Magical Pokie wrote:

wow..wip？

CMP wrote:

Can I make "Insane(CMP's Insane)" difficulty?



Anyway

good song


--------------my pending map-------------


http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31388

Zelos wrote:

Ahhh yay an edited down version. 4 minutes would make my hands hurt.

Folder:
All clean!

General:
Use the same tickrate for all difficulties please.
Rename Dark Extreme to something else. "Dark" doesn't really fit such an upbeat song imo.What is with those kiai times, why not just have a consistent one that starts at the chorus. If it isn't a big problem I wanna keep it; It's kinda decoration for climaxes

Easy: =>Normal
Why didn't you use the epic custom hitsounds in this diff D:?
00:12:558 (1) - why does this start on a 1/4th? start it on the next white tick please.
00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I know its only 138 BPM but dont you think these half notes are a bit much for an Easy?
Changed difficulty name to Normal (oh I see haha5957 is lame..!?!?)

00:42:232 (1) - remove new combo here.
01:12:666 (1,2,3) - you dont think the timing differences with the same spaces will confuse the easy players? It might, might not. just a suggestion.
01:49:189 (2) - end this on the next white tick. sounds very wierd ending on a 1/4th.
01:50:058 (3) - this shouldnt be on 1/3rd. it should hit the timing ticks in the following order WHITE BLUE RED This was the reason why i updated during ur mod sorry O.O
Like this!
01:50:928 (4) - again end this on the white tick.
02:03:971 (1,2,3) - stack the endings of these sliders.
02:31:797 (1,2,3,4) - again I dunno but I think this just might be a bit much for an easy.
Map to the end. (or was that the update that you told me about when I was halfway done with this mod.) YES xD


Extreme:
00:56:579 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - having half of the notes hit the same spot over and over is kinda boring. why not switch it up?
01:09:623 (5,6) - this jump isnt really that pretty. it also does not play well imo.
01:55:710 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - having half of the notes hit the same spot over and over is kinda boring. why not switch it up?
This was much nicer than Easy:

Dark Extreme: => Someone's Watching you!

AR8 instead of AR9 please. AR9 is more meant for highspeed BPMs like 190 and above. it doesnt fit well in this situation.
00:10:166 (6) - new combo here please.
02:10:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - center this based on the Y-axis please. it would look nicer.
02:52:666 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - why not switch this up by like horrizontally flipping each new combo or something.
Im not sure what to say about this diff. There are kinda notes everywhere.
I shall star on completion of mods.

[spoilerbox]376,144,10710,6,0,B|296:64,1,115
376,144,11145,2,0,B|456:224,1,115,0|8
376,144,11579,2,0,B|456:64,1,115
376,144,12014,2,0,B|296:224,1,115,0|8
376,144,12449,2,0,B|376:24,1,115
376,144,12884,2,0,B|376:264,1,115,0|4[/spoilerbox]

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

IMO <- my opinion
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General

I can see you 2 bg is bad quality try find better picture
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Some Suggestions
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Normal

00:24:840 (1) - Grid 1 left and remove new combo?
00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This too play on hard i suggest use Stack this is better Gameplay IMO
01:19:623 (3,4) - Jump? i suggest you fix this spacing pleasse because normal can't be make jump don't ignore this
02:00:492 (2,3) - try stack this will be better IMO
02:02:231 (2,3) - ^

This is fine to play but some color combo is weird imo
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[Extreme]

00:13:645 (5,7) - I feeling this is overmapped you should remove this
00:58:753 (7,8) - incosiente spacing?
02:07:449 (1,2) - weird stack
02:09:188 (1,2) - ^
02:44:840 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - very very confuse tu play try better play

Some notes or slider is overmapped but ok this jsut extreme
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[CMP's insane]

00:10:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - confuse play I like better http://puu.sh/4PLw try this code->fixed

[spoilerbox]376,144,10710,6,0,B|296:64,1,115
376,144,11145,2,0,B|456:224,1,115,0|8
376,144,11579,2,0,B|456:64,1,115
376,144,12014,2,0,B|296:224,1,115,0|8
376,144,12449,2,0,B|376:24,1,115
376,144,12884,2,0,B|376:264,1,115,0|4[/spoilerbox]

00:14:623 (1) - i not like this try copy and past you did this 00:15:927 (1)->fixed
00:17:232 (1,2) - not fit this song and remove and add note here 00:17:884 don't forget fix spacing->fixed
00:20:710 (1) - this is fit song but to play not good remove? you can sayd no if you wish->fixed
00:49:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this too much jump and 00:52:232 (8) - http://puu.sh/4PML get another place->fixed
01:15:710 (1,1) - too much jump and too hard catch :/ try reduce jump->fixed
01:25:275 (1) - again try get another place->fixed
02:58:101 add green line and remove kiai time->fixed

this too much play this like kirby i guess
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[Somoene's Watching you]

this is fine but name diff lol wut
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That all i think
questions? call me and good luck

