This Future (we didn't expect) mapped by HoshiMiya_‬ · beatmap discussion‬

00:06:200, 00:08:867, 00:11:700, 00:12:033, 00:12:200 这些地方也要采上类似的装饰音，保持一致性，同理4分钟左右的段落也要补充上去

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done

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00:06:978

00:06:978 (6978|3,9644|3) - 这一段你应该只是在采钢琴以及伴随钢琴的装饰音，那么这两个note应该删掉

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04:01:644 (241644|3,244311|0) - 同理也要删掉

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00:08:756

00:08:756 (8756|0) - 应该挪到00:08:811

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00:12:644

00:12:644-00:14:478这一段比起你对这首歌的整体编排来讲过于爆了，可以适当调低一点密度，给你一个我改的例子，可以复制上去参考一下：
00:12:644 (12644|2,12644|3,12728|1,12783|0,12839|2,12894|0,12978|1,12978|3,13103|3,13228|3,13311|1,13311|0,13367|3,13561|0,13561|2,13644|1,13728|0,13811|2,13811|3,13894|1,13978|2,13978|3,14061|1,14144|0,14228|2,14228|3,14283|0,14339|1,14394|2,14436|3,14478|1,14478|0) -

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同理04:07:311 - 也改一下

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00:25:769

00:25:769 (25769|1,25769|0) - should start on 00:25:811

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done

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00:53:561

00:53:561, 00:53:894, 00:54:894, 个人建议可以加一个note

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added

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01:01:478

01:01:478 - 鉴于你在01:00:811 (60811|2,60894|3,60978|1,60978|0,61061|2,61144|0,61311|2,61311|3) - 处已经开始采这个人声切片，那你在这段kiai最好也要突出人声切片，所以可以用子弹强调一下，比如可以这样子：

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01:11:978同理

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done

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01:01:811

01:01:811 (61811|3) - 这根面条最好可以在01:02:019处结束，和后面左三轨的grace衔接一下

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这一根以及后面类似的段落也要改01:12:478 (72478|3) -

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哎呀，点错了

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Reopened by Ycloki

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01:01:978

01:01:978 - 01:02:644根据你的这个三轨grace面的采音逻辑，我认为应该这样排列比较好：

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01:12:686也同理

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嗯

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01:09:269

01:09:269 - 漏音

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01:09:561

01:09:561 - 最好采那个人声切片

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01:15:894

01:15:894漏音

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done

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01:16:228

01:16:228和01:16:478建议搞个双押，single stream有一点点孱弱

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finished

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01:59:311

01:59:311 - 02:01:311这一段也需要像之前那样nerf，此外02:01:311 - 02:01:978的鼓太弱了，几乎听不到，所以我觉得与其采鼓倒不如着重去强调一下伴奏旋律

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02:58:311

02:58:311 - 02:58:478 个人意见是，这里的旋律比起前段颗粒感比较强，为后端子弹段做一个引入，所以这里与其用简单的ln切过去，倒不如做一个子弹引导一下，强调一下旋律特别的听感

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同样后面相似的地方也改一下

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done

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02:58:644

02:58:644 - 02:59:311 不错的排列

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03:05:311

03:05:311 可以重音用三押，这样更有气势一点

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爽

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03:07:103

03:07:103 - 左一轨应该和前面一下加一个面保持一致

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哎呀漏了

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03:12:561

03:12:561 - 可以在这里加一根小面条把旋律的滑音音色手感处理得更加圆滑一点

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03:21:561

03:21:561 - 这里其实有一个旋律音但是你漏了，个人建议是可以加一个子弹强调一下这个漏掉的旋律音

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嗯

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03:31:978

03:31:978 - 03:32:644 鼓组并不是连续的，两个小节之间要做出间断的感觉，可以缩短snap，把两个小节做一个分割，像这样：

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这个叼

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03:35:978

03:35:978 - 可以用第一小节可以用3/16，二小节1/6填充一下补足一下手感的连续，顺便做一个子弹，如图：

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帅啊

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03:51:978

03:51:978 - 这一段开始的旋律建议也用子弹强调一下，类似改法可以参考前面

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收到

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03:57:978

03:57:978 - 可以考虑三个双押再加一个短ln变成三押，把感情推上去

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搞定

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