01:54:688 (1,2) - i would make the quieter because the sound in the song is really quiet aswell and you can barely her the sound when playing
02:42:752 (1) - maybe this is to sudden, like there are instantly cross screen jumps and not such a nice buildup like 03:24:043 (1) -
05:00:600 (1,2,3,4) - you could remove these so the sound on 05:01:145 (1) - gets even more emphasized and the jump section fits a bit more in my opinion because at 05:01:145 (1) - the jumps get bigger and bigger because of the (guitar?) and at 05:00:600 (1) there is no (guitar?) or atleast that that noticeable
02:13:670 (10) - it kinda destroys the illusion in my opinion, maybe make this circle completely clean so you don't have a number atall if that's posible
00:01:275 (6) - it's nice that you always have this clap sound a bit more spaced away, feels nice to play
00:29:789 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - maybe do a cross pattern here and put 00:29:790 (5) - ontop of the slider 00:28:464 (2) -
00:38:079 (1) - for this part i would make a pattern too, for example the one you did in the beginning 00:02:270 (1,2,3,4) - because this part seems very random which doesn't fit into the map
00:32:112 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe do these perfect, like stars here because you later went with a square pattern and maybe here the triangle pattern would fit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10526641
00:25:811 (1,2,3) - rotate the slider by -1° and align these objects like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10526597
00:03:596 (2) - new combo here for better visuality (so you can better tell that it's a 1/3 stream
00:18:848 (3) - here aswell, put it after the sliderend of 00:18:185 (1) - so you have 00:18:185 (1,2,3) - in a straight line OR you could leave it like that and change 00:16:196 (1) - so that they look the same and are just mirrored
00:16:859 (3) - put this circle after the sliderend of 00:16:196 (1) - so you have 00:16:196 (1,2,3) - in one straight line
00:14:206 (1) - i would overlap these a bit so you go for a kinda hard to read, linear map https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10526481
00:17:522 (6) - new combo here aswell so you can better tell that there is a 1/4 gap instead of 1/2
00:07:243 (4) - new combo here so you can tell that the slider is slower than the 3 sliders before
00:06:249 (1,2,3) - make these sliders straight because i think you are going for a linear map (according to the beginning of the map, everything is more or less in a grid)
02:14:057 (1) - i really like the 1 2 jumps but tbh i would more say sharp angels represent the song better and even plays easier und just more fun to play with the song (like in the ranked 6* blade dance map) but personal opinion
01:38:559 (6) - remove this slider and this circle 01:38:881 (6) -
instead put a circle on 01:38:720 (6) - (the red tick) between the sliderend and the new slider (01:39:043 (1) - )
01:28:398 (2,3,1) - make these three together so that you see it better that it is 1/2 gaps (or like these three 01:26:301 (1,2,3) - )
01:14:068 (3) - i would make a new comob here so you can tell that the slider is different (.5 speed)