00:06:639 (1) - would be nice if the intro was less filler-y. make big sound more emphasised and make small sound not as emphasised
00:09:917 (2) - could be less
00:15:491 (1) - could be more
00:21:393 (3) - could be more
00:23:688 (5) - could be less
00:27:294 (4) - could be more
01:00:656 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing of these are waaay underdone compared to the super intense & drastic change in vocals,
something like this would work perfectly
01:03:689 (1,2,1) - especially since this is spaced a lot more too & its just a bit of filler
01:28:934 (5) - small recommendation: considering the amount of overmapping it would be better to start bursts on redlines cuz it feels better to play
also it would be good if there was some consistency/reasoning such as a music motif to justify why you have chosen to overmap certain parts and not others, e.g. why 01:35:655 (2,3,4) - and not 01:34:671 -
I don't think this really works on this one. Also didn't get what is it about overlapping. Is it like covering too much of a slider?
Reply to comment: it doesn't follow any "consistent" instrument throughout the map. But in this specific moment it is the same guitar as here 01:37:130 - which sounds differently one these 01:34:507 (2,3) - than here 01:35:655 (2,3,4) -. And these differences just make it feel right to me
02:12:540 (1) - not too sure why you gave up on this pattern 01:56:802 (1,2,1) - i thought it was nice
02:35:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - missing claps like u did 02:39:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - & on other diff's
02:36:066 (12) - 02:40:000 (12) - there is no sound on these notes, remove them & space it out a bit from next sliders