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

IMO <- my opinion
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
General

I can see you 2 bg is bad quality try find better picture it was very nice BG but it was like 3240x4680 size, so i did reducing on windows paint and this happened... can't get better once ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Some Suggestions
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Normal

00:24:840 (1) - Grid 1 left and remove new combo?
00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This too play on hard i suggest use Stack this is better Gameplay IMO
01:19:623 (3,4) - Jump? i suggest you fix this spacing pleasse because normal can't be make jump don't ignore this
02:00:492 (2,3) - try stack this will be better IMO
02:02:231 (2,3) - ^This is fine to play but some color combo is weird imo

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[Extreme]

00:13:645 (5,7) - I feeling this is overmapped you should remove this
00:58:753 (7,8) - incosiente spacing?
02:07:449 (1,2) - weird stack
02:09:188 (1,2) - ^
02:44:840 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - very very confuse tu play try better play I understand it is confusing but i don't want people just FC the Extreme difficulty on first try. please excuse this xD

Some notes or slider is overmapped but ok this jsut extreme
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[CMP's insane]

00:10:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - confuse play I like better http://puu.sh/4PLw try this code

[spoilerbox]376,144,10710,6,0,B|296:64,1,115
376,144,11145,2,0,B|456:224,1,115,0|8
376,144,11579,2,0,B|456:64,1,115
376,144,12014,2,0,B|296:224,1,115,0|8
376,144,12449,2,0,B|376:24,1,115
376,144,12884,2,0,B|376:264,1,115,0|4[/spoilerbox]

00:14:623 (1) - i not like this try copy and past you did this 00:15:927 (1)
00:17:232 (1,2) - not fit this song and remove and add note here 00:17:884 don't forget fix spacing
00:20:710 (1) - this is fit song but to play not good remove? you can sayd no if you wish
00:49:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this too much jump and 00:52:232 (8) - http://puu.sh/4PML get another place
01:15:710 (1,1) - too much jump and too hard catch :/ try reduce jump
01:25:275 (1) - again try get another place
02:58:101 add green line and remove kiai time

this too much play this like kirby i guess
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Somoene's Watching you]

this is fine but name diff lol wut
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That all i think
questions? call me and good luck

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-this BG has bad quality, perhaps change it? same as to Pereria
-I think you'll need a [Hard] for sure... also you have 3 insanes here which is not rankable, so perhaps you could remove one of them?
I'll try to make Extreme more easier or remove Someone's Watching You4
-There are a lot of Kiai toggles, I think you should remove most of them: 00:19:623, 02:05:710, 02:31:797, 02:33:536, 02:45:710, 02:47:449 If this is not really needed I wanna keep it

Normal:

00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - stream is a bit too much for the easiest diff, perhaps reduce it?
00:38:319 (2) - Too far from (1)
01:14:406 (4,5,6,7,1) - seems a bit too hard for the easiest diff
01:20:058 (4) - Too far from (3)
02:47:449 (1,2,3) - too far apart it's just x1.2 spacing rather than x1.0, i think it is excusable since it's not that hard, and this is Normal instead of Easy...

Extreme:

00:13:971 (8) - too close to (7)
00:31:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern plays weird o.o perhaps change it?
02:44:840 (4,5,6,7,8) - confusing
I wanna keep those :$ and yet i admit 02:44:840 confusing (reason at last post) but yeah O.O..

CMP's Insane:

-A few things should probably be changed... the slider velocity is really fast, there are a lot of jumps that don't play nicely (or are just too far), and there are a lot of patterns involving multiple repeating 1/4 sliders that don't play that well, especially with the high slider velocity T_T that said, I can find some good ideas in this map, but IMO you should probably change these things
-end the last Kiai time somewhere...though I think it might be better if you changed your kiai time to match the other diffs

00:24:406 (1,2,3) - doesn't fit, perhaps try this http://puu.sh/4Q66
00:25:819 (6,7) - move (6) 1/4 later and move (7) 1/4 earlier
00:25:492 - add a note?
01:25:275 (1,2,3) - doesn't fit the song, perhaps try this? http://puu.sh/4Q4Y
01:26:362 - add a note?
02:24:406 (1,2,3) - doesn't seem to fit the music maybe this? http://puu.sh/4Q4E
02:25:492 - add a note?
02:39:079 (4,5) - move 1/4 earlier
02:54:406 (1) - remove NC

Someone's Watching you:

-capitalize "you"?

