nice map!!

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>a0178042

Thank you for star~!!

faito!

hoshi~

>Reflain,-HowLiNg

Thank you for star~!!

star

☆彡

Revived~
Oh yeah minimum message limit

Good luck on the map

James2250 wrote:

Revived~ Oh yeah minimum message limit

Good luck on the map

Thank you~><

what an awesome map
have a star





charstofulfillmincharlimit

Can make a taiko diff?

Verdisphena wrote:

Can make a taiko diff?

sorry..orz..

I do not need Taiko diff

Hinacle wrote:

Verdisphena wrote:

Can make a taiko diff?

sorry..orz..

I do not need Taiko diff

Not problem :3

This is a fun map/song and gets a star from me However, one thing for you to consider is changing the circle colors. I don't think you should make them all blue or green, that blends in with the background a lot D: My opinion is that you should choose warm colors, orange yellow etc., since the color scheme of this is cool. It will stand out a lot more and it will still look nice. Hope this helped a little Get this ranked please! xD

STAR★~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
i love this map ><

sorry fot the delay @.@ I hope you like it =w=

moemoemoemoemoemoeI'maloliconmoemoemoe

Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Octave Rain (Short ver.) (Hinacle) [Vicho].osu

Vicho-kun wrote:

sorry fot the delay @.@ I hope you like it =w=

moemoemoemoemoemoeI'maloliconmoemoemoe

Thank you guest~!!>w<b

very cute diff @ w @

[General]
01:18:186 - kiai time in here?
01:58:801 - finish at this time (New rule.so you really need change those:( )
letterbox during breaks need remove ((F4 → storybroad's tag

[Easy]
All looks good

[Vicho]
00:22:339 (5) - touch the HP bar. You need fix it:3
00:59:493 (4) - ^

[Insans]
01:39:878 - finish
01:40:339 (3) - ^
01:41:032 - ^

really pretty map~star

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
01:18:186 - kiai time in here?
01:58:801 - finish at this time (New rule.so you really need change those:( )
letterbox during breaks need remove ((F4 → storybroad's tag

[Easy]
All looks good

[Vicho]
00:22:339 (5) - touch the HP bar. You need fix it:3
00:59:493 (4) - ^

[Insans]
01:39:878 - finish
01:40:339 (3) - ^
01:41:032 - ^

really pretty map~star

ALL Fixed~!!

Thank you mod~!!>w</

Easy:
Good job.

Normal:
01:34:801 (5) - Add New combo?
It's ok too >w<

Vicho:
00:35:724 (5) - Add nc
00:35:493 (4,1) - Put first the slider and then the beat, invert the order of them. And new combo on the slider.
00:37:801 (1) - Remove new combo
00:38:032 (1) - Add new combo

I really like it.

Insane:
00:16:339 (6) - New combo?
01:05:032 (5) - Last waypoint 1 grid up. (x:128 y:328)
01:12:416 (7) - ^ (x:368 y:320)

Okay, That's all I found >w< I hope It will be ranked soon ~
Good luck! *-*

Chewin wrote:

Easy:
Good job.

Normal:
01:34:801 (5) - Add New combo?
It's ok too >w<

Vicho:
00:35:724 (5) - Add nc
00:35:493 (4,1) - Put first the slider and then the beat, invert the order of them. And new combo on the slider.
00:37:801 (1) - Remove new combo
00:38:032 (1) - Add new combo

I really like it.

Insane:
00:16:339 (6) - New combo?
01:05:032 (5) - Last waypoint 1 grid up. (x:128 y:328)
01:12:416 (7) - ^ (x:368 y:320)

Okay, That's all I found >w< I hope It will be ranked soon ~
Good luck! *-*

Thank you mod~!!

Konnichiwa

General
* Kiai should end at 01:47:724
* Make sure all inherited sections is snapped to the ticks

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal
01:07:109 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:43:339 (x) - Add note here (very very minor suggestion)

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Vicho
* AR +1?
* Sorry for nitpicky, Vicho. I'm really sorry orz

00:22:339 (5) - This object is touch the HP Bar, and this problem was included in new Guidelines
00:47:493 (5) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar
00:59:493 (4) - Same issue as 00:22:339 (5)
01:03:416 (1) - Same issue as 00:47:493 (5)
01:33:416 (4) - Same issue as 00:22:339 (5)
01:50:032 (2) - Forgot to put clap here?
01:50:263 (3) - Remove clap at head slider?

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Insane
00:20:724 (9) - New combo?
01:32:493 (1) - Remove new combo?

