00:08:206 (8206|2,8274|1,8341|2,8409|1,8476|2,8544|1) - this trill pattern is too complex for such a high bpm. I suggest you just do this simple pattern for the part: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14777918/2480
I start to think about this since I restart to map this... I think it's not so hard that for 222bpm. So sorry I will not take this.
00:08:746 this part until 00:09:489 looks like a mess in balance. suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14777929/6972
00:27:489 (27489|0,27534|1) - these are ghost notes though, there's no sound supporting it, they should be deleted and then put a note on 2nd column at 00:27:511
00:29:266 (29266|1,29469|3) - move these two notes to the 1st column as to play a bit of pitch here
00:31:224 - I don't get why this part is a sudden double spam. The sound and melody is similar to the part prior.
There's no reason to use doubles here. emphasize the sounds with pitch would be better imo. What you do just boosts the star rating and does not represent any notable sounds in this part
00:33:384 and now these LNs, (except 00:36:084 (36084|0) - which represents the rise sound) does not represent anything in the song. The melody is already been played with the jack notes. I don't get why these LNs are here, pls remove them and change the patterns up.
00:44:184 (44184|3,44454|2,44724|1,44994|0) - don't change these ones however, because there's the bell sound supporting it
00:36:084 (36084|0) - end this at 00:36:489 as the rise kind of end there. you can then make the notes after like so for simpliciity: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14777973/aa29
they are all ghost notes though. There's no sound supporting it at all, these are the only sounds that should be played: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14777989/08f6
okay don't look at that picture, that one's in wrong snap, use this one: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14777998/30d1
00:55:692 (55692|1,55726|2,55760|1,55794|2) - this trill here is too difficult, it doesn't do anything in emphasizing music, you should just do a normal stair pattern like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/14778098/29d9
Umm...I don't know what do you mean...maybe you can attach a screenshot in your reply..thx!
Change that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13136911 to that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13136920, is more suited to the rhythm.
01:34:809 (94809|1) - move this to 1st column, the anchor at 01:34:539 (94539|1,94674|1,94809|1,94944|1) - to emphasize hat is not a good idea as hats like these are not worth emphasizing
03:09:579 (189579|3,189596|2,189612|0,189629|1,189646|3,189663|2,189680|0,189697|1,189714|3,189714|2) - this pattern is to fast i think