00:09:008 (1,2) - you could have the vocals clicked on the slider cause im not sure what you're emphasizing with the slider. you can just ctrl+g
I agree with kibb. I think either you delete 00:09:002 (1) or apply agatsu's suggestion to fix this.
00:09:825 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this is pretty much the hardest pattern of the map (has both the longest consecutive jump pattern and longest active 1/4 rhythm on top of large spacing).
The intro climaxes here but it's still not the most intense part of the song, should be nerfed.
00:12:470 (3) - there isn't really a clear attack on the sound here and just a slur making a circle not really appropriate for it imo. consider making a 1/2 slider on 00:12:305 (2,3) -
00:13:947 (5) maybe make this a short slider to match the trumpet sound so it won't feel empty
00:14:613 (2) - you could emphasize this note more since there's a snare and it's much stronger than 00:14:778 (3) - imo. i suggest increasing the spacing on (1) while lowering the spacing on (3)
like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12323210
00:17:910 (7,1) - spacing can be increase a bit here for emphasis snare on 00:18:569 (4) - , or maybe you can increase the spacing of 00:18:239 (3,4) -
00:18:074 (1,2) - here there currently aren't any hitsounds making it feel like you're clicking to nothing since hitnormals aren't strong enough to give good feedback to the player. please consider adding something like whistles
00:33:404 (4,5) - Spacing can be decreased a bit here to give more emphasis on the sax 00:33:569 (5,6,1) - maybe make 00:33:239 (3,4,5) - the same spacing.
00:37:690 (1) - this isn't part of the sax sounds but is patterned in the same way as them, and also vocals could be supported to differentiate from the sax. consider making it two circles
00:41:811 (1) - here could benefit from more emphasis since it has a strong finish sound. i suggest increasing the spacing like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12323258
00:43:294 (1,2) - as you could probably hear; 00:43:294 (1) - has a tight sound to it making a circle appropriate for it while 00:43:624 (2) - has a held, lazy sound suggesting that maybe a circle is not very appropriate since there is all these held sounds not being mapped reflectively imo.
please consider making (2) a slider to portray to held sax better like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12323284
00:49:393 (6) - there is a vocal being skipped which could lead to poor emphasis of the explosive finish sound on 00:49:723 (1) - imo since the attack is very subtle as they hold the slider. also the 3/4 sound isn't as strong as the 1/2 vocal but it's currently being emphasized
consider ending the slider on 00:49:558 -
00:57:140 (1,2) - spacing is really overkill imo since there hasn't been anything like this in the map so far. i suggest reducing the spacing maybe like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12323307
00:58:129 (2,3) - spacing here can decrease a bit imo, for making contrast of 00:57:635 (1,2) -
01:16:254 (2,3) - right now the vocals here feel very disconnected since it feels similar to 01:16:090 (1,2) - which don't have vocals on the first note. So stacking 01:16:254 (2,3) - would make the vocals feel connected and fit the song much better.
01:17:580 (1) - missing finish+clap like you did on 01:17:910 (2) - which is the same basically
01:18:232 (1) - there's no sound on the blue tick, shouldn't be a kickslider - or add a clap on sliderend like the other two diffs
01:18:562 (3) - has one on the blue tick after tho but isn't a slider
01:19:880 (5,1) - I would make the spacing here bigger so that it is similar to 01:25:155 (6,1) - and doesn't cause any unwanted combo breaks.
01:28:624 (4,5) - this isn't really a good way to reflect the drums imo since drums are passive on 01:28:871 - and 01:29:118 - but is as strong as the actively clicked drums. consider making a rhythm like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/12323352
01:31:749 (4,1) - tbh I think you should switch nc because people may see that new combo and think because there is such a big spacing here that it is a 1/1 gap and not a 1/2.