00:33:856 (1,2,1) - The pattern looks great, but the distance is a bit confusing -- it tricked me thinking the latter note 1 as a 1/4. One possibility is something like this? https://i.imgur.com/65gGsWR.png 01:31:456 (1) - If you want to make a change also make this place consistent :)
03:41:806 (2) - Easy to read as a 1/4 -- it's a well designed pattern though. Related: 03:41:806 (2,3,4,5,6) - this flow is just hard combined with stackings.