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Gomennasai Hina-chan

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa

General
* Kiai should end at 01:47:724
* Make sure all inherited sections is snapped to the ticks

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal
01:07:109 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:43:339 (x) - Add note here (very very minor suggestion)

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Vicho
* AR +1?
* Sorry for nitpicky, Vicho. I'm really sorry orz

00:22:339 (5) - This object is touch the HP Bar, and this problem was included in new Guidelines
00:47:493 (5) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar
00:59:493 (4) - Same issue as 00:22:339 (5)
01:03:416 (1) - Same issue as 00:47:493 (5)
01:33:416 (4) - Same issue as 00:22:339 (5)
01:50:032 (2) - Forgot to put clap here?
01:50:263 (3) - Remove clap at head slider?

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Insane
00:20:724 (9) - New combo?
01:32:493 (1) - Remove new combo?

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Gomennasai Hina-chan

Thank you mod~!!

ello~ ^^

Easy and Normal
both look fine!~!!!

Vicho
00:17:262 (5) - add a New Combo?
00:32:955 (5) - ^
00:35:724 (5) - ^
01:01:801 (5) - ^
01:06:186 (6) - ^
01:08:724 (5) - ^
01:12:416 (6) - ^
01:16:109 (5) - ^

Insane
00:35:493 (5) - add a New Combo?
00:39:416 (7) - ^
00:43:570 (7) - ^
01:05:032 (5) - ^
01:14:262 (5) - ^
01:23:724 (3) - ^

----
Nice MapSet!
shoot a star for you

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

ello~ ^^

Easy and Normal
both look fine!~!!!

Vicho
00:17:262 (5) - add a New Combo?
00:32:955 (5) - ^
00:35:724 (5) - ^
01:01:801 (5) - ^
01:06:186 (6) - ^
01:08:724 (5) - ^
01:12:416 (6) - ^
01:16:109 (5) - ^

Insane
00:35:493 (5) - add a New Combo?
00:39:416 (7) - ^
00:43:570 (7) - ^
01:05:032 (5) - ^
01:14:262 (5) - ^
01:23:724 (3) - ^

----
Nice MapSet!
shoot a star for you

Thank you mod~!!

Some small suggestions, you don't have to follow them except for the mod on Insane. But you were just careless.

Easy is fine

Normal: Hmm, Box mapping? Very straight-forward, linear/horizontal. Nothing off here.

Vicho:

- 00:32:493 - Too close to the HP bar maybe. Few other notes that might be too high up.

- 00:48:186 - Could be stacked at the previous (4).

Insane:

- 01:02:262 - Lol.
Not worth it so don't kudosu. lol

Better to give to a MAT/BAT if she/he has things to point out.

Faust wrote:

Some small suggestions, you don't have to follow them except for the mod on Insane. But you were just careless.

Easy is fine

Normal: Hmm, Box mapping? Very straight-forward, linear/horizontal. Nothing off here.

Vicho:

- 00:32:493 - Too close to the HP bar maybe. Few other notes that might be too high up.

- 00:48:186 - Could be stacked at the previous (4).

Insane:

- 01:02:262 - Lol.

Not worth it so don't kudosu.

Better to give to a MAT/BAT if she/he has things to point out.

Thank you mod~></

moe~

Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Octave Rain (Short ver.) (Hinacle) [Vicho].osu

this is a good song

/?

Hello ~

General:
- Vicho's difficulty name seems inconsistent the way it is now, change it to Vicho's Hard ? I think is better that way
- Vicho's difficulty colors are different from the ones in the other difficulties, I think it would be better to keep them the same for consistency
- I'm worried about the combo colors, some might blend with the video (especially combo 3)

Easy:
- 00:08:032 >> I suggest adding a whistle at the start
- 00:15:416 >> ^
- 00:19:109 >> Add a finish
- 00:28:339 >> ^
- 00:32:032 >> ^
- Nice difficulty, just some suggestions about hitsounds

Normal:
- 00:20:955 >> Maybe add a new combo here ?
- 01:10:801 >> Try to make the curve a bit smoother
- 01:14:032 >> Could you move it to x:376 y:284 ? It looks better
- 01:20:032 (3,4) >> Delete (4), add a repeat to (3) then add a note at 01:21:416 ? Sounds better
- 01:44:032 >> Add a finish ?
- 01:53:262 (5,6) >> Exchange their places (in timeline) ?
- Very easy for a normal but it does the job just right

