Blast!

00:08:844 - no crash here, just k k d D?

00:14:207 - K?
00:14:710 and it sounds the same, and it looks nicer when it doesn't continue to be the same color

00:16:553 (58) - how about changing this one as k? it gives more emphasis on the ddd here 00:16:721 (59,60,61) - with the color swap. Tho, d is also pretty good with the k on melody here 00:16:386 (57) - . So really up to your preference

00:18:146 - I don't think it's a problem to map this note. Considering 00:00:715 (4) - is mapped, it should be fine to also map 00:18:146 - . If you do so, you should probably also tweak the SV to make this speed up smooth

00:22:922 - 00:28:285 - think you can remove those for emphasizing the hold vocal, section feels a bit dense with 1/2

00:26:274 (113) - I do think that if you're going to speed up this D, might as well do it for the other finisher of this part: 00:23:593 - 00:26:274 -
Current SV is something like this:

What i'm suggesting would be something similar to this:

Other way to emphasize finishers would also work

00:30:296 - how about remove finisher here to emphasize the next finisher a bit mroe?
00:29:877 - and remove this note to emphasize the Ks since there is no drum?

00:51:330 - 00:51:749 - same

00:53:928 - would just keep this consistent with ddk k d d - k with 00:56:609 - , fits more than the dkk imo

00:56:107 - think would be cool to move this to 00:55:939 - for vocal

02:00:464 - same

01:17:056 - change this triplet up in comparison with 01:11:693 - since the vocal here ends on the triplet, like with ddk?

01:17:391 - add d?
The only gap here felt unnatural when I tapped it

01:38:676 - bar lines is way too slowed down between the D & d imo. try something around 1.10 to make a better transition?

01:46:051 (147,148,149) - how about using higher SV for those 3 K ? I do think they're strong enough to be emphasized a bit more.

02:03:146 - crash here, could do a slowing down sv thing within the ddkkd D into higher sv K ddd d k similar to 01:24:766 - ?

02:44:375 - no crash remove finish
02:46:218 - 02:46:721 - crash, add finish

03:17:391 - no finish, remove crash. also would be more impact into 03:17:894 - to change into lower sv like 03:17:391 - x1.00 -> 03:17:727 - x1.10

03:44:877 -> 03:47:391 - sv at the end here a bit high for oni, also with the only 7plet in this diff. nerf down to like x1.10 -> x1.20? this is where the 1/4 notes of the 7plet are still connected

03:54:598 - 03:59:291 - 04:05:324 - doublets a bit overcooked to introduce that late in a map, just use xxx x just like rest of the map for consistency? there is also a triplet drum at all of these places 03:54:598 - 03:59:291 - 04:05:324 -