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00:00:776 (1,2,3) - Smallen the gap plz, right now it is a little tricky to walk safely.

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tbh I don't think need full walk in overdose diff.
I just need to be able to identify the hard parts and the easy parts.
this parts is less density and no need to use a hdash so I think it's fine.

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00:03:852 (1,2,3,1) -Those are the same as 00:00:776 (1,2,3,1) - these. At least you could do mirror. (Ctrl+H)

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y

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00:12:122 - Not sure why you avoided vocal here. You could do a 1/1 slider from 00:11:737 (2) - here.

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piano sound is more outstand than vocal so it should be fine.

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00:25:391 (1,2) - Too much distance here. Use the minimum required to be a gap.

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Wdym? These dash distances are consistent in any other part

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00:53:083 (1,2) - Not a big fan of the stack here. You stopped suddenly the flow here. A bit of movement could be great. 00:54:045 - Adding a note here could work aswell, up to you.

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I like standstill movement and would rather put to have a stress on next flows 00:54:236 (2,3,1) -. so keep as it is

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01:05:391 (1,2) - Seems too much. I'd nerf a bit, keep the dash.

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Oops!

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01:10:583 (3,4,5) - The lack of movement feels inconsistent with the rest of the map
I would turn this into a jump for emphasis: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19148024/fb31
5 and 6 are hyperdashes

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add movement here

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but no need hdash imo

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01:13:852 (4,5,6,7) - There's no emphasize on the vocal of 6 note, and current equal gap four notes are also kinda tricky to count correct dash/walk time. Consider making 4,5 and 6,7 walk then 5,6 dash (if not HDash)

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I don't think need special emphasis here. these 4 sounds hear as the same strongness by me.

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01:15:391 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think its better to just follow vocals instead of having these streams like this example u could use 1/2 sliders for these streams to follow vocal i think that would suit slightly nicer

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that is fair in one opinion.
but I wanna making a various patterns of mapping as I could if there is unique sound. so keep it

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01:17:699 (1) - i think its better to cut this slider into a 3/4 followed by a 1/2 it feels more correct that way

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I think no need to change here cuz the vocal sound isn't mapped

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01:24:814 (4,5,6) - Please consider at least movin 5 to x:477. The lacking of movement gives those notes an empty sensation, as you're building up to kiai time.

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would rather keep standstill movement for making a difference from following build up to kiai. so keep it

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01:28:083 (4,5) - Personal, but I think this HDash (as a HDash chain) is unnecessary since no heavy-enough sound on 5. Just keep 01:28:372 (5,1) HDash is enough for emphasize.

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ok

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01:33:660 (3,4) - The empty space feels weird. Pretty noticeable sound 01:33:852 - here. Not sure why you avoided. It can easily used with an hdash to emphasize. You could use a 1/1 slider.

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01:33:852 add note

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02:04:044 (2) - i think its better to make this a 1/2 slider since ur following vocal on 02:02:891 (3) - cuz on 02:04:237 - she says ''sh'' so making (2) a 1/2 slider would folllow the vocal a bit better than just 1note

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I don't think need to change it to slider cuz the melody is stopped and vocals is almost muted

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02:10:968 (5,6,7) - I'd move 6 to x:223. It gives you a pretty intented move right there.

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Move a bit to left 02:11:160 (6,7) - so not breaking a C shape

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02:28:852 (5,6,7,8) - You must change this stream. The sudden stop from 7 to 8 feels awkward to catch the next notes. A 1/2 repeat slider could be a better and fun solution. If you agree, please be careful with distances.

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No need to change here imo.
Cuz this is easy to follow and I don't wanna use the typical patterns

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02:40:583 (1) - Good idea of using these kind of sliders. But at least make it like using the same position as it starts as it ends.

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refine a bit

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02:54:526 (9,1,2) - This antiflow is really unnecessary. Considering 02:57:314 (5,1,2) it is better to change this to followflow, both better on consistency and playing.

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nop

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03:08:468 (1,2,3,4) - I'd increase the distance here. The progression feels kinda slow and the natural movement of the catcher aswell.

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tried a bit more radically

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03:13:083 (1,2,3) - Yeah, this is tricy to fully walkable. Suggest smallen these distance in relax part so that it won't need extra dash to walk

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03:20:776 (1,2) - i think its better if u would represent this as a 1/2 slider into a 1/1 just like in 03:22:314 (1,2) - this one follows it a bit better than the 1/2 reverse into a note

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feels vocal is more stretched 03:22:283 (1,2) - than 03:20:745 (1,2) - sounds. so keep it in order to leave a difference

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03:29:622 (5,6) - If this is intented to be an hdash should be increased, otherwise the gap is way too much for the current ds.

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Do u mean about 03:29:045 (2,3) -? fixed

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03:30:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - As you're approaching to the kiai, the stack here doesn't give you any proper value to even play harder. You should definitely consider changing 03:30:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - to something as you did here.

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add a mini flow

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03:38:853 (7) - maybe make this a hyper so its play the same as 03:38:083 (3,4) -

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rather want to leave impact on 03:38:821 (7,1,2) - and feels vocals relatively weak on 03:38:821. so keep

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03:45:776 (3,4,5) - This is the largest hyperdash in the whole map and it feels out of place, I think it would look and play better if 4 was at the same position as 1

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reduce ds a bit

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