1. Timing looks good
2. In your SB, "Like im outte control" is spelt wrong. It should be "Like im outta control"

Doomsday93 wrote:

1. In your SB, "Like im outte control" is spelt wrong. It should be "Like im outta control" It's original lyric lol, though I don't know why it speel like this, but I prefer to follow the original, I would double check that, thanks

Breeze wrote:

Doomsday93 wrote:

1. In your SB, "Like im outte control" is spelt wrong. It should be "Like im outta control" It's original lyric lol, though I don't know why it speel like this, but I prefer to follow the original, I would double check that, thanks

Doomsday93 wrote:

All of the pages I found spelt it "outta". I guess the place you found the lyrics from spelt it wrong.

Also, shouldn't the Artist be Elva Hsiao in that case?

Matma Rex wrote:

Nice difficulty spread you got there, N H I I I. Easy would be appreciated, but meh, it's fine.

[Easy]
00:11:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is messed up due to stacking (try it in test mode). Lower stakc leniency (F4 -> Advanced) by two ticks. I feel it's fine
02:24:730 (2) - it's a bit confusing with these repeats. I suggest to make it 2x longer with 1 repeat.
02:26:508 (2) - ^ Fixed

[Hard]
01:14:952 (1,2,3) - (minor) spacing/style.
01:16:730 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:18:730 (2,3,4) - surprise triplets D: use slider with repeat instead, like earlier?
01:31:175 (2,3,4) - ^
01:33:397 (4,5,6) - ^ I guess it's fine
01:34:064 (7,8,1,2,3) - (minor) spacing/style.) Fixed

Breeze wrote:

Matma Rex wrote:

[Easy]
00:11:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is messed up due to stacking (try it in test mode). Lower stakc leniency (F4 -> Advanced) by two ticks. I feel it's fine

Matma Rex wrote:

Nice difficulty spread you got there, N H I I I. Easy would be appreciated, but meh, it's fine.

[Easy]
00:11:397 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern is messed up due to stacking (try it in test mode). Lower stakc leniency (F4 -> Advanced) by two ticks.
02:24:730 (2) - it's a bit confusing with these repeats. I suggest to make it 2x longer with 1 repeat.
02:26:508 (2) - ^

[Hard]
01:14:952 (1,2,3) - (minor) spacing/style.
01:16:730 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:730 (2,3,4) - surprise triplets D: use slider with repeat instead, like earlier?
01:31:175 (2,3,4) - ^
01:33:397 (4,5,6) - ^
01:34:064 (7,8,1,2,3) - (minor) spacing/style.

[Gaya]
yaya-spacing, eh.
00:41:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - doesn't fit the music IMO.
00:56:064 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:42:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:56:508 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

[LKs]
00:24:064 (4,5) - spacing also ugly.
01:57:619 (5), 02:01:175 (5) - whistles hurt my ears.

[AngelHoney]
01:28:286 (5,6,7) - shouldn't these be stakced with (1,2,3)?

Hikato wrote:

[General]
Nice skin.
I suggest a seizure warning; While it's only brief the sb still flashes and could cause a problem.

[/color]
[Timing]
Offset: 5619 (Changing to this doesn't seem to require a resnap but I recommend doing it anyway.) I think it's fine

[Normal]
00:08:286 (1) - Snap the start to the 1/1 rather than the 1/4. Doesn't make much difference though.
No problems. Done

[Hard]
No problems.

[Gaya]
The spacing is a bit confusing but it played well to me so no complaints.
Maybe map to the same length as the other diffs though?

[LKs]
The double repeat sliders after the rather large break feel strange since all the repeats before the break are single.
Also the jumps from slider to 0.5 slider feel strange in play (ex. 01:43:396 (5,6)) but are playable.

[AngelHoney]
The slowed sliders are unexpected on first play, my only complaint since those are the only things that seemed to mess me up in play.

No major problems with the maps.

