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01:29:537 (2,3,6) - < w >

01:45:303 - BRUDER!!!!! DA IST EINE NOTE ZU VIEL!!!""" MERK DIR; FÜR CLAP UND FINISHER 3 NOTEN UND FÜR DRUMS 2 NOTEN!!!! KANN DEN BESTEN PASSIEREN!!!

00:46:637 - DIGGA!!! EINE NOTE ZU VIEL ODER NICHT??? BITTE CHECK MAL AB!!!

00:14:637 (14637|6,14646|5,14655|4,14664|3,14674|2,14683|1,14692|0) - WOWWWWW!!!!! SUPER PATTERN!!!!!!!!

00:12:414 - MISSING NOTE FÜR CLAP!!!!! BITTE FIXEN!!!! ABER ZACKIG!!!!

00:05:748 - EINE NOTE ZU VIEL!!!!!!! BITTE FIXEN!!!!

00:51:909 - consider removing a note

00:53:250 (53250|0) - should be rearranged so there will be no minijack. Please keep it consistant with 00:48:331 (48331|2,48331|3,48480|1,48629|3,48629|0,48778|2) - and 00:50:716 (50716|0,50716|3,50865|1,51014|2,51014|3,51163|0) -. You also only used minijacks for this specific part of the melody: 00:47:436 (47436|3,47436|1,47586|1) -, 00:49:822 (49822|3,49822|0,49971|0) - and 00:52:207 (52207|3,52207|2,52356|3) - . Consider rearranging

00:36:704 - is missing a note. You used doubles for the kicks.

00:43:263 - should have one less note to match the other diffs.

remove note at 00:20:008 - because triple doesnt really make sense there. 2 notes would make more sense. consider removing

01:29:176 - missing note for the uhhhh uhhh uhmmm kikc

00:42:666 - missing note for the uhhhh uhhh uhmmm ^clap (again)

00:39:685 -missing note for the uhhhh uhhh uhmmm ^clap

00:53:250 (53250|0) - could be removed too make it consistant with 00:48:331 (48331|2,48331|3,48480|2,48629|1,48629|0,48778|1) - and 00:50:716 (50716|0,50716|1,50865|1,51014|2,51014|3,51163|2) - or you could add another note at 00:53:548 - to represent the build up rise.

00:43:859 (43859|3,43859|2,43859|1,43859|0,43974|1,44088|1,44202|2,44202|0,44202|3,44288|3,44374|2,44374|1,44374|0,44488|1,44602|1,44716|2,44716|3,44716|0,44802|3,44888|1,44888|2,44888|0,44945|3,45002|0,45059|1,45145|1) - this is such a cool way to represent the breakcore

consider making all of the 1/1 notes like 02:44:509 (164509|1) - a double. Its the same sound as 02:47:970 (167970|1,167970|0) - and the drum is just really noticeable. Consider changing.

02:41:278 - 02:42:547 is kinda off. Triples and doubles are off by 1 beat. Please check this spot

02:33:143 - should be a doube for the snare

02:26:393 - should be single. In this part, the snares were noticeable and since this is a drum, it should be single. Consider removing a note.

02:22:124 - Missing note for the noticeable drum aswell as the guitar. I would recommend you to rearrange it just like 02:14:682 (134682|1,134739|2,134739|0,134739|3) -

02:01:816 - This should be double for the noticeable drum and 02:09:201 - shouldnt be double because theres no noticeable drum or sound that could be mapped as double.

01:47:047 - should be a double. You made the drums doubles like in 01:54:432 (114432|3,114432|2) -. Consider changing.

01:54:086 - consider removing the doubles there. You made these kinds of patterns: 01:53:970 (113970|1,113970|2,114086|0,114086|3) - whenever there was 2 cymbals. In this section, theres only one which is represented at 01:53:970 (113970|1,113970|2) - . Consider removing the doubles

02:07:355 - Sounds pretty dense. I would make it a triple but preference ig so Ill just let you decide

02:20:220 - missing note for the snare.

02:16:586 - should be a double. Theres a guitar sound which should usually be mapped as triples but its better to just do doubles instead for playability. Consider changing

01:59:047 - missing note. Theres a cymbal that wasnt represented as a double like 01:58:586 (118586|2,118586|0) - . Consider adding a note.

01:43:355 - should be a double. You mapped the triples as either drums or vocal and this spot contains none of it. Consider changing.

01:37:874 - consider removing a note. You mapped every double a snare but in this particular spot, theres no snare

01:09:726 (69726|3,69791|4,69791|2,69856|5,69856|1) - <3

01:34:239 (94239|0,94239|1) - sounds just like 01:34:124 (94124|1) - and since you mapped all the snare drums as doubles (I assume), you should make 01:34:239 (94239|0,94239|1) - a single. Consider removing a note

01:14:855 - should be a triple since 01:14:739 (74739|0,74739|3,74739|1) - is the same sound and mapped as a triple. Consider making it a triple and rearranging the trill if triple is added. If its intentionaly for playability then ill leave the choice to you.

00:45:970 - the sound is pretty noticeable. Consider making this a double.

00:34:816 (34816|3,34970|3,35124|3,35278|3,35432|3) - please rearrange so there wont be a 5 note anchord. I would say a anchord of 4 notes is the max in the current part but this is completely my preference. Examples on how you could rearrange it:
Left: Example / Right: Original Chart

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