00:10:704 - 00:16:104 this part, 00:17:184 - 00:18:264 this part, and 00:19:344 - 00:24:744 this part's layering makes no sense to me.
Hats like 00:10:839 (10839|1,10839|3) - , 00:11:109 (11109|1,11109|3) - , 00:11:379 (11379|2,11379|0) - , and so on shouldn't be double notes in this circumstances. They are a very weak sound. All it does is boosting the star rating, nothing more. They should all be fixed into a single note
Sorry for late to reply your suggestions. Thank you for pointing out some issues that existing in this diff.
This is my reply to your advice: IMO, the doubled patterns such as hat groups, are not very serious overmapping. I want to make this diff becoming the "main diff", which can be distinguished by some characteristics like the note density, so I'll take it as a style, at least in FREEDOM DiVE. To the "Boosting the star rating", sorry if it's too offensive, but it does not make significant contribution to the star rating at all.
Sorry if this came out as aggressive, but it's the reality. This diff is really overmapped and boosted in star rating. No BNs would ever let this pass through to ranked. You need to remap this diff so it's correctly represented of the sounds. Otherwise, the best status this map will get it's loved.
Thanks for your criticism and suggestions to this map. I'll set to re-arrange the notes if those patterns are pointed that as "Overmapping".