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00:14:792 (2,3) - and 00:24:392 (2,3) - : I feel the spacing in these two parts is a bit too large, especially since up to now the spacing in this section seemed to reflect more the singer than anything else, and as a result tere isn't much of a pattern to support this kinda spacing. Maybe you could consider grouping 00:14:792 (2,3) - and creating a jump on 00:14:942 (3,4) - ? I feel it would work better as the singer changes chord on 00:14:942 (3,4) - . An example could be the following:

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bro quit so im looking at the mods :sob:

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fixed it a bit

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00:28:142 (2) - more of a personal thing here: maybe you could space this a little more from 00:27:692 (1) - considering it's the end of the section, for some added emphasis :P

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00:30:692 (1,2) - Considering how you've kept 00:29:492 (1,2) - separated from 00:28:892 (1,2,3,4) - I would do the same here by introducing a small jump at 00:30:542 (4,1) -

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changed the pattern a bit so that theres a jump on 00:30:992 (2) - but the reason for this is that her voice on 00:29:492 (1) - pitches down a lot and is similar to 00:29:492 (1) - but on the rest of the patters its only on the 2nd slider

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00:34:892 (1,2,3,4) - would consider spacing these more to better represent the buildup, at the moment this is spaced much less than 00:33:692 (1,2,3,4) - which i don't think makes much sense

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00:46:892 (1) - nc's not needed imo

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00:57:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could definitely space this a more compared to the rest of the pattern, considering how the drums ramp up it's underwhelming seeing basically the same spacing used here. I think you could actually use the same structure as before for this:

I think you could also consider changing 00:56:342 (1,2,3,4,5) - by upping the spacing a bit (and maybe using patterns composed by group of 4 notes for 00:55:892 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - instead of 3-5 since it would reflect the drums better), but in case you were against this I would at least consider changing the pattern above

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01:09:767 (1) - should probably have the end silenced like trito's diff

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