Mesmerizer

00:13:983 (7) - rhythm is also messed up here, maybe change the 7 to 1/4 slider and add an extra one like this

01:08:470 (9) - same problem as the first thing, you can also fix it doing the same thing on the image.

yea I like that, fix

make sure to add spacing to 00:03:929 (1) - kinda looks ugly

yea that works, sure

I do acknowledge that this part is kind of bad, since there's side instrument the I forgot to capture. But I think there you kinda overmap it on the triples there. But thanks for pointing it out, I already change 00:04:172 (2,4) into a slider

also, 00:09:280 (3) should start a note later, since the melody's changes notes at 00:09:362; you could move 3's head down a tick and leave it at that or add a note between to make it a 4 note burst, either one fits the song

sure that works petty well. Just gonna move 3's head down a tick and leave it at that since is my og intent anyway

sure, change it to 00:10:740 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4). Make 00:10:821 (2,3,4,5) into a circle pattern, and the rest normal space burst pattern

00:19:983 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this one is also different from the first one

I do this because the aim angle is a bit more tighter then osu://edit/00:14:794 (3,4,5,6,7,8). so I make that a bit more comfortable to aim by making the spacing less. But I do get song representation is more important then comfort, so yea fix.
ps. the second respond is the same patterns

whoops it was late at night and didnt realize I mentioned it on the first reply LOL

nc these: 00:30:848 (2) - 00:33:605 (6) - 00:37:010 (1) - 00:45:443 (4) - 01:04:740 (4) - 01:13:659 (4) - 01:17:145 (4) - 01:17:389 (5) - 01:18:686 (4) - 01:25:551 (2) - 01:39:713 (2,3,4) - 01:50:199 (2,3) - 02:16:253 (3) - 02:25:739 (2) - 02:26:225 (7) - 02:31:658 (2) - 02:32:631 (2) -

These are mainly so the patterns look better

remove nc on these: 01:05:875 (1) - 01:25:334 (1) -

fix

don't wanna make it as hard as it is, again mainly focus on the burst, not jumps

love the buzz sliders idea, since that I didn't really use it in this map. Fix

yea I know that. Is just that is sound too much "buzz" on the 1/16 Divisor. But fine sure cus I can't find any better non scarf solution

you could use a soft or drum hitnormal for the reverses on the last one if you mean the sound's annoying, or do 1/4->1/4->1/8, or leave it how it was originally with the 3/16 cuz i see what you mean now (i was about to suggest 1/6 but it ends at a different time than it would with a snapping divisible by 4, so it wouldnt work)

thanks, I leave it how it was then. May change if others hate it

00:50:956 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same with these, the song is too intense for a pattern like this imo

01:00:686 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - and here

don't really know how through, adding sliders into it will make the map a bit more techly, and I hate it. Maybe on the last jump 00:46:091 where I add like a long slider to the next jump. Did it sound good to you?

I mean you can said that most of the part on kiai is petty boring since that there not that much insane stuff into it. I kinda what it to make it like Onloog version of it, but I don't want to change it cus I mainly want it to focus on the tripes. IDK, maybe I'll came up with something else later on

change 3 into a slider to the next jump, expect on the last on beacuse don't wanna ruin the integrity of the map

Nice improvements, I still think its not as intense as i would like it to be but i get you wanting to keep the integrity of the map so its fine

decline, don't wanna ruin the flow and too lazy to rework that section

I try and they all uncomfortable to aim, maybe because at 01:37:334 (7) the song just stop eruptly so you won't likely to aim that far. As for make it overlap, althrough the music stop. You still have some movement left on you, so making the note stop is also not that great

i mean this whole pattern is uncomfortable to aim, but fair lol

another "WHY THE F*** DO YOU PUT THAT PATTERN THERE" moment lol

I saying the players

yeah, makes sense if thats what you're going for, i was just saying that one note being spaced more isnt single-handedly making the pattern uncomfortable lol

oh I see, "annoying" should be the word that I should choose. Sorry

npnp

I think it's probably the jumps on 02:09:605 (2,3,4) that make it feel it kinda wide out. So I shortening the gap. I kinda want to make 02:10:740 (1,2,3,4,5) closer to 02:10:416 (1,2,3). But doing that means reworking the later map, so I'm gonna put it there

sure, move them a tiny bit away

sure, make it now 5% volume