00:03:721 (1,2) - feel kinda odd visually. Maybe make them curved and fit together nicely with the slider before it 00:03:379 (7) Something like this:
(Obviously can adjust so it's nice and tidy for your own tastes)
00:15:379 (2,3,4) - This being so close together seems a bit counter-intuitive. I would space this apart more.
00:23:436 (4,5,6) - This would look better visually if you move it away from 00:23:093 (2), since right now they are mushed together. For example, you could do https://imgur.com/a/GOsJpHd.
00:30:807 (7,8) - Stacking these kinda kills the movement here while the vocals are still pretty strong. Could change it to something like https://imgur.com/a/3jk3QoH.
00:35:093 (4,5) - Spacing between these is pretty low, which causes a lack of movement. Flip it horizontally and move it like https://imgur.com/a/XcSN58P.
00:53:950 (1,2) - Spacing looks like 1/4. Increase the distance so they aren't overlapping.
01:16:750 (1,2,3) - little detail but i think, the circle 2-3 is little close to the slider 01:16:236 (4)
I think you can moov 01:16:750 (1,2,3) to x:435 y:338
01:28:750 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This feels more like the intensity is decreasing instead of increasing. I would highlight this with circle + slider kinda rhythm instead.