00:38:753 (3) - NC?
02:56:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - this looks odd and doesn't play nicely, perhaps change to a spinner or space it evenly? This is just to Follow the BG (You can see Mikoto shooting Railgun that way! xD....oh yeah.)


Nice start but I think a few things should probably be changed (mostly on CMP's Insane)

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-this BG has bad quality, perhaps change it?
-I think you'll need a [Hard] for sure... also you have 3 insanes here which is not rankable, so perhaps you could remove one of them?
-There are a lot of Kiai toggles, I think you should remove most of them: 00:19:623, 02:05:710, 02:31:797, 02:33:536, 02:45:710, 02:47:449

Normal:

00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - stream is a bit too much for the easiest diff, perhaps reduce it?
00:38:319 (2) - Too far from (1)
01:14:406 (4,5,6,7,1) - seems a bit too hard for the easiest diff
01:20:058 (4) - Too far from (3)
02:47:449 (1,2,3) - too far apart

Extreme:

00:13:971 (8) - too close to (7)
00:31:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern plays weird o.o perhaps change it?
02:44:840 (4,5,6,7,8) - confusing

CMP's Insane:

-A few things should probably be changed... the slider velocity is really fast, there are a lot of jumps that don't play nicely (or are just too far), and there are a lot of patterns involving multiple repeating 1/4 sliders that don't play that well, especially with the high slider velocity T_T that said, I can find some good ideas in this map, but IMO you should probably change these things
-end the last Kiai time somewhere...though I think it might be better if you changed your kiai time to match the other diffs

00:24:406 (1,2,3) - doesn't fit, perhaps try this http://puu.sh/4Q66->fixed
00:25:819 (6,7) - move (6) 1/4 later and move (7) 1/4 earlier
00:25:492 - add a note?->fixed
01:25:275 (1,2,3) - doesn't fit the song, perhaps try this? http://puu.sh/4Q4Y->fixed
01:26:362 - add a note?
02:24:406 (1,2,3) - doesn't seem to fit the music maybe this? http://puu.sh/4Q4E->fixed
02:25:492 - add a note?->fixed
02:39:079 (4,5) - move 1/4 earlier->fixed
02:54:406 (1) - remove NC->fixed

Someone's Watching you:

-capitalize "you"?

00:38:753 (3) - NC?
02:56:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - this looks odd and doesn't play nicely, perhaps change to a spinner or space it evenly?

Nice start but I think a few things should probably be changed (mostly on CMP's Insane)

Leyko wrote:

Hi!
ah, i LOVE this song~~ <3

general
mp3 must be 192kbps (new rules >__<)
hitsounds hurt my ears a little x.x'
make kiai standing from (00:14:406) 'till (00:31:797); (01:01:362) 'till (01:30:927);
(02:00:492) 'till (02:28:101); and (02:28:319) 'till the end.

normal
00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part may be confusing. replace them with spinner?
00:38:753 - add NC
00:40:492 - remove NC
00:42:232 - add NC
01:17:014 - ^
01:17:884 - remove NC

extreme
HP Drain +1 (max score gets too much high)
AR +1 (I don't wanna make it same with Someone's watching you =D
01:28:101 - add note? (doesnt fit i think)
01:29:188 - make this streme curvy and pretty~ (this is meant to be like this O.O
02:00:384 - add note?

CMP's Insane
Crazy diff o.O
HP Drain -1
No breaks?..
00:14:623 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - remade this part. it ruins the flow T.T

Someone's Watching You!
whats up with the diff's name xDD When Toaru Kagaku no railgun OVA start, this message appears for few seconds xD
otherwise it's very fun :3

Raging Bull wrote:

I don't see any other shortend song (ex: only my railgun) has short version on it O.O

I understand this is shortened but I think i shouldn't put short ver. cuz This is 3 mintues(which isn't really short) and
it already has TV Size...O.O

and thanks for accepting it even i broke the rule ;o;

Leyko wrote:

Hi!
ah, i LOVE this song~~ <3

general
mp3 must be 192kbps (new rules >__<)
hitsounds hurt my ears a little x.x'
make kiai standing from (00:14:406) 'till (00:31:797); (01:01:362) 'till (01:30:927);
(02:00:492) 'till (02:28:101); and (02:28:319) 'till the end.

normal
00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part may be confusing. replace them with spinner?
00:38:753 - add NC
00:40:492 - remove NC
00:42:232 - add NC
01:17:014 - ^
01:17:884 - remove NC

extreme
HP Drain +1
AR +1
01:28:101 - add note?
01:29:188 - make this streme curvy and pretty~
02:00:384 - add note?

CMP's Insane
Crazy diff o.O
HP Drain -1->fixed

No breaks?..
00:14:623 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - remade this part. it ruins the flow T.T

Someone's Watching You!
whats up with the diff's name xDD
otherwise it's very fun :3

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.

