00:47:065 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - and this 01:35:065 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - wrong snap, do it like in top diff or remove
01:39:800 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - If you compare it with this 00:51:612 (1,2,3,4) - or this 02:39:800 (2,3,4,5,6) - it seems that you have turned off your brain here 01:39:800 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - for a short time which is quite typical during mapping (i knew it lul)
now I would advise you to make this 01:39:800 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - similar to these 00:51:612 (1,2,3,4) - or this 02:39:800 (2,3,4,5,6) - for consistency
02:12:425 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - and this 02:15:425 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - it seems that you use such uninteresting patterns too often, they completely spoil the representation of the song, try to do something that you have already done before like here 02:16:925 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) -
i would also advise you to do more spacing here 02:12:425 - 02:22:737, since this moment still sounds louder than 02:00:425 - 02:12:050 it seems that there is less spacing here 02:12:425 - 02:22:737 at this time