Tsumugiboshi (starring ONGEKI SHOOTERS)

00:04:613 - can map the sparkle if you want quite prominent imo lol compared to unmapped stuff

00:07:770 - might wanna go with slightly less annoying pattern like D kkd (and change 00:09:192 to ddk accordingly if applied i see your little abekobe schtick) as D ddk is more annoying to play more than any other pattern in this map i think

00:11:007 -> 00:11:165 for the drum? Drum here is not the same earlier so lol

00:12:192 - i think you're doing abekobe between each chain and maybe inted not making this d kkd vs 00:10:928?

Or could make 00:10:928 d kkd

Or you can tell me you're not doing abekobe and that i'm troling and resolve the post, that works too

00:12:428 - mapping this would go harder since the drum is more than 3-plet here also end of section

00:13:692 00:16:218 etc - map the synth maybe?

00:19:928 (95) - change to d? the pitch change happens between (95) and (96)

00:32:560 - add a note to emphasis the next part.

00:37:849 - could map the extended vocal

00:37:928 (182) - delete this k, then cancel (or not which is ok) these notes 00:38:402 (184,186,188,190) - and add d to 00:38:244 - 00:38:876 - 00:39:507 - 00:40:139 - this is my opinion but pls feel free to decide it.

00:42:665 (204,205) - change to k would be better

00:42:665 00:42:744 00:42:981 - up to you but could omit these - the sounds here are not as intense as earlier so i think this being less dense than earlier makes more sense imo

00:58:139 - map the drum maybe? would also be similar to you mapping 00:59:402 01:00:665

01:09:823 - map the drum maybe? Don't think resulting structure is that difficult for oni imo
Unlike 01:08:560 which actually doesn't have a drum lol

01:12:192 - 01:12:507 - this 1/1 break maybe not so good so you could add some notes to it like d (dd)d or something

01:19:770 - honestly the break here seems a bit weird, seems better if 01:18:507 - 01:21:034 was one long chain instead? i.e. map 01:19:928 01:20:007

You have done long chains before at 01:10:928 and there's a long break afterwards so i don't think difficulty would be a concern

01:26:007 -> 01:25:692 for the drum?

01:26:402 - recolor suggestion with more fidelity to the melody and drums (imo)

01:58:770 - feel like it's better to map this considering 02:00:034 02:01:297 etc

02:07:376 - after this part is a long breaktime so i'd like to add a note for a ddddkkkkd pattern.

02:21:192 02:21:270 - since you're more mapping based on drums here i think its better if these were mapped for the 1/4 drums and omit 02:21:428 02:21:507 for rest moment there?

Also could map 02:22:534 for the drum there

02:23:718 02:23:797

02:22:455 -> 02:22:770 - sorry no explanation here besides 'it genuinely feels more natural and idk why' so feel free to reject if no likey

02:24:665 - 02:25:297 - 02:25:928 - add notes