General:
Baddddddd difficulty spread. You need a better normal or easier hard.

Normal:
00:19:623 (3,4,1) - Yeah. I prefer you don't do kiai toggles. I don't mind 00:12:666 (1) - since it's a chorus but the other two doesnt seem necessary.
01:05:710 (2,3) - Space these. No need for jumps on lower diff. ;_;
01:08:319 (1) - Ahhh. Kiai toggle. Remove this
01:14:406 (4,5,6,7,1) - Unstack these. Beginners would most likely spam click instead of listening to the music
01:15:275 (1) - Yeah...Kiai toggle. Remove it.
01:20:492 (1) - >_> Remove the beginning and end kiai toggle.
01:29:188 (1) - Eh I guess you can keep it since it seems okay, though I would also remove it. This one is up to you.
02:05:710 (3,1) - ;_;
02:19:623 (1) - ;_;
02:31:797 (1,5,1) - Just sooooo many! This is totally ruining kiai mode.
02:45:710 (1,1) - Yep same thing.
02:48:156 (1) - Short spinner on an normal Just remove it I suppose and use a slider instead. Also. Remove kiai toggle ;_;
02:54:406 (2,3) - And space these. You made a jump on normal. I wouldn't usually point this out but this is the easiest diff so yeah. Space it properly. >_>

Oh dear. It states don't overuse it. So please don't.
Plays like easy tbh.

Extreme/Someone:
First off I'm not even going to mention kiai toggles anymore. Just check what I said on normal and remove those I mentioned.
Dunno how to mod this and your other insane. I could mod insanes but I don't know what would fit for what difficulty >_>
You also have 3 insanes right now which is rather unrankable. Make extreme easier please.

CMP:
00:07:014 (12,2) - Find a way to move 12 so it doesn't overlap with 2. It looks ugly.
00:07:666 (2) - Reverse select.
00:08:536 (1) - ^ seems to play better to me imo.
00:10:492 (6,1) - Tricky. Try this with 00:09:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6) instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/138652
00:14:623 (1) - Sounds ugly. Move this to 00:14:406 and change the timing section so your slider won't break.
00:15:927 (1) - Sounds ugly too. It doesn't really follow anything. Try this one instead

The combo starts at 00:14:406 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) -

01:42:232 (1,3) - Arcs could be nicer...I could help if you want me to.
01:44:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't think this really fits. You can hear the vocals really clearly. I don't think there are drums at that part yet
I suggest you map to vocals here since you also do it in the next combo.
02:58:101 (1) - End your spinner at 03:01:362 and end kiai here since it's the end of the song.

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

• ●You'd better to change a higher quality BG for "479303.jpg".
  ●I'm not sure but that'll be nice if you unify the KIAI time in all diffs ~ ><
  ●Remove your useless osb file.

• ●00:37:884 (1,2) - DS here is 1.23x , did you do that on purpose ? o.o I think it's unnecessary... @.@
  ●02:47:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too hard for beginners imo since this is the easiest diff in your mapset.

• ●Oh.. Hitsounds in this diff is too loud !! T_T PLZ LOWER THEM AT LEAST 20% I GUESS...
  ●00:05:710 (1,2) - Keeping 1.0x will be better.
  ●00:18:753 (5,6) - Change your pattern here. They are not following any vocals or rhythms.
  ●00:22:449 (4) - Down about 8 grids since it's really confused to change your DS suddenly.
  ●00:59:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest you to change pattern like this:
  SPOILER

  
  ●01:01:362 (1) - Resnap KIAI line.
  ●01:17:014 (1,2) - Confusing Spacing here.
  ●01:21:797 (4) - The same to 00:22:449 (4). Hard to read.
  ●01:30:927 (7) - Add a note here (Suggestion only). And your KIAI time should be endded here. Resnap your green line.
  ●01:58:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The same. See my suggestion above.
  ●02:34:840 (5) - You can stack this better on the end of the slider6.
  ●02:54:406 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - No. I want to say no because this pattern is really played badly for most players. Players will miss a note easily here and have to retry. And actually it's too hard for a hard as well.
  ●02:57:884 (x) - Add a green line to make KIAI ends here.

• ●00:31:362 (5,6,1) - Confusing DS here. o.o I point out this because I have missed here 2 times during playing before I start modding.
  ●02:01:362 (3,3) - Unstacked ? Since there is 0.7 stack leniency you don't need to stack them manually.. ._.
  Very hard in the last part xD

• ●Can't pass this diff but try to mod anyway ;_;
  ●00:50:492 (4) - Ctrl+R in my opinion..
  ●01:49:622 (4) - ^