00:11:298 (2,3,1) - not a big fan of this because you're replacing the 1/3 rhythm with a 1/2 beat one that doesn't exist. one 3/4 slider suits this part a lot more in my opinion. if you change this remember to do the same at other parts too
00:21:886 (4) - replace slider anchor for more fluent flow here like this https://reverri.s-ul.eu/OCC61DdJ
00:59:125 (4,5) - using 1/2 reverse first and circle at the end would make vocal grouped in one slider and separate drum, so it'd feel like following them better.
I think the idea was to use a slidertail for all the snares, similar to 00:57:184 (1,2,3) -
00:59:302 (5) - could do 1/2 reverse instead of 1/1 slider to catch the vocals you were following up till now
01:04:062 (2) - This note feels A tiny bit awkward by itself. My opinion would be to add maybe 2 more notes around it to even it out. 01:31:062 (1) - This one kinda feels similar but it's less awkward because it isn't a slider on an offbeat
01:05:651 (1,2,3) - kinda harsh rhythm here, like this would be better https://i.imgur.com/cT9UK21.png
01:23:298 (2,3,4) - I consider something like this would be better https://reverri.s-ul.eu/fZ9aKIrd
01:25:062 (6) - since you follow lyrics a lot maybe just a circle here suits this part better