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I've made the motion friendlier but I like the pull on that strong guitar 00:13:805 so I didnt make this into a circular motion but fixed

11 months ago

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00:26:067

Scorf

00:26:067 (4,1) doesnt match what youve been following. Both the guitar chord and vocal fall on the slider body at 00:26:504. New pattern suggestion

7 months agoLast edited by Scorf 7 months ago.

00:29:825

00:29:825 (1) - To give it more emphasis, I'd make this a 1/1 slider, remove 00:30:116 (2) - and unstack (00:30:262 (3,4) - ). So something as this
https://i.imgur.com/qN27oMR.png

12 months ago

1:1 applied this mod

11 months ago

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00:36:524

00:36:524 (5) - Both the start and end should have emphasis, so a 1/2 slider feels a bit out of place imo. Better make it 2 (stacked) circles

12 months ago

yeah sounds right fixed thanks

11 months ago

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00:39:145

00:39:145 (1) - Considering this spacing prior (00:37:689 (4,1) - ) is a 1/2, this also looks like it, as you go back to the exact same place of the previous note. Better increase the spacing here, or stack this note under 00:37:980 (1) - to make it a bit more understandable

12 months ago

increased the spacing

11 months ago

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00:46:307

00:46:307 (2,3) - Please improve the blanket

12 months ago

im sorry forgive me

11 months ago

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00:53:128

00:53:128 (1,2) - due to the stack with 00:52:545 (2) - this looks a bit weird. Move these two to 218:232. This way it will be 00:53:128 (1) - which stacks with 00:52:545 (2) - instead of 00:53:273 (2) -

12 months ago

my bad, fixed

11 months ago

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01:03:759

01:03:759 (2) - You map this as 1/1 while 00:54:438 (2) - is a 3/4 slider. Make them consistent. I personally think a 1/1 works better here, but up to you

12 months ago

did a 1/1 with a shape so it fits there now

11 months ago

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01:12:205

01:12:205 (3) - I'd personally make this a longer slider cause the sound keeps holding for quite a while.

12 months ago

made it into a 1/2

11 months ago

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01:27:205

01:27:205 (3) - To me this slider can be a bit straighter to make it longer. The intensity is building up, and while I like the enxt three notes, I feel this part can also be a bit more intense. You can also make this a circle stacked on 01:27:496 (1) - That makes the jump a bit larger, but shows more emphasis to the end

12 months ago

I've made sure the intensities are represented accurately now.

11 months ago

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01:27:524

lasah

01:27:524 (1,2) - seeing as this is the climax of the song u could do better than a half beat slider to represent the snares, this is underwhelming

13 months ago