00:19:395 (1) - could make something different here instead of a simple 1/2 flowy repeat? feels kinda weak in comparison with 00:39:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - which has a similar song but weaker.
00:39:434 (2,3) - 00:39:590 (4,5) - might wanna add some spacing here looks a bit cluttered
00:57:832 (3,4) - might wanna group it up with 00:57:520 (1,2) - or give it reduced movement, cuz it's the weaker sounds, 00:58:145 (1,2,3,4) - same
it would be really cool if you add a note 1/8 in this places 01:24:590 - 01:29:590 - 01:34:590 -
to create a better contrast with the similar but weak sounds in this section which are: 01:01:895 (3,4,5) - 01:06:895 (3,4,5) - etc