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submitted 3 Jun 2024

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00:11:037

[TCD]SnowyCutie

00:11:037 (11037|2,11184|3) - could CRTL+G this since the flow of the melody changes here

2 months ago

fixed and ty!

60 days ago

Marked as resolved by growcanine

00:13:096

00:13:096 - A minor detail but you can disconnect this note from previous sequence to emphasize that it's not a part of piano line.

6 days ago

Same for 00:17:802 (17802|2) - and other similar cases

00:11:037 (11037|3) - First one is here actually

6 days agoLast edited by Kurisu Makise 6 days ago.

fixed and ty!

5 days ago

Marked as resolved by growcanine

00:18:243

[TCD]SnowyCutie

Flow
00:18:243

Same melody pitch can be stack 1 collum 00:18:243 (18243|2,18537|2)

While 00:18:537 - 00:18:831 - build up 1st melody flow and then reset to a new direction for the melody flow at 00:19:125

Because 00:18:537 (18537|3,18684|2,18831|1,18831|0,18978|3,19125|2,19272|1,19419|0,19419|3) - this is too rolly to the left with this melody not expressed correctly 00:18:831 (18831|1,18978|3,19125|2) - (since is going down should had roll to the right)

2 months ago

[TCD]SnowyCutie

after taking a further look i can finalize my statement above that you need to recheck the flow in the whole map itself

2 months ago

ran through the map and made a few modifications to the flow

60 days ago

Marked as resolved by growcanine

00:31:772

00:31:772 (31772|1,31919|0,32066|1) - Minor detail again but you can move it right or 00:31:919 (31919|0) - to 3 for balance. 00:32:360 (32360|2) - to 1 then.

Making a trill is enough for pr here, it doesn't have to match the direction.

00:32:360 (32360|0,32654|3) - these 2 going up is also enough, they don't have to include 00:32:066 (32066|2) - since it's for vocal anyway.

6 days agoLast edited by Kurisu Makise 6 days ago.

6 days ago

fixed and ty!

5 days ago

Marked as resolved by growcanine

00:46:184

00:46:184 - Emphasize vocal more?

Less evil suggestion:

6 days ago

did something a bit more evil xd
vocals are all jumps, and to compensate 4th beat got removed

5 days ago

Marked as resolved by growcanine

00:47:802

00:47:802 - Release is a bit uncomfortable here, especially with a rice note on same hand.

I played around with different LN patterns a bit, this one seems to fit well:

If you keep yours, use different hands for LN and rice:

6 days agoLast edited by Kurisu Makise 6 days ago.

will need to spend some time with working on this, since that pattern of [12] snare into [3] vocal ln into [4] kick is maintained throughout the map for all the vocals that lie on the off beat, so any changes here is gonna require me to revisit every other instance where this pattern occur

5 days ago

should be fixed now xd

5 days ago

Marked as resolved by growcanine

00:58:169

00:58:169 - You can consider this a grace note and reduce 00:58:243 to a single. Otherwise put the double on one hand, like 01:00:522 (60522|1,60596|3,60596|2) -. Current pattern is too uncomfortable for beginners.

6 days ago

01:45:228 (105228|0,105302|3,105302|1) - ^

6 days ago

03:09:934 (189934|0,190007|2) - ^ ctrl + J

6 days ago

fixed and ty!

5 days ago

Marked as resolved by growcanine

01:34:419

01:34:419 (94419|3) - and 01:37:949 (97949|2) - Make them 1/1 length for structural consistency and more comfort. Imo those are more important here than emphasizing slightly different lengths of vocal sounds.

6 days ago

fixed and ty!

5 days ago

Marked as resolved by growcanine

01:42:066

01:42:066 (102066|0) - You can make this LN, like 01:41:478 (101478|3) -

6 days ago

implemented and ty!

5 days ago

Marked as resolved by growcanine

03:07:654

03:07:654 - Rearrange for better PR and a bit more symmetry?

6 days ago

fixed and ty!

5 days ago

Marked as resolved by growcanine

03:36:184

03:36:184 (216184|1) - Move to 1 for PR?
Classic last note mod :D

6 days ago

moved xd

5 days ago

Marked as resolved by growcanine

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