Sakura no Zenya

00:11:435 (4) - turn into reverse 1/4 kick slider that ends on red tick, mute middle tick slider sound
match with 00:06:102 (4)

https://imgur.com/poeqIXu < like this, the highlighted red slider reverse is where u add the muted slider end timing point

00:16:769 (5) - I think you should follow the bell (or what) sound here. I get that you are following the singer but it's just too noticeable in my opinion to not map it. Especially when you map it here 00:22:102 (6) - . Same with these 00:27:435 (5,1) - 05:40:768 (6) - 05:46:101 (6,1) - 05:34:769 (7,1) - .

00:22:102 (6) - make this slider 1/4 reverse it also follows that bleep bloop sound thingy

00:29:102 (3,4,5) - rhythm inconsistent
https://imgur.com/7Fe6eqr this is better

00:42:102 (1,2,3) - it would be so cool to make this lower spacing and kinda overlap it with 00:41:435 (1,2) in some type of way, since it also follows the descending intensity in the piano

00:42:102 (1,2,3) - would be nice if you change the flow here from counter-clockwise to clockwise to emphasize piano

00:42:602 (1) - no need for nc here since you still following piano here

i think you should fully stack 00:47:935 (9) - under 00:47:435 (8) - because it's a 1/2 rhythm and you use half stacks for 1/4 too which can make players have trouble reading the pattern

00:50:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1286667410249613337/1354478884464365742/image.png?ex=67e57043&is=67e41ec3&hm=fb294df80d986e3de753642368f7cf7b486b33d0a083d1b50fd2489f9c5d46db&
try to consistently keep equal visual spacings within patterns as this will improve your patterning and structure overall

01:00:602 (2,3,4) missed beat on blue tick

my fix + angle changes: https://imgur.com/sgTBYE8

01:05:269 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - increase spacing here because the intensity didnt go down

01:27:602 (6,7,8,1) - soft finish

01:29:102 (5) - 01:31:102 (6) - 01:40:769 (5) - 01:42:769 (6) - 01:32:102 (1) - nc these to be consistent with your new combos as 01:28:102 (1) - 01:30:102 (1) - 01:38:769 (1) - 01:39:769 (1) -

01:41:269 (8,9) - spacing between these two is too much i would lower it

01:46:769 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - nice

01:46:769 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - you should make this a bigger buildup as the intensity is building up with the singer's held vocal and the current spacing is almost the same spacing as 01:38:769 (1,2,3,4) - 01:40:935 (6,7,8) - 01:42:769 (6,7,8,9) - 01:44:435 (4,5,6,7,8) - despite this section being the climax of the first kiai

01:50:435 (5) - this slider is really weird and doesnt really fit this pattern as it is the only 90 angled STRAIGHT slider with the rest being curve, slanted sliders

01:51:435 - 01:52:102 I think here you should map the rest of the singer sounds before going into the break.

01:52:102 - really weird that you chose to start a break here and not 04:05:435 since 01:52:102 - is still really active and it would feel rly awkward for the players to not do anything here imo

02:09:102 (5) - could make active to follow vocals

02:20:435 (4,5,6) - would be really cool if you switch flow here just like what you did here 02:19:769 (1,2,3) - after 02:18:769 (1,2,3,4,5) -

02:22:102 (3,5) - fix visual spacing between these two, something like this https://prnt.sc/DGOdM26OhRLT

02:44:102 (3,4,5) - increase sv and spacing

02:49:102 (1,2,3) - WHY ARE THEY NOT SYMETRICALL??

https://imgur.com/56GQZgg

shift + ctrl + r, rotate 120 clockwise on the first slider, and slowly piece them together like shown in picture

02:50:435 (7,1) - move this a little bit down to compensate

03:08:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - clean

03:09:435 - a slow long slider here to emphasize held vocal maybe?

03:10:769 (1,2) - this is so hard to play btw since the 2 starts on blue tick everyone will break their combo here, make 03:10:769 (1) - reverse twice and place 03:11:019 (2) on white tick and rearrange the pattern following up after it.

03:10:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this entire part is 1/3rd beat divisor

03:12:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) -

NC every big white tick at 03:13:435 (6), 03:16:102 (6), 03:18:769 (6)

03:32:102 - 03:42:769 - 03:53:435 - 04:04:102 - same as #4882011/12956822

03:37:602 (6,9) - move this a little and avoid overlap
https://imgur.com/JrOUMef

04:13:435 (3) - new combo here.
04:13:435 (3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - also this build up is spaced like almost the same, start from lower spacing to larger spacing and it should be clean.

04:22:102 (4,5,6) - pls center this burst on 04:20:602 (7) -

04:25:435 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you usually map the high vocals with jumps no? why not do the same here

05:30:187 - Slider reverse unsnapped by 2 ms. (the slider is too big for the sv)

05:51:435 (6) - NC? and spinner?