01:49:557 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - looking back this feels rly bland to play since its just circular jump spam and no flow / emphasis on the vocal phrase changes and downbeats in the song so i suggest changing flow around downbeat here 01:52:166 (1) -
01:50:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - feels really cramped since you pretty much only use the right side of the playfield and thus doesn't reflect the intensity of the section well, definitely should move some patterns around to use the entire playfield like how you do the first half of the chorus
01:39:117 - 01:59:823 - My main concern with this kiai is you use higher spacing jumps when the singer stops singing i.e. 01:42:378 (1,2,3,4,1), 01:50:367 (3,4,5,1,2), 01:52:813 (1,2,3,4), 01:58:030 (3,4,5,6).
You repeat these ideas for more intense parts at 01:48:247 (1,2,1,2) & 01:59:008 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - using the exact same kinds of jump angles, which makes the contrast in this section overall pretty meh.
Would suggest nerfing the jumps to reflect what's happening in the music better and try differentiating the jump angles used for differing vocal phrases.
01:59:986 - 02:10:910 - This section has a very similar intensity compared to 00:57:378 - but the spacing feels really babied at times i.e: 01:59:986 (1,2,3,4,1,2) & 02:05:530 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3).
Would buff these a bit.