Gaya and AngelHoney <3

tutuhaha wrote:

LKs
HP7 你下面说我要难度调低 hp就不用调高了吧 OD可以-1
00:10:952 - ...前面这些绿线干什么用的.....没用的话去掉 音量线
00:24:285 - 不建议0.5X
00:35:841 - 00:37:396 一定要加1/4circle的话就加音效,太小声听不出来,后面有一段也一样 为啥要听出来?
这是我见过LKs做的最正常的一张图了0 0...... 不是吧..
节奏方面没问题,其实我是个手残渣渣没亲自动手打就不说什么关于排版的了 排版额

HP OD AP太小了要不就把LKs那个难度的调低要么就这个难度调高....我觉得LKs调低比较好0 0.... HP保持 OD-1 AR动不动没关系 AH比我的难的不是一点

tutuhaha wrote:

现在是负资产,我会努力的TAT
Normal
HP3 OD3 AP4吧....这才算normal啊.. k

00:07:396 - slider在这里结束怎样？然后把Spinner拉到00:07619 spinner是对应"白"字的长音
00:10:952 - 这个绿线改成50%吧 音量都加了10%
00:14:507 - 既然前面这段全是circle的话，试试吧接下来这段改成slider吧，长的短的都行，节奏一样容易使人厌倦 改slider节奏也一样啊:/
00:17:841 - 绿线=60%，太小声了
00:25:174 - 这段和00:14:507一样的理由，改改咯O(∩_∩)O
00:28:507 - 60%
00:34:953 - 这个拉条拉到这里，声音改成S50%后加finish 这歌不适合加finish呢
00:35:396 - +circle+clap
00:42:507 - 拉条拉到这里结束然后+clap,原来那个多了一半节拍听着不舒服 k
00:49:619 - +clap+circle spinner后接note对于新手不好掌握,所以特意留了些时间
00:59:841 - ..一摸一样..还同一边?.....不好吧.... 有改变一些排法
后面的感觉都和前面说的差不多
0 0这张是老图翻出来做的是把,可能要翻修很多..
这张图你可能在当时把节奏分的太清晰了,像是一块一块的地区规规矩矩的颜色
混杂起来吧,要不玩这个趣味性太低了

Hard
0 0这个就要开始各种加circle各种减circle了
以下只是建议,因为你的想法可能和我不一样,如果你有自己的想法就更好了
HP5 OD5 AP6
00:13:841 - +circle k
00:14:507 - 改成拉条拉到00:14:952下个红线加circle下个白线加拉条结束在下个红线然后重复一下就到了下个白线然后红线+circle
下个白线拉条到下个白线终止 其实我这里就是刚开始节奏慢点,所以只是敲鼓点
00:18:507 - 0 0不建议这里用箭头重复还是直接拉到下个白线吧
00:20:285 - ^ 感觉是3连音
00:28:285 - 0 0这个时间的前面一段随便跳一半改下节奏,随你咯前一半还是后一半 没懂什么意思
00:32:952 - 同00:18:507,假如要改的话+个circle在00:33:396
00:35:841 - 00:43:396 空的太有节奏了OTL,挑一些空的地方+circle吧... 你们先现在都喜欢塞满note么:/ 慢慢点不也挺欢乐么,我都做休闲图的XD
然后后面的问题都和上面重复了
哦然后你一定要在这个后面加3连circle的话前面也最好加点后面突然出现1/4的3连circle太突然了
01:43:396 - 01:48:730 ///这个重叠真难看...真的 哈哈,以前实在不知道能怎么摆了,好吧,换用了现在都喜欢用的五角排法
02:35:841 - ....要叠就叠好点撒....还露个尾巴,,,,后面那个也一样 完全stack的话玩的时候很难看,这样玩的时候刚好
02:45:619 - ....太难看了...换个吧
02:50:952 - ////同上 咦,这个我觉得还好啊

音效太低了,,,提高点吧,,,,,加油咯

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

[Normal]
01:43:396 (1,1) - what? I think this is unrankable oops, fixed

[Hard]
01:34:508 (1) - 1 gird left and 1grid down [gird snap : 3] fixed

12nd map, osu need more Chinese song map

48,304,117619,2,0,B|-1:233|32:160,1,140,0|8
56,120,118286,2,0,B|112:8|288:8|344:120,1,350

SPOILER

akrolsmir wrote:

[Difficulty: Normal]
Snapping:
00:54:509 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:55:398 (9) - Unsnapped circle. oops, fixed

Consider adding the kiai time to all difficulties, and make sure to take care of those two unsnapped notes in Normal. I don't like KIAI, sorry

[General]
Given the song and the fact that you start a lot of new combos on short white ticks rather than long ones, I think that though the timing is fine, the offset should be shifted to 5619 so that the metronome starts with the downbeat. change to 285

[Normal]
The combos are really long for a Normal diff, I would have them show up every 2 measures instead of every 4.
(for example, NC on 00:32:286 (5) and 00:39:397 (5).) I like it (ﾟ´Д｀ﾟ)

