said you before, stop advicing.
Sounds for me good too.
HEY GUYS I LOVE DOING RECHECKS AND FILLIN' PENDING WITH BUBBLES, HELLO MOM.
On a side note, those double red lines might be unnecesary, though if Lyby says they're fine I dunno, well, I suppose the next BAt who checks this will decide.
Btw, charts material, good work.
On a side note, those double red lines might be unnecesary, though if Lyby says they're fine I dunno, well, I suppose the next BAt who checks this will decide.
Btw, charts material, good work.
As far as playing the map goes, they are unnecessary. If you remove the 2nd one though, you'll see why it's there - the metronome sounds totally off. This is because it will be ticking on the "red ticks" instead.Krisom wrote:
HEY GUYS I LOVE DOING RECHECKS AND FILLIN' PENDING WITH BUBBLES, HELLO MOM.
On a side note, those double red lines might be unnecesary, though if Lyby says they're fine I dunno, well, I suppose the next BAt who checks this will decide.
Btw, charts material, good work.
Topic Starter
Thanks Krisom
As per your request:
[Beginner]
01:17:810 (4,5) - Uh, spacing
[Tonoicutzu]
00:29:327 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for a Normal.
01:27:460 (1) - ^
[Kurai]
00:10:511 (1) - Maybe end with the soft sound set so you don't get that pop sound that normal likes to do at low volumes?
Call me back and I'll bubble~
Edit:
Er, rebubble, I guess.
Editedit:
Rebubbled!
:U
[Beginner]
01:17:810 (4,5) - Uh, spacing
[Tonoicutzu]
00:29:327 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for a Normal.
01:27:460 (1) - ^
[Kurai]
00:10:511 (1) - Maybe end with the soft sound set so you don't get that pop sound that normal likes to do at low volumes?
Call me back and I'll bubble~
Edit:
Er, rebubble, I guess.
Editedit:
Rebubbled!
:U
Garven wrote:
As per your request:
[Tonoicutzu]
00:29:327 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for a Normal.Fixed
01:27:460 (1) - ^Fixed
:U
Download: W.T. Orchestra - William Tell Overture (Louis Cyphre) [Tonoicutzu].osu
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Pretty good quality mapset, there's nothing I don't like here!
Ranked~
Ranked~
yay. congratz
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thanks guys
Yay !
Champion is just plain stupid difficult for no reason on ctb, but that's kind of expected from Louis, so congrats.
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Champion is just plain stupid difficult for no reason on ctbWrong.
Sorry, I forgot "Louis likes to make stupid hard ctb maps". That's reason enough for me.Louis Cyphre wrote:
no reasonWrong.
Shael_old
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Why is something plain stupid if it's difficult?
My favorite beatmap of all time. Congrats.
my dream is to flasligt champion. maybe with hidden.
my dream is to flasligt champion. maybe with hidden.
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my dream is to flasligt champion. maybe with hidden.keep going /late
flashlight may be hard but not dt
I'll never do 285bpm.Blue Dragon wrote:
flashlight may be hard but not dt
But I can S it and therefore learn to use flashlight on it if I play it enough times.
Topic Starter
Something for Cookiezi (DT) and may be for Bikko (FL).
or Lunah, or CXu, or Lybydose.Louis Cyphre wrote:
Something for Cookiezi (DT) and may be for Bikko (FL).
But Ima try my best to do Flashlight.
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keep going xD