00:15:939 (15939|2) - Is better to delete this one and just use the sound of the LNs, so if u delete that one, add a LN in 00:15:858 (15858|2) - into the next LN
00:26:398 (26398|2) - I don't feel a real sound for that LN , so i suggest u to delete that one and make the before one more large like this ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11459374 Also makes the pattern more fiting with the song
00:52:831 - U could try to used that other sound for making LNs(idk the name of the sound so xD), then u have more variation in this section ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11459391 00:55:425 - In this section too 00:58:020 - ^ i recommend something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11459402
00:55:425 (55425|3,55587|2,55749|1) - if these ln have purpose then the other parts forward dosen't have then just delete it owo except for the last part owo
I can hear the same sound that is intended then no LN's on the other parts owo delete this owo
01:01:749 (61749|2,61749|3,61912|1,62074|3,62074|2,62236|1) - these has both sounds so
change the pattern or rearrange 01:02:398 (62398|3,62398|2,62560|1,62722|3,62722|2,62885|1) -
same as ^ 01:03:695 (63695|0,63695|2,63858|1,64020|0,64020|2,64182|1) - change the pattern or rearrange owo
01:04:668 (64668|0,64668|3,64831|1,64993|0,64993|3,65155|1,65317|0,65317|3) -
same as ^^^^^^^^^