00:25:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Either move (1,2) or (5,6) left 1 grid, so that the spacing here is consistent fixed
00:57:175 (3) - Adjust so that it forms a more circular shape with (4)? fixed someway
01:57:619 (3) - Same as above. Try this:

48,304,117619,2,0,B|-1:233|32:160,1,140,0|8
56,120,118286,2,0,B|112:8|288:8|344:120,1,350

SPOILER

02:12:730 (3) - Looks a bit sharp, try making with 4 nodes instead of 3 fixed someway
02:14:508 (3) - ^ ^
02:32:286 (6,7) - Make these two exact copies of each other (they're not right now, flip one over the y-axis to check) done
02:50:064 (1,3,5) - ^ These 3 I looked fine

[Hard]
00:11:397 (1,2) - Move these two right 1 grid so that spacing is consistent (similar to in Normal)
00:14:508 (1) - Move right 1 grid for the same reason all fixed
01:22:730 (4,5) - Spaced too close fixed
02:08:286 (1,2,1,2) - Instead of linear sliders here, how about something more interesting? A lot of the other sliders in this difficulty look really cool. I want to keep this, sorry
02:37:397 (5) - You can make this symmetric by going into grid level 3, and moving the 2nd and 4th nodes 1 grid right. (then copy for 02:40:953 (5)) emm, it looked fine enough for me

I thought the SB in the beginning was pretty cool, and the patterns and sliders you used were designed pretty well. The guest difficulties had their own different feels, but I could also seem some aspects that were constant throughout all the diffs. Starred! thanks

(Also, I was wondering, Breeze, could you recheck my map at some point? Thanks a lot!)

akrolsmir wrote:

[LKs]
00:21:841 (2,4,6,2,4) - Drag down 1 or 2 grids so that the spacing is consistent? but if that, the spacing between white colors will become inconsistent
00:56:286 (1,2,3,4) - IMO this would look cooler if (4) was flipped over the x-axis nah, i was concentrating on y-axis as you have seen
01:56:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is close, but isn't exactly a perfect pentagon. I'd suggest taking (2), and using copies rotated at 72 degrees for the others so that the spacing and shape is perfect. Same for the one right after. ok

qihanzhang wrote:

all be suggestions~
lks
00:35:837 (2) - 拆成两个circle，“不”音短 但circle没有流动感
00:36:726 (1) - ^
00:47:170 (4) - 提前半拍结束再在原来的结尾放circle 想法不错 有设计
00:48:281 (6) - 去掉，spinner在这里开始、 确实有点短 但也不用去掉6 向前一点
01:04:726 - 加个circle 为啥
01:19:615 (5) - 去掉 那间距怎么弄
01:21:393 (6) - ^

LKs wrote:

01:04:726 - 加个circle 为啥在原来的结尾处加finish会很奇怪，新的这个就自然点（当然是个人感觉）
01:19:615 (5) - 去掉 那间距怎么弄01:19:170 (3,4)重合试一下
01:21:393 (6) - ^

我都是随便选一个难度mod的...这是我能pass的最高难度

spboxer3 wrote:

Hi~微風
給點建議~~

[整體]
不加個kiai?
02:08:281 - 02:29:170 - 我整個很有感覺好想做閃阿lol((slap 个人感觉KIAI太瞎眼

[Normal]
星數超過3星了啦>_< 尝试再降低难度...
01:00:726 (3,4) - 這兩個用對秤過去後用ctrl + R 翻過去會比較好看 实际上就是翻过去的啊...
01:04:281 - Break 從這裡開始? k

[Hard]
01:42:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - 形狀有些跑掉了 fixed
01:04:281 - 同Normal k

Mok wrote:

Map is already fine to me, so there's nothing to add more. :3

spboxer3 wrote:

[LKs >w<]
00:23:393 (1,2,3,4,5) - (5)的間距好像有些跑掉 这是一个渐大的间距..不够明显? 改了下
01:57:615 (5) - 可以加幾條綠線讓聲音漸遠嗎 現在這樣給人感覺有些奇怪呢 好
02:01:170 (5) - ^

xierbaliti wrote:

-lks-
01:34:281 - 在这+个circle叠在01:34:504 (1)上怎么样? ok

xierbaliti wrote:

-General-
既然没有丫大哥的diff了那么把他从tag里移除吧. done

-Normal-
为了符合新规定ODHP-1? k
00:34:059 (9) - nazi spacing lol Isn't it right?

nice diff :3

-Hard-
02:04:726 - break 应该从这开始吧? 从你前面那个break的设置来看应该是需要 k