00:16:077 (17) - 00:19:174 (31) - 00:22:271 (46) - you could delete this for additional break place since 57 note (1st early part off kiai having 55 noteish so its dense than kiai) without 2/3 maybe too much. delete 00:12:981 (3) - for consistency of this if you apply.
00:53:432 (22) - you could delete this to give a little break and making the emphasis sounds better here.