DiSANiMATE

00:03:598 - 00:08:663 - You should double check your snaps in this section, half of the piano notes mapped are in the wrong snap. Most of these if not all should fall under 1/6, not 1/4 or 1/8.

Examples:
00:03:695 (3695|3,3793|2,3841|1) - should just be 1/6 up to 00:03:793
00:05:254 (5254|0) - Should be 1/6 at 00:05:286 -
00:06:764 (6764|3,6812|1,6861|2,6910|0,6958|1,7007|2) - Should be 1/6

etc..

00:11:780 - 00:12:599 - the right long notes in this are un-synced, there should be 2 long notes, adding the up long note which should be snapped on 1/8. Have the stairs at 00:11:293 - 00:11:780 spread out a little. The idea is really good.

00:19:415 (19415|0) - Should be 1/3 not 1/4

00:20:019 (20019|1) - Why stop mapping the 1/3 here and use a 1/2 note? Feels unnatural.

Change every triple notes from 00:25:799 - to 00:32:826 - into doubles or even single notes since the difficulty and note density from 00:33:637 - to 00:41:475 - being easier than 00:25:799 - feels the map isn't expressing the gap of sound's intensity into note density.

00:35:799 - third hand on this pattern is out of line with the rest, should be adjusted to keep consistent with previous triple hand idea

00:36:610 - placements on these long notes here should be readjusted to better have pitch relevance

00:41:205 (41205|2) - For a cleaner LN pattern I'd extend this to 00:41:475 as it just feels a bit ugly to have the releases play out like this currently.

00:46:610 - 00:48:367 - What are the LNs here following? The piano notes are in 1/4 in this section and half of the LNs here dont really emphasize anything.

00:50:394 - 00:50:935 This here feels empty as i believe this section should be mapped.

00:53:637 - 00:54:043 - and 00:54:448 - are all the same repeated sounds but strangely the first one is different, I would suggest coming up with a repeatable pattern for this as it is a prominent sound throughout 00:50:935 to 01:08:232, and a notable consistency problem throughout this large section too

00:54:989 - should probably be emphasized with a jump or hand to fit with your current pitch relevance on percussion

00:55:259 - needs some repatterning as it's quite similar to the sound at 00:50:935 - but doesn't follow anywhere near the same structure

00:55:799 - Confused at the sudden pattern change here to minijacks when the other patterns before and after it don't use this structure despite following similar rhythms. In itself is fine, but in context of the overall chart it's an inconsistent change.

Also be more considerate with how surrounding patterns transition into it, you have a weird triple minijack at 00:55:732 (55732|1,55799|1,55867|1).

00:57:826 - I think the pitch relevancy here would feel a lot nicer if this stream flowed towards column 1 (1/2/3/4) as well with the prior

00:59:178 - I do think there could be a rice note here to emphasize the very soft click sound here, and to leave this break in the song with a lot more impact

01:00:394 to 01:00:664 - I feel like there should be some change in patterning or stream flow here to help contrast to the largely different sound here from the rest of the section

01:07:759 (67759|2,67759|3,67826|1,67826|0) - Considering the rhythm here I'd make these singles as it doesn't feel right to continue the jumptrill for half a beat after a measure, since the music starts focusing on other instruments.

01:09:043 - Very long and uncomfortable anchor in column 3 here (1/2/3/4), should be removed
01:12:286 - Ditto

01:16:880 to 01:20:935 - there is a noticeable hand imbalance here, and my left hand certainly did not consent to whatever you are doing to it. please balance out the handstream here a bit more

01:16:880 - to 01:23:699 - , 01:47:422 - to 02:07:965 - , 02:30:047 - to 03:12:654 - , and 03:44:100 - to 04:18:694 -

-redo these sections

01:21:205 - to maintain your long note stream flow here, I think the rice notes immediate here, and a little bit after should be adjusted to be long notes fitting to the streams that follow

01:21:205 (81205|1) - secret rice note hidden under LN

01:22:087 and 01:22:690 - is there any specific reason for these hands in particular being rice notes? it seems out of place and would fit better as long notes

01:28:346 (88346|2,88427|2) - I don't really understand what the purpose behind this minijack is, as it is mapped to sounds that were previously just mapped as jumpstream and feels out of place. these should be repurposed to streams to fit in

applies to 01:33:563 as well and other reiterations of this pattern here

01:28:998 - the minijack here feels far too intense for the given sounds here, and makes an unreasonably uncomfortable and out of place pattern for a such a faint sound. i'd suggest killing this minijack with rocks.

along the same lines, all of the minijiacks throughout 01:34:052 to 01:36:661 seem to yield no actual purpose other than difficulty without any song representation, and would feel better being removed

01:29:487 (89487|1,89569|0,89569|3) - or 01:29:569 (89569|3,89569|0,89650|1) - should have minijack to follow 01:29:324 (89324|3,89324|2,89406|2) - 's concept.

