01:20:720 (10,11,12,13,14) - Can consider to use different colours cuz its same as 01:17:386 (233,234,235,236,1) - which is another layer + much different
03:16:886 - yea I can see you're lowering the density a tad here for the ending of the kiai but I don't see why not add a note here for the guitar, makes it less awkward than having this 3/4. in fact I'd argue the density could be a bit closer to the first kiai's but yeah, at least add a note there
03:34:386 (188,189,190,191,192,193) - nah this is a troll pattern to throw into the map this deep into it even with the bpm being this low LOL
I think it'd be nicer to skip the drum on 03:34:386 and have this be a (kkk)dk instead, as that'd be considerably less awkward to play, as well as basically follow the guitar 1:1