Justability

00:24:011 - Ngl this sounds so loud imho, could decrease the HS volume to 60 or 65%

Do something like: 00:24:011 Start with 60% then 00:29:344 65% for some volume progression

00:39:344 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing here feels e abit underwhelming in comparasion to the jumps before, i think doing a similar spacing to 00:42:011 (1,2,3,4) - could play better

00:56:011 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel like this section can chill out for a bit because to me this part feels too dense maybe reduce the density so that it does not feel too dense in the beginning but to let it introduce the kick sliders first and then the doubles and triples?

00:56:011 (1) - and 00:56:678 (1) - can change to a 3/4 slider and remove the following circle.

Changing those 2 sliders may tone down the density a bit.

01:03:678 (5,6,7,1) - This can be a 5 note burst thing (4 circle then follow-up with the 3/4 slider).

01:04:344 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This section I feel like its better to follow the guitar?

Something like 5 kicksliders then a triple into the slider

01:34:844 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel like this can shift to the right by 1/2 and delete 01:35:844 (8,9) - before shifting, so that the triples can land on the vocals which the vocals are more prominent in that part.

As for the empty space left by the 1/2 shift from the above suggestion, 01:34:678 (6) - can be a 3/4 slider and place close to 01:34:344 (4) - .

Example:

01:35:011 (1,2,3) - either overlap them like 01:35:345 (1,2,3) - and 01:35:678 (1,2,3) - or make it progressive spacing increase

01:38:511 (1,2) - you've been using this same spacing for blue tick sliders rythms the whole kiai, someone can easy misserad this one for a blue tick slider too, you can increase the spacing here

01:41:178 (7,8,1) - the overmap feels super weird even with the hitsound when the vocal turn a complete stop, would just make it a long slider with low sv instead imo

01:42:011 (2) - ctrl+g this goes harder tbh but you'd gotta make the whole pattern then so up to you

01:44:344 (1) - perhaps you can make it stand out more than the previous 3/4 sliders since the pitch goes up here, increasing SV for higher pacing seems a nice option but can also be done with rhythm

01:56:678 (2) - can unstack this and make it spaced, this being stacked makes it stand way less than 01:54:011 (2) - since it requires less movement

02:48:011 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - idk about this maybe use some sliders or maybe use this rhythm instead if want a shizo rhythm.

Example rhythm:

1. Delete 02:48:511 (3) -
2. Delete 02:49:344 (3) -
3. Delete 02:49:678 (4) -
4. Add circle on 02:49:844 -

😂😂

02:55:344 (1) - extend this to 02:55:594?

03:01:344 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - can be spaced a bit more plays kinda underwhelming as is

03:48:011 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I really like ur map but i wanted to know on this section if there is a reason for why the ncing isn't following vocals ? Its kinda messed up my reading on ez when i played but ig it would make more sense if 03:48:844 (1) - you unnc this 03:49:011 (2) - nc for vocals 03:49:511 (4) - nc for vocals 03:49:678 (1) - unnc ?

04:01:511 (2,3,4,5) - I think flipping this rhythm will be more fitting, circle on the red tick after 04:01:178 (1) - and follow with a triple kick here 04:01:844 -.

04:35:344 (1) - Is this NC intentional?

04:37:178 (4,5,6,7) - this triple here feels a bit disconnected from the section, most of times when you map those quiet drums they are at the end of a long slider
you can just extend the first slider and turn this pattern into a long slider with a double at the ending like 04:39:844 (6,7,1) -

05:13:344 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this feels a bit random considering what went for afterwards not gonna lie. i'd tone down these actives or rework the part right after for a nice build up since the intensity of the song gradually increases

05:56:011 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - i think the spacing here is a bit too big, it have almost the same spacing as the jumps at the very ending of the section
you can nerf it to make a more progressive spacing for this sections

06:18:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - surely you can come up with a more interesting rhythm than 5 note bursts, what you did in the previous kiais was more fun to play than this bland rhythm imo

06:29:844 (4,5) - linear back and forth followed by a wide pattern 06:29:844 (4,5,6,7,1) - is kinda uncomfortable would just move 06:30:011 (5) - to x176y123 or something like that

06:50:344 (3) - make this 3/4 for the held vocal?

06:54:178 (3,1) - it would be soooooooo cool if 06:54:178 (3) - this was unnc and 06:54:344 (1) - this was for the big guitar and vocals

07:01:344 (1,2) - this seems like a better pattern maybe, at least anything that avoids 07:01:678 (2) - this being stacked under 07:01:344 (1) -

07:10:511 (7,8) - perhaps a wiggle stream here? haha