Heartcatch Paradise! (TV Size)

00:01:850 (3) - nc for noticeable pitch difference from the guitar and remove nc here 00:01:118 (1)

00:02:216 (1) - remove nc + would be better as two circles like 00:00:752 (2,3)

00:05:326 (3,1,2,1) - these are big jumps for hard diff i think (and theres just a perfect stack on the slider end which reads like a 1/4 rhytmn usuallly, i think moving it of the slider body would be good

00:11:819 (1,2,3,4) - this seems to be the only high-intensity stream in the entire map. theoretically, it's not a problem, but it's a bit odd that a similar pattern doesn't appear in the higher intensity kiai. i suggest changing 00:11:545 (3) - to a circle, and placing a 1/4 repeat slider at 00:11:728 - with the tail at 00:12:002 -

01:23:435 (4,1) - just like you did here

00:13:191 (2,3) - make these smaller

00:15:021 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -
although the intensity is still high, the changes in the song give a more jumpy feeling, rather than the smooth flow like before. u can refer to the approach used in the top difficulty.

u can try reducing the 1/2 sliders and adding circles to express this jumpy feeling.
like this:

same 01:26:728 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) -
but the latter part has higher intensity, you can maintain a similar pattern to 01:28:557 (1,2) - to contrast with the relatively lower intensity section earlier.

like this:

00:15:569 (1,1) - maybe a different spot for the second circle (keep 00:15:935 (1,1) stacked)

00:18:679 (1) - unnecessary nc

00:19:228 (3) - suggest to replace this with a circle and one way 1/4 slider (in this exact order)

00:19:228 (6,1) - Spacing seems overdone, could nerf as this will likely be quite confusing for a Hard diff player.

00:20:691 (1) - noticeable beat missing at white tick (00:20:874)

00:20:691 (5,6,1,2,3) - You used stacking for the 1/4 here -> 00:20:691 (5,6) - so this should be 00:21:240 (2,3) - unstacked for better readability. Having different stacking in a row can be confusing for a Hard diff player.

00:22:886 (4) - personally i'd change this to two circles since the slider tail's sound here is stronger than the head

00:23:435 (2) - Could ctrl+g to make it more comfortable to play and have a better transition for the 1/4 rhythm gap. As it is currently, a Hard diff player might be confused about the direction change coming out of (2).

00:26:362 (2) - change to a 1/4 slider and a circle in that order (same reason as #4428883 but much more defined)

00:53:801 (4) - there's a vocal staccato, but using a 1/2 slider here makes this short vocal lose some expression. my suggestion is to replace it with a circle and stack it on top of the head of the slider at 00:54:167 (5) -

00:55:996 (1,2,3,4) - perhaps lower the intensity of the jumps here (these are borderline 4 star jumps)

00:57:460 (2) - nc for noticeable down beat from vocals

01:01:118 (3,1) - slider overlap (avoid in lower star maps)

01:02:582 (4,5) - lower star diffs usually have players move the cursor the same direction as where the slider is heading

01:17:215 (3,4,1) - Spacing variation here is too much, would keep the spacing somewhat consistent with prior spacing in the kiai, without removing the required emphasis on 01:17:947 (1) -.