Hope Is the Thing With Feathers

00:18:099 (6) - Could try to have a more linear flow from 00:17:630 (5) - to 00:18:099 (6) - considering this section is really calm and there are no special sounds on this note

01:50:677 (5) - Same. This part is really calm too and flow changes drastically on a vocal that isn't really special if compared with the other vocals in this section

00:18:802 (1) - 1/1 slider for the vocal here like you did with 00:16:927 (4) - fits way better than forcing a 1/2 for the downbeat/kick

00:18:802 (1,2,1,2) - These two sounds are very similar, but you have mapped them with different rhythms which is inconsistent and make gameplay uneven, specially for a NORMAL. I suggest to use the rhythm from 00:26:302 (1,2) - on 00:18:802 (1,2) - since this part of the song is very calm and you want to represent that pace on your map

00:24:427 (4) - Would be better to avoid HP bar overlap

01:09:427 (4) - Would be better to avoid HP bar overlap

01:26:537 (3) - Would be better to avoid HP bar overlap

01:45:052 (1) - Would be better to avoid HP bar overlap

01:45:990 (2) - Would be better to avoid HP bar overlap

02:25:833 (1) - Would be better to avoid HP bar overlap

03:15:755 (2) - Would be better to avoid HP bar overlap

00:35:677 (4) - OFFSCREEN

01:01:927 (4) - OFFSCREEN

01:23:255 (2) - OFFSCREEN by something around 1 or 2 pixels

03:00:755 (2) - OFFSCREEN

00:56:537 (1,2,3,4) - Could adjust the rhythm to highlight vocals a bit better, the 1/2 sliders at the start implies more of a drum-centred rhythm which given the 1/1 gap on 00:57:708 (4) - isn't really the intentional, could do something like this instead and have the increase in rhythm density at 00:58:412 (2) - where the drums pick up: https://i.imgur.com/90ix3OA.png

00:56:537 (1,2,3,4) - You could change the flow to something like this .

Minimizing the movement for this build up could be interesting in therms of gameplay because you already have a very dense rhythm for a NORMAL, so having an easier flow in this part would balance the difficulty of it in comparison with the dense rhythm

01:04:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - In this pattern you've added 01:04:037 (1,2,3) - 3 1/2 rhythm objects in a row and also 01:05:677 (5,6,7,8) - 4 1/2 rhythm objects in a row but you haven't done it on 01:19:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - which is inconsistent since these two parts of the song are THE SAME. I would suggest to only use the rhythm from 01:19:037 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - since it is more melodic and kinda fits this low paced vocal part very effectively

01:19:037 (1) - i think it fits better to vocals to stretch this to 01:19:505 and place the circle at 01:19:740

01:27:240 (4) - Not really anything worth an active circle over the loud held vocal here, would be much better suited on the next white tick following the drum layer, changing this into a 1/2 slider and deleting 01:27:708 (5) -

01:34:505 (2) - Both the vocal on the start of this as well as the repeat arrow are 2 distinctly different vocals and don't really need to be grouped like this, omitting the snare and having something like this fits better here: https://i.imgur.com/Ecof22X.png

01:44:818 (7,1,2) - this rhythm is kinda confusing with you following the drums out of the blue.

you could change it up like so to follow the vocals better like you did in the rest of the map and not confuse the player

01:49:505 - consider adding a circle here before the 1/2 slider to properly represent the vocal in the song

01:49:740 (3,4) - Would be better to undermap it as an 1/1 to keep the rhythm as dense as you have on 01:45:052 (1,2,3) - while maintaining the vocal mapping

02:28:880 (3,4,5,6) - The 1/2 sliders would be better suited at the end of the chain and not the start so it feels more like a build-up into 02:30:287 (6) - instead of kinda doing the opposite of what the song is doing

02:58:412 (1,2) - Drums are on doubles around the blue ticks here, current rhythm is very off from what the song does even for simplification sake and should defo be 3/4 repeat instead