01:14:584 (8,9) - make this a no-reverse 1/2 slider with 2 circles on blue and white tick or a 1/4 slider on blue tick. the 3/8 slider repeat makes no sense and the vocal ends on the sliderend which makes me sad :(
00:45:503 (6,7,8) - 7 doesnt need to be there, you can put a slider instead of the 2 circles on blue ticks
metadata stuff : https://calumbowen.bandcamp.com/track/free-money
background : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mrnipxEveG8
01:31:427 (1,1,2,3) - u followed a weird rhythm if u followed one at all. maybe this pattern would work out https://prnt.sc/Bi5d1oBh7iNB
01:31:205 (2,3,1) - this jump doesn't emphasise anything, get rid of circle 3, it has no purpose. this part is too calm for this kind of jump
01:08:302 (1) - why skip the loud sounds? i understand u follow the vocals but it's underwhelming. if you don't want to make more 1/4 slider jumps you can use sth like 01:09:192 (4) (here's an example https://prnt.sc/V-b-7-5EOc58 ). same goes for the 01:10:971 (4)
00:57:620 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - doing sth like this ( https://prnt.sc/cRMDxKSAMARm ) would emphasise the song cause the first 3 set of jumps (numbered in the photo 1-2 , 3-4 and 5-6) emphasise the 3 loud sounds and break the pattern by changing the way the jump goes because the song changes a bit
00:52:292 (1,2,1,2,3) - i understand what ur doing, i see 00:52:292 (1,2) is a pattern used through-out the map but maybe sth like my idea would play better? https://prnt.sc/IPXba4fwEsrB
00:43:412 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - a pure hexagon would look a bit more clean, maybe like this https://prnt.sc/8-L-6zVY3E8L and move it in such a way u make a triangle with the incoming burst
00:37:639 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i personally think this would play better https://prnt.sc/IPEZ26aZApMi
00:28:315 (1,2) - you can do sth like https://prnt.sc/zzhRwOov2v5p cause of 3/4 rhythm which might be confused with 1/2 rhythm and ctrl+g 00:27:427 (5) for better flow
03:26:105 (1,2) - make this a slider (available for 01:23:705 (2,3) too) 1/3 rhythm doesn't appear the song too often so peple would think it's a 1/4 or 1/2 jump
02:57:005 (2) - this section is brutal, maybe nerf the spacing and ctrl+g this slider ( maybe sth like this would work -> https://prnt.sc/DWSMljpweTJf ) (available for 00:53:405 (1,2,3) too)
02:54:905 (6,7,8,9) - make this a 1/8 repeat slider, it looks painful to play (https://prnt.sc/x5PI2rRROvPY) (it's a safe link if you have doubts)
02:39:905 (2) - ctrl+g this and stack 02:41:105 (1) with the sliderends of the previous 2 sliders ( 02:38:705 (1,2) )
02:31:355 (1) - nc this and you can even move 02:31:205 (1) to x85 y190 to emphasise the pattern
move 02:30:605 (4) - at x300 y364 and ctrl+g 02:30:755 (5) so it's consistent with 02:29:105 (1,2,3)
02:29:555 (3) - the tiny overlap with 02:28:505 (1) is infuriating, move 02:29:405 (2) at x459 y49 and 02:29:555 (3) at x373 y98 to look better
02:27:905 (1,1,1) - confusing spacing, if u wanna stay consistent make 02:28:505 (1) the same rhythm as 02:27:905 (1) (3/4 slider)
00:03:615 (2,3,4,5) - put this pattern as such the circle 5 is completely overlapping the slider from before
00:36:847 (5) - since for every "WOO!" there is in the song you have a curved slider, you can continue this thing on this slider too!
00:56:088 (1) - maybe make this a mirror'd ver of 00:54:549 (3) ? it would look more aesthetic
00:25:126 (1) - make this slider look different cause there is a voice unlike the rest of the pattern
00:40:879 (2,3) - spacing is slightly too big for the given part of the song? i think reducing it a bit will make it better, maybe like this? -> https://prnt.sc/1zfbjg6