00:12:892 (12892|0) - should be double for kick to be conssitent with 00:12:580 (12580|0,12580|3) - 00:13:205 (13205|0,13205|1) - etc
00:19:611 (19611|3) - you'd better ignore the hihat here because i find it's obviously not on the red line. It's little advanced. And you could just make a stop here imo
00:24:142 (24142|3,24533|3) - (Optional) This Shield Still Could Be Avoided, Swap 00:24:533 (24533|3,24611|2) - Their Collumn
00:36:486 (36486|2,36486|3) - is same as 00:36:798 (36798|2) - but one of them is double another one is single?
00:36:642 (36642|1) - also this deserves double more imo. It is more obvious
00:44:142 (44142|1) - Move To Col 3 (1|2|3|4). // To Avoid Meaningless 3 Stack
Same: 00:46:173 (46173|1,46330|0) - Swap Their Collumn
00:44:455 (44455|3,44455|2,44611|1,44767|0,44767|2,44767|3,44923|3,44923|1,45080|2,45236|1,45236|3,45392|0,45392|3,45392|2,45548|1) - the col1 is too empty compared to right hand.
You could move 00:45:236 (45236|3) - to col1 for balancing,.
00:51:798 (51798|3,51798|2) - Not Worth Getting Double, Kick There Not Strong Enough.
Same: 00:56:798 (56798|3,56798|2) -
Note: But 00:50:705 - 00:51:642 - This Much Better If U Use Double
00:53:673 (53673|1,53830|2) - i think it would be better just ctrl+H them. 00:53:517 (53517|1,53673|1) - the strength doesnt deserve the jacks here.
00:55:548 - Needs to have an aditional note imo, the sound is strong enough to be a double at least
If applied your gonna have a quite awkward [2][3] trill like https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/810197430003171398/1201234751399411752/image.png?ex=65c9140a&is=65b69f0a&hm=a34208b6ec4af45092eb24b4a8979c688238c52693617213bebb93c42cbdb892&=&format=webp&quality=lossless&width=274&height=623
So after that you might want to change 00:54:767 (54767|0,54923|1) - for col 1 and 2 to avoid the long [2][3] trill
01:07:111 (67111|3,67345|3) - This Shield Still Could Be Avoided. Swap 01:07:345 (67345|3,67423|2) - Their Collumn
01:08:205 (68205|1,68283|2,68361|3,68361|1) - why this is different from 01:07:267 (67267|1,67267|0,67345|2,67423|3) - in chordsize? I suggest to make them conssitent.
01:26:949 (86949|1,87105|1,87261|1,87261|0,87417|0,87574|0) - This Stack Is Too Much. Would Be Better If U Spread It. And Since Next Pattern Also Has Another Stack On Left Side 01:28:199 (88199|0,88355|0,88511|0) - It Would Make Left Side Really Heavy.
Example