1. 00:41:663 (3) - Move it up by 1 grid. I know you hate this but it would look much better if it would stack on top of the previous slider 00:39:031 (1).
2. 01:10:507 (1) - Extend this spinner to the next big white tick (01:11:870). Afterwards move the starting point of the spinner 01:11:870 (1) to 01:12:038.

1. No need to have Tonoicutzu in tags on this diff. Nothing critical though.
2. 00:06:386 (1) - Completely silent hitsounds are unrankable I think. Having 5% volume doesn't really justify it since it's still not hearable. However, if I'm wrong in this case, you should do the same to 00:00:386 (1).
3. 00:09:636 (4,5) - Instead of these I think you should use a short repeating slider just like you did a few notes before. If you are really keen on keeping these, then add a note at 00:09:761.
4. 01:32:513 (1) - End this spinner at 01:34:250.

1. No need to have AngelHoney in tags on this diff. Nothing critical though.

1. 00:49:444 (1) - Remove new combo from this note. Add it to 00:50:263 (3) instead, fits better if you ask me.
2. 01:09:128 (5) - Probably not necessary, but maybe put a new combo here? Looks better if you ask me.
3. 01:22:250 - 01:27:302 - I don't agree how combos are positioned here. Nothing wrong but I think you should change them to follow the music better. Like this:
   
   SPOILER

   01:22:881 (1) - Remove new combo.
   01:23:039 (2) - New combo.
   01:23:671 (2) - New combo.
   01:24:302 (3) - New combo.
   01:25:566 (2) - New combo.
   01:26:197 (3) - New combo.
   
   Also, remove new combos from all (1)s that are coming in between these.

1. 01:10:507 (1,x) - Don't think sliders like this are rankable since you can't hear them at all. You should up their volume so that they can be heard, or just swap to default soft hitsound for these. This applies to all sliders like this from this point onward.

1. You have an obsolete .osb file in your folder (William Tell Overture - W.T. Orchestra (Louis Cyphre).osb), remove it.
2. I don't like how normal-hitclap sounds because for me it's making the stuff sound weird. Having a default hitnormal heard and this one on top of it makes it double volume and slightly phased.

what is the applause.mp3 for? it seems you want to add it to the end of the map but i didn't see that?

01:10:507 (1) - according to your next spinners... extend this spinner by 1/1 and start next spinner 1/2 later would be better?

...spacing lol... only thing i could mention for this diff is you probably need a new combo mod = =|||

lolcubes wrote:

[Tonoicutzu]:

1. No need to have Tonoicutzu in tags on this diff. Nothing critical though.
2. 00:06:386 (1) - Completely silent hitsounds are unrankable I think. Having 5% volume doesn't really justify it since it's still not hearable. However, if I'm wrong in this case, you should do the same to 00:00:386 (1). √
3. 00:09:636 (4,5) - Instead of these I think you should use a short repeating slider just like you did a few notes before. If you are really keen on keeping these, then add a note at 00:09:761.√
4. 01:32:513 (1) - End this spinner at 01:34:250.√

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Tonoicutzu]
01:24:934 (1) - don't think start notes 1/2 after spinner is a nice idea in a ...Normal? or well, even for Hard, the BPM is already high enough here.√

lolcubes wrote:

[Kurai]:

1. 00:49:444 (1) - Remove new combo from this note. Add it to 00:50:263 (3) instead, fits better if you ask me. New combo added on (3), but I keep the one onto 00:49:444 (1)
2. 01:09:128 (5) - Probably not necessary, but maybe put a new combo here? Looks better if you ask me. Yeah
3. 01:22:250 - 01:27:302 - I don't agree how combos are positioned here. Nothing wrong but I think you should change them to follow the music better. Like this: ok
   
   SPOILER

   01:22:881 (1) - Remove new combo.
   01:23:039 (2) - New combo.
   01:23:671 (2) - New combo.
   01:24:302 (3) - New combo.
   01:25:566 (2) - New combo.
   01:26:197 (3) - New combo.
   
   Also, remove new combos from all (1)s that are coming in between these.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Kurai]
00:36:249 (3) - remove? you don't have such a beat for similar parts. Yeah
00:46:145 (2) - repeat and move to the symmetry place of (1)? lower the hitsound volume for the slider's end if needed. Symmetry done
hell spinners...

akrolsmir wrote:

Kurai:
01:30:618 (4) - This was hidden by/ confused with the aftereffects of the spinner. It's not a problem imo

all offsets +23ms

Krisom wrote:

HEY GUYS I LOVE DOING RECHECKS AND FILLIN' PENDING WITH BUBBLES, HELLO MOM.
On a side note, those double red lines might be unnecesary, though if Lyby says they're fine I dunno, well, I suppose the next BAt who checks this will decide.
Btw, charts material, good work.

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[Tonoicutzu]
00:29:327 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for a Normal.Fixed
01:27:460 (1) - ^Fixed

Champion is just plain stupid difficult for no reason on ctb

Louis Cyphre wrote:

no reason

Wrong.

Shiirn wrote:

Champion is just plain stupid difficult for no reason on ctb, but that's kind of expected from Louis, so congrats.

Why is something plain stupid if it's difficult?

my dream is to flasligt champion. maybe with hidden.

Blue Dragon wrote:

flashlight may be hard but not dt

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Something for Cookiezi (DT) and may be for Bikko (FL).