01:40:248 - has a rather uncomfortable pattern, and is an entirely different way and different note density of mapping the same sound you previously mapped at 01:27:204. it's quite inconsistent, incredibly uncomfortable from the minijack and split trill, and should probably be adjusted

01:41:960 (101960|2,102001|3,102041|0,102082|1,102123|3,102204|2,102245|3,102286|1,102327|2) - What are these LNs for? Whatever it is, the sound is too subtle to warrant this much attention between the bursts.

01:45:628 (105628|1,105628|2,105628|0) - This is just a kick so it would be more suitable as a double

01:47:096 - 02:07:965 this whole section makes no sense. Why is it mapped on 1/12? I believe you should instead map it to 1/8 as i remapped it myself and it's more playable and smoother. 1/12 here just doesn't make sense.

02:03:074 - This part in general is a bit too messy with the mix of LNs and bursts, this is just one example but when you layer too much you start leaving more room for random pattern choices that don't feel intentional. The sudden strain on col 4 at 02:02:911 (122911|3,123074|3,123237|3,123346|3,123482|3,123563|3), the weird trill with 02:04:867 (124867|0,124976|0,125031|1,125085|0,125194|0,125248|1) and 02:05:737 (125737|3,125846|3,125954|3,126090|3,126253|3), etc..

It's important to be careful with how you structure more than one pattern to consider as it can easily get messy in gameplay due to unintentional stuff like these.

The density and difficulty of patterns from 02:30:047 - to 02:35:297 - was too easier than patterns in intense sounds in general.

Should utilize minijack or 3+ jacks even more to make it more difficult and intense to balance the overall difficulty/density of this mapset.

03:12:875 - 03:13:536 Good patterning but should be synced right to the big sounds (unsure if this intentional or not). Should be more consistent with these sounds.

03:14:911 (194911|3,194978|2,195046|1,195136|3) - This is definitely not 1/4, the piano is a lot faster here.

03:20:046 (200046|3,200063|2,200113|0,200130|1,200181|3,200198|2,200248|0,200265|1) - This is barely following the amen breaks with how it's structured, especially since they're just jumptrills.

03:24:100 (204100|3,204201|0,204269|2,204370|1,204471|3,204539|0) - This should be 1/3

03:30:688 (210688|3,210721|2,210755|1,210789|0,210857|3,210890|1,210924|2,210992|0) - This should only be 1/4..the piano doesn't go any faster than that.

03:38:154 - This 1/4 LN jumpstream is really monotonous and barely follows what the music is doing. There's some short pauses in between like 03:38:492 (218492|1,218559|3,218559|0,218627|2) but you keep the same jumpstream motion. It'd be nice to change this up a bit, especially since you seem to do it the first time with 03:37:884.

03:41:397 (221397|0,221431|1,221498|0,221566|1,221600|0) - Not a nice transition to play with the bursts, as you have a left-hand trill starting and then quickly going to rolls leading to the left. It's really chokable and not fun to do with the movement needed.

03:57:073 - Really heavy on the right hand suddenly with how this plays out (look at the col 4 anchor compared to everything else).

04:12:208 - 04:13:289 Weird start for 2nd section of the chordjacks. Should be rearranged formally.

04:12:208 - This jack structure makes no sense with the music. It's not just a 1/2 percussion rhythm. I'd suggest re-evaluating the pattern choice here and accomodate as necessary with how the drums and cymbal is played out.

04:19:235 - 04:26:938 should somewhat switch hands but can move back to right hands if needed so (for switch ups and more louder/lesser sounds).

04:42:166 - What's with the long quad anchors here. You don';t do this anywhere else, having it come out of nowhere when the music is still following the same rhythm feels so out of place and is quite a difficulty spike with how it's arranged.

Also you're ignoring an obvious 1/4 rhythm at 04:43:355 (283355|2,283355|3,283355|0,283355|1,283487|1,283487|0) -

04:58:246 - 04:58:726 These short LNs are unsynced. Should sync them on time.