Vicho;
- 00:17:262 >> Maybe add a new combo ?
- 00:18:878 >> New combo then remove new combo on the next note
- 00:26:493 >> New combo and remove new combo on the next note
- 00:27:416 >> New combo
- 00:32:955 >> New combo ? Is fine if you leave it like how it is now too
- 00:35:724 >> New combo
- 00:37:801 >> Remove new combo then add new combo to the next slider
- 00:39:416 >> New combo then remove new combo at 00:40:570 and finally add a new combo at 00:41:493
- 01:10:570 >> I think you could delete this note, it isn't following anything
- 01:12:416 >> New combo ?
- 01:16:339 >> ^
- 01:18:186 >> I strongly recommend to start the kiai time with a note or slider on the spot, it gives a more emphasizing feeling and also it is kinda weird to see the kiai time starting while you are holding a slider
- 01:33:416 >> It touches the hp bar by a little
- 01:47:724 >> New combo then remove new combo on the next note
- 01:54:416 (1,3) >> Add finish to (1) and remove it from (3) ?
- Very nice as always Vicho, most combo mod is just plain suggestions

Insane;
- 00:54:186 >> I think you're overmapping a bit here, for me the real streamy part can start at 00:54:993
- 01:02:262 >> Add a finish ?
- 01:01:570 >> Here too, a bit of overmapping; for me the streamy part starts at 01:02:262
- 01:18:186 >> New combo then remove new combo on the next slider; this helps to emphasize the kiai time

* Quite nice

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello ~

General:
- Vicho's difficulty name seems inconsistent the way it is now, change it to Vicho's Hard ? I think is better that way
- Vicho's difficulty colors are different from the ones in the other difficulties, I think it would be better to keep them the same for consistency
- I'm worried about the combo colors, some might blend with the video (especially combo 3)All Fixed!!

Easy:
- 00:08:032 >> I suggest adding a whistle at the start
- 00:15:416 >> ^
- 00:19:109 >> Add a finish
- 00:28:339 >> ^
- 00:32:032 >> ^
- Nice difficulty, just some suggestions about hitsounds
All Fixed!!

Normal:
- 00:20:955 >> Maybe add a new combo here ?
- 01:10:801 >> Try to make the curve a bit smoother
- 01:14:032 >> Could you move it to x:376 y:284 ? It looks better
- 01:20:032 (3,4) >> Delete (4), add a repeat to (3) then add a note at 01:21:416 ? Sounds better
- 01:44:032 >> Add a finish ?
- 01:53:262 (5,6) >> Exchange their places (in timeline) ?
- Very easy for a normal but it does the job just right
almost
Vicho;
- 00:17:262 >> Maybe add a new combo ?
- 00:18:878 >> New combo then remove new combo on the next note
- 00:26:493 >> New combo and remove new combo on the next note
- 00:27:416 >> New combo
- 00:32:955 >> New combo ? Is fine if you leave it like how it is now too
- 00:35:724 >> New combo
- 00:37:801 >> Remove new combo then add new combo to the next slider
- 00:39:416 >> New combo then remove new combo at 00:40:570 and finally add a new combo at 00:41:493
- 01:10:570 >> I think you could delete this note, it isn't following anything
- 01:12:416 >> New combo ?
- 01:16:339 >> ^
- 01:18:186 >> I strongly recommend to start the kiai time with a note or slider on the spot, it gives a more emphasizing feeling and also it is kinda weird to see the kiai time starting while you are holding a slider
- 01:33:416 >> It touches the hp bar by a little
- 01:47:724 >> New combo then remove new combo on the next note
- 01:54:416 (1,3) >> Add finish to (1) and remove it from (3) ?
- Very nice as always Vicho, most combo mod is just plain suggestions
Aalmost Fixed!!



Insane;
- 00:54:186 >> I think you're overmapping a bit here, for me the real streamy part can start at 00:54:993
- 01:02:262 >> Add a finish ?sorry,no change
- 01:01:570 >> Here too, a bit of overmapping; for me the streamy part starts at 01:02:262
- 01:18:186 >> New combo then remove new combo on the next slider; this helps to emphasize the kiai time

* Quite nice

Thank you mod~!!>w</

Everything seems good now
Bubbled
Edit: Bubble repair!

lovhin456 wrote:

Everything seems good now
Bubbled
Edit: Bubble repair!

Thank you recheck and bubble~></

[Normal]

01:07:109 (3) - New combo.

[Vicho's Hard]

Approach Rate +1.

Fix both things and I'll rank.

Incoming.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

01:07:109 (3) - New combo.

[Vicho's Hard]

Approach Rate +1.

Fix both things and I'll rank.

Thank you mod~!!

Fixed!!

Yay! Good job.

Ranked~